申请出国留学英语怎么说（汇集20篇）

i am a student, graduated from baoyang middle school, nanning, guangxiautonomous region, in 20__. i am still studying in high school now, because iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. recently, i have a dream tostudy abroad. then i search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to new zealand for study.

first, new zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which i think is mo

re reasonable for me. finally, the climate of new zealand is similar withthe climate of the south of china. considering above reasons, i told my parentsmy plan on going to new zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

as a girl, i like preschool education since i was young. nowadays, chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. if i study specialized curriculums on preschool education,i will go back china and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

my plan is as follows: first, i plan to study english in language institutefor about a half year in new zealand. then, i will study specialized curriculumson preschool education. i believe i have the ability of study abroad, because ihave finished all high school curriculums. besides, my parents both have job andhave rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. after finishing mystudy, i will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as torealize my life value.

尊敬的_大学的老师们：

您们好!

我叫__，女，17岁，是西北大学附属中学理科一班的学生。

我是一个喜欢热闹的人，我总喜欢和同学们聚在一起谈论身边的大事小事，也会一起讨论一些很复杂的问题，但更多的是一起畅想未来，每当这时我们都会笑得很开心。其实我是一个特别喜欢笑的女孩，因为我坚信笑容可以给我的朋友们带来快乐，而我自己也在同时收获到快乐。所以我爱笑，就算遇到挫折也选择用这样的态度来迎接，以给自己更多的信心。也就是因为爱笑，同学们有时会说我像个傻瓜，不过我从未介意过，因为我希望我的朋友都快乐。

在学习上，我态度端正，曾担任学习委员和语文课代表，并且获得了许多荣誉。在生活中，因为我的笑让我与同学更团结了，也因此在小学一直担任班长，升入高年级后开始担任大队委、大队长，多年获得“三好学生”、“优秀班干部”，这些荣誉是我今生难忘的

它们是老师、学校对我的学习、工作的一种肯定，也一直激励着我向前。但我从未因此骄傲，而是怀着一颗感恩的心，感谢我的老师始终关心我、爱护我;感谢老师给我的荣誉，让我看到自己努力的价值;感谢老师教会我如何做一个正直的人。

我最喜欢的运动是游泳，我觉得在水里可以让我的头脑更清醒，所以无论是酷夏还是寒冬，只要有机会我就泡在水里。我也喜欢听音乐并且涉猎的范围很广，从通俗音乐到交响乐都有我喜欢的，之所以喜欢听音乐大概是因为我觉得这样可以让我的心静下来吧。

考试失利或遇到烦心事时我都会借此来舒缓压力。我还喜欢写随笔和涂鸦，把自己的开心或不快写出来、画出来，有时也会义愤填膺地写上一篇文章评论当下的新闻和一些社会现象。

我自认是一个爱玩的人，但对学习还是很认真的。我感觉自己是一个比较有自制力的人，知道什么时候该学习，也知道学习时不能分心，并且能遵守它。可我不觉得自己是人们通常所说的“书呆子”--只是一心扑在学习上，而不注重与别人交往。

所以我有很多朋友，我们一起学习，也约定一起向目标努力。同时我的外向性格也理所当然使我拥有了对外界强烈的好奇心和探索欲望，这也让我的眼界更加开阔。长得越大，懂得越多，我的探索欲望也越强烈，它驱使着我不停地向未知世界“进攻”，同时我也收获到学习的快乐。

我每天上学都要经过西电，校园里树木很多，我经常能闻到绿树青草的香味，而一旁古朴的教学楼更让这个校园显得优雅，久而久之我也就对这所伫立在闹事之中却能保持它原有气息的高校产生了浓厚的兴趣。后来，我开始查看有关电子科技大学的资料。

我渐渐了解了关于这所高校的历史沿革、办学理念和学科设置等一系列情况。我知道了电子科技大学是以信息与电子学科为主，工、理、管、文多学科协调发展的全国重点大学，是国家“211工程”立项建设的重点高校之一。而且学校汇聚了一支政治素质优良、学术水平高、结构合理的教师队伍。最让我感到兴奋的是“神五”、“神六”飞船副总设计师杨宏等一大批IT行业领军人物和技术骨干原来都是电子科技大学培养出来的。

看到这些，我情不自禁地笑了起来，与其说是为陕西有如此好的高校而高兴，还不如说是为自己找到了目标而高兴。特别是西电的通信工程专业吸引了我，对宇宙飞船和神秘的外太空充满好奇的我，希望自己也能像杨宏老师那样为航天事业做出贡献。

的确，从那时起我就决定不管结果怎样，都要以电子科技大学为目标奋斗。

我深知确定了目标就要为之而努力，否则一切都是徒劳的，但我有时也会对大学的生活充满想象：我想象着与大学里的同学一起生活的那种快乐;想象着与教授们一起探讨问题时的那种学习氛围;想象着丰富多彩的社会实践活动……而现在，为了我的目标和我所幻想的一切美好我必须更加刻苦地学习。

但在众多的优秀学生之间，我常常会感到力不从心，甚至是自卑，这是我的一大缺点。但在成长的过程中我一直在努力克服它，并且我也认识到唯有踏踏实实、勤奋拼搏才是通向成功的路。

我现在就在这条路上走着，虽然辛苦但我甘之若饴。我相信既然我有缘每天与_擦肩而过，我就会在不远的一天怀抱感恩的心骄傲地踏进那扇我向往已久的大门。

尊敬的_老师：

您好!

我叫___，是___中学中学___学生。我与_缘起于幼年时读过的《荷塘月色》，苍茫的月光静静地泻落，田田的荷叶亭亭的立着，如同梦境般的美好景色给我留下了深刻的印象,从此，古朴典雅、文化底蕴丰厚的_就扎根于我心中，成为我魂牵梦绕的圣地。

_重视的是全面发展的人才，所以在平时各科的学习中，我都稳扎稳打，表现出色，在历次考试中都名列前茅。

竞赛方面：在20__年第__届全国生物中学生生物学奥林匹克联赛中获陕西赛区一等奖并代表陕西参加国家决赛获得银奖，在20__全国联赛中获陕西赛区数学一等奖和化学二等奖。在这里我想谈谈暑假参加全国生物竞赛的经历。来到武汉二中，我以自己的微笑与亲和力结识了来自全国各地的朋友，谈天说地，共话理想;我懂得了山外青山楼外楼，与全国的精英相比，我还有很多的地方需要改进;我学会了就算遇到挫折也永不言败，调整心态迎接下一个挑战才更重要……这一切，都是让我毕生难忘的宝贵经历，也让我更深刻的理解了_“自强不息”的校训。

爱好广泛：我虽然是一个理科生，却对历史人文知识等很感兴趣，闲暇时喜欢看看“百家讲坛”，看电视上的国学知识竞赛，有意提升自己的综合素养。我幼时曾习国画，我喜欢在生宣上信笔泼墨，喜欢那份“山水横拖千里外”的悠远超然;我也学过古筝，我喜欢在那二十一弦琴上钩托抹挑，喜欢《高山流水》的相逢恨晚，喜欢《春江花月夜》的婉约忧伤;初中时，我去学习跆拳道，我喜欢听双腿破空而出凌风而过踢中脚靶的清脆声响，也将跆拳道精神——礼义廉耻，忍耐克己，百折不屈——牢牢地铭刻在心，并且践行。

我的理想：我从小就很喜欢看各式各样的建筑，阿布?辛博神庙每个太阳日的第一缕曙光，巴黎圣母院高耸的尖顶，悉尼歌剧院的风帆造型，都让我深深着迷。我希望能成为_建筑系的一员，形成自己独特的建筑风格，从而实现我的终极梦想——参与未来世博会上中国馆的设计，让世界看到中国的风采!

我很喜欢泰戈尔的那一句诗：“天空不留下鸟的痕迹，但我已飞过。”为了我的梦想——_，我已经厚积了多年的力量，等待薄发的那一刻。不论结果如何，至少我曾经为自己的梦想努力过，为自己的人生拼搏过，那么我就永不后悔。或许当我苍颜白发时想起这段时期的经历，我也会为自己当初的坚持，为年少时的那份破釜沉舟的决心，而微微一笑。

“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海。”_园，等着我!

此致

敬礼

申请人：___

__年__月__日

Personal Statement

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am with great pleasure to submit this personal statement in support of myapplication for continuing my university education in your esteemed universityand wish you could give my application a positive and favorable assessment.

Currently, I am a junior student in International College of Hubei NormalUniversity majoring in Accounting. Thus, I have obtained great knowledge aboutbusiness for the past three years. Depending on that, I have determined topursue a Bachelor degree at your distinguished university. There are therereasons leading to me choose business, the most important reason is that I amvery interested in business. In my opinion, handling good business is the sameas successful work of art. That’s an exciting thing. The second reason is that Ihave already learnt it for three years, so I want to broaden my knowledge aboutbusiness which will benefit my future life. The third reason is that I want tobecome a successful business lady which is my dream all the time.

To be honesty, I am an average student but I have diligent and strongconfident heart. I believe that a good attitude can change bad situation. So Iam always keeping a positive attitude on my life. I never ever give up anychance of promoting my study. During my three years in Hubei Normal University，Inever fail a class and always do my best for assignment. However，in my mind,social activity is as the same important as class study. In my spare time, Itook part in student union and took charge of minister in arts department. Ourwell-organized activities attracted many students to practice themselves. Lastsummer, I joined the Work and Travel Programme to be a staff in an Americancompany for three months. I made good use of that chance to improve my oralEnglish and tasted western culture. I think I can understand and adapt to aforeign culture in a short period.

I firmly believe that anyone could acquire success by their right way andfighting. This is one of the reasons why I want to go abroad. What’s more, Iwant to taste and accept some western education. I hope that I can learn moredifferences between Chinese and British university education and widen myhorizon. Furthermore，as we know, UK is a very modern country. It owns the mostadvanced education system and top universities in the world. And graceful schoolenvironments deeply attract me. By the way, if I can learn in your university Iwould cherish and appreciate this chance. In the future, I also mean to applyMaster’s Degree in UK. But after that, I will go back to my country and look fora job related to business.

I really want to own a colorful campus life in your school, further developmy overall capabilities including organizational ability, teamwork spirit etc. Ibelieve I can adapt to a foreign life and acquire best degree. With all theabove mentioned, in terms of my understanding of business and my enthusiasm forit, I hope that I can be up to the standard of the admission requirements inyour university. I believe that my strong interest in this subject. last, mypositive attitude and comprehensive ability will facilitate my successfulcompletion of the proposed program. Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours, Wanbin Xu

Yours sincerely,

尊敬的考官：

您好!

很荣幸有机会向您呈上我的留学申请书。

我出生于一个教师之家，母亲是一位优秀的小学教师;父亲是也曾经是教师，后来经历了人生的第二次选择，考入法院，成了一名法官。父母对生活的热情和对人生挫折的态度，潜移默化地影响着我，形成了我自强不息、不轻言败的性格。

中考的教训，让我懂得了什么叫脚踏实地，什么叫不图虚荣，什么叫谦虚谨慎，什么叫取长补短……高中三年，我努力夯实学科基础知识、掌握学习方法、提高操作实践能力、同时，利用课余时间广泛地涉猎大量书籍，不但充实了自己，而且培养了自己多方面的技能。夷陵中学严谨的学风塑造了我朴实、稳重的学习态度，更重要的是在这样一个精英云集的地方，我学会了在竞争中挑战自我，在合作中欣赏他人。这样一步一个脚印走来，我尝到了成功的喜悦：成绩逐年上升，我看到了自己身上蕴藏着的无限潜能，它让我相信——如果给我一个支点，我也能撬起整个地球!

选择_大学我有以下几个理由：

一是_大学是一所国家教育部直属的，拥有研究生院，本科专业涵盖了理、工、文、经、管、法、教育等学科门类的综合性重点大学，是一所有着坚实的学术基础和严谨的治学传统，校园环境优美的大学。在这样的学习环境里，无论是在知识能力，还是在个人素质修养方面，我会受益匪浅。

二是_大学是一所以工为主的大学，这符合了我的学科兴趣，我是一个理科生，尤其以数学、物理学科见长，这次推荐我参加自主招生的就是我的数学老师和物理老师。我喜欢在这样自主开放的环境里学习，希望可以有更为广阔的发展前景。

三是_大学坚持以“厚基础，宽口径，强能力，高素质”的人才培养计划，在教学中注重创新能力培养，注重提高学生的综合素质，学校实施了一系列教学改革新措施包括：名师上讲台工程、中英文双语教学工程、“创新人才培养”工程、本硕连读制度等，还有一系列的完善学分制管理的制度，包括主辅修制、弹性学制、第二学位制、优异生培养制度等。

现在有很多的大学生毕业后面临就业难的问题，这也将是我今后不能回避的，但我想，这是一个适应社会的问题。大学是一个可以接触并尝试众多领域的独一无二的场所，是一个沟通社会的平台。我希望这里掌握生活技能，培养自己的社会角色，使自己能承担社会责任，权利和义务，成为一个真正的社会人。

现在的科技发展可谓日新月异，我的学习是要掌握最基本的学习工具和方法，将来利用这些工具和方法，再去学习新的东西。我们不可能靠在大学里学到的知识来维护一生的，以后如果不再学了，照样会落后，所以，本科读什么专业不能完全决定毕业后的工作方向。我希望根据我的学科特长，选择适合我的专业，但是我不会太在意专业的趋向，绝对服从学校根据我的情况进行专业调剂。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

"All I know about leadership I learned from . . ." What items could a person use to describe leadership qualities?

Inspired by the student council advisors at my high school.

Student council was a big part of my life in high school. I have participated in it since my frst year of high school. When I frst joined， I was quiet， na?ve， and unwilling to participate in many activities. I was scared to meet new people and afraid to apply myself. This all began to change. Half way through my frst year in student council， one of the advisors can up to me and asked why I did not participate that much. I did not have an answer for her and did not know how to respond. After this， I began to think of an answer. I became frustrated and decided to change. I started to show up at events and had a great time. I realized I loved this and wanted to start leading these activities. In my sophomore， junior， and now my senior year of high school， I asserted myself and took on a strong leadership role in student council. I did not fgure out the answer to why I was so reserved until this year with the help of this question.

When I looked up leadership in the dictionary， it said that it was the capacity to lead and the act or instance of leading. These are two very broad defnitions of leadership. Many people have different notions of what this word actually means. When I was challenged to use different items to describe what leadership actually is， I thought this was going to be a hard and obnoxious task. What could I learn from comparing leadership to a stuffed animal or a rubber chicken? But when I sat down to come up with a couple of answers， I realized that leadership could be compared to almost anything a person wants.

All I know about leadership I learned from a calculator. A calculator can add everything together to come up with the best answer. It can delet e what is unnecessary and only include what is important. It can solve any type of problem. These are all important equalities a leader has to have. A leader has to be able to add all of the ideas together to make the best possible plan. Leaders have to know how to decipher the good and the bad out of an idea. They have to be versatile and know how to deal with different types of issues.

All I know about leadership I learned from a ball. A ball is able to bounce back up after it is dropped. It is round and has no creases. A ball can be thrown back and forth to different people. All of these qualities are also leadership qualities. A leader has to be ready for every situation that is thrown at him or her. He or she has to be able to bounce back from any setbacks and never dwell on the past. Leaders have to exhibit many qualities and never be closed-minded about a situation. A leader must be able to delegate when he or she cannot get the work done. They have to trust everyone they lead to be able to "catch the ball" and keep a project rolling.

This activity made me realize that being a leader is so much more than just having authority and having the ability to take control of a situation. A leader has to be trusting of all the people he or she leads and， leaders must be able to combine ideas into one encompassing idea. They cannot sit in the background and watch events happen; they have to jump in and be involved. They should not delegate all their responsibilities away.

Leadership is more than what the dictionary says it is.

I learned through all of this that I have many of these qualities.

I have the ability to solve problems， lead through adversity， and be versatile. From answering this question， I realized that I could lead effectively， even if my leadership style is different from other individuals. When I joined student council in my frst year of high school， I did not have these qualities because I was never put into a situation where I had to lead. I was too reserved to try. When I tried， I learned that I could succeed in this. I did not realize until I answered this question about leadership. I was never able to see that being a leader is not just about taking control of a group and telling everyone what to do When I was a freshman， I thought leadership was this. I did not know that did not have to be forceful and strict. I stereotyped a leader then. Thisis where I went wrong. A leader is about being yourself and never letting anyone change you. I thought I had to change to be a good leaderOnly when I expanded my comfort zone did I realize this was not trueIt only took three years and a silly question/game to fgure this out.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的领导：

您好!

从高一到高三毕业学习成绩有了明显的提高，在这三年中多次获得学校颁发的三好生奖状，进步之星奖，优秀学员奖和多项运动会奖状等。

在高中毕业以后，我想去日本留学深造。

自小就在城市中生活的我十分向往去经济发达的大城市去学习。同时对于自己家乡落后有着深刻的责任感。日本是当今世界上世界上经济最发达的国家之一，电子产品在世界市场的占有率居于榜首。具有强大的海洋捕捞船队和水产品养殖业，渔业发达。留学条件良好，气候四季分明。环境优美，有美丽的樱花，北海道的樱花。

去这些美丽的地方是我小时侯梦想。有优秀的教师和先进的教学设备以及先进的教育理念。于是从上高中开始我就定下了将来去日本留学的想法。

20x年2月底我向家里说明了我想去日本留学的意愿。在当时就得到了家人的许可。于是从20x年的3月份开始我到x日语培训学校学习日语，平常的上课时间我正常到学校学习高中的课程到了，周末就上x日语培训班去学习日语，到现在为止我的日语水平已达到使用最基本的日常用语和进行简单的阅读的程度。日本以后，打算先到语言学校学习。为自己将来进一步的深造做好语言上的准备。

在此基础上，根据本人的个人喜好和特长，想在日本的大学学习物流管理。日本是个经济文化繁荣发达的国家，尤其改革开放以来，中日两国经济文化艺术的交流更加深入。当我学有所成回国后，将致力于家乡的经济发展，用在日本所学的先进的管理方去经营自己家乡的企业。也愿意在日友好中日文化经济交流方面贡献自己的聪明才智。

父母支持我的留学请求，能够支付我在日本的一切费用。我到日本以后，保证遵守日本的法律遵守学校的规章制度。好好学习，增长本领，成为一个有用的人才

真诚地希望我的留学申请会被批准。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的X大学老师：

您好!我是X，现就读于X。感谢您在百忙之中审阅我的留学申请书。

X大学，以怒蹄奔腾的骏马为标志物，希望学子们能“腾天潜渊，吐纳川海;辽阔原野，一任奔驰”，博大高远的追求使我渴慕不已，心神往之。我渴望成为X大学的一名学生。

由于在数学上表现出了优秀的能力，我5岁时上了小学。20X年时，我们全家来到北京，并开始了我在X学校长达8年的学习。这8年来，X见证着我点点滴滴的进步。来到北京前我对英语一无所知，可我的母校是一个国际化的学校，于是我的英语让老师和父母十分着急。后来在父母老师的帮助之下，我一直努力提高自己的英语水平，现在英语已经成为我的优势之一。小升初的时候，我的成绩还不是很好，在我初中三年的不懈努力之下，最终以中考523分(当时的市重点线)的成绩进入了我校高中部实验班。在高一时我的成绩在班里、年级的前列，参加了海淀区数学、物理、化学竞赛，并在第X届全国数学“希望杯”比赛中获得全国三等奖。进入高二之后，我在所有考试(包括月考、期中期末考、高三的周考、区统考)中都保持着班级第一、年级第一的成绩，而且整个高中年级的各科会考成绩都是A。我认为只要对学习有着严肃认真的态度，始终都在努力超越自我，就一定可以取得成功。而且我可以理性对待考试、不断提高自己的学习能力，从而保持了一个稳定的、向上的状态，我会将这种状态在我以后的学习、生活中继续保持下去。

我出生在一个民主开放的家庭。父母都是老师，给我一定的自由发展空间，并着重培养我的领悟能力、学习能力和动手能力，让我学会自立。于是我在遇到生活、学习、与人沟通相处等方面的困难时，都自己想办法独立解决，从而在各方面成为班级、年级的佼佼者。由于父母对我潜移默化的影响，我做事十分认真，习惯追求完美，虽然十分完美是不可能的，但是追求完美的态度和意志让我在学习、工作中有着出色的表现。

正如校训“X”所展示的，我的母校X学校，既秉承了传统教育的严谨、求实，也发扬了寄宿学校的军事化管理，更融入了外国教育的开放和高效。正是在这样的环境中，我拥有了丰富的知识、多样的能力、坚强的毅力和开朗的性格。在X年的学习生涯中，我更加成熟稳重，做事心思缜密、谋划周到，成为一个学习优秀、善于处理各方面事务、全面发展的人。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Having a flair for Economics and accounting I have decided that I want adegree in Accounting and Finance or Management. The many brilliantrepresentatives of the management community around the world have strengthenedthat resolve.

When I worked in my school as a tutor of English as a Second Language forstudents from a community school in Muscat, I realized the importance of astrong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well withothers. These ideas were further enforced by my month long internship atNovartis Pharmaceutical (Accounts and Finance Department and Human ResourcesDepartment).

I attended the Harvard Model Congress in Paris and won the Award ofDistinction. One skill in particular that contributed to this award was myconfident public speaking.

The last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world businessand economics. For my IB Extended Essay, titled “To What Extent Does Subway inOman Operate as an Oligopoly”, I set out to prove the oligpolistic structure ofthe fast food market in Oman. In this effort, I have come across many real lifecomplexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the Theoryof the Firm. While attempting to explain these alternate theories of firms Ihave developed a keen interest in analyzing and understanding how the world ofbusiness works.

After an undergraduate degree in accounting and finance or management Iplan to go onto post graduate studies and work on an MBA. A strong performancein a BA will allow me to move onto an MBA and only then shall I besatisfied.

For the last four years I have been part of our schools volleyball teamICE. We have retained our ISAC (Inter Schools Activities Conference, MiddleEast) title for four years. Playing in the power hitters (spiker) positionrequires immense physical fitness and to accomplish that I regularly go to thegym for fitness training. I am also part of my school track and field team.Being the fastest sprinter in the school since 11th grade the 100m, 200m and400m races are my specialty even though I still pursue long distance running. Inmy spare time I explore and master the computer as I am conversant with a VisualBasic Programming course. It is imperative for me to have the latest hardwareand software and I make it a point to install everything myself. I also learnUrdu as it is my native tongue and a link to my culture, to maintain that iscrucial.

Living in a diverse international community of over 52 nationalities hasallowed to me recognize and appreciate different cultures. With the experience Ihave and the strong motivation to craft a bright future I feel I can justify mydecision to pursue a career in Accounting and Finance or Management.

尊敬的_的老师：

您好!

我是来自河南省__中学的__，很高兴能向您呈上我的留学申请书，也希望借此机会我可以脱颖而出，为顺利进入_大学奠定坚实的基础。

在首都这座梦想之城，可谓高校林立，但是只有贵校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我们高中都会有人考入贵校，他们被誉为“天子骄子”。当录取金榜贴到校园里，看着他们脸上洋溢的笑容，我的心里也如波涛汹涌，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定决心，有朝一日我也要以自己的实力筑梦于人大校园，成为她的一分子。

可说归说，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奋学习。

在学习上，我对自己要求十分严格，充分发扬不怕吃苦的精神去面对学习中的一切困难和挫折。我知道学习就是一个苦难的过程，唯有坚持不懈，才能实现凤凰涅盘的重生，才能抵达成功的彼岸。因此，在课堂上，我紧紧跟随老师的思路，认真听讲，细心做好笔记，每一个知识点都不会错过。课下，我珍惜时间，努力复习，积极预习，有的放矢地掌控好自己的学习节奏。我喜欢思考问题，喜欢探究问题的本源，然后举一反三，化整为零。由于我的勤奋、刻苦，我获得了优异的成绩，每次考试都在全校前列，受到了老师和同学们的肯定，多次被评为优秀班干部、优秀学生、学习标兵等。

在获得优异成绩的同时，我还抽时间，挤时间发展自己多方面的兴趣。我喜欢打乒乓球、羽毛球、篮球，沉浸于体育锻炼的激情与豪迈中，在紧张与刺激间收获了强健的体魄。但比起体育锻炼，我更钟情于国学文化。

我喜欢国学的博大精深，喜欢国学的厚重神奇。课余，我已经阅读了多部国学经典，比如《孟子》《论语》《史记》《资治通鉴》《汉书》等，在文字与故事里感受到了国学的无限魅力。在我看来，国学不仅仅是传统文化，更是中华民族核心的价值理念和追求，是数千年来中国人思维方式行为方式生活方式生产方式的高度总结，是中华母亲的乳汁，是中华儿女的血脉、精神和灵魂，是中国人信仰的天空和大地。

出于对国学的热爱，我从小就立志要投身于祖国宝贵文化的学习、挖掘、弘扬中，用自己的所学，为国家的文化发展和民族的文化复兴，贡献自己的微薄之力。

而我之所以在众多的_高校中钟情于贵校，就是因为贵校深厚的文化底蕴吸引了我。贵校是一所以人文社会科学为主的综合性研究型高校。自建校以来，贵校始终不忘“立学为民、治学报国”的办学宗旨，以“实事求是”为校训，逐渐形成了完备的教育体系，尤其注重发挥人文社会科学认识世界、传承文明、创新理论、咨政育人、服务社会的作用，半个多世纪以来，已为国家输送了一大批高素质的人才，其中范文澜、冯其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可谓赫赫有名，为国家的文化建设做出了巨大的贡献。

我敬仰贵校国学院，它是新中国第一家以国学为教育研究目的且本硕连读的教育科研机构。学院学术力量雄厚，已经制定了完整系统的国学教学方案，建立了以经典研读为中心的课程体系，并充分兼顾传统与现代的有机融合，在教学与研究中，既有继承传统的治学特点，又有鲜明的时代性和宽广的国际视野。这些，都令我向往。所以，我认为贵校国学院是我的梦想之地，会改变我的人生轨迹。

尊敬的老师，请您考虑并接受我的申请，给我一片天空，让我自由飞翔，给我一片海洋，让我尽情畅游，我相信，进入人大是我最明智的选择。如果顺利被录取，我一定会珍惜时间，勤奋努力，孜孜以求，投身于学术研究，跟随大师足迹，在国学的传承里留下自己的名字，成为国家的栋梁，成为人大的骄傲。

我相信，我可以。

此致

敬礼

Dear Sir,

I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.

My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的先生/女士：

你好，我叫X，是X大学的老师。也是X学生的班主任，我非常高兴地向你推荐我的学生X，并且相信它能够出色的完成在贵校硕士课程的学习。

自从他进入大学以来，常常表现出与年纪不相符的成熟和稳重。由于班上的大部分同学都来自其他省市，这第一次的出门离家的经历使得他们需要一个相当长的过程适应这个完全陌生的新环境。但我注意到，相比之下，某某同志很快的调整好了心态，积极主动地融入到这个新环境之中。

大学的课程与中学有很大不同，偏重在自学能力，而且专业课程的学习要求另一种思维方式。因此，在大一。大二，很多同学都表现出了不同程度的不适应，不知道该如何学习大学的课程。但是，某某同志适应能力很强，很快摸清了工商管理课程的关键，在很短的时间里就掌握了学习方法，而且其他任课老师都表示他对于新知识的接受能力很强，新学的知识他马上就能消化，当堂就能理解掌握。

可以这么说，班里的部分学生是拿着极其出色的高考成绩走进了我们学校，而某某同志凭借的则是他极强的自学能力和良好的学习方法。这一点，在每学期的期末考试上得到了很好地体现，尤其是在专业英语的期末考试中取得极其优秀的成绩，也是班里少数顺利通过英语四六级考试的同学。他对学习英语的热情和毅力是最让我感动的。除了学同学还校里足球队的主力队员，积极的参加校里组织的各项活动，有极强的组织和领导才能。他经常到我办公室或给我打电话，一起讨论他学习和生活中所遇到的问题，希望取得更好的学习成绩。概括的说某某同志是一个好学生。

我希望贵校能给他一个机会，让他在贵校严谨的学风和良好的学习环境中继续发挥他的特长，进一步提高专业知识，拓宽视野。望贵校考虑它的申请。

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Monsieur le Président,

Dans le souhait dune inscription auprès de votre université, jai lhonneur de vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.

Jétudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans, et jobtiendrai ma licence(bac+4) en juillet 20__ .(1)

Outre la langue fran?aise, jai étudié littérature fran?aise à laquelle je mintéresse particulièrement.(2)

Après lobtention de mon dipl?me, jaimerais poursuivre mes études de littérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement de littérature.(3)

Or, pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires, jai besoin d’un certificat de pré-inscription délivré par votre université. Cest pourquoi je vous demande quelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat et quelles sont les attesations que je devrais fournir.

Si cest possible, pourriez-vous me faire parvenir, à ladresse ci-dessus, un dossier dinscription ?(4)

Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance, je vous prie dagréer, Monsieur le Président, lexpression de mon profond respect.

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

亲爱的教授：

我很高兴以书面形式推荐的医生的信。 __支持他申请在实验室的博士后位置。

博士。X__一个优秀的研究生致力于为毫秒我的监督下度。在我与他在大学接触，他的创造力和态度研究工作给了我很深的印象。他总是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解决他自己的问题，我很满意他。

__一直致力于高分子发光研究六年左右。据我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化学在主人的工作，如蛋白质和核酸检测等，在这些领域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已经和将发表多篇论文在国际期刊。我在读他的论文发表和与他讨论往往兴趣。我很赞赏他的研究能力。

__博士还拥有非常优良品格。他是一个虔诚的科研工作者。他的作品是在周末。他是一个诚实和智能，可靠，负责人，并且是非常合作过。

基于这些优势，我相信这个年轻人将实现在今后的工作更大的学业成功。因此，我强烈支持他的应用程序，这将不胜感激，如果你能给他的优先考虑。

请随时联系我，如果我可以回答关于__的任何其他问题。我的地址如下：

教授__X

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的x大学领导：

白雪皑皑的季节，莘莘学子又迎来了一年一度的留学热潮，这也将是我人生旅程的第一个重大转折。我来自x高级中学，我的名字叫x，男，x岁。今日我郑重向贵校推荐自我，因为考入x是我梦想，我渴望成为x的一名学子，成为一名真正的x人。

对x的向往由来已久，从上高中那天起，就开始对x有了逐步的认识，x大学以往不止一次被同学和教师提起，同学们也一向视考入x为一种荣耀和自豪，我开始关注x，了解x的一点一滴。

x大学是x第一所大学，其前身为x大学，始建于x年x月x日，至今已走过了x年的光辉历程，x始终依循“实事求是”的校训，构成了“严谨治学，严格教学要求”的优良校风，正是百年积淀的深厚底蕴，给x带来了生生不息的原动力，激励每一位x学子励精图治、创业为国。

随着对x了解的加深，自我对x的感情也在与日俱增，每每提起x，都感觉那样的亲切，对x，我似乎有一份难解的情缘，我默默地将考上x定为自我的奋斗目标。虽然x是那么遥远，是那么高不可攀，可是我要拼搏，我要追梦，我必须要去实现我美丽的梦想。随着自身的不断提高，学习成绩的稳步提升，我开始一步步向x靠近，我明白，正是我的梦想，支撑着我更加努力学习，支撑着我去争取走入x。

我出生在一个普通的工人家庭，父母都是从农村考上中专后进入城市，他们也一向对我有一个完美的期待，那就是上一所名校，完成他们没有完成的愿望。从小学到高中，父母从来没有对我的学习有太严厉的要求，他们更加注重我个性的培养，更加注重我健康欢乐地学习生活，他们不期望我成为一个读死书和死读书的书呆子，他们要我成长为一个阳光欢乐的人，成为一个善良正直懂得感恩的人。正是这样的家庭环境，让我有了充分的空间张扬个性，我欢乐，我阳光，我强健，虽然才十七岁，我已经长到了1.82米，我成了父母眼中的骄傲。

十余年的学习生涯，我一点点长大，一步步成熟，我不会错过任何一次表现自我的机会，学校组织的各种活动，我都进取参加，演讲比赛、体育比赛等，我都会冲在前面。我关心班级，爱护团体，从小学到初中一向担任班干部，上高中之后，我们开始竞选学生会，我又第一个报名，参加体育部长的竞选，经过努力，我最终如愿当上了学生会的体育部长，每周我还会参加学校的值周，帮忙教师管理学生，三年来的学生会和值周体验，锻炼了我的组织本事和语言表达本事，也磨练了我的意志。

都说当学生会干部会影响学习，我并没有这种感觉，倒是学生会的工作，促进了我的学习，学生会干部，学习更不能落后于别人。从进入高中的全校五十名，我逐年提高名次，最让我引以为傲的，是刷新自我最高名次和分数的证书最多，此刻我已经迈进了第一梯队，各学科也没有偏科落后现象，各科成绩均衡发展，但我最喜欢的还是物理和化学，多次取得近满分的成绩，这更增加了我学习的信心和动力。

我明白，我此刻离x还有必须的距离，可是我会利用这余下的将近180天时间，努力去完成学业，努力去提升自我，为自我走入x积蓄力量。我喜欢工科，喜欢动手，也有很强的动手本事，我觉得x的专业也异常适合我，如果我能走入x，我必须努力学习专业技能，不断增长才干，我也要象x的那些前辈们一样，设计更多的“鸟巢”及“水立方”，研究出继第一台飞机发动机之后众多的第一，为x人增光。

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Due to the comprehensiveness of china’s “reform and open” policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. though more and more companies built， management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. management is a burgeoning field in china， so i hope i can acquire more modern knowledge on management in england.

The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. my father was among the first of china’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. as a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. my mother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simple calculations. and so it was early in my life that i hoped i， also， would someday be able to enter the realm of business.

With the time of growing up， i preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. i never ceased to contemplate over the questions i encountered. subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.

As a high school student in china， i had to concentrate on the college entrance examination (cee)， even so， books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. unfortunately when sitting in the exam in june， __， i was so nervous that i didn’t score well in the cee exam. i enrolled in the department of computer science in zhejiang college of traditional chinese medicine. any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. after several terms， i realized that i would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. at that moment， i lost my direction and objectives.

My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. as a matter of fact， i enjoyed reading the books included encyclopedia american， and some books about management by peter ker. i began to notice something interesting： why some companies can produce more than others? why some company can sell more than others? why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

With the questions in my mind， i started to read many relevant books. i was lucky to read the book “jack： straight from the gut”by jack welch， in which john a. byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. when i was a junior， i ran a bookshop by myself near my school. i should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. from this， my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed， definitely i was increasingly interested in what i was doing. by december， __， i had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of it. to accumulate more relevant knowledge， i strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.

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__年__月__日

Dear _,

“Life is Like a Box of Chocolates. You Never Know What You are Going toGet”. Such words come from a famous movie “Forrest Gump”. I don’t know what kindof chocolate life will give me, but I believe I can achieve my target if I workhard with my unwavering belief and persevering efforts like Forrest Gump. As astudent of Mechanical Engineering, I have just finished my undergraduate studysince July. Next what I have to face is to choose the new chocolate which I haveyearned for all long. With four-year study of M.E. in China, I would like toscale higher intellectual heights by undertaking advanced studies in __University, as I believe its rich learning environment and free academicatmosphere will open my eyes to new realities and influence me to confront thesituation back home.

My strong interest in research was born during the undergraduate years at_University. Upon entering the university in 20__, I began to embark on myjourney of industrious study in the Department of Mechanical Engineering. Myexceptionally solid foundation in mathematics and physics provided me with astepping stone with which I proceeded onto the exploration of othersophisticated and erudite subjects. My performance in all the specialty-relatedcoursework not only enabled me to secure good GPA ranking me about top 17 in mygrade among 169 students but also furnished me with a powerful instrumentwhereby to materialize my dreams in the research. I constantly congratulated myluck to obtain a lot of scholarships and awards, due to my academic achievement,from the university, especially the scholarship of “_University – AmericanUnited Technological Corporation”, awarded only for the best students who areboth good at academic and social capacity. Not contented with doing a good jobin mere coursework, I endeavored to keep abreast with the latest theories andtechnologies by reading extensively technical literature in recent journals andattending the lecture some famous professors made. During my undergraduatecareer, I have grasped every chance to do some researching work. I used toparticipate in at least six projects including the intern work in the factory,mechanical designs and graduate design.

Especially during the period from September to November of 20__, I readmany books and journals in the field of mechanical engineering such as “Handbookof Practical Gear Design” (Written by __). In these books, I did intensivereading on the theory of the speed reducer. I investigated and discussed with myteacher on how to apply the theory into the practice. Then according to myteacher’s advice, I tried to organize a team consisting of five members to makea harmonic gear reducer. As a team leader, I should not only take charge of thewhole arrangement of project but also make every member of the team cooperatewith each other harmoniously. Before starting the program, I, together with myteam, made a detailed plan covering the schedule, materials, and equipment. Thefirst step of our work is the design of the reducer. The design plan is asfollows: (1) Set down the blue print. (2) Complete 3-D solid model with Pro/Esoftware. (3) Finite-element analysis with ANSYS software. (4) Assemblingsimulation by using Pro/E. (5) Complete the 2-D draft of part and assembly.After two-week design work, we stepped to the next work, manufacture of theproduct. With the aid of the technique of computer, we plan the manufacturingprocess of every part. And then, all parts were made with various machine toolssuch as C lathe, wire electrical discharge machine, vertical machining center,and so on. Finally, we had toassembly all parts to the harmonic gear reducer,and test-drove it for many times. With five-week unremitting efforts, wesucceeded in the project of harmonic gear reducer and obtained the highestpraise. This special experience makes it very helpful for my further study.Firstly, I find the connection between theory and practice. Textbooks couldhardly cover everything, therefore, if we want to learn more, we should pursueevery opportunity to have practices. Meanwhile, I experienced the importance andmightiness of cooperation. In the project, we divided ourselves into severalparts, not only doing one’s own work well, but also cooperating with each otherharmoniously.

Another case worthy mentioning is my design project for graduation,“Manufacturing and Performance of Electroplated CBN Tools”. The main objectiveof this project is the manufacturing of the electroplated CBN (Cubic BoronNitride) wheels and the research of its performance when grinding theheat-resisted steel. I had completed three steps of task. Firstly, I took chargeof the manufacturing of electroplated CBN wheels, covering the following work:selecting electroplating solution, computing various electroplating parameterssuch as electrical current and temperature, adhering CBN to the tool base byelectroplating a nickel layer. After these basic preparations, I had to do thesecond part of the research work to compare grinding abilities of electroplatedCBN wheels with those of other wheels such as SiC wheels, Al2O3 wheels etc. Thispart of the work needs the researcher’s highly particularity and staidness. Idid the detailed work as follows: (1) Grind heat-resisted steel with variouswheels in the same grinding conditions. (2) Record data and compute the grindingratio of various wheels. (3) Measure the surface roughness of the heat-resistedsteel ground by various wheels. (4) Observe dulling and pullout of abrasivegrains of various wheels by using optical microscope. In this part, we canconclude that electroplated wheels have far better grinding abilities than otherwheels, by comparing parameters, such as grinding ratio, surface roughness etc.The final assignment of the project is to find out the most suitable parametersof grinding heat-resisted steel with electroplated CBN wheels, through comparingthe grinding ratio and surface roughness of heat-resisted steel ground indifferent grinding parameters. By investigating the attributes of electroplatedCBN wheels and concluding their practical grinding parameters, this project isvery important in promoting the application of them.

China’s unique advantage of labor force predicts the resplendent future ofits Mechanical Engineering, especially the manufacture, and it is our beliefthat this day will come soon. On the other hand, there are so many experiencedtechnicians in China, however, with the absence of advanced experts manyadvanced producing method cannot be used in practical yield. When I worked asintern in some factories, I found that most of them were still using facilitieswhich were used in America about thirty years ago. Therefore I want to use theadvanced knowledge earned in United States, combined with my acquaintance withChina, to improve the present situation and apply best the advanced scientifictechnology to practical social wealth as soon as possible. I hope to become asuccessful researcher in Mechanical Engineering, the arduous but exhilarativefield. The significant progress achieved in M.E, with the extraordinary culturaland intellectual sources in your university, has attracted me greatly. Based onthe study and the research experience in _ University, I am sure that I amqualified and would be an outstanding Ph.D. student. With the advanced courses,balanced program and distinguished faculty of your department, I would get asolid background for my future academic career.

Yours sincerely,

尊敬的_老师：

您好!

我叫___，今年17岁，是__市__中学高三_班的一名学生。一直以来，我成绩优异，团结同学。从高一起多次获得“三好学生”“学习标兵”等称号，这些荣誉是老师、学校对我自身努力的一种肯定。在这些荣誉的鼓励下，我更加严格要求自己，谋求全面发展，提高学习及综合能力，取得了更大的进步。

说到学习，我认为自己是一个很有自制力的人，我能够将精力倾注于学习，一心一意，不被周围环境所打扰。正是由于这一点，我总能保持高效率的学习。我并不是一味的与其他同学拼时间，而是注重时间的充分利用，让有限的时间得以延伸，实现的利用效率。学习的高效性帮助我合理的安排作息时间。在取得成绩的稳固与提高的同时，维持良好的生物钟。

当然，我所关注的不仅仅是学习，还有自身综合能力的培养。从高一起，我就一直担任班里的宣传委员，每当各种节日来临之际，我都会亲自进行版面设计，然后再和绘画写字好的同学一起办板报。在所有人的共同努力下，我们班的板报每次在年级的综合评比中总能得到好评。除此之外，我还是学校魔术社的一名社员。我积极参加社团活动，表现优秀，并

多次在学校开展的“社团展示周”活动中代表社团在其他年级和班级表演。这些经历不仅丰富了我的高中生活，同时也进一步提高了我的综合能力。

在高一了解各个高校之初，_大学“自强弘毅求是拓新”的校训便深深吸引了我。“自强”是中华民族的传统美德，成就事业当以此为训，“弘毅”和“求是”又是学习中所必须具有的坚毅刚强的品格和科学严谨的治学态度，而“拓新”则是当今时代发展所必需的动力来源。也许正是因为这样的校训，_大学作为一个历史悠久的高等学府，并没有止步于历史的光环之下，而是紧跟时代的步伐，不断拓新，发展成为长江沿岸上一颗璀璨的明珠。

在众多的学习精英中，我时常会感到压力。但我始终坚信，唯有踏踏实实、勤奋拼搏才能通向成功之路。当我决定做一件事时，就会用最认真的态度竭尽全力去办好它，即使遭遇挫折与困难也决不放弃，直到目标达成。

这就是我，一个热爱_的女孩的自述。虽然前面的道路可能有很多坎坷，但我始终在向前走着，因为我知道，那里有我的梦想，我的希望……

三年前，我怀着对_的憧憬开始了高中三年的学习。我相信，我将凭借着自己的努力带着骄傲和自信踏入_大学的校门!

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尊敬的老师：

您好!

我叫__，今年18岁，____高三生。

在20_年秋季我参加了全国中学生的物理竞赛，获得了二等奖。由此我得到了参加_的资格。为此，我感到十分的意外和荣幸。经过考虑权衡之后，我选择了贵校作为我的奋斗目标。虽然面对未知的结果我忐忑不安，但我决定全力一试。

我是个从小通过书籍接受儒家道家文化熏陶的人，我待人以礼，也能做到诚实守信、热心集体。只是有时反而会因太重礼节而与人产生隔阂。有时缺少站出来的勇气。我正在努力改变自己。

学习上我一直能在班级排前十，成绩在全校属中上等。然而高考面前这却不是个理想的成绩。我的理科成绩较优秀——有时能达到全班第一，而文科却总是达不到自己的理想状态。我喜欢研究问题、难题，喜欢安静的琢磨事情，被老师评价为“想的和别人不一样的学生”。我不敢说自己是否优秀，但我自己是很享受这种与众不同的感觉的。

在课外，我兴趣广泛，在自主研究上还得到过比较令我自豪的成绩。我曾花一年的课余时间来制作一个游戏，该作品因其精巧而有创意曾受好评，只是因为缺少剧情而人气较低。在一年期间制作进程断断续续，程序构思使我绞尽脑汁，在玩游戏与做工程之间不断进行心理斗争。收集素材、算法、音频剪辑……每一步都十分用心。很多个第一次让我得到了不少经验。然后在终于完成的时候，那种喜悦也是不可替代的。我学会了一样很重要的事情，那就是坚持。

另一件让我获益匪浅的业余尝试是曲谱。因为很喜欢一段电视配乐，我尝试把它写成钢琴谱。我拥有业余电子琴五级证书，但这依然不容易。遇到瓶颈后，我求助于网上。然而有多少人会随便帮助陌生人做这种麻烦事呢?答案是零。于是我便下定决心，靠自己来完成。没想到经过自己的一番努力真的把它写成了!从中我明白了另一样重要的事，那就是自立自强。没人可以随便让你依靠。困难要自己克服才有意义。

所以有理由相信，虽然我于现在的只能做到中上成绩，但到大学去学习自己喜欢的，向往科目时我一定能做到最好。那时我会选择自己的事业，全身心投入去完成。相信我做到更好——也希望您可以相信。

我认为我最重要的优势是，我有时间——同所有人一样。我还有利用大学四年去改变自己、完成自己的机会。去争取它，那便是我现在在做的事了。希望贵校能给我实现自我的机会。期待您的认可!

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