扬州英文介绍作文（最新20篇）

Good morning everyone，my name is ，and my english name is . Iam 21 years old and iam from (qingdao/) .

I have very happy family， they were my mother，my father and i. my father is soldier and my mother is doctor .i love them verymuch，we leave very luckly everyday!

I have some interests， four example: play piano singsong ang swimming.I have lend so much from them.

when i was young， i haved a dream， i was dreaming flying in the sky， so ，i long to work in the plain. then， iam here，i weash you would take me， because iam looking four would， to working four(china easten airlines)，nice meeting you again.

thank you !

国际专利许可合同(附英文)

develop-ment of or improvement on the contracted product.

9.2 party b guarantees that the technical documents to be supplied by party b are

com-plete，correct，legible and are to be despatched in time.

9.3 if the documents suppied by party b are not in conformity with the stipulation

in article 6， party b shall， within the shortext possible time but not later than 3o

days after re-ceipt of party a’s written notice， despatch free of charge to party a

the missing or the cor- rcet and legible technical socuments.

9.4 if party b fails to despatch the said documents within the stipulated period as

per appendix 2 party b shall pay penalty to party a in the following proportions:

(a)...percent of the total contract price for delay from 1 to 4 weeks.

(b)...percent of the total contract price for delay form 5 to 8 weeks.

(c)...percent of the total contract price for delay exceeding weeks;

9.5 the payment of penalties by party b to party a as stipulated in article 9 shll

not releve party b of its obligation to deliver the said documents.

9.6 whenever the delay in delivering the said documents exceeds 6 months， party a

shall be entitled to terminate the contract at its discretion and party b shall be

obliged to re- fund party a all its payments together with the corresponding ingerest

at the rate of... per-cent per annum.

9.7 if the verification tests fail with the responsibility lying with party b and

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2. 找出不通顺的句子，改通顺。

3. 找出用错的标点，并改正。

4. 语句(不太)通顺，书写(不太)工整，

5. 思路(不太)清晰，标点使用(不够)正确， 结构(不够)完整，用词(不够)准确，

6. 以时间为序，条理清晰地介绍永丰春节的习俗

7. 能通过具体的事例体现春节热闹的场面。

8. 详略得当，写出了春节喜庆的气氛

9. 用词准确，描写生动，反映出传统春节的热闹与人们

10. 表达了作者的无限快乐

Has many years of human resources management experience, covering large group companies, finance, communications and other industries, well versed in human resources management philosophy, and has accumulated rich experience in practice and management. Excellent communication and coordination skills, strong analysis, problem-solving ability, with emergencies, contingency plans processing capacity.According to the diversification of the Groups business characteristics, subordinate companies in different industries at the same time planning and management, and rational deployment of resources. Good at human resources planning, the establishment and integration of system architecture, diagnosis of human resources and personnel structure of the layout, there have been restructuring of enterprises, personnel diversion of actual combat experience.

Optimistic, progressive and proactive. Through years of social experience and continuous learning, I have good communication and coordination skills, full of affinity and team awareness, a serious and responsible work; and be able to independently and calmly deal with all kinds of emergencies, the establishment of a good social and interpersonal relationships.

I am responsible for the work seriously, active and thoughtful, and has high organizational skills and communication skills; daily work can play a good team spirit, good at mobilizing the enthusiasm of colleagues around, with indomitable spirit to overcome difficulties. Years of administrative practice, I have accumulated some experience, recognizing the positioning of the administration should be "involved in government affairs, management services, improve service." Mainly responsible for the coordination of internal affairs, liaison with external departments, to provide staff with a comfortable working environment and create a harmonious working environment for the companys steady, sustained and rapid development of protection.

I am a third year master major in automation at Shanghai Jiao Tong University, P. R. Ch ina. With tremendous interest in Industrial Engineering, I am writing to apply for acceptan ce into your Ph.D. graduate program. Education background In 1995, I entered the Nanjing University of Science & Technology (NUST) -- widely co nsidered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During the following undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester, and my overall GPA(89.5/100) ranked No.1 among 113 students. In 1999, I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admiss ion test. I selected the Shanghai Jiao Tong University to continue my study for its best re putation on Combinatorial Optimization and Network Scheduling where my research interes t lies. At the period of my graduate study, my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5% in the depa rtment. In the second semester, I became teacher assistant that is given to talented and m atured students only. This year, I won the Acer Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department, which is the ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university. Presently, I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of Excellent Graduation Thesis. Research experience and academic activity When a sophomore, I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. In 1997, I participated in simulation tool development for the scheduling system in Prof. Wang’s lab. With the tool of OpenGL and Matlab, I d esigned a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. It is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. In 1998, I assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis & dispose project for Nanjing sewage treatment plant. This was my first practice to conv ert a laboratory idea to a commercial product. In 1999, I joined the distinguished Professor Yu-Geng Xis research group aiming at Netw ork flow problem solving and Heuristic algorithm research. Soon I was engaged in the Fu Dan Gene Database Design. My duty was to pick up the useful information among differe nt kinds of gene matching format. Through the comparison and analysis for many heuristi c algorithms, I introduced an improved evolutionary algorithm -- Multi-population Genetic

Algorithm. By dividing a whole population into several sub-populations, this improved algorithm can effectively prevent GA from local convergence and promote various evolutionary orientations. It proved more efficiently than SGA in experiments, too. In the second semester, I joined the workshop-scheduling research in Shanghai Heavy Duty Tyre plant. The scheduling was designed for the rubber-making process that covered not only discrete but also continuous circumstances. To make a balance point between optimization quality and time cost, I proposed a Dynamic Layered Scheduling method based on hybrid Petri Nets. The practical application showed that the average makespan was shortened by a large scale. I also publicized two papers in core journals with this idea. Recently, I am doing research in the Composite Predict of the Electrical Power system assisted with the technology of Data Mining for Bao Steel. I try to combine the Decision Tree with Receding Optimization to provide a new solution for the Composite Predictive Problem. This project is now under construction.

Besides, In July 20xx, I got the opportunity to give a lecture in English in Asia Control Conference (ASCC) which is one of the top-level conferences among the world in the area of control and automation. In my senior year, I met Prof. Xiao-Song Lin, a visiting professor of mathematics from University of California-Riverside, I learned graph theory from him for my network research. These experiences all rapidly expanded my knowledge of English and the understanding of western culture.

I hope to study in depth

In retrospect, I find myself standing on a solid basis in both theory and experience, which has prepared me for the Ph.D. program. My future research interests include: Network Scheduling Problem, Heuristic Algorithm research (especially in GA and Neural network), Supply chain network research, Hybrid system performance analysis with Petri nets and Data Mining.

Dear Mr. Director,

I have learned from the newspaper that you are employing an administrative secretary. I am very much interested in this position.

I have worked as an administrataiv secretary for a chemical company in Shanghai for three years, so I have some understanding of the chemical industry. I graduated from the East China University of Technology, holding a bachelor degree. Having obtained certificates of CET-4 and CET-6, I find myself fluent in both spoken and written English. In adition, I am also quite familiar with computer skills.

Enclosed please find my resume.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

I am a love life, work seriously people. In high school life, I not only learned a lot of knowledge, but also in all aspects of perfection. In the face of difficulties, I never retreat, always brains, trying to solve the problem, to overcome the difficulties. And each solve a problem, overcome a difficulty, all my confidence has been improved. I believe that, as long as there is sufficient self-confidence, coupled with increased efforts to be able to overcome all kinds of difficulties and obstacles, leading to the success of the other side.

In the high school stage of the learning process, I can seriously take every course, carefully preview, active review. Encountered problems, ask the students, to the teacher advice. I will continue to improve the learning method, adjust the learning plan, reasonable time. I regard learning as acquiring knowledge, enriching my own pleasure, and being interested in it.

I have a correct outlook on life and values. Good communication with the students, with them to establish a good relationship, make the greatest efforts to help others. In life, I can respect teachers, honor their parents. I am able to actively participate in school and social organizations, useful activities to enrich their own after-school life. I like sports, and actively participate in them, in the movement to experience happiness, harvest health.

I still have a lot of shortcomings and deficiencies in the future, I have to redouble our efforts to continuously improve themselves.

1, Western practical application of the ability to highlight, is fluent in English (cet6), German (German graduate, professional level 4), Mandarin and Cantonese, analysis, learning, communication, adaptable, enthusiastic and creative;

2, strong writing ability to control, instruments and institutions have two years of experience, specializes in various types of documents writing;

3, there is a strong organization and leadership ability, along with team-oriented independent quality;

4, can be completed on time and under high-intensity work, willing to accept new challenges, to take responsibility;

5, with a strong resilience and can fastest adapt and integrate into the new environment;

6, want to engage in the work of foreign trade business, enterprise management, and other aspects.

Good morning/afternoon, my name is yanghaiyan ,you can call me yanzi. I like the feeling flying in the sky like a swallow.

It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for an interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today.

Now i will introduce myself briefly.i am 20 years old,born in shandong province.i grow up in a sweet family,composed of my dad,mom,brother and

Myself.i am an optimistic and confident girl.i have full confidence in a bright future,and i believe i can do well in caac.punctuality and diligence are crucial to most future careers,i will try my best. altough i just graduated from school, i have confidence to venture my funture.

Scoaring in the sky as an airhostess has been a dream for me since childhood.this is why im longing for a job on a plane, and this is why im standing here for this interview.i hope my application will be granted ,so that i will delive my best servies throughout the world as a airhostess member of caac and my dream can come ture.

Thats all.nice talking to you .thanks.

Im a little face, pointed chin, a pair of big eyes. They always say that the eyes are the windows of the soul, so they can always read my mind.

I have a black long hair, I love with a ponytail and walked off to the left, a spirit! I am not very high, and the students stand together, people always say I am their little sister, Im really worried!

In front of others, I was quiet, someone joked that I was a doll. In fact, Im just very shy. When I play with my classmates, I like the wind always noisy. This is my character, sometimes like water placid, sometimes like a burning the fire like passion.

The life lies in sports, I love sports. I dont look at small, but I am a sports, dancing, skipping, jumping, running, I will do everything! Of course, I love most is to sing, because singing, I feel not only physical and mental pleasure, but also to gain peoples applause and cheers.

This is me, a common but extraordinary me

Hi, dear tourists, please come with me, you see this is the qin Terra Cotta Warriors, now scientists have unearthed three pits, although only three, but with a total area of nearly 20xx0 square meters! Equivalent to fifty basketball court, pit there are nearly eight thousand terracotta warriors, in these three pit, no. 1 pit is the largest, 230 meters long, north and south 62 meters wide, with a total area of 14260 square meters! The pit of the Terra Cotta Warriors is one of the most. There are about six thousand.

Tourists, tell you, the Terra Cotta Warriors is not only large scale, and various types, the personality is bright, let me introduce!!!!

Terracotta warriors average about 1.8 meters tall and powerfully built, they wear down with uniform, wear hard armor and weapons in hand, ready to go, youve said dont go far?

The general figurines is power! Burly, wearing a crown, wearing armor in brown, hand hold a sharp sword, head high head, chest, belly of battle-hardened a look will know that is! Actually the Terra Cotta Warriors type many, said also said not over. The Terra Cotta Warriors pit or PeiZangKeng qin shi huang Lin, 1974, a few archaeologists found in the east of the Terra Cotta Warriors pit, stir in China, shocked the world, is one of the 20th centurys greatest archaeological discovery.

And, finally remind you: dont throw GuaGuoPi, rubbish, plastic bags, the environmental pollution!

2019英文开题报告

古典文学中常见论文这个词，当代，论文常用来指进行各个学术领域的研究和描述学术研究成果的文章，简称为论文。以下就是由编为您提供的英文开题报告。

一、论文题目：classroom interaction and oral english teaching

二、研究现状：

对于课堂互动与英语口语教学之间的关系，国内的研究主要集中在：(1)构建主义模式 它是以构建主义理论为基础的互动模式，司洪海在《构建主义理论与英语口语教学》中从对现有教学模式的“反思”入手，探讨将构建主义引入英语课堂教学的必要性、可行性及其意义和作用。卢艳春和路雅琴在《构建主义与大学英语口语课堂教学》中则分别“从构建知识观”“构建学习观”“构建教学观”入手，强调以学生为中心的主动性、构建性。(2)角色扮演模式 徐志敏、王瑛在《大学英语课堂互动教学中角色扮演探究》中着重探讨了在角色扮演的互动教学中教师的作用，对指导教学实践具有重要的意义。而黄玉兰在《角色扮演引入英语专业口语教学中》从角色扮演是“多为互动英语口语教学模式的应用”探讨了角色扮演这一教学方法的目的、步骤和利弊等方面。(3)以学生为中心模式 这一模式被单独研究的较少，黄影秋在《以学生为中心提高英语口语课堂教学效果的探索中》通过对学生口语课堂学习存在的问题的分析，提倡“以学生为中心”，实现教与学的“双边互动”。并提出阐述如何运用其他“教学策略提高口语的教学效果”，促进学生交际能力的提高。而刘蓉在《谈英语口语课堂互动》中则提出了互动可以创造“以学生为中心的口语课堂和整体小组作业模式”，提高口语交际能力。(4)合作性学习模式 这种模式的研究较为普遍和盛行，它兴起于美国，在后来取得实质性的进展的一种教学理论与策略。黄艳在《合作性学习在大学英语课堂的应用》中提出了以下几种合作模式，从而的出该模式的优势所在。顾晓乐在《合作性学习与情景剧表演》中从情剧表演的角度来证明合作性学习的有效性。肖巧玲在《大学英语口语教学中的合作学习》中则通过合作学习在口语教学中的实践探究合作学习应注意的原则。而慕东文在《合作性学习的特点、目标、内容和实践策略》一文中，他用“人文精神和平等民主合作”原则，对待新的理念，指导英语口语教学。(5)情景设置模式 它主要是根据gillian brown & george yuled的语言情景对第二语言习得者的交际紧张、焦虑的研究表明口语情景设置不适当，会影响学生用目标语进行交流，进而强调进行口语教学情景设置的重要性。张舍茹、孙边旗在《英语口语教学的情景设置>>中就论述我们应注意“情景互动教学中应遵循的原则”，及如何设置“英语口语教学中情景设置的形式”两个小方面局部性的探讨了情景设置这种互动模式。孙久荣在《论英语口语课的情景教学》中对情景设置这个模式从宏观上进行了分类，进而得出“开放式情景”和“封闭式情景”，为情景设置互动模式研究开辟了一个小领域。

please allow me to introduce myself fou you. my name is , my 20-year-old, was born in qinghai province. very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview. now i will briefly introduce themselves. i graduated from the qinghai first vocational schools. my specialty is computer software applications. in the past year i have the basic expertise. i like reading books, watching movies, listening to music, and so on. i think i am an honest and optimistic, can also work under great pressure. this is probably, thank you.

my name is __ and im from __ .right now，im a student.i study very hard every day.i like going to school because im eager to learn.i enjoy learning english.

its my favorite class.i like to make friends and i get along with everyone.this is the introduction i give whenever i meet new people.it tells people a little bit about me and about what i like to do.

我叫__，来自__。现在，我是一名学生。我每天都很努力学习。我喜欢上学，因为我渴望学习。我喜欢学习英语。

这是我最喜欢的课。我喜欢交朋友，我和每个人都相处得很好。这是我每次遇到新朋友时的介绍。它告诉人们一些关于我和我喜欢做什么的事.

优秀团支部主要事迹介绍

一、提高思想道德素质，加强团支部建设

07科学教育班团支部始终以提高团员的思想道德素质为工作重点，为更好的掌握同学们的思想动态，团支部特意制定了有关工作计划，定期召开班会和主题团日，举行座谈会，了解同学们的近期思想情况，平时多留意，多关心，充分调动广大团员的积极性，使大家自觉养成学习先进理论的习惯。在注重学习的同时，加强思想道德建设，如响应学院号召，XX年11月本团支部召开“学习xx届四中全会”主题团日活动，全体团员积极参加寝室座谈会，并对团支部提出建议与意见，使该团支部改进了工作方法，更好的进步与发展，并在此次活动中获得“xx届四中全会青年主题团日”实践活动先进团支部。其次，注意充分发挥党员的先进模范带头作用，有力的促进了团支部工作的进步。截至目前， 07科教班团支部有团员54名，占全班总人数的100%。其中正式党员和预备党员共12名同学，占全班总人数的22.2%。有15人参加了学院组织的第三期业余党校学习并有13人以优异的成绩结业。广大团员积极学习，努力提高自己，缩小与党员之间的差距，以党员的标准来要求自己，争取早日入党，为成为一名光荣的共产党员而努力奋斗！

二、强化班级集体观念，加强班风学风建设

学院一直强调学风是一个班级的灵魂,良好的学风是班级的宝贵财富。因为良好的班风、学风是取得优异成绩的前提，同学们共同努力是取得优异成绩的保证。这一年来，他们热衷于把一个班集体和团支部建设成一个充满温暖的家，每一位团员都是这个家的主人，同学们之间亲如兄弟姐妹，彼此关怀照顾，相爱如一家。在这个家中更能凝聚班集体的向心力，加强互动与交流，使54名兄弟姐妹融为一体，相互帮助相互学习。让学习好的同学积极帮助学习暂时有困难的同学，在相互交流中促进，在相互交流中提高。只有团支部中的每一位成员行动起来，形成你追我赶的局面，才能最终促进集体的班风学风。随着这一年的努力，已经取得了较为满意的成绩。除了英语四级通过率已达到72.2%，计算机二级考试通过率已达到87%，计算机三级考试通过率已达到61.1%，三笔字通过率已达到87%，普通话全班通过，还有很多同学考取了计算机三级证书、职业技能鉴定证书、会计证书、营养师等等。当然，他们在平时习惯养成方面所下的功夫也是很足的，虽然有个别同学性情散漫，但是经过同学的帮扶以及班委的教育，使该班的考勤情况一直很好，处于学院的前列。在学生科研方面，他们班也不示弱，申请了1队校级科研和6队院级科研都在如火如荼的开展着，相信不久的将来都将硕果累累。

三、积极开展各项活动，丰富班集体生活

积极开展班集体活动即促进同学们之间的交流，增加相互了解与信任，又丰富同学的课余生活，消除彼此之间的陌生感。但是他们深知自己已经不是刚进大学那时候的自己了，每个人的身上肩负了更多的使命和责任。结合自身的专业特点和自己未来的就业方向，经班委会和支委会通过决定搞一系列与我们师范类息息相关的活动。如针对语言表达能力方面，延续学院的三分钟演讲活动并把他扩大化；针对教师写教案方面，推出“人人出教案，人人有教案”活动；针对班主任管理能力方面，试行“我当家，我做主”的一天一个班主任轮流制。当然，除了参加自己班的活动外，该班还积极的参加学校以及学院里组织的各项活动并在一些活动中也取得了令人满意的成绩。如XX年度院排球比赛第二名、XX年度院趣味运动比赛第四名、“捐一元钱，献一瓶水”活动捐款，我们班共交特殊团费219元等等。

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master the application CorelDRAW, Photoshop, Illustrator, PageMaker, Office20xx / XP and other software. I work enthusiasm, hard working, self-discipline, and lenient towards others, and gradually improve themselves, always continue to strict demands on themselves, to develop their own hard-working, vigorous and resolute spirit. Have a solid theoretical foundation, ability, self-learning ability, can quickly adapt to different environments. Having a positive attitude towards life and a wide range of interests. Down to earth every good thing, the work of the strong sense of responsibility, diligent, steadfast, strong organization, with some artistic and creative production capabilities, focus on team spirit and collective ideas, he took part in social practice.

国际专利许可合同(附英文)

party aat the most favourable price wity parts， accessories， raw materials， fittings，

etc. for con-trade mark the two parties.

2.8 party b grants party a the rignt to use party b’s trade mark， and use the

combinedtrade，mark of both parties or mark the wouding ’production according to

licensor’s licence’on the contract produets.

article 3 price of the contract

3.1 price of the contract shall be calculated on royalty in accordance with the

content and scope sipulated in artice 2 to the contract and shall be paid in___________.

3.2 royalty under the contract shall be paid from__________ months after the the date

ofcoming into effect of the contract in terms of calendar year. the date of settling

accountsshallbe 31，december of each year.

3.3 royalty at the rate of__________ % (___________percent ) shall be calcuated in

terms ofnet selling price after the contract products are sold in this year，the contract

products which not sold  shall not be included.

3.4 the report of the selling quantity， net selling amount of the contract products

androyalty which should be paid in last year shall be submitted to party b in written

form by party a within 10  (ten) days after the date of settling accounts to royalty. the

specific methods which calculatenet selling amountand royalty are detailed in appendix 3

to the contract.

3.5 the contract products sold by party a pursuant to the patent license herein

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research experience and academic activity

教师英文自我介绍

when a sophomore, i joined the association of ai enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. in 1997, i participated in simulation tool development for the scheduling system in prof. wang’s lab. with the tool of opengl and matlab, i designed a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. it is now widely used by different research groups in nust. in 1998, i assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis & dispose project for nanjing sewage treatment plant. this was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.

in 1999, i joined the distinguished professor yu-geng xis research group aiming at network flow problem solving and heuristic algorithm research. soon i was engaged in the fudan gene database design. my duty was to pick up the useful information among different kinds of gene matching format. through the comparison and analysis for many heuristic algorithms, i introduced an improved evolutionary algorithm -- multi-population genetic algorithm. by dividing a whole population into several sub-populations, this improved algorithm can effectively prevent ga from local convergence and promote various evolutionary orientations. it proved more efficiently than sga in experiments, too. in the second semester, i joined the workshop-scheduling research in shanghai heavy duty tyre plant. the scheduling was designed for the rubber-making process that covered not only discrete but also continuous circumstances. to make a balance point between optimization quality and time cost, i proposed a dynamic layered scheduling method based on hybrid petri nets. the practical application showed that the average makespan was shortened by a large scale. i also publicized two papers in core journals with this idea. recently, i am doing research in the composite predict of the electrical power system assisted with the technology of data mining for bao steel. i try to combine the decision tree with receding optimization to provide a new solution for the composite predictive problem. this project is now under construction.

Dear Mr. Ben(the name of your boss)

尊敬的Ben先生(老板的名字)

①Please accept this letter as formal notification that I am leaving my position with company on August 7.

请接受这封辞职信，我将于八月七日正式辞去我在X公司的职位。

②I have allowed 30 days prior to my departure for assisting in the transition process.

离职之前，我有30天时间来帮助移交工作。

③Although I have enjoyed my job， I have received an offer for another company that I feel is better suited6 to my career objectives.

虽然很喜欢日前的工作，但我已得到另一家公司提供的更适合我事业目标的职位。

④Thank you for your kind attention and would appreciate if you could let me have a reference letter before I leave.

感谢您对我的关照，如果您能为我写一封推荐信，我将不胜感激。

⑤I regret having to resign from my position. I wish you and the best of luck and future success.

很遗憾我不得不辞职。祝您和X公司好运相伴，未来更加兴旺发达。

⑥If I can be of any assistance during this transition， please let me know.

如果在工作交接期有需要我做的事情，请通知我。

Sincerely，

真诚的

(your full name)

(你的全名)

中学生作文评语

词雅文练，写景生动

布局新颖，用词简达

娓娓细说，清婉可喜

文笔清丽，写景生动

写景状物，入木三分

层次井然，结构严谨

行文洒脱，趣味隽永

淡远情逸，隽永含蓄

平铺直叙，亦有情韵

简洁流畅，意义深长

言近旨远，不同凡味

叙述详尽，条理井然

明察秋毫，描述生动

内容曲折，耐人寻味

逸趣横生，读来可喜

自然顺畅，有条不紊

婉转流利，真实不虚

内容充实，文字流利

优游从容，描写细腻

取材丰富，文字生动

据实叙述，畅所欲言

辞意从容，雅见情韵

叙事抒情，均颇贴切

叙述紧凑，扣人心弦

全局顺当，描写逼真

语多赘余，文欠生动

内容贫乏，错字太多

颇富幽默，笔调轻松

识见不高，文句生涩

语多重复，文欠调畅

收结过早，意未尽宜

文笔雄健，不落俗套

文情并茂，感人肺腑

清新流畅，自然有致

遣词造句，行云流水

刻划入微，栩栩如生

取材不凡，运笔如飞

词义从容，雅见情韵

诠释明确，措辞顺当

文气充沛，段落分明

脉络分明，有条不紊

文从字顺，言简意赅

激昂慷慨，扣人心弦

细心求证，丝毫不苟

措辞得体，立论公正

句句有力，字字精辟

笔致轻松，理畅辞达

八面玲珑，论断正确

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