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优秀的英文自我评价

范文类型:自我评介,全文共 5978 字

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Time flies in the companys three-month trial is coming to an end, the memories of this short but rich practical life, I am both nervous and novelty, but also a lot of harvest. Here is my brief summary of my internship life.

First of all, in the ideological and organizational discipline, abide by the provisions of internships, no late, leave early, absenteeism and sick leave, and actively participate in health, water conservation, public property, civilized courtesy, modesty, respect leaders and colleagues, unity and fraternity , And colleagues get along. Second, the work attitude, work hard work, dedication, hard work, listening and coordination with the leadership of the squad leader arrangements, humbly accept the car supervisor and other colleagues criticism and suggestions, and strive to do their work, can do rigorous work, Diligent study to ask, and complete the squad leader layout of the task. In practical ability, the harvest the most, the biggest satisfaction is learned before the company has no contact with the equipment so that I know more about driving equipment and textbooks outside the knowledge and doing things the truth. In practice, the theory can be linked with practice, by solving the problems encountered in practice, increased self-knowledge and ability to solve things, but also learned a lot of things that have not previously learned. In life, to know a lot of work together with their colleagues to get along with them, in learning to learn from each other with advice, to help each other, mankind also received a lot of life. I am very grateful to Hai Chang company to give me this rare internship opportunities and work, but also very grateful to the leadership and car supervisor Zhou monitor for my trust and concern, I also cherish this opportunity to learn in this three months trial a lot Things, I believe that if we can work for the Hoi Chang more, their own is also learned more.

The trial in the , brought me some of my previous company did not touch the knowledge, which will be our future work, life, and the next electrical maintenance work of great help. More importantly, in the electrician internship I learned is a serious and scientific attitude, through the electrical practice, so I Siemens electrical control systems, inverter, ship loading machine, bucket wheel, and electrical technology Have a deeper understanding of the rationale for electrical technology and other aspects of expertise to do a better understanding. At the same time, through internships to obtain the actual production knowledge and installation skills such as electrician technical knowledge, develop their ability to link theory with practice, improve the ability to analyze and solve problems, enhance the ability to work independently, to cultivate cooperation among colleagues, to explore and advance together spirit. More than three months of trial, so I more deeply understand the importance of practice, through the practice of more understanding of the "apply what they have learned," the truth of this sentence, there is a problem there is gain, there is increased.Theory and practice are very different, and many things need to think for themselves, only to pay, will get, there is thinking, there is a gain, it means to improve, it increased the practical ability and thinking ability.

Establish the overall concept, do their jobs No matter what work, establish a global consciousness is the primary problem, electrical maintenance is no exception. I think the electrician should be the first time to deal with equipment problems, to meet production. Collection of problems in order to make timely improvements, so that better maintenance to meet future production requirements. As the electrician should have a strong professional and technical knowledge, but also should have good communication skills, some equipment has been due to the use of improper operation before there is a problem, and often not reflect the maintenance of not, so this time we need to find Out of the crux of the problem, and they flow, regulate the operation, so as to avoid such problems

I think the electrician should be the first time to deal with equipment problems, to meet production. Collect questions,

In order to make timely improvements, so that better maintenance to meet future production requirements. Proficient in professional skills, diligent on-site observation of independent thinking, and more exchanges with colleagues, and strive to continuously improve their level. Every maintenance of a driving, is the companys traffic equipment to further promote the work of technical understanding. This three-month trial, I learned a lot of things, not only learning, but also learned a lot of truth in life, for me to benefit greatly. This is my future into the future work is very useful.In addition, I learned how to better communicate with others, how to better state their views, how to persuade others to agree with their point of view. I believe that these valuable experiences will be the most important cornerstone of my future success. Trial is a must have every experience into the plant, it allows me to understand the companys equipment in practice, work content, regulations and society, so we learned a lot in schools and companies simply do not learn the knowledge, but also opened the Vision, an increase of knowledge, for me to better serve the future Haichang lay a solid foundation.

The information age, the basic hands-on ability is all work and create the basis and necessary conditions, and only continue to increase their ability to have a very rich knowledge in the future competition will not be eliminated. There must be good technology and judgment to make the work go smoothly. The internship, let me feel. In the process of learning in the future, I should try to combine theory and practice, focusing on the ability to exercise their own hands, so that their future work face a certain confidence and confidence.

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篇1:优秀的英文自我评价

范文类型:自我评介,全文共 4887 字

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Ring the New Years bell ringing in 20xx, has become the past, the prelude to 20xx has been opened, review me into the hundreds of popular department nearly two years of work, can be said to be the result, earn more, experience more, but many problems, too. In order to better to do all the work in the future, according to the requirements of leadership is about 20xx a year working summary is as follows:

A, about the overview of annual work

In hundreds of popular department store such as security work in a large department store, a great responsibility, the pressure surge. In order to complete and fulfill the mission of good, with good quality for one year we focus on the three tasks. One is the team construction. A good team is the important guarantee of good work, starting from the security form, we will adhere to the principle of "" on the team construction, grasping personnel equipped, grasping quality enhancement. Six months, our security has become a draw, played to ring, have strong executive force and fighting capacity, can complete the task well. The second is to grasp the system construction. Job specification orderly, successful key is to rely on scientific and applicable system as a guarantee, "not to rule, is lacking. We are on duty, transferring - class, learning, training, etc are introduced a complete set of strict and practical system, to carry on accurate militarized management team, with a system to regulate our behavior, to ensure the completion of tasks with the system. 3 it is to grasp the ideological construction. As a result of our colleagues come from different places, different jobs, every mans comprehensive quality, personality, hobbies are not the same. More important is that they are just in his early 20 s, soft, this is both the need of our security work, at the same time, we also need to be aware of in the daily work and life, the young plasticity is very big, but the variability is very big also. Problems and errors in the work, we require: shall not conceal, timely report, has must rectify a mistake, there is a wrong will change, to punish after cure, before that, to strengthen the spirit, improve their work. Various forms of ideological and moral education, has received the tangible result. Whether at work, or in daily life, our team in the sanduo "3 without" gratifying situation. I.e., proactive, negative to cope with less; Do things endures hardship in front, no bargaining; To do good, disciplinary back method.

Second, the progress and deficiency

Access to hundreds of popular department work, has always been my pleasure, I think, because I think I learned a lot here in other places not learn social experience, although security work not how unremarkable, but it truly is an indispensable safeguard department, because of our work should not only guarantee the life property safety of the customers to visit our department, but also protect the goods in our store security, although multifarious work again and again, but this exercise my ability of organization and communication, let my communication ability is greatly improved, this is my personal feel their biggest progress; But at the same time also has many shortcomings, such as the arrangement of the work is not very detailed, all the time since I wanted to design a detailed plan for a days work, chapter works that way there will be a nodal, wont have no idea, the other in terms of dealing with emergencies and emergency, feel the strain capacity and lack of, later in the work must be compared with the excellent employees, many communication, learning, and himself in the work constantly learning and accumulation.

Three, ability and character

Although oneself do security work, not to deal with him yourself how numerous and complicated things, but as we advocated by the hundreds of popular a word: "big and small issues seriously, repeat the happy things to do", I have been following the rule, strict with myself in work, not to let uncertainty of safety hazards exist in their noses, once discover things immediately resolved, strictly abide by the companys articles of association, the advantages of this is my personality, I think so my potential, and because I feel meticulous, conscientious, security most in need of love and respect hillock do have the quality, I believe I have this. Of course I also have insufficient, is not very talkative, personality is not too the extroversion, I will try to overcome in the later work.

Fourth, work plan and design in 20xx

New Year new atmosphere, the New Year I wish I have a greater progress, trying to own work experience, more exercise to do a good job in every markets big promotion, guarantee the customers life and property safety, ensure the safety of stores of trying not to make any mistakes in his work, and colleagues work together to hundreds of popular department of a better future.

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篇2:写给公司的道歉信范文

范文类型:道歉信,适用行业岗位:企业,全文共 531 字

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尊敬的*总:

您好!

首先非常感谢您在与我公司合作中给予的关注与支持,收到您的"关于工作表现的汇报"我们非常重视,并对该业务员的一切行为深感震惊。

经取证调查、核实事件的来龙去脉后,在此,我谨代表*有限公司的全体员工,对业务员在派遣期间之一切严重违纪行为表示诚恳地歉意!作为一个负责任的品牌企业,发生这样的事,我们深感内疚和自责!

事情的发生对一直以来信任和支持部分区域客户心理造成了一定的伤害,也对我企业的声誉和形象造成了难以弥补的巨大损失!同时,也暴露了我企业在业务管理工作中存在的失职、失责、失查问题以及在基础管理和特殊时段的应急处理能力的不足。

鉴于严重失信,损坏我公司及客户声誉、谎报信息、假票冲账、虚报假账、向客户借款、收受回扣等严重违纪行为带来的极其恶劣的影响,造成的严重名誉损害。我公司为了业务正常有序的良性发展及企业良好形象,经研究决定,即日起对做出以下处理决定:

同时,公司将会就此期间针对对贵公司及您个人造成的损失进行补偿,补偿包括:、等相关费用,由销售部孙总负责与您核定支付。再次对在此期间给您带来的一切困扰深表歉意!

希望以后贵公司及林总还能一如既往的信任和支持,让我们为共同维护企业的良好形象,发展友好的合作关系而努力!

此致

敬礼!

20xx年x月x日

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篇3:优秀个人道歉信范文

范文类型:道歉信,适用行业岗位:个人,全文共 271 字

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亲爱的:你好!我最好的朋友,我们好几个星期没见了。几天前,我在家里举行了一个聚会。有很多朋友来参加聚会。我们玩游戏,唱流行歌曲,吃了一顿大餐。

但是我在聚会上感到不高兴,因为我没有邀请我最好的朋友,你。我写这封信是为了让你原谅我的错误。我知道你思想相当宽广。为了表示我的诚意,我将为你举办另一个聚会。很高兴邀请你来。

这是一个很好的机会,你认识许多朋友,你已经很久没有见过了。聚会将于下星期天晚上七点在我家开始。你能来参加聚会吗?没有你,聚会就不完整。希望见到你并得到你的原谅。如果你对聚会有什么好建议,请写信给我。向你致以最良好的祝愿!

此致

敬礼

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篇4:英文合同

范文类型:合同协议,全文共 4294 字

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Contract No.:

Sales and Purchase ContractFOR

Manganese Ore

This contract is made and entered into on, Feb20xxunder terms and conditions as per the international chamber of commerce-600 (ICC UCP-600/20xx revision) by and between:

The Buyer:

Address:

Tel:

The Seller :

Address:

Tel:

Whereby seller agrees to sell to buyer and Buyer agrees to buy from seller Manganese Ore under following the terms and conditions stipulated below:

Article 1 Commodity

Concentrated manganese Ore

Article 2 Specifications

Concentrated Manganese Ore

Size: 0-5mm (90% min)

% Mn min. 40.0%

% Fe max. 15.0%

% Silica ( SiO2 ) max. 1.0%

% Aluminum ( Al ) max. 4.0%

% S max. 0.20%

% P max. 0.10%

Moisture max. 7%

Article 3 Quantity:

500 MT, partial shipment not allowed.

Article 4 Origin and Port of loading

4.1 Republic of ABC

4.2 Loading port:

Article 5 Packing/Delivery

5.1 In50 kg sack

5.2 Incontainer Shipment, more or less 20 tons.

Article 6 Shipment/Delivery

6.1 500MT(+/-5%)partial shipment not allowed

6.2 Shipment will be 90 days after signing of this contract and after the acceptance of the Letter of Credit by seller’s bank. L/C will be openedafter BuyerreceivingProforma Invoice from Sellerwith confirmation of the delivery schedule.

6.3 The Buyer has the right to appoint the independent surveyor or his representative to conduct the Pre-shipment Inspection and/or conduct the joint-inspection of the material with buyer for his own account.

Article 7 Contracted Price and Values

Price:Mn: 48% and above - USD0.00/%/DMTCFRCY Port, China

40% - 47.9% - USD 0.00 /%/DMTCFRCY Port, China

The Mn content will be average of the joint-inspection testing result at loading port.

Article 8 Payment

8.1 Payment shall be effected in full by an irrevocable Letter of Credit, which will be opened by 1stclass bank in Hong Kong or Singapore, 100% at sight upon presentation of shipping documents.

A. Seller’s Banking Details:

Bank Name :

Bank Address :

Account Name :

S.W.I.F.T. CODE SWIFT :

B. Buyer’s bank issues L/C to the Sellers bank via S.W.I.F.T. wire transfer.

Buyer’s Banking Details:

Bank Name : (will be advised)

Bank Address :

Account Name:

S.W.I.F.T. Address SWIFT :

Article 10 Inspection of Analysis & Weight

The shipmentinspection and analysis shall be done byCCICappointed by the Seller and one independent surveyor (i.e.: SGS or Geo-Chem, etc) appointed by the buyeras agreed by both parties at site before loading to container. While final weightand qualitydetermination shall be done atloadingportby the above joint-survey.Moisture content shall be deducted from the total weight shipped.

Article 11 Documents

Seller shall present the following documents to the buyer:

A. Signed Commercial Invoice for 100% of the total cargo value indicating, quantity, unit price and the total Amount of Value of the delivered commodity , 1 original and 3 copies.

B. Certificates of quantity, quality and weight issued byCCICand one independent surveyor appointed by the buyer.

C. Certificate of Origin issued by ABC Department Of Trade or concerned Government authorities, I original and 2 copies.

D. Weight List, showing total weight , 1 original and 3 copies.

E. Bill of Lading, 3 original copies and 3 non-negotiable copies.

Article 12 Force Majeure

The Seller shall not be responsible for the delay of shipment or non-delivery of the goods due to Force Majeureunder UCP 600. The seller shall advise the buyer immediately of the occurrence mentioned above and within 3 days thereafter the seller shall send a notice by courier to the buyer of their acceptance of a certificate of the accident issued by the local chamber of commerce under whose jurisdiction the accident occurs as evidence thereof. Under such circumstances the seller , however, are still under obligation to take all necessary measures to hasten the delivery of the goods. In case the accident lasts for more than 60 days the buyer shall have the right to cancel the Contract.

Article 13 Arbitration

All disputes arising out of or in connection with this Contract shall be finally resolved by arbitration in accordance with the Rules of Arbitration of the International Chamber of Commerce (UCP-600/20xx or Uniform Customs and Practice for Documentary Credits) by one or more arbitrators appointed in accordance with the said rules. The arbitration shall be conducted in ABCbythe English language.

Buyer Seller

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篇5:火灾事故的道歉信

范文类型:道歉信,全文共 431 字

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尊敬的本市领导:

我怀着深深的愧疚与自责向大家宣读我公司对于7.15火灾事故道歉信。此次7.15火灾事故共造成一人重伤,2人受轻伤,一间厂房烧毁的严重后果,预计直接经济损失在300万元。

在此,我代表本公司向事故受伤人员极其家属表示深深的歉意,并表示我公司会按照规定、尽己所能地做好善后赔偿工作。

对于这次事故,我公司有着不可推卸的事故责任。公司厂房存在年久失修的情况基本属实,厂房的消防设施布也没有完全达到消防规定,不少灭火器材都已过期未更换。

此次事故的发生,也是我公司各相关领导所不愿意看到的。错误发生,我们极为懊悔与自责。为此,我表示要严肃认真吸取本次事故教训,在今后彻心改正错误:

第一,今后我公司必将坚决贯彻“安全第一”的核心原则,主抓安全生产。

第二,今后建立一套完善健全且不断更新维护的公司消防安全体系。

第三,充分吸取此次错误的经验教训,将此次7.15火灾事故列为公司的“警醒日”,让全体领导、员工认识消防安全重要性。

此致:

非常抱歉!

20xx年XX月XX日

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篇6:给公司的经典道歉信

范文类型:道歉信,适用行业岗位:企业,全文共 322 字

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新疆吉祥达建筑安装公司各位老总,

你们好,我是几年前曾经工作于贵公司的江西理工大学学生曲良峰,由于贵司的疏忽给本人造成的职业待遇、身心,生活等伤害,所以本人在没有得到合理解释和遭遇不良社会风气情况下,曾发表一些涉及到贵司法人的信息,在此,本人作出深刻检讨,对贵司相关人员遇到的不理智的待遇郑重的说一声“对不起”,与此同时,我已经删除相关网站的对贵公司违反劳动法的一些行为的宣传,自此,我不再与贵司计较众多失去的东西,希望你们也能守法,遵守新疆乌鲁木齐市水磨沟区中级法院的公平裁定,做一个良心企业,承担你们对社会和职工们的责任和义务,不要再为难咱们这些工程行业的工人,大家都不容易。本是同根生,相煎何太急!

道歉人:__X

时间:____年__月__日

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篇7:英文自我介绍信

范文类型:自我评介,介绍信,全文共 1160 字

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Having heard that there is a need for students of English major in your company, Id like to render my services for the post you are offering.I am a 23-year-old undergraduate expecting to graduate by July 20xx from the Department of English, Central South University, with a bachelor degree majoring in English.

In the past three years, I have participated in several activities concerning the application of English. In July 20xx I used to work as an office assistant in an Import Export Company for two weeks, during which I have done some translation and reception work that enabled me to learn a great deal which couldnt be taught in class. Whats more, June 20xx saw my translation efforts made for the tender materials of English version of some construction companies. I think my education and previous experiences will enable me to offer helpful services.

The enclosed resume will tell you more about my details, and my references, to whom I can refer you as to my personality and ability, is available upon request. I shall be pleased to come to your office for a personal interview at any time that is convenient to you.

Yours faithfully

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篇8:本月英文自我评价

范文类型:自我评介,全文共 1434 字

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able to work under high pressure and time limitation.能够在高压力下和时间限制下进行工作。

be elegant and with nice personality.举止优雅、个人性格好。

with good managerial skills and organizational capabilities.有良好的治理艺术和组织能力。

the main qualities required are preparedness to work hard, ability to

learn, ambition and good health.主要必备素质是吃苦耐劳精神好、学习能力优、事业心强和身体棒。

mature,self-motivated and strong interpersonal skills.思想成熟、上进心强,并具极丰富的人际关系技巧。

energetic,fashion-minded person.精力旺盛、思想新潮。

with a pleasant mature attitude.开朗成熟。 strong determination to succeed.有获得成功的坚定决心。 strong leadership skills.有极强的领导艺术。 ability to work well with others.能够同他人一道很好地工作。 highly-motivated and reliable person with excellent health and pleasant

personality.上进心强又可靠者,并且身体健康、性格开朗。 the ability to initiate and operate independently.有创业能力,并能独立地从业。

strong leadership skill while possessing a great team spirit.有很高的领导艺术和很

强的集体精神。

be highly organized and effecient.工作很有条理,办事效率高。

willing to learn and progress.肯学习进取。

good presentation skills.有良好的表达能力。

positive active mind essential.有积极、灵活的头脑。

ability to deal with personnel at all levels effectively.善于同各种人员打交道。

have positive work attitude and be willing and able to work diligently without supervision.有积极的工作态度,愿意和能够在没有监督的情况下勤奋地工作。

young,bright,energetic with strong career-ambition.年轻、聪明、精力充沛,并有很强的事业心。

having good and extensive social connections.具有良好而广泛的社会关系。

being active, creative and innonative is a plus.思想活跃、有首创和革新精神尤佳。

with good analytical capability.有较强的分析能力。

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篇9:英文的生日邀请函范文

范文类型:邀请函,全文共 414 字

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Dear friend,

Im very happy,because my birthday will come next Saturday, And my family have many food and drink.I think a lot of funny things and we will paly them in that day.So I hope you can take part in.Now I will tell you the address of my house.It is in the central of our city named Funny Time. There are many trees and flowers around my home. Its wall is red and white.You must come.Ill wite you.

your friend

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篇10:优秀的英文自我评价

范文类型:自我评介,全文共 1261 字

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I am a perfectionist with an obsessive pursuit of ideals, but I am more concerned with the pursuit of the ideal than the final result of the hard process. I think gold is always shining. A person, no matter what his current situation, his realm of life can not be completely limited, of course, a persons current talent can not fully determine his future all social contribution. A persons life should be a work hard, and constantly exceeded and breakthrough process!

I am passionate, generous, fluent in English, and pure mathematics and applied mathematics through basic professional skills. In the past three years, I have learned a wide range of modern mathematics courses related to differential geometry, partial differential equations, and topology, with great interest in specialized courses. In the aspect of thinking and cognition, I have carefully studied the basic contents and history of philosophy, science and technology, aesthetics, etc., and have a deep and profound reverence for the wisdom of the sages.

As for my future work, I have a strong ability to work in teams, can withstand stress, and like challenging and creative issues. In particular, in the work I can Chikunailao, humbly communicate with others, continue to learn to forge ahead.

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篇11:小学生作文评语怎么写?_作文评语_网

范文类型:评语,适用行业岗位:小学,学生,全文共 4115 字

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小学生作文评语怎么写?

作文评语时,还应站在学生的角度,去品味你写的作文评语会给他带去正面还是负面的影响。下面是由第一范文网PQ小编推荐的小学生作文评语x,欢迎大家阅读。

小学生作文评语

鼓励为主。教师在批改学生作文时,要留心学生的进步,哪怕是极其微小的进步,在评语中应该指出来,给予肯定的赞扬。有时优点并不容易发现,甚至要教师带着放大镜去看。即使是对学生习作中的不足之处,也应该用一种商量 式的评语。如:“这个词是不是可以换一个?”“这句话太长了,用标点把它们分开行吗?”等。而要尽量避免一些判决书式的冷冰冰的评语。如:“语句不同,条理不清,中心不明确”等。会挫伤孩子的写作积极性和自信心。要尽可能让学生从老师的评语中看到自己的长处和闪光点,一此来增强学生的能力感和成就感,让他们感到自己能行,增强他们的自信心。

表扬鼓励决不是盲目的吹捧、廉价的 赞扬,而是事实求是,恰如其分,同时也不排斥满腔热情地指正。例如有这样一多评语:“你的文章如春雷般唤醒沉睡的大地,为新的一天增添新绿……”很有诗意,也很美,但对小学生来讲,太深奥了,不懂其中蕴含的真正意思。

古人云:“数子十过,不如奖其一长。”把握好鼓励为主的原则,写好评语,让学生体会到写作的成功和乐趣。

最新的小学低年级作文评语:评有所指。这里的“所指”,即是要有真对性,要有的的放矢,而不要千篇一腔,翻来覆去老是那么几句套话、空话。

吕叔湘先生曾谈到他读小学时一位语文老师批改作文的一位语文老师批改作文的一个特点,“就是对不同的人有不同的批改重点。有人错别字多,就着重批他的错别字;有人说话罗嗦,就着重批他的罗嗦;有人说话不照前顾后,就着重批他的失于照应。因此往往同一种错误,在这个同学的本子上随手改掉,评语中并不提什么,在那个同学的本子上就要先批一通再动笔改。当然,着重点不是一成不变的,一个缺点克服了,另一件事又提到日程上来了。

这段话给我们这样的启示:小学生初学习作,难免会有这样那样的问题、毛病,我们不能从文学的高度去要求同时们,也不可能指望一次评语能解决所有问题,而应因文而异,有所针对,有所侧重,各个击破,最终取得写作水平的全面提升。

评语的针对性还要做到因人而异。小学生的性格是各不相同的,有人骄傲,有人谦虚,有人进取,有人懒惰,因而导致了他们对接受事物有不同的一面。所以,写作文评语时,还应站在学生的角度,去品味你写的作文评语会给他带去正面还是负面的影响。对易骄傲的学生大肆渲染地加以表扬,只会让他骄傲自满,不思进取。只有诚恳地向他提出不足之处,并提出殷切的希望,才可让他清楚、正确地认识自己、改进自我。对懒惰的学生不可以夸赞他简短的习作为精练之作,只有勉励中加一丝认可方能让他认识到自己的可取与不可取之处。

生动有趣。一位学生在习作中有一段离了题的描写。他啊的语文老师用一个特大有力的红“X”把它给“毙”了。评语自然是毫不留情的硬梆梆的判决书式的语句:“离题万里,乱址一通,不如不写!”

简单的三个词,使学生如闻老师的责骂之声。似睹老师的不屑之态。这样的评语怎能叫学生有研读的兴趣呢?即使勉强读了,恐怕也之会对作文心灰意冷。这当然与我们给作文写评语的目的大相径庭。

活泼好动的小学生喜欢在生动有趣的语言中获得收益,喜欢在欢声笑语中捂出道理。学生喜欢的语文老师大多是幽默风趣、知识广博、能说会道的。给学生写评语也是这样,一条有趣的评语学生会竟相传阅,仔细体会评语中的“味道”,最终捂出其中的道理。

评语的生动活泼、幽默风趣也要掌握分寸,否则使学生认为老师在讽刺他,从而产生抵触情绪,那样就弄巧成拙了。

合乎规范。作文评语是写给学生看的,是对学作文和人的评点和指导。其目的之一就是要给学生做出一个榜样。所以教师在写评语时,各方面都要做到合乎规范。要求学生做到的事,老师首先要做到。

老师写的评语,卷面要干净、整齐,使人看了感到舒服;遣词造句要力求准确、生动;标点符号的使用要恰当,合乎规范;书写汉字要正确、工整,不写不规范的简体字。如果老师龙飞凤舞的写上几个字:字迹不工整,错别字太多。很难想象学生会从中获得什么有益的启示。

精彩的作文评语会给学生写作水平的提高提供有益的帮助,也会使学生变得自尊、自爱、自信、自强,引导学生走上正确的人生道路。作文评语为老师和学生架起沟通和交流的桥梁,让老师和学生共同享受着教与学的乐趣。

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作文评语既有评价功能,又有导向作用。精妙的评语,往往能唤起学生的写作兴趣,点燃学生的写作热情,激活学生的创造思维。

因此,教师在评改学生作文时,一定要用心写作文评语,使作文评语具有六“性”。

一、准确性

老师在评价学生的作文时要遵循小学生各年段的年龄特点和认识事物规律,要做到正确、客观,不要随意拔高要求,更不要求全责备。评语要写得具体明确,要抓住学生习作中的主要问题进行点评,给学生指明方向, 使学生有所警醒和收获。比如教师发现学生的习作行文多有不通时,就不能光写个“语句不通”了事,而应具体指出语病的根源,属于何种毛病,应如何避免等,像再世华佗一样,开出“对症良方”来。

二、情感性

教师写作文评语要以情去感染人,要以己心去发现他心。可落笔直呼其名,还可多情地加上个“小”字,敞开自己心扉,似家常絮语,像亲朋叙旧,字字句句轻扣学生的心弦。这样,学生阅读了老师深情的评语后,感受到老师是用心在关注他,用情在欣赏他,用爱在发现他,不仅能缩短师生之间的心理距离,还会使师生的关系变得和谐融洽,大大提高学生对评语的阅读兴趣。

曾经教过一个姓冯的女生,女孩什么都好,就是一直郁郁寡欢,好像生来就与欢笑无缘。真的是生性如此,还是另有隐情呢?几次试探性的交谈都未获得结果。后来在《我的××》一文中,她吐露了因自己的疏忽而使弟弟不幸落水身亡的悔恨心理,写得质朴感人。我读后写下了这样的评语:“字里行间,流露出对弟弟的思念之情,质朴的语言,纯朴的感情,令人潸然泪下。天有不测风云,人有旦夕祸福。更何况当时的你只是五岁的娃娃,哪能预料祸福?老师觉得错不在你,你不能总生活在阴影里。爸妈虽有失子之痛,但能有你这样懂事的女儿,也是一种最好的补偿,他们会感到幸福的!老师、同学和你父母都真心期盼着见到你灿烂的笑脸!” 这位女生读了这段评语后,十分感动,从此,脸上渐渐地有了笑容。

三、激励性

“数子十过不如奖子一长。”作文是学生的劳动成果,教师要善于用一双慧眼发现学生作文中的闪光点,哪怕是一句形象的语句,一个生动的词语,甚至一个准确的标点,都应以充满激情和希望的评语肯定他们的成绩,增强他们不懈努力的信心。例如,一些学生阅读面广,写作中能恰到好处地运用古诗文、传说故事,教师在评语中不妨送上一句:“你真是写作高手!把民间故事巧妙地运用到景物描写中来。”也有学生作文通篇文采飞扬,比班内学生明显高出一筹,教师就可以这样批注: “阅读你的文章是我的一种荣幸,几年后或许你的名字会家喻户晓。”我想,每一个孩子读到这样的批语都会心花怒放。再如,“可喜可贺,又一篇佳作问世了!细致的内心活动描写,巧妙的前后照应,证明你已掌握了一定的写作技巧。从你的这篇作文,我仿佛看到21世纪的冰心!”这样的评语,既肯定了学生对作文技巧的灵活运用,又使学生体验到作文成功的愉悦与满足,让他们觉得自己才是作文的主人,从而激发写作的积极性和主动性,并在心灵深处树立起为做人而作文的信念。

四、启迪性

对学生不符合写作要求的习作,或者文中出现的语言不规范的现象,教师要进行点拨--用上启发性的评语,引导学生独立思考,积极探索,从而发现自己作文中的问题,提高分析问题和解决问题的能力。如一个学生在《我学会了游泳》一文中没能把自己学游泳的过程写具体,只写道:“我开始怎么游也不会游。爸爸就耐心地教了我一个方法,我便按爸爸教的方法游,终于学会了游泳,我高高兴兴地回家去。”我就在这段话旁写下了批语:“真为你高兴,你的游泳本领大起来了,你爸爸真有一手!我也希望学一学,可仔细地阅读了你的文章后,老师也没找到你爸爸的绝招,让人感到遗憾。”没有直接用“内容不具体”“重点不突出”来点出学生作文的不足,而是通过启发性的语言,引起学生的思考,认识文章中的不足。这个学生看了批语后,马上对自己的作文进行修改,把爸爸教游泳的方法具体地写了下来。

五、趣味性

苏联著名教育家斯维特洛夫说:“教师最主要的,也是第一位助手是幽默。”活泼好动的小学生喜欢在生动有趣的语言中获得教益,喜欢在笑声中悟出道理。一句深刻幽默的评语,不仅可以创造愉快的学习情境,而且可以达到一种“笑过之后又令人深思”的效果。如,“句号瞪着圆圆的眼睛,引号的眉毛挑了起来,叹号哭起了鼻子:我的主人,你怎么忽视我在文中应有的位置呢?”这么一句评语送给不正确使用标点符号,作文一逗到底,乱点“鸳鸯谱”的学生,可促使其在一笑之余,马上“拨乱反正”。又如,有位学生在作文中写了这样一个细节:“我远远地看见前面走过来一位老人,他头发灰白,满脸皱纹……”我给他写了这样一条眉批:“你是长着千里眼,还是戴着望远镜呢?”结果全班同学竞相传阅,以后学生习作中此类错误就很少出现了。

六、 商讨性

学生写作是用自己的眼光去看待这个缤纷多彩的世界,往往表达出独特的认识,教师不能根据自己的主观想法去任意修改,以致文章中美好的童真、童趣在修改中消失。对学生习作中一些不尽如人意之处,教师要注重营造平等、民主、宽松的气氛,与学生共同探讨写作问题,一起研究解决办法,在师生思维碰撞过程中有效地引领学生进行新的探究活动。如在读完一篇学生习作《快乐的春游》后我写了这么一句:“你春游时观察得真仔细!你眼中的景,美得像一幅画!如果把你当时的愉快心情写上,那该多好!“作文评语使用商讨性的语气,既指出不当之处,又提出建设性的意见,显得亲切、平和,容易让人接受,收到理想的效果。

一位作家在给他的小学语文老师写的信中说:“是您,多次在我的作文中写下了激励性的语言。至今,我还记得好多话。您说我会成为作家的,从那以后,我真的做起了作家梦,没想到,现在,梦已经成真了。”但愿我们都能从这则感人的故事中受到启迪。

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篇12:给领导的道歉信范文推荐

范文类型:道歉信,适用行业岗位:领导,全文共 1498 字

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尊敬的领导:

您好!

我是,20年春节前隶属于皖北区域行销主管,20年1月23日东区行政人员陈通过电话通知我会议日程,并把会议内容和要求发送到我的QQ邮箱,要求在第二天9点准时进入会议日程,同事在电话中报到!20年1月24日三全食品股份有限公司东区电话会议上打开手机进入东区会议通话时,无视工作纪律,公然开着手机开会期间和别人聊天,扰乱会议秩序,严重影响会议的开展和进程,作为一名销售人员在工作期间作出的行为很可耻。

事情是发生在会议后的一个小时,皖南行销主管吴打电话告诉我,开会期间的事情和经过,我对此非常的歉意,我想此时并不是道歉能解决的问题,涉及到人品、职业道德、伦理的关系,影响到的人也是不能一句话就解决的,需要触及到灵魂才能保证事情的再次发生。

作为受过高等教育的人,我是那么的轻狂、自大、无知、愚昧、骄傲!忘记自己几斤几两了,再一次证明自己是错误的事实。我应该为自己的此次行为感到可耻和忏悔,从小学到中学、高中、大学,老师和家长每次都教育我要低调做人,高调做事,谦虚、尊重别人就是尊重自己,现在自己的行为和言论严重的不尊重同事、领导,给公司造成很坏的影响,不仅是经济效益,也是管理效益。

作为速冻食品职业的员工,公司的公司训言也是无时无刻的告诉自己,尊重就是胜利,不仅尊重同事、领导,更要尊重对手!所以从一进入公司的时候就会教育我们尊重的重要性,历史的顺序也是,这样一直到我这里,我把这事情丢在脑后,不顾一切的来满足自己的无知和骄傲。

作为社会人的角度来说,这个时候我是失败的,如果在一个小团队里面,我都没有容身之地,还有什么能让我待下去的理由呢,在此,说明内心狂躁的时候要静下心来认真思考我的领导、同事对于我的帮助和支持。没有他们我是苍白无力的。刚进入社会就进入食品股份有限公司这个企业,我是满意。不仅是企业的发展规模还是企业的实力和社会责任感,都是在同行业中首屈一指的。我需要在这个企业中成长。

通过东区电话会议的事情,我想通过以下几个方面道歉和表达诚意:

1.工作方面,作为20年的大学毕业生,我是稚嫩、空白、理想主义者的光环笼罩,认真工作踏实的学习,我的领导王经理、朱总、刘经理、魏经理都是我榜样,执行公司领导的旨意,踏实的执行工作细节,及时反馈给领导报备,有效控制不必要的损失。心里上和外表上都要表示诚恳

2.生活方面,社会生活时间不是很长,以往都是在校园里面度过的,现在我是需要锻炼的和学习的,王经理、朱总给我一次机会让我,做皖北区域行销主管,这是不容易的开始,不能以为自己的一次进步,就认为是无敌的,认清自己的不足和缺失。要事情上看待到本质,谦虚、空杯的心态面对社会和人群,三人行必有我老师也!

3.学习方面,在学习过程中,不要认为我做好了,速冻食品的知识还有很多,需要我来进一步学习,会议期间不好好听讲,反而是自己在讲话,那是需要改正和批评的

朱总说的对,你现在只不过是小毛孩,不要骄傲,要学会尊重别人,不要把自己当什么都学会了,组织是有纪律的,你现在认识也是肤浅的需要深造。任何领导之所以能做领导是有其中道理的!我说,事情真的大家听到的那样,我是在无视工作期间私自玩,影响别人工作,只是一时的冲昏头脑让自己不知所措了,因为工作还是在正常的做,而且是在规定时间内完成的。

在此,我要诚挚地表达我的歉意:为我承担工作上的错误和失误的领导,事情出现没有及时沟通,工作受到影响的诸位同事,表达我由衷的歉意,对不起!

现在,我已经充分认识到我的上述行为所造成的不良影响,以及我思想层面的原因。有过当改,各位同仁以我为戒,并进行监督。最后,我要再次向各位表达我由衷的歉意,并请接受我的道歉。对不起

此致

敬礼

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篇13:去世英文慰问信

范文类型:慰问信,全文共 878 字

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Date:

It was with a great sense of loss when we/I heard of (insert name) death.

We/I wanted to let you know that you have our/my greatest sympathy,and our/my heart(s) are/is truly saddened.

(insert name) was more than just a wonderful person; he/she was always so kind and considerate to us that we always welcomed seeing him/her at every opportunity.

And,we know that his/her passing will not only leave a void in our lives,but in the hearts of all those who knew him/her.

(insert name) will always remain within our hearts,and we have included (insert name) and you in our daily prayers.May God give you strength.

If there is anything that we can do to help you in anyway,please do not hesitate to call us at anytime.You can phone either of us at (insert area code and phone number) even if it is only to talk.

Our sincere thoughts and prayers are with you.

With our deepest sympathy,

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篇14:同学道歉信

范文类型:道歉信,全文共 389 字

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__你好,

我们之前井水不犯河水彼此之间也没有太多交集,可你却伤害我最要好的闺蜜,但凡是一个有感情的人也决不允许自己看着的好朋友被欺负。

不知道这些话该不该这样说,但事实确实是如此,我想还是说了比较好一点,让你的心里能够明白。

在我的心里你只能占取一个同学的位置,当然了我们也只能保持同学的关系。很感谢在过去的学习生活中你曾给予我那些鼓励和帮助,我会铭记着你的好处。因为我根本就无法把你当作一位特殊的朋友来看待。你打我的闺蜜是你不对在先你有错,当然我也有责任。

我们本就是同学一场,同在一个教室,同在一个学校,每天都要见上好几面,撕破脸对大家都没有好处,我承认我一直看不惯你,你的言行举止等,但是我想我们没有必要把事情搞得这么僵大家都下不来台,在学校里抬头不见低头见的。

所以这件事到此为止,我向你说声对不起,我希望以后我们能做好朋友(或者我希望以后不要再有类似的事情发生了)!

此致

敬礼!

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篇15:接收函的英文是

范文类型:接收函,全文共 1009 字

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Letter No.:123456

To

Dear Sirs,

our auditors, , are conducting an audit of our financial statements. According to “Auditing Standards of Chinese Certified Public Accountants” , the auditor need to confirm the balance with you. If the information indicated below which comes from our records agrees with yours, please confirm by signing and affixing your official stamp in the space indicated as

“Confirmation the above balance to be no difference”. If yours do not agree with the information, please list the amount of yours in the space indicated as “Giving full details of difference”. We shall be appreciated if you send this confirmation letter directly to .

Address as: Linkman:

Postcode:123456

Tel: +86- Fax: +86-

1.

2. Other events

Please note that this is just a confirmation of account balance(s) and not a request for payment. We appreciated that the account may have been paid or settled since the date mentioned, but confirmation of the balance is still required and please indicate

Company: Date: Conclusion

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篇16:优秀的英文自我评价

范文类型:自我评介,全文共 1617 字

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Although the beginning of military training, when feeling particularly suited to the training is tired and pain, soak in their sweat all day, doing everything to obey orders, not arbitrary, but I can always stick to it, even in the The most tired of the moment did not relax the requirements of their own, asked when the hand and shoulder pressure was sore, I still teeth to maintain, maintain Junzi, and actively hone their own will quality. Later, more sweat, to adapt, and do not feel tired.

Military training let me understand how to do a qualified military is not easy, the military to pay more than we can not imagine the sweat, to be a soldier, we must discipline, obey orders. I am in military uniform is half of the military, through strict military training in their own requirements, my physique and will have been honed even stronger, this kind of bitter and tired I may never meet again, but may Will encounter even more tired of the challenges. I believe that after the military training I will not fear any hardships, I will be brave to face all challenges, no matter how serious the task, I will continue to complete the task.

Military training is also a team training, hard training created a well-trained company, marching, side guns, kettle, we everywhere unified action, we are concerned about each other, mutual exchange of experience, let us squareMore neat. Thirteen companies, even though this company formed only a short period of ten days, but it has been firmly in memory in each of the hearts of thirteen, 13 is the pride of the entire battalion! We created it Honor, and we are proud of it!

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篇17:员工英文辞职信_辞职报告_网

范文类型:辞职信,汇报报告,适用行业岗位:职员,全文共 898 字

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员工英文辞职信

resignation letter

it is with regret that i must inform you of my resignation from my position as administrator at twin cakes corp. effective jan 1, .

i have invested over 13 years of my life at twin cakes corp. and my decision to move on from this position has not come lightly or easily.

it has been a privilege to work with the people at twin cakes corp., i will be forever grateful for the opportunities that have been provided to me during my time here. these years have been so rewarding for me personally and professionally i thank you for providing me with support and guidance over the years.

in the coming weeks i will ensure that any outstanding issues are wrapped up and that records and files are left in order for the incumbent administrator. if there are any priorities that you have for me to wrap up please let me know so i can do my best to ensure that i focus on that for you.

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篇18:英文商务邀请函范文

范文类型:邀请函,适用行业岗位:商务,全文共 428 字

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尊敬的_____:

dear______:

为感谢您及贵公司对我们长期以来的支持与厚爱,我们将在装修一新楼空中酒廊举办商务客户答谢会,尽情期待您的光临!thanks for you and your company supports our hotel as always. we are going to arrange a cocktail party just for you at our newly decorated sky lounge on th floor, we are looking forward your coming.

时间time:_____________________

地点location:____________________

联系人contact person:___________________

联系电话telephone:____________________

传真fax:____________________

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篇19:朋友吵架道歉信英文

范文类型:道歉信,全文共 427 字

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原谅我,好吗? ,你还恨我吗?我知道我很坏,一次次地伤害了你,你现在还恨我也是应该的... 记得那天,我很生气,心里对自己讲,我恨死你,我发誓以后都不再理你。

然而,我错了。原来一个人生气也不会生很耐的,吾知你系吾系,但我系。当我再一次看到你时,我看到你的眼神充满着困惑,愤怒。从那一刻开始,我知道我错了。但我真的没勇气去找你认错,人说,内向型的总是在意别人对自己的看法。是的,我很在意。

从那以后,我不敢再望着你,我怕你会用像那天的眼神一样仇视我。我害拍,惶恐。我一次次地蹀躞于饭堂的过道,大口大口地深呼吸着,深怕自己的余光感受到你的愤怒,而使我的身体被刺得渺小。

从此,我变得没自信,总是低着头颅走路... 然而那天,你对着我笑,笑得那么的灿烂,我想,你大概已不再生我气了吧。但我却感到很愧疚,我觉得自己真的很小气... 如果你还舍不得我的话,就请原谅我吧。如果舍得的话,也不必在意我的感受,我的心理承受能力已比高一好多了...

此致

敬礼!

20xx年x月x日

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篇20:大学给班主任的道歉信

范文类型:道歉信,适用行业岗位:大学,班主任,全文共 643 字

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无知者无畏并不可怕,真正可怕的是无知者还无所谓

——厚德(某重点大学教师)

在昨天晚上的选修课上,我把3个学生礼貌、友好地请出了教室。这是我十几年来第一次在自己的课堂上遇到这样的学生,也是第一次把学生请了出去,尽管是礼貌而友好的.

整个晚上直到现在,我的心里都很不好受,有对自己的自责,更多的是深深的思考和沉重的责任感。

这3位学生从上课开始始终在偶有间断地接听手机和相互大声说话,在我友好地提醒了两次后仍然是这样。其他学生都向他们投去了厌恶和无奈的目光,也向我投来了同情和征询的目光。我平静地对他们说,如果有什么事情没处理完,就出去说吧,不要影响讲课和听课。我以为他们会安静下来,但一个学生竟然真地站了起来走出去了,另两名学生在稍稍迟疑后也跟着走了出去。这时候课堂上很静,我反倒突然感到自己的不妥和尴尬。尽管整堂课充满了笑声和掌声,我心底还是多了一丝自责和沉重。在下课前,我当着近300名学生表达了自责和歉意。下课后,几个学生过来对我说,老师,你没有错,他们真是太过分了,也真的影响我们听课了。

但我想的是更深层的问题。

我有很多政府、企业和教育、文化界的朋友,他们对大学生的成长、就业等问题很关心,也都在自己的能力范围内做了很多有益的工作,但他们也表达了对大学生的一些负面评价和些许失望。

我的一个学生在一家大型药业公司做人力资源总监。他对我说,有的学生在招聘现场站没站样、坐没坐样,还有的学生一副满不在乎、无所谓的样子,甚至有的学生连话都说不明白,这样的学生往往在第一关就被pass(淘汰)了。

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