登岳阳楼【经典20篇】

课文通过记叙两个日常生活中的小故事来启示人们在生活中要学会将心比心，尊重老人，关爱孩子，让人与人之间多一些宽容和理解。课文内容浅显易懂，在教学的过程中采用自读自悟的方法进行课文学习，达到了意想不到的效果。

拿到课文后读了几遍，脑海中开始思考这节课的教学思路。这是一篇略读课文，文章描述的都是日常生活中的平常事情，备课时是这样设计的：学生读熟课文后解决几个问题，谈谈对这篇课文的理解。以往大多数课堂上的大部分时间都是我在滔滔不绝的讲着，台下一双双小眼睛聚精会神的看着我，小耳朵竖着在认真听，孩子们发言的时间很少。语文课上总觉得时间过的很快，时间不够用，每每听到下课铃声响起总觉得还有很多东西没讲到，感觉意犹未尽还想继续下去，这时候却没有考虑到学生们的感受。很多时候忽略了他们的想法，导致课堂效果不理想。这节略读课文让他们自己去学习看看效果怎样。

一上课，我先放课文录音，让学生们跟读课文，目的是为了纠正生字的字音，模仿如何能讲课文读的有声有色也就是有感情的朗读课文，进而了解课文内容。跟读一遍课文后，学生再分段朗读再继续了解课文。读完课文老师抛出问题让学生思考，这时学生再一次快速浏览课文寻找答案。在这反复的阅读中渐渐的熟悉了课文内容对老师抛出的问题自然应对自如。在交流问题时大家的表现很是让我吃惊，平时课上几乎不举手的庞硕同学这节课举了好几次手，叫起他来回答的还很好，我想他读懂文章了，有自信了，有勇气在课堂上展示自己了，很替他高兴。课堂上你一言我一语，大家发言都很积极，说出了自己的见解，还有的学生结合实际生活给大家讲了一些例子来说明将心比心的意义。大家在对待老人和孩子方面也都提了不少建议，他们的建议都是发自内心的想法，很真诚，很温暖。看到大家这样的表现我很高兴，自己想要的不就是这样的课堂吗?

很多时候我们觉得学生自己做不好，可我们给他们机会尝试来吗?教学中我们应该大胆放手让学生自己去探索文学殿堂中的奥秘，让学生们的自主合作能力得到提升;其次，要注重阅读能力的培养，在阅读中领悟文章主旨。

Welcome to Yueyang Tower, one of the three famous buildings in Jiangnan.Today, I will introduce Yueyang Tower to you as a super tour guide. My name isLuo Ganquan. You can call me Luo Dao or Xiao Luo.

Yueyang Tower is located on the Bank of Dongting Lake with beautifulscenery and long history. Fan Cuyan of Song Dynasty once wrote Yueyang Tower topraise Yueyang Tower.

Yueyang Tower is 21.35 meters high, with four columns and three floors. Itis a pure wood structure without a brick. There are four ridges on the eaves ofeach layer. The first ridge is decorated with lotus flowers and lotus pods, andthe head up is Phoenix; the second layer is the head up tap; the third layer isdecorated with rolled grass, and the head up is Huiwen Ruyi Xiangyun. The roofof Yueyang Tower, especially the helmet of ancient generals, is called helmettop. Because helmet top is very rare in ancient Chinese architecture, it is oneof the important factors that makes Yueyang Tower famous. The whole YueyangTower has made amazing achievements in aesthetics, architecture and technology,so it has enjoyed the reputation of "Yueyang World Tower" since ancienttimes.

In fact, Yueyang Tower is really famous in the world when fan Cuyan wroteYueyang Tower. In the fourth year of Qingli period, Teng Zijing was demoted tobe the magistrate of Yuezhou for being framed. As soon as he took office, he didthree major things: first, he built Yanhong dike to prevent the waves ofDongting Lake; second, he set up county school to cultivate talents; third, herebuilt Yueyang Tower. The scale of the rebuilt Yueyang Tower was verymagnificent, but Teng Zijing knew that it was not enough to rely on its grandeuralone. Teng Zijing immediately thought of Fan Zhongyan, who was the same as TengZijing. Fan Cuyan, like Teng Zijing, was demoted as the magistrate of Dengzhoubecause he was framed. Teng Ziren drew a picture of the autumn evening inDongting and wrote a letter of Qiuji to introduce the momentum and structure ofYueyang Tower. After reading it, Fan Zhongyan finally wrote the famous story ofYueyang Tower, in which "worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later"has become a famous sentence of reincarnation, inspiring generations of futuregenerations to work hard.

All right, everybody can go into the building now. Ladies and gentlemen,the first thing you can see here is Yueyang Tower, which is composed of 12pieces of red sandalwood. It is said that Teng Zijing was overjoyed when hereceived Yueyang Tower. He immediately asked Su Shunqin, the great calligrapherat that time, to write it and Shao song, the famous sculptor, to carve it on awooden plaque. As a result, "Lou, Ji, calligraphy, sculpture" is known as thefour unique. Its a pity that what we see now is not the "four unique plaque".It was destroyed in the fire as early as the reign of emperor Shenzong of theSong Dynasty. The Yueyang Tower here was written by Zhang Zhao, a greatcalligrapher and Minister of the Ministry of punishment in the Qianlong periodof the Qing Dynasty.

Thats all for me. Ill give you 15 minutes to take photos.

在本课教学中，齐齐乐互动软件的使用提高了学生的兴趣，按点的设计有所创新。但在实际课堂中，感觉自己对学生的预设还不够到位，致使对学生的反馈不够及时甚至有所忽略，特别是在学生在段落中抓关键词体会人与象的亲密与和谐时，引导与体会还不够深入，造成学生朗读没有显著提高。

在课堂上，我也尝试授以学生方法：透过课文中很突出的先概括后具体的方法，以及全文大量关键词语、句子等表达出作者对大象的喜爱，展现人象共处的和谐景象。但这些方法的渗透总显得呆板、生硬。以至整节略读课上仅有写法的牵引，而没有学生的自主实践和运用过程。

“激发自主学习的动机——渗透自主学习的方法——养成自主学习的习惯”这应是略读课上教师为培养学生读书能力所追寻的途径。而阅读与写作的有机联系与渗透在课文教学中没有完全贯彻始终，这不能不说是种遗憾。

各位游客：

大家好!欢迎大家游览江南三名楼之一的岳阳楼。

现在耸立在各位面前的就是岳阳楼。楼顶悬挂的“岳阳楼”三字横匾，是1961年毛泽东主席提议，请离沫若先生题写的。岳阳楼高21.35米，为四柱，三层，飞檐，盔顶，纯木结构。中间的本根楠木大柱从地到顶承载大部分重力，再用12根“金柱”作为内围，支撑二楼，外围绕以20根檐柱，彼此牵制成为整体，飞檐与屋顶用伞形架传载荷重。三楼用如意斗拱层叠相衬，拱托楼顶。全楼没用一块砖石，全都用木料构成门缝对榫，结构严整，工艺精巧，造型庄重。飞檐和楼顶，都是盖的黄色琉璃筒瓦。各层檐面都有四条脊，层脊上饰以荷花、莲蓬，翘首为凤凰;第二层为昂首的龙头;第三层饰以卷草，翘首为回纹形如意祥云。整个楼阁重檐鳌突，藻井锁窗，雕梁画栋，丹柱彩楹，金碧辉煌，庄严壮丽。特别是三楼楼顶，很像古代将军的头盔，被称为盔顶，这在这国古代建筑中是相当罕见的。整个岳阳楼的建筑在美学、力学、建筑学、工艺学方面都有惊人的成就，因而自古就享有“岳阳天下楼”的美称。

大家不禁要问，既然是天下名楼，为什么只建了三层呢?据说当时修建者是取天时、地利、人和之意。岳阳楼的前身是三国东吴大将鲁肃的阅军楼。在一千七百多年前的东汉建安二十年，东吴的孙权为了和刘务争夺荆州，派鲁肃率领万名将士，驻守战略要地巴丘，也就是今天的岳阳。鲁肃在洞庭湖操练水军，并在城西依山傍水的地方，修筑坚固的城池，建造了指挥和检阅水军的阅军楼，这就是岳阳楼的前身。唐朝时阅军楼扩建，它基本原有了建筑艺术和历史风貌。好，现在请大家随我进岳楼内参观。

各位游客，这里首先映入我们眼帘的便是在神驰已久的《岳阳楼记》雕屏，它由12块紫檀木组成。前面我们说到，岳阳楼这一名称是在唐朝时才启用的。这时期，李白、杜甫、刘禹锡、李商隐等才华横溢的风流名士，或是落拓不羁的迁客骚人相继接踵而来。他们登楼远眺，泛舟洞庭，奋笔书怀。

但是，岳阳楼真正名扬天下，还是在北宋滕子京重修，范仲淹做《岳阳楼记》以后。庆历四年，遭人诬告的滕子京被贬为岳州知府，他上任后便筹办三件大事：一是在岳阳楼湖下修筑偃虹堤，以便防御洞庭湖的波涛;二是兴办郡学，造就人才;三是重修岳阳楼。重修后的岳阳楼规模宏大壮观。滕子京是个文武兼备的人，他认为“楼观非不文字称记者不为久”。这样一座楼阁，必需要有一篇名记记述，才能流芳千古。于是，他想到与自己同中进士的好友范仲淹。便写了一封《求记书》，介绍岳阳楼修葺后的结构和气势，倾吐了请求范仲淹作记的迫切心情，并请人画了一幅《洞庭秋晚图》，抄录了历代名士吟咏岳阳楼的诗词歌赋，派人日夜兼程，送往范仲淹当时被贬的住河南邓州。范仲淹是北宋著名政治家、文学家、军事家，他和滕子京一样，因为主张革新政治，受到排斥和攻击，被贬到邓州。他接到滕子京的信件后，反复阅读，精心构思，终于写出了千古名篇《岳阳楼记》。这篇文章全文虽然仅有368个字，但是内容博大，哲理精深，气势磅礴，语言铿锵，其中“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”成为传世名句。其实，《岳阳楼记》之所以能历代传颂，主要是由于它把一个重大的思想命题，极其巧妙而生动简洁地融入对优美景物的描写之中。它启迪人们：“不以物喜，不以已悲”，昭示了“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”这一崇高的人生哲理。作者那高尚的情操和宽阔的胸怀，不能不令人扼腕浩叹。先忧后乐，掷地有声，它激励着一代又一代的人想人生，思荣辱，知使命。作为一种中华民族知识分子崇高人格文化的积淀，《岳阳楼记》以其至高至上的思想内容和艺术魅力，流传千古而不朽，滋养着人们的心灵。从那以后，岳阳楼的名声大震，传扬中外，这就是人们所说的“文以楼存，楼以文名”。据说滕子京接到范仲淹的《岳阳楼记》后，喜出望外，当即就请大书法家苏舜钦书写，并请著名雕刻家邵竦将它雕刻在木匾上。于是，楼、记、书法、雕刻全称“四绝”。可惜我们现在看到的并不是“四绝匾”。它早宋神宗年间便已经毁于大火之中。我们所见到的这幅雕屏是清代乾隆年间著名大书法家、刑部尚书张照书写的。

现在，让我们再注意一下一楼厅内的四根楠木大柱。这四根大柱自楼底直贯楼顶，支撑着整座楼的全部重量，再以12根柱代内圈，支撑二楼，周围绕以20根木柱，彼此牵制闩缝对榫，结为整体。整个岳阳楼为纯木结构，找不到一颗铁钉。各位还可以看到，在楼的四壁，悬挂着许多木刻匾对，这些都逝今名家吟咏岳阳楼的楹联。挂在楼堂正中的这副楹联，是清代大书法家何绍基写的，是岳阳楼长的一副。这副对联是：

一楼何奇?杜少陵五言绝唱，范希文两字关情，滕子京百废俱兴，吕纯阳三过必醉。诗耶?儒耶?吏耶?仙耶?前不古人，使我怆然涕下。

请君试看：洞庭湖南极潇汀，扬子江北通巫峡，巴陵山西来爽气，岳州城东道岩疆。潴者，流者，峙者，镇者。此中有真意，问谁领会得来。

上联以“一楼何奇”起首，列兴了诗圣、名儒、贤吏、酒仙在岳阳楼所留下的诗文政绩和传统，抒发了作者吊古伤今的感慨;下联介绍了巴陵的名山、大川、雄关、险邑。如果您记下了这了这副对联，那么您对岳阳楼便有了大致的了解。

(在岳阳楼二楼)

一来到二楼，大家马上就发现在二楼也悬挂了一副《岳阳楼记》雕屏。这是为什么呢?这里面淬着一个真实的故事。清道光年间，岳阳来了个姓吴的知县，他一上任就看中了岳阳楼上的《岳阳楼记》雕屏，便用重金贿赂一个民间艺雕高手，花了十七个月时间精心临摹，秘密仿制雕屏赝品。两年后，吴知县趁调离岳阳楼之机，偷梁换柱，携带家小和张照的雕屏真迹，在一个风雨交加的夜晚出逃。没想到船行不久，风雨大作，船被风浪掀翻在洞庭湖的九马嘴段，雕屏也随波逐流，因是紫檀木制成，全部沉入了水中。后来，湖水干浅，《岳阳楼记》雕屏的真迹才被当地渔民打捞上来。打捞时，不慎将第八块屏上的“歌互”二字和第十块上的“乐”字损坏。当地文士吴敏树闻讯后，用120纹银从渔民手中将雕屏买回，花了三年时间临摹张照的手迹，才补上被损坏的三个字。各位现在可以看到，雕屏上还有明显的修补痕迹。又过将近100年，岳阳楼再度整修时，地方官员用120块大洋从吴氏后代后中将屏赎回，挂在岳阳楼二楼，这才“完壁归赵”。至于一楼那副，虽是赝品，也有100年历史了，当然是文物了。两副雕屏一真一假，正像一张功罪表，昭示后代子孙，值得我们深思。

(上三楼)

现在我们登上了岳阳楼的三楼，楼堂正中悬挂着毛泽东主席手书杜甫《登岳阳楼》诗的木刻雕屏，杜诗为：“昔闻洞庭水，今上岳阳楼。吴楚东南坼，乾坤日夜浮。亲朋无一定，老病有孤舟。戎马关山北，凭轩涕泗流。”其书法笔意奔放，布局严谨，雄健挺拔，形神兼备，笔触与唐代怀素的狂草相似。这是1964年秋天，毛主席从长沙乘火车返回北京途经岳阳时，在列车上即兴而书的。在雕屏两侧，挂有岳阳楼短的一副对联，仅仅八个字。上联为“水天一色”，下联是“风月无边”。落款为“长庚李白”。当我们站在三娄凭窗远眺时，看到的洞庭湖水天相接，浑然一色;清风朗月，无边无际，山色湖光荟萃于楼时，得到的感觉正是“水天一色，风月无边”吗?后，请各位再抬头看楼顶。楼顶彩富有民族地方特色的如意斗拱层叠相衬，荷重承力，拱托楼顶，用伞形架传载负荷，和盔顶结构一样，这在我们现存的古建筑中也是罕见的。

为了深化名楼，丰富景区内容，岳阳楼正在加快景区建设，并已作出规划。岳阳楼的介绍我就给诸位讲解到这里，欢迎下次再到岳阳来。祝各位旅途愉快，一路顺风!

通过这首诗歌的教学，收获良多。

一、课堂教学的时间很宝贵，教师要争取把力用在刀刃上。我的设想是让学生在有限的课堂时间，尽量多读，并达到当堂背诵的目的。在学生在读中学，读中思，以读带学，课堂实践证明，这样的教学思路是正确的。

二、让学生多思考，主动学习。

在教学中，老师多提问，少讲解，让学生在思考中学会分析问题，总结问题。所以我设计了很多思考题目，目的就是引导学生主动思考和学习。

三、课后作业既紧扣课文，又让学生的思维得以拓展。

布置的扩写题目，老师可以示范性的先写开头，以达到开拓学生思维的效果。

我去过江西的滕王阁，湖北的黄鹤楼，唯独没有去过湖南的岳阳楼，这次五一假期，爸爸妈妈带我终于完成了这个心愿。

岳阳楼是江南三大名楼之一，位于湖南省岳阳市区，洞庭湖畔，以前是三国时期鲁肃的阅军楼，后来慢慢变为观景游览的胜地，特别是范仲淹的《岳阳楼记》让它闻名天下，还有李白、杜甫、孟浩然、刘禹锡等诗人也曾经来过这里，流下了千古诗篇。

我们首先来到巴陵广场，正中央有一尊高大的“后羿斩蛇”石雕，在它右侧是观岳门，进入观岳门穿过汴河商业街，就来到岳阳楼景区大门，我急切的走进景区，首先映入眼帘的是唐宋元明清“五朝楼观”，其中唐朝的岳阳楼最为精致，屋顶上有五只凤凰，栩栩如生，非常精美!

沿着景区主路向前走，有诗词碑林、二王祠等景点，大约7分钟便可以看到岳阳楼，它建在一个宽大的底座上，楼高三层，四角向上翘起，金色的琉璃瓦，紫红色的立柱，特别是岳阳楼三个金色大字，在太阳的照射下熠熠生辉，在主楼两侧分别是三醉亭和仙梅亭。沿着楼梯走到三楼，我极目远眺，一望无际的洞庭湖，尽显豪迈，面对眼前的美景，我不由念起了“先天下之忧而忧、后天下之乐而乐”，也背诵起了刘禹锡的《望洞庭》……后面，我们还参观了怀甫亭、小乔墓、吕仙祠等景点。

下午三点，我们带着留恋踏上了归途，再见了岳阳楼，我还会再来目睹你的风采!

各位游客：

大家好!欢迎大家游览江南三名楼之一的岳阳楼。

大家不禁要问，既然是天下名楼，为什么只建了三层呢?据说当时修建者是取天时、地利、人和之意。岳阳楼的前身是三国东吴大将鲁肃的阅军楼。在一千七百多年前的东汉建安二十年，东吴的孙权为了和刘务争夺荆州，派鲁肃率领万名将士，驻守战略要地巴丘，也就是今天的岳阳。鲁肃在洞庭湖操练水军，并在城西依山傍水的地方，修筑坚固的城池，建造了指挥和检阅水军的阅军楼，这就是岳阳楼的前身。唐朝时阅军楼扩建，它基本原有了建筑艺术和历史风貌。好，现在请大家随我进岳楼内参观。

各位游客，这里首先映入我们眼帘的便是在神驰已久的《岳阳楼记》雕屏，它由12块紫檀木组成。前面我们说到，岳阳楼这一名称是在唐朝时才启用的。这时期，李白、杜甫、刘禹锡、李商隐等才华横溢的风流名士，或是落拓不羁的迁客骚人相继接踵而来。他们登楼远眺，泛舟洞庭，奋笔书怀。

但是，岳阳楼真正名扬天下，还是在北宋滕子京重修，范仲淹做《岳阳楼记》以后。庆历四年，遭人诬告的滕子京被贬为岳州知府，他上任后便筹办三件大事：一是在岳阳楼湖下修筑偃虹堤，以便防御洞庭湖的波涛;二是兴办郡学，造就人才;三是重修岳阳楼。重修后的岳阳楼规模宏大壮观。滕子京是个文武兼备的人，他认为“楼观非不文字称记者不为久”。这样一座楼阁，必需要有一篇名记记述，才能流芳千古。于是，他想到与自己同中进士的好友范仲淹。便写了一封《求记书》，介绍岳阳楼修葺后的结构和气势，倾吐了请求范仲淹作记的迫切心情，并请人画了一幅《洞庭秋晚图》，抄录了历代名士吟咏岳阳楼的诗词歌赋，派人日夜兼程，送往范仲淹当时被贬的住河南邓州。范仲淹是北宋著名政治家、文学家、军事家，他和滕子京一样，因为主张革新政治，受到排斥和攻击，被贬到邓州。他接到滕子京的信件后，反复阅读，精心构思，终于写出了千古名篇《岳阳楼记》。这篇文章全文虽然仅有368个字，但是内容博大，哲理精深，气势磅礴，语言铿锵，其中“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”成为传世名句。其实，《岳阳楼记》之所以能历代传颂，主要是由于它把一个重大的思想命题，极其巧妙而生动简洁地融入对优美景物的描写之中。它启迪人们：“不以物喜，不以已悲”，昭示了“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”这一崇高的人生哲理。作者那高尚的情操和宽阔的胸怀，不能不令人扼腕浩叹。先忧后乐，掷地有声，它激励着一代又一代的人想人生，思荣辱，知使命。作为一种中华民族优秀知识分子崇高人格文化的积淀，《岳阳楼记》以其至高至上的思想内容和艺术魅力，流传千古而不朽，滋养着人们的心灵。从那以后，岳阳楼的名声大震，传扬中外，这就是人们所说的“文以楼存，楼以文名”。据说滕子京接到范仲淹的《岳阳楼记》后，喜出望外，当即就请大书法家苏舜钦书写，并请著名雕刻家邵竦将它雕刻在木匾上。于是，楼、记、书法、雕刻全称“四绝”。可惜我们现在看到的并不是“四绝匾”。它早宋神宗年间便已经毁于大火之中。我们所见到的这幅雕屏是清代乾隆年间著名大书法家、刑部尚书张照书写的。

一楼何奇?杜少陵五言绝唱，范希文两字关情，滕子京百废俱兴，吕纯阳三过必醉。诗耶?儒耶?吏耶?仙耶?前不古人，使我怆然涕下。

请君试看：洞庭湖南极潇汀，扬子江北通巫峡，巴陵山西来爽气，岳州城东道岩疆。潴者，流者，峙者，镇者。此中有真意，问谁领会得来。

1、成功的上好一堂课，跟很多因素有关，其中妙用导语是至关重要因素。导语融知识性、思想性、艺术性、趣味性于一体。它像一座桥梁，架在学生通向理解课文内容获取知识的必经路上，在必经的路上这座桥梁架宽了，架牢了，学生就能轻松愉悦的到达下一站。

2、教师应确立“我的课怎样才能使学生学得精彩”的理念，把心中这一“念”自觉地偏到学生这边。教师从备课、上课到课外辅导，时时处处都应该胸中有学生，心系其发展。就是要时刻关注学生的存在发展。

3、在课堂上，教师要善于激励学生发现问题，激发和鼓励学生自觉的去思考、去探索。这样才能给学生创造自主学习、探索学习的平台，学生才能真正的自觉学习，而不是老师强灌。

当然，即使做好了这些，课堂上还可能会滋生这样或那样的问题，但只要我们心中这一“念”时时能从学生的全面和谐、健康发展的角度去考虑，我想一切问题的结果都会向最好处发展。

一、成功的喜悦

1、激发兴趣，自主读文。

为了能激起学生的自主读文的兴趣，教学伊始，我问学生：这是什么季节的景色?你想画什么?接着，我就和学生一起绘画了一幅秋天的图画。今天我们就一起到秋天里走一走、看一看。学生兴趣盎然。接着让学生用自已喜欢的读书方法读课文，可以和同桌一起读，也可以找好伙伴商量，还可以和学习小组的同学讨论。这样，通过营造开放宽松而富有创新活力的课堂氛围，让学生在感兴趣的自主活动中读文，整体感知课文的内容。学生有了认知的激情，就会自主参与，寻求新知，而不是被动接受灌输。学生整体感知课文后，再让学生自主识字：说说自己记住了哪些字，怎样记住的。然后我学着杨昱婷老师的教学生字的方法，把字剪成桂花、苹果、梨、枫叶的形状，让学生贴到相应的位置上，这样既增加了学生识字、记字的兴趣，又增强了识字、记字的效果。

2、美读课文，读中感悟。

这是一篇讲读课文，教学中，我让学生自读感悟，自主地从课文中找出自已想学的内容，多读多想;自主地讨论、交流，自觉地练习运用在精读课上学会的一些读书方法探究课文，使全体学生在积极的参与和协作中自读自悟，主动发展。例如：读完课文的第三自然段后，我问学生：大自然的地毯怎么画?你则呢知道?在课文中找出来读一读，画一画。然后再出示这一段再读，问学生读后有什么感觉?哪儿最美?学生说：“一抹金黄最美”。“那么什么是一抹金黄呢?”学生都不理解，我又适当引导：想一想秋天的草坪是什么样子的?有的说：“是黄色的。”有的说：“是一半绿一半黄的。”我及时点拨：“一半绿一半黄的草坪就像是染上了一抹金黄。”学生在自己的发现中完全了解了“一抹金黄”的意思，根本不用老师解释。再如：你还喜欢什么?在课文中找出来读一读。有的学生说喜欢星星。我知道了他不明白课文中的“星星”就是成熟的果子。我就让他读一遍：“课文中说星星在什么地方?”“果林里。”“果林里有星星吗?”“没有。“那会是什么?”“那是梨子、苹果熟了。”学生又在我的引导下明白了文中的“星星”是什么。

二、不足的惋惜

学习完课文内容后，为了培养学生的创新思维能力和口语表达能力，我鼓励学生大胆地想象、讨论：你喜欢秋天吗?喜欢秋天里的什么?学生兴趣盎然，都说喜欢，但却说不出秋天都有什么景色。也许现在还没有真正到秋天，学生以往没有注意观察周围世界的习惯。我觉得今后要注重引导学生养成爱观察的好习惯，全面提高学生的语文素养。另外学生的评价还显得不够到位，如他读的声音太小，读的没有感情等。今后应培养学生正确评价，评一评成功之处，不足在哪里，并能说出为什么。这样学生在自主评价的过程中会进一步理解文章的主题思想，提高审美情趣，使纸面上的静态内容跃出教材，转化为符合儿童个性特点的动态表演，让学生真正成为学习和发展的主体。

发展学生的语言和思维，培养学生的创造能力。

这篇课文是以小学生喜爱的童话故事形式出现的，它借小柳树和小枣树生长情况的不同，赋予它们不同的性格特点。小柳树因自己长得漂亮而得意，瞧不起小枣树;而小枣树不因自己长得没有小柳树好看而泄气，也不因为自己能结又大又红的枣子而自大，相反还夸奖小柳树。通过它们之间的对话，生动形象地使学生懂得“要善于发现别人的长处，正视自己的不足”这一深刻的道理。在课堂教学中，我让学生通过比较小柳树和小枣树的不同来读懂课文。其中，我又是从三方面进行引导：一是从柳树和枣树的生长特点分析他们的不同;二是从两者的性格特点来理解不同;三是通过小柳树的前后表现不同来体会。在进行这三方面的引导中，我抓住小柳树和小枣树的语言进行不同语气地朗读、比较和体会。

学生不仅在读中感悟课文中不同角色的性格特点，也体会到了“尺有所短，寸有所长”的道理，知道要多看别人的长处。其中对小枣树心情与性格地方理解比较到位，而对小柳树的性格与说话语气方面不是很清楚，造成有些学生在回答仍存在含糊不清的地方。在今后的教学中要多灵活地引导学生，过渡语言简练准确，充分挖掘学生的完整思维。

教学完《小柳树和小枣树》，下课铃声响了，大课间活动开始了，我跟着孩子又蹦又跳，活动结束了，我意犹未尽，浑身的兴奋点似乎都被点燃了!我还被课堂上的气氛牵引着，成功地喜悦无以言表!

教学时，我按部就班，第一课时学习生字词语，第二课时利用插图逐步学习了课文，从学生的表现可以看出他们预习很到位!我顺势拓展思维，问他们：“从此以后会怎么样了?”学生开始续写故事，教室里只听到沙沙地写字声，过一会儿，一双双小手相继举了起来，孩子的答案精彩纷呈，我一次次都被他们丰富的想象打动，我出乎意料地发现：孩子们的心眼里有多彩的世界!由此我深味到：语文的教学要开掘他们不尽的潜力!它的教学的确是一门艺术啊!

Dear tourists

Hello everyone, welcome to Yueyang Tower, one of the three famous buildingsin Jiangnan.

Yueyang Tower is a national key cultural relic protection unit and one ofthe first batch of national 4A tourist areas. The landscape characteristics ofYueyang Tower can be summarized into four aspects. First, it has a long history.Yueyang Tower, formerly known as Yuejun tower built by Lu Su, was built in the19th year of Jianan in the Eastern Han Dynasty (A.D. 220__) and was namedYueyang Tower in the 2nd year of Qianyuan in the Tang Dynasty (A.D. 759). It hasthe longest history among the three famous buildings in the south of the YangtzeRiver.

Second, the scenery is unique. Yueyang Tower is composed of river, lake,mountain and city. "Baling Sheng shape, a trace in the Dongting, the title ofthe distant mountains, swallow the Yangtze River, vast, boundless horizontal,morning and evening Yin, magnificent." The poet Du QinYong said: "the vast snowwaves with smoke, the sky and the West back painting, the building is verybeautiful scenery, a mountain nine lake." Yueyang Tower is a marvelous praisefor its geographical shape. It is strong with water, beautiful with mountainsand better than Jiangnan in shape. Third, it has a profound culture. YueyangTower poetry anthology contains more than a few famous works, a large number ofcouplets, plaques, paintings and inscriptions, most of which are permeated withthe "sense of hardship" of the Chinese nation. _In Du Fus "climbing the YueyangTower", he said, "I heard the Dongting water in the past, but now Im going tothe Yueyang Tower. In the southeast of Wu and Chu, heaven and earth float dayand night. Family and friends have no word, old and sick have their own boat.The army passes the mountain north, depending on the Xuan tears Si flow Hisconcern for the prison and the people is beyond expression. Fan Zhongyans"Yueyang Tower" is the development of this excellent tradition to the peak. Thephilosophy of "not to be happy with things, not to be sad with yourself", Atthat time, Su Dongpo expressed his emotion that "although it is not easy for asage to rise again", which Liu Shaoqi introduced as the criterion for thecultivation of Communist Party members, Hu Yaobang praised as thecrystallization of traditional Chinese virtues. It is indeed the most preciouscultural relics of Chinese spiritual civilization. Among the three famousbuildings in the south of the Yangtze River, only Yueyang Tower is a nationalcultural relic with historical, artistic and scientific value. The Yueyang Towernow seen is a pure wood structure. It was overhauled in 1983 according to theprinciple of "keeping the old as it is". It has four columns, three floors,cornices and helmet top. The whole building is made of wood without a brick or anail. The door joints are mortise and tenon. The workmanship is very exquisite.In history, Yueyang Tower has been destroyed and repaired for more than 50times. Friends, this couplet in front of the door, "Dongting Tianxia water,Yueyang Tianxia tower", is extracted from the five character quatrains of WeiYunzhen, a poet of the Ming Dynasty. The last two sentences of this poem are"who is the scholar in the world, drinking on the top of the building." Today,you are going to be the corporal of the day. Lets enjoy the profound YueyangTower culture and the magnificent mountains and rivers of Yueyang with Dongtingas the wine. Maybe you will be as drunk as Li Bai.

On the wall of Baling ancient city, the "Xiaoxiang archway in the SouthPole" and the "Wuxia archway in the north" were built in the Qing Dynasty. Thecouplets of chanting scenery in the two places are all written by famousartists. In the north of the ancient times, he Shaoji, a great calligrapher ofthe Qing Dynasty, wrote couplets, and Li duo, a famous calligrapher of thecontemporary era. In the south, Zhang Zhao, who wrote Yueyang Tower in the QingDynasty, and Liu Haisu, a contemporary master of calligraphy and painting, wrotethe couplet. From then on, we can see that Yueyang Tower was loved by literatiof all ages.

Now in front of you is Yueyang Tower. The three characters of "YueyangTower" on the horizontal plaque were inscribed by Mr. Guo Moruo, and now it hasbeen compiled into the book named plaque of Zhongjun. Yueyang Tower is 2135mhigh, 1724m wide and 14.56m deep. Three story three eaves, helmet top type woodstructure, covered with yellow glazed tiles. The helmet top is a prominentfeature of Yueyang Tower. You can see that it looks like the helmet of anancient general. It is powerful and majestic. With cornices, it has smoothcurves and gives people a sense of power. Looking at the Ruyi Dougong under thehelmet top, it looks like a beehive. It is decorated with dragon head, phoenixhead and cloud head. It not only supports the gravity of the helmet top, butalso makes the whole building more exquisite, solemn and harmonious. The top ofthe roof, ridge ornaments, head up and other components are all ceramic productsleft over from the middle of the Qing Dynasty. Therefore, Yueyang Tower has madeamazing achievements in aesthetics, mechanics, architecture and technology.

When you enter the main building, the first thing you see is the carvedscreen of Yueyang Tower, which is composed of 12 pieces of red sandalwood. Asmentioned above, the name of Yueyang Tower was only used in the Tang Dynasty. Atthat time, Li Bai, Du Fu, Liu Yuxi, Li Shangyin and other talented personagesand poets came one after another. They look out from the cantharidin tower, goboating in Dongting, and write hard. In his poem "climbing Yueyang Tower withXia 12", Li Bai described it as follows: "the tower views Yueyang as far aspossible, and the Sichuan Dongting opens. The wild goose leads the sorrowfulheart to go, the mountain holds the good month to come. Even stay in the clouds,the sky line cup. After getting drunk, the cool wind blows and the people danceLi Shangyin, a poet in the late Tang Dynasty, also wrote the poem Yueyang Tower:"if you want to get rid of your worries, you can go to Yueyang Tower on DongtingLake. Its a pity that thousands of Li can take advantage of the prosperity.Its a dragons solution to the shipwreck. " The Yueyang Tower became more andmore famous because of these new words.

However, it was after Teng Zijing rebuilt Yueyang Tower and Fan Zhongyanwrote Yueyang Tower. In the fourth year of Qingli period, Ying Zijing wasdemoted to be the governor of Yuezhou. After he took office, he organized threemajor events: first, building a rainbow dike under the Yueyang Tower to defendthe waves of Dongting Lake; second, setting up a county school to cultivatetalents; third, rebuilding the Yueyang tower. Teng Zijing has both literarytalent and military strategy. He thinks that "it is not long for Louguan to becalled a reporter by writing, and the writing is not written by those who aretalented and powerful.". So he thought of his friend Fan Zhongyan, who was aJinshi in the same middle school. He wrote a Book of Qiuji, which introduced thestructure and momentum of Yueyang Tower after it was revised. He poured out hiseagerness to ask Fan Zhongyan to write a record. He also asked someone to draw apicture of autumn evening in Dongting, which copied the poems and Odes ofYueyang Tower chanted by famous scholars of all ages. He sent people to FanZhongyans demoted residence day and night It is located in Dengzhou. FanZhongyan was a famous statesman, litterateur and militarist in the Northern SongDynasty. Like Wei Zijing, he was rejected and attacked because he advocated theinnovation of politics. After receiving the letter from Teng Zijing, he read itrepeatedly and thought about it carefully, and finally wrote the famous story ofYueyang Tower. Although the full text of this article is only 368 words, it hasbroad content, profound philosophy, majestic momentum, sonorous language andpearly words. It has become a masterpiece for thousands of years. However, thesaying "first worry about the world, and then joy about the world" has become afamous saying handed down from generation to generation, and has become theaccumulation of the noble personality culture of the outstanding knowledge ofthe Chinese nation. The story of Yueyang Tower, with its supreme content andartistic charm, has been handed down for thousands of years and nourishedpeoples hearts. After receiving Fan Zhongyans Yueyang Tower, Teng Zijing wasoverjoyed. He immediately asked Su Zimei, a great calligrapher, to write it andShao Songhui, a famous sculptor, to engrave it on a wooden plaque. As a result,Lou, Ji, calligraphy and sculpture are collectively known as the "four wonders".Unfortunately, the sculpture was destroyed in the fire during the reign ofemperor Shenzong of the Song Dynasty. The screen we see now is written by ZhangZhao, a famous calligrapher and Minister of the Ministry of punishment in theQianlong period of the Qing Dynasty.

The whole building is supported by four big nanmu columns. It runs from thebottom of the building to the top of the building, and then uses 12 gold pillarsas the inner ring to support the second floor. Around it, 20 wooden pillars areused to control the door joints and tenons, and connect them as a whole. Thewhole Yueyang Tower is of pure wood structure, and no iron nail can be found. Onthe first floor, there are couplets chanting Yueyang Tower by ancient and modernmasters. The one in the middle of the hall is the longest of the couplets. Thefirst couplet begins with "whats strange on the first floor", listing theachievements and legends of poets, famous Confucians, virtuous officials andwine immortals left in Yueyang Tower, expressing the authors regret for thepast and the present; the second couplet introduces the famous mountains andrivers, the magnificent and dangerous city of baling. If you write down thiscouplet, you will have a general understanding of Yueyang Tower.

A carved screen of Yueyang Tower is hung on the front of the second floor.There is a story circulating here. During the reign of Daoguang in the QingDynasty, a magistrate surnamed Wu came to Yueyang. He took a fancy to the carvedscreen of Yueyang Tower, and bribed a master of folk art carving with a largesum of money to make another carved screen. Taking advantage of the opportunityof being transferred out of Yueyang, Wuzhi county took advantage of theopportunity to steal the beam and change the column, and fled on a stormy nightwith the carved screen of Jiaxiao and Zhang Zhao. The boat was overturned in thejiumazui section of Dongting Lake by wind and waves, and the carved screen sankto the bottom of the lake. It was salvaged by local fishermen and collected byWu Minshu, a local scholar. After 120 silver from the hands of Wus descendantswill screen back. During the cultural revolution, the red guards wanted to smashthe feudal carved screen. In order to protect it, the workers covered thewriting with plaster and wrote Chairman Maos poems. In this way, the carvedscreen escaped another disaster. This one and the one on the first floor areboth true and false, just like the list of merits and demerits.

The third floor is the top floor of Yueyang Tower. Looking from the window,you can appreciate the majestic momentum of "holding the distant mountains andswallowing the Yangtze River" and enjoy the beautiful scenery of lakes andmountains, which is "the same color of water and sky, boundless wind and moon".Signed "Changgeng libaishu". When we stand on the third floor and look out fromthe window, we can see that the water and sky of Dongting Lake are united, theclear wind and the moon are boundless, and the mountains and lakes are all onthe first floor. Isnt the feeling that "the water and the sky are united, thewind and the moon are boundless"?

In the middle is the strip screen of Deng Yueyang Tower written by Du Fu inMao Zedongs handwriting. You can see that it has rigorous layout, bold andunrestrained brushwork, iron and silver hook, vigorous and straight, which isdeeply rooted in huaisus wild grass style, and has its own style. This is arare art treasure, hanging here, making Yueyang Tower even more icing on thecake.

Out of the Yueyang Tower is the three drunk Pavilion, which is the place toworship Lu Xian. Lu Dongbin used medicine to save people and did good deeds. Hewas deeply respected by the people. In addition, he was named "Fuyou emperor" bythe emperor of Yuan Dynasty. He was one of the five northern ancestors ofTaoism. Yueyang Tower was built with yellow glazed tiles specially used by theemperors in feudal times as the place where LV Xian stopped. Why is Lu Xian soprominent in Yueyang? It turns out that there are anecdotes about Lu Xian in theannals of Yueyangs prefectures and counties, saying that he had drunk with TengZijing, played chess with Wang Taishou, the national chess player, and stoppedQiao Taishous sedan chair when he was drunk. In particular, Zhizhou Li Guan notonly records the origin of LV Xiantings story, but also includes two poems byLV Xian. At that time, they were carved in front of Yueyang Tower with hugestones. One of them is "when you travel to the north, the dusk of Cangwu, thecourage of the green snake in your sleeve, when you are drunk in Yueyang, youcant recognize it, and you can fly over Dongting Lake with langyin." The nameof sanzui Pavilion comes from this poem.

Finally, visit Yueyang Tower culture and Art Center. There are not only thecarved screen of Yueyang Tower written by the famous calligraphers Mi Fu, ZhuYunming, Dong Qichang and Zhang Zhao, but also the image display of theconcentrated landscape of Yueyang Tower in song, yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties.There are also a large number of works of art and crafts with Yueyang Towerculture as the theme, as well as various books and periodicals about YueyangTower. Besides enjoying, you can choose your favorite souvenirs forcommemoration.

Hello, everyone. Welcome to Yueyang Tower, one of the three famousbuildings in Jiangnan. Yueyang Tower is one of the national key cultural relicsprotection units and the first batch of 4A grade tourist areas. The landscapefeatures of Yueyang Tower can be summarized in four aspects. First, it has along history. Yueyang Tower, formerly known as Yuejun tower built by Lu Su, wasbuilt in the 19th year of Jianan (220__ AD) of the Eastern Han Dynasty, andbecame Yueyang Tower in the 2nd year of Qianyuan (759 AD) of emperor suzong ofTang Dynasty. Among the three famous buildings in the south of the YangtzeRiver, Yueyang Tower has the longest history. Second, it has unique scenery. Thescenery of Yueyang Tower is composed of river, lake, mountain and city. "Balingis like a victory, holding Yuanshan in a lake in Dongting, swallowing theYangtze River. Its boundless, bright and gloomy, and has a magnificentatmosphere.". Third, it has a profound culture. Yueyang Towers poetrycollection contains more than a thousand masterpieces, as well as a large numberof couplets, plaques, paintings and inscriptions. Most of them are permeatedwith the sense of hardship of famous Chinese people. For example, Du Fus"climbing Yueyang Tower" expresses his concern for the country and the people,and Fan Zhongyans "Yueyang Tower" brings this excellent tradition into fullplay. Su Dongpos philosophy of not being happy with things and not being sadfor himself, his sense of anxiety and happiness after the worlds worries, andhis spirit of integration made Su Dongpo express his emotion that "although itis not easy for sages to rise again"; Fourth, cultural relics are precious.Among the three famous buildings in the south of the Yangtze River, only YueyangTower is a state-level historical relic with historical, artistic and scientificvalue. Now we can see that Yueyang Tower is a pure wood structure, which wasoverhauled in 1983 according to the principle of "keeping the old as it is". Thewhole building is made of wood without a brick or a nail. The door seam ismortise and tenon, and the technology is very skillful. Well, friends, now infront of you is Yueyang Tower. The three characters "Yueyang Tower" on thehorizontal plaque were inscribed by Mr. Guo Moruo and have been included in thebook "Chinese famous plaque". You see, the whole building is supported by fourbig nanmu columns, which run from the bottom of the building to the top of thebuilding, and then the second floor is supported by 12 gold columns as the innerring, surrounded by 20 wooden columns, which are connected as a whole byrestraining the door joints and tenons. Yueyang Tower has three floors and threeeaves, with a helmet top wooden structure and yellow glazed tiles. Helmet top isthe outstanding feature of Yueyang Tower. You see, it looks like the helmet ofan ancient general. Its powerful and majestic. Its equipped with cornices. Ithas smooth curves and gives people a sense of power. If you look at the RuyiDougong under the helmet top, it looks like a honeycomb. It is layered andmatched. It is decorated with dragon head, phoenix head and cloud head. It notonly supports the gravity of the helmet top, but also makes the whole buildingmore exquisite, solemn and harmonious. Therefore, Yueyang Tower has made amazingachievements in aesthetics, mechanics, architecture and technology. When youenter the main building, the first thing you can see is the carved screen ofYueyang Tower, which is composed of 12 pieces of red sandalwood. Yueyang Towerreally became famous in the world. It was after Teng Zijing rebuilt YueyangTower in the Northern Song Dynasty and Fan Zhongyan wrote Yueyang Tower. In thefourth year of Qingli period, Teng Zijing was demoted to the magistrate ofYuezhou. After he took office, he rebuilt Yueyang Tower and invited his friendFan Zhongyan Zhong Yan wrote down the famous article Yueyang Tower. Although thefull text of this article is only 368 words, it has broad content, profoundphilosophy, magnificent momentum and sonorous language, which has become thebest song for thousands of years. And "worry about the world first, and enjoythe world later" has become a famous sentence handed down from generation togeneration, and has become the accumulation of the noble personality culture ofthe excellent intellectuals of the Chinese nation. The story of Yueyang Tower,with its supreme ideological content and artistic charm, has been handed downfor thousands of years and is immortal, nourishing peoples hearts. The coupletsof Yueyang Tower sung by ancient and modern masters on the first floor. Standinghere on the third floor of the top floor of Yueyang Tower, we can enjoy themajestic momentum of "holding the distant mountains and swallowing the YangtzeRiver" and the beautiful scenery of lakes and mountains. You can see that thewater and sky of Dongting Lake are united, the wind is clear, the moon isboundless, the mountains are beautiful, and the lake is full of light. Dont youget the feeling that "the water and the sky are united, the wind and the moonare boundless"? In the middle is the strip screen of Deng Yueyang Tower writtenby Du Fu in Mao Zedongs handwriting. You can see that it has strict layout,bold and unrestrained brushwork, strong and straight, which is deeply rooted inthe legacy of huaisus wild grass and has its own style This is really a rareart treasure, hanging here, making Yueyang Tower even more icing on the cake.Ill explain the introduction of Yueyang Tower to you. Welcome to come hereagain. Thank you

Dear tourists

Welcome to Yueyang Tower, one of the three famous buildings inJiangnan.

Now standing in front of you is Yueyang Tower. The three characterhorizontal plaque of "Yueyang Tower" hanging on the top of the building wasproposed by Chairman Mao Zedong in 1961 and asked to be inscribed by Mr. LiMoruo. Yueyang Tower is 21.35 meters high, with four columns, three floors,cornice, helmet top and pure wood structure. In the middle, the big nanmu columncarries most of the gravity from the ground to the top, and then 12 "goldcolumns" are used as the inner wall to support the second floor. Around theperiphery, 20 eaves columns are used to restrain each other and form a whole.The cornices and the roof use umbrella shaped frame to transfer the load. Thethird floor is lined with Ruyi Dou arches, which support the roof. There is nota single brick in the whole building. All of them are made of wood. The doorjoints and tenons are made of strict structure, exquisite workmanship and solemnmodeling. Eaves and roof, are covered with yellow glazed tiles. There are fourridges on the eaves of each layer. The first ridge is decorated with lotus andlotus pods, and the head up is Phoenix; the second one is the head up tap; thethird one is decorated with rolled grass, and the head up is Huiwen RuyiXiangyun. The whole pavilion has double eaves, locked windows, carved beams andpainted buildings, red pillars and colorful couplets, which are resplendent andmagnificent. In particular, the top of the third floor is very similar to thehelmet of an ancient general, which is called the helmet top, which is quiterare in the ancient architecture of this country. The whole Yueyang Tower hasmade amazing achievements in aesthetics, mechanics, architecture and technology,so it has been known as "Yueyang World Tower" since ancient times.

You cant help but ask, since its a famous building in the world, why onlythree floors were built? Its said that the builders at that time chose thetime, the location and the harmony of people. The predecessor of Yueyang Toweris Yuejun tower of Lu Su, a general of the Three Kingdoms. More than 1700 yearsago, in the 20th year of Jianan in the Eastern Han Dynasty, in order to competewith Liu Wu for Jingzhou, Sun Quan of the eastern Wu Dynasty sent Lu Su to leadten thousand soldiers to garrison the strategic area of Bachu, which is todayYueyang. Lu Su practiced the water army in Dongting Lake, built a strong city inthe west of the city near the mountains and rivers, and built the Yuejun towerto command and inspect the water army, which is the predecessor of YueyangTower. During the Tang Dynasty, Yuejun building was expanded, which basicallyhad the original architectural art and historical style. Now, please follow meinto yuelou.

Dear tourists, the first thing that catches our eyes here is the carvedscreen of Yueyang Tower, which is composed of 12 pieces of red sandalwood. As wesaid earlier, the name of Yueyang Tower was only used in the Tang Dynasty.During this period, Li Bai, Du Fu, Liu Yuxi, Li Shangyin and other talentedcelebrities, or uninhibited emigrants came one after another. They went up tothe building to look into the distance, went boating in Dongting, and workedhard to write.

However, Yueyang Tower was really famous in the world after Teng Zijingrebuilt it in the Northern Song Dynasty and Fan Zhongyan wrote Yueyang Tower. Inthe fourth year of Qingli period, Teng Zijing, who was falsely accused, wasdemoted to be the magistrate of Yuezhou. After he took office, he organizedthree major events: first, he built Yanhong dike under Yueyang Tower Lake toprevent the waves of Dongting Lake; second, he set up county school to cultivatetalents; third, he rebuilt Yueyang Tower. The rebuilt Yueyang Tower ismagnificent in scale. Teng Zijing is a man of both culture and martial arts. Hethinks that "Louguan is not a reporter for a long time without words.". Such apavilion, you must have a title record, in order to be immortal. So he thoughtof Fan Zhongyan, a good friend of his own. Then he wrote a Book of Qiuji, whichintroduced the structure and momentum of Yueyang Tower after repair, poured outhis eagerness to ask Fan Zhongyan to write a record, and asked someone to draw apicture of autumn evening in Dongting, which transcribed the poems and Odes ofYueyang Tower chanted by celebrities of all dynasties, and sent them toDengzhou, Henan Province, where Fan Zhongyan was demoted at that time. FanZhongyan is a famous statesman, litterateur and militarist in the Northern SongDynasty. Like Teng Zijing, he was rejected and attacked for advocatinginnovation politics and was demoted to Dengzhou. After receiving Teng Zijingsletter, he read it again and again, conceived it carefully, and finally wrotethe famous story of Yueyang Tower. Although the full text of this article isonly 368 words, it is broad in content, profound in philosophy, majestic inmomentum, and sonorous in language. Among them, "first worry about the world,then enjoy the world" has become a famous sentence handed down from generationto generation. As a matter of fact, the reason why Yueyang Tower can be praisedin the past dynasties is that it skillfully and vividly integrates a majorideological proposition into the description of beautiful scenery. It enlightenspeople: "dont be happy with things, dont be sad", and shows the loftyphilosophy of life that "worry about the world first, and enjoy the worldlater". The authors noble sentiment and broad mind can not help but make peoplesigh. It inspires people from generation to generation to think about life,honor and disgrace, and know their mission. As an accumulation of the noblepersonality culture of the excellent intellectuals of the Chinese nation, thestory of Yueyang Tower, with its supreme ideological content and artistic charm,has been handed down for thousands of years and is immortal, nourishing peopleshearts. Since then, Yueyang Towers fame has been greatly publicized both athome and abroad. This is what people call "the text is preserved by thebuilding, and the building is named by the text". It is said that Teng Zijingwas overjoyed when he received Fan Zhongyans Yueyang Tower. He immediatelyasked Su Shunqin, a great calligrapher, to write it and Shao song, a famoussculptor, to carve it on a wooden plaque. As a result, Lou, Ji, calligraphy andsculpture are all called "four wonders". Unfortunately, what we see now is notthe "four unique plaque". It was destroyed in the fire in the Shenzong period ofthe Song Dynasty. The carving screen we see is written by Zhang Zhao, a famouscalligrapher and Minister of punishment in Qianlong period of Qing Dynasty.

Now, lets pay attention to the four big nanmu pillars in the first floor.The four columns run from the bottom of the building to the top of the building,supporting the whole weight of the building. Then, 12 columns replace the innerring to support the second floor. Around 20 wooden columns, they restrain eachothers bolt joints and tenons, forming a whole. The whole Yueyang Tower is ofpure wood structure, and no iron nail can be found. You can also see that on thefour walls of the building, there are many pairs of wooden plaques, which arecouplets of Yueyang Tower chanted by ancient and modern masters. The couplethanging in the middle of the hall was written by he Shaoji, a great calligrapherin the Qing Dynasty. It is the longest couplet in Yueyang Tower. This coupletis:

On the first floor, whats strange? Du Shaolings five charactermasterpiece, fan Xiwens two words about love, Teng Zijings all kinds of waste,and LV Chunyangs three times will make him drunk. Shiye? Ruye? Liye? Xianye? Noancients before, which makes me sad.

Please have a look: Dongting, jixiaoting, Hunan, the Yangtze River to thenorth of wuxia, baling to the west of laishuangqi, Yuezhou to the east ofYanjiang. He who keeps _, who flows, who stands, is the town. There is a realmeaning in it. Who can understand it.

The first couplet starts with "whats strange on the first floor", whichlists the achievements and traditions of poets, famous Confucians, virtuousofficials and wine immortals left in Yueyang Tower, expressing the authorsregret for the past and the present; the second couplet introduces the famousmountains, Dachuan, Xiongguan and dangerous towns of baling. If you write downthis couplet, you will have a general understanding of Yueyang Tower.

(on the second floor of Yueyang Tower)

As soon as we came to the second floor, we immediately found that a carvedscreen of Yueyang Tower was also hung on the second floor. Why? There is a realstory in it. During the reign of Daoguang in the Qing Dynasty, a magistratesurnamed Wu came to Yueyang. As soon as he took office, he took a fancy to thescreen carving of Yueyang Tower. He bribed a folk art sculptor with a large sumof money. He spent 17 months carefully copying and secretly copying the screencarving. Two years later, taking advantage of the opportunity of beingtransferred from Yueyang Tower, Wuzhi county took advantage of the opportunityto steal the beam and change the column, and fled on a stormy night with thecarved screen of Jiaxiao and Zhang Zhao. I didnt expect that soon after theboat was sailing, the wind and rain were so strong that the boat was overturnedin the jiumazui section of Dongting Lake. The carved screen also drifted withthe waves. Because it was made of red sandalwood, it all sank into the water.Later, the lake was dry and shallow, and the original carving screen of YueyangTower was salvaged by local fishermen. During salvage, the word "Gehu" on theeighth screen and the word "Le" on the tenth screen were damaged. After hearingthe news, Wu Minshu, a local scholar, bought back the carved screen from thefishermen with 120 grain silver. It took three years to copy Zhang Zhaoshandwriting before he added the damaged three words. As you can see, there areobvious mending marks on the carving screen. Nearly 120__ later, when theYueyang Tower was renovated again, local officials used 120 pieces of ocean toredeem the screen from the descendants of the Wu family and hang it on thesecond floor of the Yueyang Tower. As for the one on the first floor, althoughit is a fake, it has a history of 120__ years. Of course, it is a culturalrelic. Two sets of carved screens, one true and one false, are just like a listof merits and demerits, revealing to future generations, which is worthpondering.

(upper third floor)

Now we are on the third floor of Yueyang Tower. In the middle of the hall,there is a woodcut screen of Chairman Mao Zedongs poem "climbing Yueyang Tower"written by Du Fu. Dus poem reads: "once I heard the Dongting water, now I amgoing to Yueyang Tower. In the southeast of Wu and Chu, heaven and earth floatday and night. There is no certainty between relatives and friends. The armypasses the mountain north, depending on the Xuan tears Si flow His calligraphystyle is bold and unrestrained, rigorous layout, vigorous and straight, and hasboth form and spirit. His brush strokes are similar to those of wild grass ofhuaisu in Tang Dynasty. This is an impromptu book written by Chairman Mao on thetrain in the autumn of 1964 when he returned to Beijing by train from Changshaand passed by Yueyang. On both sides of the screen, there is the shortestcouplet of Yueyang Tower, only eight characters. The first couplet is "the samecolor of water and sky", and the second couplet is "boundless wind and moon".Signed as "Chang Geng Li Bai". When we stand on the third floor and look outfrom the window, we can see that the water and sky of Dongting Lake are in thesame color. When the wind is clear and the moon is boundless, and the mountainsand lakes gather in the building, can we get the feeling that "the water and thesky are in the same color, and the wind and the moon are boundless"? Finally,please look up at the roof again. The color of the roof is rich in national andlocal characteristics. The Ruyi Dougong is stacked against each other. It bearsthe load. The arch supports the roof and uses the umbrella frame to carry theload. Like the helmet top structure, it is also rare in our existing ancientbuildings.

In order to deepen the connotation of the famous building and enrich thecontent of the scenic spot, Yueyang Tower is speeding up the construction of thescenic spot and has made plans. Ill explain the introduction of Yueyang Towerto you. Welcome to Yueyang next time. I wish you a pleasant journey and apleasant journey!

1.教学思路非常清晰，紧紧扣住课文的层次结构和思想内容。指导学生找出对方的论点和论据，通过对比敌方的论据和我方的论据，直观、形象地让学生领悟到对方的观点是错误的，我方的观点是正确的，我们有并不失掉自信力的中国人在。先破后立，既破又立，破立结合，这是驳论文显著的特点，也是其常用的写作手法。最得意之处就是精心设计了板书，提纲挈领地帮助学生把握了文章的学习重点。课后很多老师私下和我交流，他们都说听了我这堂课知道以后该如何执教驳论文了。我想主要原因可能就是我抓住了驳论文的核心——批驳对方的错误观点进而树立作者正确的观点。鲁迅先生写这篇杂文就是为了批驳当时笼罩在中国各个领域的那种悲观亡国论调，鼓舞民族自信心。这应该是他写这篇文章的主要目的。

2.精读重点语段，以此品味文章的思想内涵以及作者遣词造句的技巧，体味作者语言犀利、力透纸背的语言特色。化繁为简，抓住关键语句来品读。如对国民党及社会名流“求国联”“求神佛”举动的深层理解，引导学生读课文下的注解，有意识地把课文注释整合成背景资料，并要求学生结合注解理解文章，不全面的地方我稍作补充。引导学生个别读，集体读，把难懂的课文容易化，降低了学生的学习困难，同时也激发学生想要学习文本的兴趣。

对文中个别字的注释，本来是易掌握的，只要课上老师讲解，学生做笔记或参考文中的注解，再课下自习，完全可以自行解决。可是，学生根本不自觉学习，不注重文中的注解，没有很好地去理会，对知识的掌握就不牢固，离开了课本就无法给解释。今后应让学生自主学习，要求多看看文中所做的注解，首先弄懂个别字的注解，接下来是句子的翻译。教师可以在习题上让学生多练。

第一课时非常重要的环节就是梳理课文大意，文言文教学学生最感枯燥的往往是疏通文意环节，对于基础相对较弱的学生更甚。若老师指定学生翻译，要么哑口无言，要么不动脑筋拿着参考书照念;若以老师串讲为主，学生便无所事事，亦不愿主动记笔记。对于这一问题，在教学中，可以以小组为单位，结合课下注释翻译，然后各小组在质疑相关的字词句，教师加以点拨，设置此环节的目的就是充分调动学生学习积极性。最好要求把重点翻译的句子抄写，加深印象。如：①自非亭午夜分，不见曦月。②清荣峻茂，良多趣味。等…… 反思四、回答问题。本文从不同的季节对“三峡”雄奇险拔、清幽秀丽景象做了描写。

理会文章先写山，后写水，写水分，着重让学生体会“夏水暴涨，湍急”“春冬水落潭清，风景秀丽”“秋寒猿啸，气氛凄凉萧杀”的奇异景象;不同季节应多读成诵，只有多读才能理解深刻，光靠老师传授，没有多少个学生能记忆犹新，到复习时还是要依靠老师 。我觉得传授他们知识的同时更应该教会他们怎样去学习，只有对文言文有了学习上的眉目，才能产生兴趣，学习上也轻松，不至于很快忘却，复习时候甚是陌生，难度自然加大。教好学复好习和考好试密切相关，只要师生配合，把握好每一个环节，教和学都能达到效果。

一、教学是一种再创造的过程

情景①在传统教学中司空见惯，面对新课改精神，这样的“认真”行为显得那么可笑，那么机械。

布卢姆曾说“人们无法预料教学所产生的成果的全部范围。没有预料不到的成果，教学也就不成为一种艺术了。”的确，教学过程是人与人交流沟通的过程，并非生产过程，完成一个个具体任务的时间，怎么可能精确到用多少分钟来划分呢。传统教学中，我们总试图使自己的预测和课堂上出现的状况完全吻合，这太缺乏创造性了。

二、教学是师生交往互动、共同发展的过程

新课程提出教学是教师的教与学生的学的统一，这种统一的实质是交往、互动，没有交往，没有互动，就不存在或不发生教学，那些只有教学的形式表现而无实质性交往的“教学”是假教学。

自满、自高自大和轻信，是人生的三大暗礁。——巴尔扎克

越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人的错儿。——爱尔兰

只有到了老年，沉重的人生使命已经卸除，生活的甘苦也已了然，万丈红尘已移到远处，宁静下来了的周际环境和逐渐放慢了的生命节奏构成了一种总结性、归纳性的轻微和声，诗的意境出现了。——余秋雨

最灵繁的人也看不见自己的背脊。——非洲

自己的饭量自己知道。——苏联

只有把抱怨环境的心情，化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰

把马克思主义的普遍真理同我国的具体实际结合起来，走自己的道路，建设有中国特色的社会主义，这就我们总结长期历史经验得出的基本结论。——邓小平

只有自己深深痛过，才能体会别人的痛，于是难得自我反省。——席绢

《一次成功的实验》是一篇讲读课文，课文讲的是一位教育家在一所小学让三个小学生做“逃生”游戏。初读课文后，让学生说一说课文讲了一件什么事?然后帮助学生理清文章的思路。课文可分为实验的准备、实验的经过、实验的成功原因三个部分，下面的两个问题让学生读课文时思考讨论：教育家做了一个怎样的实验?这个实验取得成功的原因是什么?

教师在组织讨论时，还可以引导学生抓一些关键词语来深化学生理解。例如，“顺利”“不假思索”两个词。“顺利”本意是指“在事物的发展中或工作的进行中没有或很少遇到困难”，教师可联系到最后一段中的一句话来帮助学生理解，“每次孩子们都争着往外拉铅锤，结果铅锤都堵在瓶口，一个也拉不出来。”这实际上是为“顺利”提供了相反的注解。因此，在课文的语境中，“顺利”实际上含有“迅速的，没有任何阻碍的”意思。“不假思索”在文中的意思是不经过思考，脱口而出的，学生通过上下文应该不难理解。教师应抓住这个词适当拓展，让学生想象女孩说话时的神态，并体会她的思想品质。

在理解文章内容的基础上，教师还可以引导学生领悟课文中一些词语在表情达意上的作用。例如，“这位教育家激动地抱起女孩，好久才放下”。这句话主要讲了教育家被女孩的高尚品格深深感动了。由于句中使用了“激动”和“好久”等词语，才使句子表达的情感更加强烈。

课文有较强的现场感，可以在上课之前或上课之后，让学生按照教育家做实验的要求与方法演一演，也可以分角色表演课文内容。通过亲身实践，加深对语言文字的感悟，提高认识，进一步体验情感。通过这样的教学，同学们很轻松地完成了教学任务，这就是我的教学反思。

人的第一印象是很重要的,而教师所要做的是在课堂45分钟内尽可能的把准确的要点传达给学生,而这种传达不应该是“灌”,而是基于教师引导学生对文章细节理解,关键句周到分析后自然得出的结论,否则效果就不好.而我恰恰因为是篇古文而忽视了这点,扮演了拔苗助长的角色,其结果可想而知.古文是中华民族的宝贵文化遗产,

其精湛的描写技艺,更是人物形象分析,景物描绘的典范,所以我深刻反省......

总之，公开课要公开的是什么?是自己的创意作秀还是我们平时真实的课堂风采?我曾经以为是前者，所以每每上公开课，常常绞尽脑汁，希望能够出奇制胜。但是后来我慢慢地明白了，不管我们的设计多么经典，能体现在课堂上才是硬道理，所谓“是马是驴，总要拉出来遛一遛”。在备好课文内容的同时，也应该考虑学生的实际情况。例如这个“也”字，对它的语气的理解和把握是备课备不出来的，而最终的解决却是从学生的身上找到突破口，虽然看起来好像是“灵光乍现”，但这是建立在对学生的信任的基础之上的，这种能力的增强需要不断提高自身的修养与业务水平。

大家好!欢迎大家游览江南三大名楼之一的岳阳楼。今天就由我这个超级导游来给介绍岳阳楼。我叫罗甘泉，大家叫我罗导、小罗都可以。

岳阳楼坐落在洞庭湖岸上，风景优美，历史悠久。宋朝的范促淹曾写过《岳阳楼记》来赞美岳阳楼。

岳阳楼高21.35米，为四柱，三层，纯木结构，没有一块砖头。每层的檐面有四条脊，第一层脊上饰以荷花、莲蓬，翘首为凤凰;第二层为昂首的龙头;第三层饰以卷草，翘首为回纹形如意祥云。岳阳楼的楼顶，特别像古代将军的头盔，称作盔顶，由于盔顶在中国古代建筑中极为少见，才使盔顶让岳阳楼成为名的重要因素之一。整个岳阳楼在美学、建筑学、工艺学上都有惊人的成就，因而自古就享有“岳阳天下楼”的美称。

其实，岳阳楼真正名扬天下的时候是在范促淹写了《岳阳楼记》后。庆历四年，滕子京因遭人诬害被贬为岳州知府，他一上任就做了三件大事，第一，修建偃虹堤，以防御洞庭湖的波涛;第二，兴办郡学，造就人才;第三，重修岳阳楼。重修后的岳阳楼规模非常雄伟，但当时的滕子京知道，光靠气势雄伟是不够的，滕子京立刻想到与自己同中举进士的范仲淹，范促淹和滕子京一样，也是因为遭人诬灭，被贬为邓州知府。滕子令人画了一幅《洞庭秋晚图》，写了一封《求记书》介绍岳阳楼的气势和结构。范仲淹看了以后，经过精心构思，终于写出了千古名篇《岳阳楼记》，其中“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”成为转世名句，启迪一代又一代的后人要奋发图强。

好了，大家现在可以进楼了。各位游客，这里首先看见的就是《岳阳楼记》，它由12块紫檀木组成的。据说滕子京当年收到《岳阳楼记》后喜出望外，立刻请当时的大书法家苏舜钦书写，并请著名雕刻家邵竦将它雕刻在木匾。于是，“楼、记、书法、雕刻”全称四绝。只可惜我们现在所见不是“四绝匾“，它早在宋神宗年间便已毁于大火之中。这们这里的《岳阳楼记》是清朝乾隆年间的大书法家、刑部尚书张照书写的。

我就介绍到这里了，给大家十五分钟时间，大家可以拍照留念。

反思本节课，有许多的不足之处一、课前导学案印刷不是太清，四个版面各漏印了一行。其他教师对我怀着一种期待，共有22位教师听课，这是听课史上最多的一次。

二、导入语中用比喻写家乡冬天寒冷的特点，学生不会。我跳过去。原计划 7个题目用10分钟时间检测的，学生搜集信息的能力不强，有的同学不看题目，直接从题目开始读书起，计划读书完再做题目。但对很有提纲作用信息丰富的课文提示语没有同学读书。我提示学生课文的范围。情况好了点。有些同学开始到黑板上写，前两个题目做的不错，特别是作者姓名与字的特点同学们挖掘的不错。

三、第四个题目正在思维，我发现时间到了，就叫了停顿。教师开始示范朗读，学生结合题目进行重点内容的反复朗读。学生仍在找答案，没有人朗读。教师提示后，学生读了一会，教师让学生说又学会了什么，两个同学发言，效果还不错。解决了两个题目，有一个题目教师适当组织了点拨。

四、在设计的几个交流环节，没有学生回答。由于时间关系，又匆匆进入了写作环节，教师有示范，学生也在写，但没有来得及交流，下课铃就响了。黑板上的内容没有核对，检测题目没有作完，写作的内容没有落实，这节课就结束了。留下了无尽的遗憾。但是看出学生对这节课还很很感兴趣的，他们接触到了与以前不一样和形式。按以前的想法，我可能会在结束之前发现学生做完了检测题目。