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篇1：学生作文评语参考模板
1、这一学期开学后你努力、进取，上课认真听讲，作业能及时完成，老师曾为你的进步而感到由衷的高兴。但后半学期你的学习有所松懈，有时还有些莫名的情绪。希望你在初三的最后学期里调整好自己，锁定目标，努力进取，提高成绩，争取考上理想的高中。
2、在校关心同学，遵守班级纪律，积极参加各项有益活动，上课认真听讲，作业及时完成，学习目的性较明确，本学期学业成绩有很大提高，望今后再接再厉争取更好的成绩。该生在校上课认真听课，作业独立完成，尊敬师长，积极参加劳动，有较强的表现能力，学业成绩较好，望今后再接再厉，争取更好的成绩。
3、你学习认真勤奋，书写端正，字体大方漂亮，作业完成相当好，并能遵守各项规章制度，尊敬师长，关心集体，帮助同学，一直受老师同学的好评。但在学习上也要更注意学习方法，这样才会有更大的进步！
4、作为班长相对会累点，作为班主任我理解你也感谢你。你在德智体各个方面都做的很好，在班里也能起到先锋模范作用，这是很可贵的，但有时你会稍为脆弱，顶不住压力。所以在这里我要送你一句话同学坚强点，你会做得更好！
5、老师很喜欢你，你知道吗？因为你热爱班集体。虽然父母收入不多，但你能把自己的一点零用钱攒起来帮助家庭，你是一个助人为乐懂事的孩子。在学习上你还要下苦功，千万不要辜负家长老师的期望啊！
6、你表现较好，作为班干部，能积极为班级做事，为班组争光。学习认真，态度端正，但学习方法单一，成绩尚不够理想。望今后多注意学习方法，合理安排时间，以争取更好的成绩。
7、你比较稳重，学习积极性比较高态度端正。能认真完成教师布置的任务。这次有的科目发挥不正常，不过没有关系，成绩不代表一切。希望假期时能认真总结，补缺补漏。该生上课尚能注意听讲，不过不能积极发言，有时思想难以集中，造成学习成绩不够理想。另加小学基础不扎实，望能下一番苦功夫补上。
8、我去年曾说过，你是一名端庄娴淑，大方懂事，工作负责，思维敏捷，学习踏实的好学生。随着时间的流逝，无论是工作，还是学习你越来越成熟，办事越来越让人放心，这是值得让人骄傲的地方，这也可以说是你的长处吧。但是本学期中，我觉得你也暴露了一些自己的弱点，比如：学习上患得患失，高兴时，学习效果肯定不错，不如意时，学习上就有一些放松。这样来求学对你是相当有害的，生活中有的是七彩阳光，你要沐浴这阳光的话，就必须下多点时间，花多点功夫，多思多问，这就是你以后的取胜之道！
9、你是一个聪明、上进心很强的。课堂上你有独特对问题的回答，但你在课后对学习还不够认真，刻苦精神有待提高。如果在初三的最后学期你能静下心来认真学习，不贪玩，努力提高学习成绩，老师相信你一定会考上理想的重点高中。
篇2：作文评语
1、文章杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出。
2、文章对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对文章重点…作了细腻而传神的刻画。
3、切合实际，蕴含着朴素而深刻的哲理，读来令人精神振奋，情绪激昂。
4、这篇文章充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情。全文层次清晰，语句流畅。
5、事例叙述生动、具体、趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的情感，令人感动。
6、文章前后连贯，形成完整的形象。
7、文章语言清新活泼，描写能抓住事物的主要特征，篇幅短小精悍，值得一读。
8、本文内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。
9、文章有详有略，言之有序，内容生动具体，不失为一篇佳作。
10、特写镜头别开生面，情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣，读来倍感亲切。
11、文章能过清新有趣的语言，描写了…的事。字里行间，充满童年真童趣，欢声笑语不绝于耳，不失为一篇佳作。
12、详略得当，虚实相生，是本文的两大特色，……内容更丰富、更生动。
13、全文清新秀逸，亲切委婉，朴素而不落俗淘，值得借见。
14、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。
15、全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。
16、全文眉目清晰，生动紧凑，趣味性强。
17、注意观察具体事物，并展开合适的想象，这是本文的成功之处。
18、文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章生动具体
19、文章内容新颖，结构合理，流畅连贯，自然通达。
20、本文取材真实生活，选材恰当，很有新意，段落分明，过渡自然，情趣盎然，可读性强。
篇3：颐和园英文导游词
Everybody is good! I am the guide from you, we are going to visit in Beijing for three days, today we are going to visit the Summer Palace of the famous.
Now, we have come to the Summer Palace. The Summer Palace was built in 1750, by British and French troops burned down in 1860. In 1886 and have been restored. In 1900, the Summer Palace and was severely damaged, the eight in 1902 to repair again. Determine the Summer Palace in 1961, the state council as one of the first batch of national key cultural relics protection units. In 1998, the Summer Palace was the United Nations educational, scientific and cultural organization included in the "world heritage list".
Let me take you to go to corridor. We look ahead, this is the long corridor, its architecture is very beautiful, and very long, as the eye is not an end, he has more than seven hundred meters long, divided into 273 pieces, everyone looked up, this is the transverse sill, it has a colorful picture, painted figures, flowers and plants, landscape, there are thousands of pictures it, but in no two are the same in these pictures, do not believe we can have a look. You notice? Are the flowers and trees on both sides of the lang is also very beautiful, here is full of the flower of life from January to December, each season has different flowers. Now we have covered corridor, came to the foot of the longevity hill, everyone looked up, three layer architecture is the anise pyramid, buddhist incense most of his use of glazed tile construction, it will shine under the sun. This is a row of resplendent and magnificent palace, row cloud temple. Here we come to the buddhist incense to play. Everyone stood looking down on it, is there a lake? This makes the kunming lake. Now the surface we see kunming lake on the mountain. Kunming lake around long bank, there are several styles of different stone bridge on the bank. Lake there is a small island, planted with trees. We have 17 through the hole in the stone bridge, can go to the island to play. Because there are seventeen holes in this stone, so called the marble seventeen-arch bridge which, on the bridge are hundreds of pillars, pillars are carved with small stones, and these lions have different attitude, no two are just the same.
Ok, here you free activities for half an hour, but dont go away, dont get close to kunming lake.
篇4：经典颐和园导游词
各位朋友，现在我为大家介绍一下颐和园，颐和园是世界上现存规模最大的皇家园林。始建于金代，位于北京西北郊，距市区15公里，占地面积290公顷。景区主要由昆明湖和万寿山两大部分组成，其中水域面积占全园的3/4。整个园林分为三个功能不同的区域，即以仁寿殿为中心的政治区;以玉澜堂、宜芸馆及乐寿堂为中心的生活区;以长廊、昆明湖、苏州街等为主体的游览区。颐和园将全国的美景及著名建筑融为一体，集南北造园艺术之大成，达到虽为人做，苑如天成的艺术效果。
早在金代的时候，这处园林既不叫颐和园，也没有这么美，只是一处帝王游猎的天然园囿，当时的山叫金山，上面建有金山行宫，水域叫金海。元代改山为瓮山，水域为瓮山泊。明代时这一组山水被称为好山园，已经出现了十里青山行画里、双飞白鸟似江南的美景。清代是它的全盛时期，乾隆皇帝为了给其母庆贺六十大寿，不仅拓展湖面，又在山前、山后修建了不少建筑，特别是长廊的修建更是神来之笔。乾隆皇帝把昆明湖挖成寿桃形，寓意向其母献寿，又把瓮山改名为万寿山，并把此处园林称为清漪园。
凡事有兴必有衰，1860年，英法联军入京，将清漪园、圆明园在内的三山五园烧成一片焦土。1885年，慈禧太后挪用海军军费重修园林，并改名为颐和园，取颐养冲和之意。但好景不长，1900年八国联军又一次将颐和园付之一炬，慈禧太后于1903年再次重建，由于财力有限，只恢复了万寿山前的景观。解放后，人民政府多次对园林进行修缮、保护，颐和园又恢复了往日的风采。1998年联合国教科文组织将其列入了《世界文化遗产目录》，现在我们去参观一下仁寿殿。
各位，这是仁寿门，门口有两块太湖石，人称猪猴石，据说是孙悟空和猪八戒被派到这里来为皇家看家护院。走进人寿门，看到的并不是仁寿殿，迎面是一块高大的太湖石，它是起到一个障景的作用。这是我国古典园林中造景的方法之一，其目的是起到屏风的作用，避免院内景物一览无余，失去含蓄之感。刚才我们讲过了，颐和园是集南北园林之大成，故又是中国古典园林的典范之作，多次、多处成功地运用了各种造景方法，待会儿我再一一向各位介绍，请各位先随我来。
(仁寿殿院内东南角松树下)
刚才我们看到了门口的那块太湖石，现在请各位再看看院内四周，这里还有四块太湖石，为什么要在这里放些奇形怪状的所谓太湖石呢?首先我先告诉大家何为太湖石。说起太湖石，大家应该不陌生，在很多园林内都有，它们看起来奇形怪状，满身是洞，或堆成假山或装点景致，只是不太知道它们的名字罢了。其实，太湖石是产自于江苏无锡的太湖湖底，因其相貌奇特，有透、瘦、皱、漏之称，而且产量又少，故被皇家选为稀罕物运来放在园林内起装饰作用。有些太湖石天生酷似某些人物、动物或祥瑞之物，就更成了人们收藏、寄与某种美好象征的尤物。
还记得门口的那块太湖石吧，从背后看去，没什么奇特之处，但要从正面看上去，你便会拍手叫绝，因为这块太湖石就像是一个老寿星，面向仁寿殿，给慈禧太后祝呢，您看像不像?另外四块太湖石根据其形状，象征一年四季之春华、秋实、冬枯、夏荣，这四季石与老寿星被称为峰虚五老，象征长寿之意。
再看看院中的这只铜铸的怪兽，人称四不象，你看它鹿角、龙头、狮尾、牛蹄，别看它长相怪异，可是本领高强，能避火，又是一种仁义之兽，既是仁兽，故在仁寿殿前，真是找对了地方!您也许会问，刚才你说真是找对了地方，莫非这四不象原来不在此处?您说的不错，四不象原有一对，是乾隆年间铸造的，原来放在圆明园，1860年英法联军在火烧圆明园时，另一只被侵略军所毁，真是令人惋惜。
在大殿前还陈列着铜制的龙、凤、香炉、太平缸等。特别是龙凤的位置与其它地方的陈设位置不一样。在古代帝王的宫殿、园林内的龙凤等吉祥物，其陈列方式应该是龙在上，凤在下;龙在内，凤在外。在这里却成了凤在中央、龙陪两旁的格局，是哪个大胆之人所为?不是别人，就是在这座大殿内垂帘听政、发号施令的女主人慈禧皇太后，好象在向人们说：谁说女子不如男?
(在仁寿殿的中间靠左的位置)
这座大殿叫仁寿殿，是帝后们夏天到这里来避暑时，临时处理政事的地方，其功能相当于故宫的乾清宫，等级相当于故宫的太和殿。这一区域就是我们在前面所说的颐和园内三大区域之一的政治活动区。在清代的每一处园林内，都设有一座处理朝政的大殿，一般称为勤政殿，以示皇帝在休假娱乐时也不会疏于国事，以示勤政，其实，只不过是懒得跑回故宫处理朝政而已。清末，慈禧手握大清大权，在故宫养心殿及颐和园勤政殿垂帘听政。天下凡是大权在握的人，通常都不想死，都希望长生不老，故大权在握的慈禧太后便将勤政殿改为仁寿殿取自于《论语》中的仁者寿，即施仁政者能长寿的意思。
在大殿内的后壁上，悬挂着寿协仁符的大匾，殿内设九龙宝座，御案及众多装饰物。值的一提的有两处陈设。首先请各位看一看正对面的大水银镜，上面有不同字体的寿字，共226个，取寿字之多的意思。在镜子的左侧的一辐画卷上有一个很大的寿字，背景里有100只蝙蝠，取意百福捧寿。这100只蝙蝠与镜子上的226个寿字寓意为多福(蝙蝠)多寿(寿字)真可谓是用心良苦，那么慈禧太后到底是否长命百岁了呢?慈禧太后一直活到了73岁。有句古话叫人活七十古来稀，现在活到七十不足为怪，但在当时活七十多岁不能不说是位长寿之人。是不是那些福字呀寿字呀保佑了老佛爷呢?当然不是，这是与老佛爷的饮食起居有规律及日常保养是分不开的。人吃五谷杂粮，谁能没病?天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福，谁能没灾?不过，慈禧太后不怕生病。她说有病有灾我能挺，因为我有延年井。据说呀，喝延年井的水便是老佛爷长寿的秘诀之一。那么大家想不想看一看延年井沾沾仙气?好!各位随我来，我们一起去参观延年井。(在延年井旁)
各位，这就是延年井，据说有一年慈禧中了暑，久治不愈。一天睡午觉时梦到了一口井，便派人来挖，果然挖出一口井。慈禧太后取水喝了一碗，暑气顿消，精神气爽，非常高兴，便封其为延年井。以后慈禧太后经常饮用此水，并用此水沏茶，称为延年井水沏杯茶，气得大夫满街爬。其实，这口延年井的井水为优质矿泉水，确实有利于人体健康。慈禧对这口井的感情胜过金银珠宝。1900年八国联军打进北京，慈禧太后从紫禁城跑到颐和园，金银珠宝丝毫未取，只是特意来喝了一碗延年井水，然后就背井离乡，带上光绪皇帝匆匆西行了
好了，讲完了政治活动区，现在我们要去帝后生活区参观一下，首先我们去看一看光绪皇帝在园中居住的地方玉澜堂，请大家跟我来。
(在仁寿殿后的假山旁)
走到这里，也许有些人已经不耐烦了，会问导游，您说过颐和园又大又美，3/4都是水，可我们进来以后确是什么门呀，石头呀，大殿，假山呀，水呢?为什么不带我们去看?大家别急，如果进门就是水，您是否会觉得太直截了当了，就会觉得不够深度。其实，这又是一种造园方法，叫抑景。所谓抑景就是先抑后扬，即当各位感到山穷水尽疑无路之际，便是最想看到柳暗花明又一村之时。这里看起来曲径通幽，其实，您再往前走几步，就可以体会到柳暗花明的感觉啦!不信，请各位走走看。各位!现在是否有一种湖光山色尽收眼底之喜悦感?俗话说，冰冻三尺非一日之寒，故精美园林非一日之建。咱们在前面已经讲过，早在金代，这里便是帝王们游猎的场所，当时的万寿山被称为金山，山上，建有金山行宫，供金代帝王游猎时临时过夜居住。山下的水域在当时称为金海湖。元代改金山为瓮山，据说是有一老瓮在山上挖出石瓮而闻名，山下的水域被称为瓮山泊。明代曾把这一组山水称为好山园，并在瓮山南坡建园静寺，改瓮山泊为西湖，当时的景色已经出现了西湖十景。特别是到了清代，盛世国君乾隆皇帝为了给他母亲庆祝60大寿，在此大兴土木，在瓮山的南坡增建了以排云门至佛香阁的中轴建筑群，把这组建筑做为生日礼物送给她的母亲，以示孝顺。乾隆皇帝还将瓮山改为万寿山，既然山改名了，水自然也要改名，叫什么呢?据说当年汉武帝曾在都城长安挖昆明池操练水军，于是乾隆皇帝效仿先贤，将万寿山下水域挖深，而且拓宽湖面，为日后训练水军之用。工程结束后将这片水域更名为昆明湖。现在请大家随我去知春亭，那里是观赏颐和园全景的最佳位置。我将为大家介绍一下昆明湖东岸的重要景观及建筑。
(在知春亭外)
这里是观赏颐和园全景的最好的地方，为何称之为知春亭呢?大家都知道春江水暖鸭先知的说法吧?但这里不养鸭，怎么才能知道春天的来临呢?我们的方法是望柳而知春。大家看，这里遍植桃柳，每当春天来临，此处是最先柳绿花红，向人们报春，故名知春亭。放眼望去，远处群山起伏，古塔耸立，现在我来问一问大家，远处的这座古塔是在颐和园园内呢，还在园外?远处的山叫玉泉山，盛产优质矿泉水，是专供紫禁城内的皇帝及后妃们饮用的。
远处的古塔叫玉泉山塔，看着在园内，其实是在园外的玉泉山，这种把别处的景色，借来一用的造园方法，称为借景。
再看看我们左前方的那个小的岛屿，它叫南湖岛它的南面有三个小岛凤凰墩、治镜阁和藻鉴堂，象征东海三仙山的蓬莱、方丈和瀛州，它与万寿山遥遥相对，这种造园方法叫对景。
连接南湖岛与东岸陆地的桥叫十七孔桥，是仿北京著名的卢沟桥而建，为何要在这里仿卢沟桥建一座十七孔桥呢?这得从乾隆皇帝说起。
乾隆皇帝虽为一代明君，但也是一位好大喜功的帝王。他在下江南的游历中对江南的景色及建筑都非常喜欢，因此产生一个念头，何不将天下美景尽绘长廊之内，将天下精美建筑集于颐和园当中，于是颐和园中便出现了黄鹤楼、岳阳楼、卢沟桥等景致。乾隆皇帝还想留住杭州和苏州的景色，于是，又仿杭州的苏堤在颐和园内建西堤，西堤上又建6座桥用以增色，而且还消除了由于西侧建筑少而产生的空旷感，起到了造园方法上添景的作用。
此外还有万寿山后建苏州街，整条街再现苏州水乡的美景，这样一来，足不出京，就可遍游江南秀色，虽然造景花点钱，但节省了一次次下江南的路费及辛苦。如此说来，还真是挺合算的!
在十七孔桥东侧有个八角亭，叫廓如亭，它可是我国现存最大的一座亭子，它与十七孔桥及南湖岛连接在一起，形似一只乌龟的头，颈和身躯，用乌龟形状象征长生不老之意。
廓如亭往北的河堤处伏着一只铜牛，与真牛大小相仿。为何在此设铜牛?有两种说法：一种说法是为了镇水，乾隆皇帝铸铜牛，还特意写了一篇《铜牛铭》，刻在了牛背上。另一种说法是在初建园林时，昆明湖西侧有一组田园风光的景致被称为织耕图，象征织女居住的地方，而东岸的铜牛郎隔天河---昆明湖与织女遥遥相望，够浪漫吧!
最后给大家介绍一下文昌阁，请看我们前方的这座关城式建筑，叫文昌阁，阁楼内供奉一尊文昌帝君的铜像。相传文昌帝君是专门主宰人间功名利禄的神，深受世人信奉，连皇帝也不例外。但是文昌帝君真要保佑某人当上皇帝，有了功名利禄，有了江山社稷，一定就会幸福吗?不一定!眼前就是一个例子。
各位看看那座小院，她叫玉澜堂(指向北侧)。那里曾经是光绪皇帝的监狱。身为皇帝，却失去了最基本的人身自由，够可怜的吧!为什么贵为天子的光绪皇帝会落到这步田地呢?咱们待会再讲。现在先请各位欣赏一下美丽的景色，照张像，我们5分钟后在玉澜堂门前集合。
各位，现在我们要参观的是颐和园中生活区的一组建筑，是清末慈禧游历颐和园时皇帝及皇后住的地方。前面的一组建筑叫玉澜堂，是当年光绪皇帝居住的地方;后一组建筑叫宜芸馆，供皇后居住。这是一组紧邻昆明湖的建筑，故以湖水似玉、波澜起伏为意境，将皇帝的居处取名为玉澜堂。
不知大家是否注意到这座大门前有两块大石头，左右而立?为什么在此设石?石头有没有来历和说道?当然有，不过这得先从光绪皇帝及戊戌变法讲起。1894年，中日甲午战争爆发，慈禧太后以不得罪支邦为由，实行不抵抗政策，导致清王朝在亚洲最大的北洋水师全军覆灭。甲午战争失败后，清政府割地赔款，中国面临列强的瓜分，这使国内的一些有识之士等非常激奋。以康有为、梁启超及谭嗣同为代的改良派上书给光绪皇帝提出变法，得到了年轻的光绪皇帝的支持。但以慈禧太后为代表的保守派人为祖宗之法不可变。于是在暗中阴谋策划废黜光绪皇帝，在最关键的时刻，由于两面派袁世凯的告密，使得戊戌变法宣告失败。光绪也皇帝从此失去了人身自由，相当于被判了无期徒刑，被囚禁在玉澜堂。
现在回头再说这两块石头，它们叫母子石，是慈禧太后让人从香山搬过来的，把它们放在这里是对光绪帝的责骂，好象在说：光绪呀!光绪!没有我你能当上皇帝吗?可现在你却要造我的反，你可真是没良心，你看看，连顽石尚有母子之情，你真是不如顽石呀!
光绪也暗暗骂道，老佛爷呀!老佛爷，你也太狠心了，你知道当一个傀儡皇帝的感觉吗?我身为皇帝上不能治国，下不能安民，国家将亡，我受万民唾弃，屎盆子扣到我头上，你却站在那享福，还把我关起来，真是心比石头还硬呀!好了，现在我们到园内参观一下。
(在玉澜堂大院内)
玉澜堂为这个院落的正殿，两侧有配殿，东为霞芬室，西为藕香榭。玉澜堂的后面是通向宜芸馆的穿堂门。各位如果到两侧配殿门口，您会惊奇地发现，哎呀!怎么开门后不是屋子而是一堵墙呢?其实不但是两侧配殿，既使是通向宜芸馆后门也被封死，这就是当年光绪皇帝被囚禁的地方。光绪皇帝虽不用戴手铐、脚镣，但每日如座井观天，好不凄惨!就这样，自戊戌变法失败后，光绪皇帝当了十年的囚徒皇帝，于1908年含恨而死。要说慈禧太后与光绪真是一对冤家，在光绪皇帝死的第二天，老佛爷也驾鹤西行了，据说是老佛爷不放心，怕光绪在阴间造她的反，故紧跟光绪而去。
玉澜堂内的陈设均按当年原状展出，正殿中有皇帝宝座，御案，掌扇及龙床等，请各位参观5分钟，我们在后院集合。
(在宜芸馆门前)
各位，宜芸馆是皇后在颐和园居住的地方，宜芸为藏书之意，乾隆皇帝曾在这里读书。现在门内的廊壁上镶嵌有10块乾隆皇帝临摹的书法真迹，殿内物品也都是按当年隆裕皇后在此居住时的原状陈列的。请各位在此参观5分钟，我们的下一站便是慈禧老佛爷在颐和园中的住处乐寿堂。
各位朋友，现在我们来到了颐和园的主人慈禧太后的住处乐寿堂。乐寿堂二字取自《论语》知者乐、仁者寿之意，就是说有学问的人很快乐，讲仁义的人能长寿，之所以取乐寿二字，是慈禧希望自己能够快乐长寿。
乐寿堂内的陈设保持原状，正厅是慈禧日常起居活动之地，堂内有宝座、御案、掌扇等，除此之外还有青花大瓷盘，瓷盘是装水果用的，但不是为吃，而是专为闻香味而设，堂内的东外间是茶点室，东内间是更衣室，西外间是处理日常政事的地方，西内间是卧室。
乐寿堂外门口两侧设有梅花鹿、鹤、花瓶各一对，有人会问，此处为何不摆龙、凤、狮子等，却放些鹿呀、鹤呀什么的，是何道理?其实这几件陈设物品加起来是一句吉祥语，梅花鹿的鹿与大写的六(陆)同音，取其六字，鹤与合家欢乐的合字读音接近，花瓶的瓶与太平的平同音，故这鹿、鹤和花瓶取六合太平之意。
院中还种有玉兰树、海棠树，原来还有牡丹，取玉兰花的玉，海棠花的棠与乐寿堂的堂同音，再取牡丹的富贵之意，即为玉堂富贵。再说，慈禧的小名儿叫兰儿，所以种玉兰花就更理所当然啦!
在乐寿堂的正前方，有一块巨石，人称房山石，还记得太湖石吗?南方的太湖石是以透漏皱瘦者为贵，而房山石是以有孔不透也不漏、有形不皱也不瘦者为佳。这块巨石有孔、有形，似灵芝，名为青芝岫。青为青色，芝为灵芝，岫为孔洞之意，即为一块青色、有孔、有洞的大灵芝石。但是呀，它也有一个不吉利的名字叫败家石，这又是怎么回事呢?这话得从明朝说起了。
明朝有一位喜欢搜集怪石的官员，叫米万钟，您听这名字，要是用大钟来装米，能装一万钟，够富的吧!因为这块石头却败了家。据说有一天，米万钟在房山发现了这块巨石，非常喜欢，于是动用大批人力来搬运这块石头。隆冬时每隔数十米便挖一个水井，在路上泼水冻冰再用人马拖运，开销很大。还没走到北京就家财耗尽，只好弃之路边。故人称败家石。转眼到了清朝，乾隆在去西陵祭祖的时候发现了这块巨石，当时乾隆正在为其母亲庆六十大寿而采办释罕物，于是想把这块石头运回北京。运到这里后，却发现进园的门太小，没办法，只能破门而入。乾隆的母亲知道后很生气，说：此石既败米家，又破我门，真是败家石败家石乾隆皇帝一时无话可说，只能听着数落，还是机智的刘罗锅眼睛一亮说：太后息怒，皇上将此石运来是看它形状象元宝，又似灵芝，您看，像不像呀!如果是元宝、灵芝破门而入，那可真是可喜可贺之事呀!这是财源滚滚破门入，灵芝仙草延寿年的吉兆，这是说太后您多福多寿呀!太后仔细看了看这块石头，哎!确是有些象元宝、灵芝，于是息了怒，转忧为喜。乾隆见状，顺坡下驴，立即在石头上题青芝岫三个字，还乘兴题了一首《青芝岫》诗，至今隐约可辨。
说来也巧，自从这败家石进了园子，大清朝便从乾隆盛世开始衰败，最终真的败了大清王朝。
前面我们讲了，慈禧是一个爱奢侈的人，就拿吃饭来说吧，颐和园内共有八个大院是专门为慈禧太后做饭的厨房，被称为寿膳房，每天有120人为她的三餐忙和。慈禧太后每天二顿正餐，二顿小吃，在乐寿堂的正厅用餐，在用膳时，一般摆三桌，一桌供吃，一桌供看，一桌供装饰。慈禧太后每顿正餐需主食60种，茶点30种，各色佳肴128种，一天的餐费为白银60两，当时可买一万斤大米，可供四口之家生活一年有余，真是帝后一席饭，百姓数年粮。虽然如此，但是慈禧太后有一点很值得我们学习，她每天准点用餐，而且从不多吃，更主要地是她吃完饭后总要活动活动，她坚信饭后百步走，能活九十九，这恐怕也是她长寿的秘决之一吧!那么慈禧太后到哪里去百步走呢?当然是去长廊了!好，各位，现在我们就到长廊里看一看，走一走
位，现在我们来到了长廊景区，长廊是世界上最长的画廊兼游廊，建成于公元1750年，位于昆明湖和万寿山之间，不仅连接了山水，而且为全园增添了神趣，可谓是巧夺天工之作。长廊东起邀月门，西至石丈亭，长廊全长728米，分为273间，中间点缀着象征四亭的留佳、寄澜、秋水和清遥四个亭子。站在万寿山上看长廊，它象一只展翅飞入昆明湖的大蝙蝠，昆明湖又象征着东海，这蝙蝠飞入东海的设计便是福如东海的象征啦!很巧妙吧!
前面讲了，乾隆皇帝下江南时，对江南的山水风光非常留恋，于是派画师们到江南去写生，回来后，将画稿上的山水景色画在长廊之上，同时又将中国古典文学中的人物、故事等也汇聚于长廊之上，于是形成了一条世界著名的集山水风光及人文逸事为一体的艺术长廊。长廊上共有各式图画一万三千多幅，于1900年被评为全球画廊之冠，列入吉尼斯世界大全。如果您置身廊内，漫步其间，便会由然产生一种人在廊中走，神在画中游的感觉。好，下面请各位游长廊，祝各位好心情!
(在排云门前)
怎么样?各位，有些累了吧!不过这长廊尚未走完，同志仍需努力呀!其实我们刚刚走了长廊的一半，这里便是长廊左右两部分的分界线。从排云门前的排楼往上的建筑分别是排云门、排云殿、佛香阁和智慧海，是万寿山前的一组中轴建筑，由于我们不到里面去参观，所以我给在家讲一讲里面的主要建筑。
首先为大家介绍一下排云殿，它名称的来历是出自晋代郭璞的游仙诗中神仙排云出，但见金银台的词句，可见此处非凡人所居之处，那么这座建筑是做什么用的呢?明代这里曾建有一座古刹，名为圆静寺，后来被毁，清朝乾隆皇帝为了给母亲祝寿，在圆静寺的基址上，建了一座大报恩延寿寺，后来被侵略军所毁。现在各位看到的排云殿是清光绪年间，即公元1887年修建的，它是专为慈禧太后举行寿庆活动的场所，慈禧太后把自己比成排云而出的神仙，希望自己能够长生不老。
在排云殿之上，是全园的中心建筑佛香阁，是为慈禧太后烧香拜佛而设，佛香两个字来源于佛教对佛的歌颂。
再往上，在万寿山之巅为全园的最高建筑智慧海，从这组建筑的名称即可断定，这是一组宗教建筑，智慧海的意思是歌颂佛的智慧浩翰如海。这组建筑虽遭联军破坏，但没有被烧毁，为什么呢?因为它是由琉璃砖及石料建成的，又因用石料发券而成，不设大梁承重，故称无梁殿，为北京三大无梁殿之一。
现在回过头来再说说排云门，大门两旁除了青铜狮外，还有十二块太湖石，又叫排衙石，象是两排衙役守卫在门前，其实它们还有一个名字叫十二生肖石。大家有兴趣可以找找看，哪一块是自己的生肖石，不过艺术本身就是夸张的，妙在似与不似之间，即三分像、七分想，越看越象。大家可别个持已见而吵得面红耳赤哟!好，我们在此休息十分钟，大家可以照照相，十分钟后在这里集合。
各位朋友，现在我们来到了长廊的西端，石丈亭。在我们眼前的湖水中有一条大石船，它的名字叫石舫。石舫又叫清晏舫，取河清海晏之意。它全长36米，是我国现存最大的古代石舫。船体上原来建有单层中式舱楼，后被侵略军烧毁，1893年重建后在船体上建双层西式舱楼，成为今天的这个式样。在上下两层舱楼内各有一块大水银镜，据说每逢细雨绵绵之季，慈禧太后常在舫上品茶、赏雨景。您也许会问，这喝茶看雨景跟镜子有什么关系呀?是这么回事儿，人家慈禧太后不是直截了当看雨景，那多俗呀!人家看的是镜子里的雨景，讲究的是半梦半醒之间的朦胧之美。那么这个大石舫有什么寓意呢?大家都听说过水可载舟、亦可覆舟的古语吧!这是统治者所不愿看到的，于是建了这么一个大石舫，任凭风吹浪打永不会被顷覆，取江山永固之意。
人家都说乾隆皇帝聪明，我看这便是他的一个败笔，大家都知道，水涨船高的道理吧!您想，如果造条大木船，如果遇到水涨、巨浪什么的，水涨船高，可能还会保住性命。但造条石船，如果遇到水涨，船就不会升高。最终，这条象征统治阶级的大船被孙中山先领导的辛亥革命的洪流所淹没了
好了!颐和园内重点景物的介绍到此结束，现在请各位在大石舫前留个影，谢谢大家一路的配合!
凡事有兴必有衰，1860年，英法联军入京，将清漪园、圆明园在内的三山五园烧成一片焦土。1885年，慈禧太后挪用海军军费重修园林，并改名为颐和园，取颐养冲和之意。但好景不长，1900年八国联军又一次将颐和园付之一炬，慈禧太后于1903年再次重建，由于财力有限，只恢复了万寿山前的景观。解放后，人民政府多次对园林进行修缮、保护，颐和园又恢复了往日的风采。1998年联合国教科文组织将其列入了《世界文化遗产目录》，现在我们去参观一下仁寿殿。
篇5：颐和园的导游词450字
各位游客大家好：
我是你们的导游员，我姓侯，今天就由我来带领大家共同游览这个清代的皇家园林——颐和园。希望我的讲解能够让大家满意，能让你们度过这快乐的一天。
颐和园是世界上现存规模最大的皇家园林。它位于北京西北郊，始建于清朝，占地面积约290公顷。颐和园有“皇家园林博物馆”之称，是世界上保存最完整的园林。
各位，注意了，现在我们来到了长廊景区。大家看!绿漆的柱子、红漆的栏杆，是不是一眼望不到头?我告诉你们，这条长廊有七百多米长，分成273间，每一间的横槛上都有五彩的画，这些画大约有1400多幅，这几千幅画没哪幅画是相同的。长廊两旁栽满了四季开不败的花，芬芳扑鼻，再加上微风拂面，使人神清气爽。
好了，走完长廊，我们现在来到了万寿山脚下。大家抬头看一看，有一座八角宝塔形的三层建筑耸立在半山腰上，黄色的琉璃瓦闪闪发光，大家猜一猜是什么?对了，就是佛香阁。再看看那金碧辉煌的宫殿，就是排云殿。
我们现在站在万寿山上，请大家远望，呈现在我们眼前的是一个很大的湖泊，那就是有名的昆明湖。昆明湖里的水清澈见底，静得像一面镜子。
游客们，昆明湖上有好几座式样不同的石桥，还有一个小岛，大家可以先看看石桥上的石柱，石柱上雕刻着形态各异的小狮子。大家看完小狮子，可以通过石桥到小岛上玩。
好了，我们的游览到此结束，希望大家喜欢我的讲解，下次如果大家还有机会来玩，我还可以给你们讲解。谢谢，再见!
篇6：300字颐和园导游词范例
各位游客，大家好!我是颐和园的导游，大家可以叫我小刘，现在就让我们游览一下美丽的颐和园吧!
颐和园，位于北京市的西北海淀区，占地面积290公顷(合是4400亩)，是清朝的一座巨大的皇家和行宫。它的前身为清漪园，距城区十五公里。
我们最先来到的有名的长廊。
进了颐和园的大门，绕过大殿，就是有名长廊。绿漆的柱子，红漆的栏杆，一眼望不到头。这条长廊有700多米长,分成273间。每一间横栏上都有五彩的画，画着人物、花草、风景、几千幅画没有哪两幅是相同的。大家可留心欣赏一下。长廊两旁栽满了花木，这一种花还没谢，令人赏心悦目。
穿过长廊，我们就来到了万寿山的脚下。大家看到的一座八角宝塔形的三层建筑耸立在半山腰上，黄色的琉璃瓦闪闪发光，那就是佛香阁。佛香阁下面有一排排金碧辉煌的宫殿，就是排云殿。下面我们就登万寿山。
游客朋友们，这人现在所在位置就是佛香阁了，这里是一处观赏颐和园风景的绝佳位置，我们可以看见葱郁的树丛，琉璃瓦屋顶，还有朱红的宫墙。正前面，就是昆明湖。此刻的昆明湖，静得像一面镜子，绿的像一块碧玉。
从万寿山下来，我们来到了昆明湖。昆明湖围着长长的堤岸，湖中心有个小岛，游人走过长长的石桥，就可以到小岛上玩。
这座石桥有十七个桥洞，叫十七孔桥，桥栏杆上有上百根石柱，柱子上有姿态不一的小狮子，没有哪两只是相同的。
大家好，下面，游客朋友们可以自由观赏，请大家注意不能乱涂乱画，要爱护文物，不随便扔垃圾，做一位文明的游客。谢谢大家合作。
篇7：改作文评语
1.字是人的脸，这次作文书写有明显进步，你的脸上也光彩多了。不过，你一向讨厌的错别字老跟着你，给你的作文蒙上了一层阴影。我为你开一剂良方：不会写的字问字典，写完作文后，请教老师或同学，你愿意试一试吗?
2.张明曾经和你处在同一起跑线上，可现在，人家连续三次作文得优，而你12个错别字，15个病句，够悲惨了!你呀，你呀!不是没本事，而是没志气!”
3.我替那些大人对你说声“对不起”。不知道这真诚的歉意是不是能慰平你那被扭曲了的心灵。我能想象你在等车时的焦急;被车撇下时的痛苦;挤在车内的窘迫。我也能理解你由此产生的怨恨。但我也要坦率地告诉你，老师也是这样挤大的，老师还要告诉你，正如你以后会成长为一个潇洒的小伙子一样，我们这个社会一定会美好起来的，因为太阳下有阴影，但是的是阳光。
4.家本应该是温馨的、欢乐的，然而你现在的处境有些‘恶劣’。对此老师很同情，但你要正视现实：一方面，恶劣的环境能磨练自己的意志，相信你会成功的;另一方面，我们要想办法改变一下环境，可以大胆地去做姨夫的思想工作，劝他们少玩或不玩，这虽然有些不太好，但‘凡事在于一试’，让我们一起努力吧!
5.李健同学，你敢于在作文中坦露自己真实的思想，对此，老师很是敬佩，但作文中的观点是错误的、片面的。尽管××同学有着这样那样的缺点，但这绝不是他的全部。我们要学会全面地、正确地认识周围事物(包括人)。其实××同学也有不少闪光点，比如他跑步很快，劳动很卖力等等。我们应该看到这些，并且尽自己的全力帮助他。‘人之初，性本善’，只要我们真诚帮助他，他定会转变，成为一名好学生的，你说是吗?”
6.××同学，你知道吗?老师为你的进步感到好高兴啊!希望你再接再厉，并把著名作家奥斯托洛夫斯基的一句名言推荐给你，‘人应该支配习惯，而决不能让习惯支配人，一个人要不能去掉他的坏习惯，那简直一文不值’。
7.好笔力，好见地，读史有眼，立论有识，小子可造其竭力用功勉成大器。”“前程远大未可限量，十二岁小儿可嘉可贺，又一篇佳作问世了!能作此语，莫谓祖国无人也。
8.细致的内心活动描写，巧妙的前后照应，证明你已经掌握了一定的写作技巧。从你的这篇文章，我仿佛看到了21世纪的巴金!”
9.你感情上的痛苦我很理解，值得欣慰的是，你是一个坚强的孩子，是个懂事的孩子，因为你写出了这样一篇令人感动的佳作。我为有你这样的学生而高兴，只要把握住今天，你的未来一定会是美好而幸福的。
10.一只不起眼的丑小鸭，飞进了我的丛林，我怜爱她的自卑和娇弱，我欣赏她的诚实和坦率，我更珍爱并抚慰她洒满露珠的羽翼。你信吗?这样一只丑小鸭，真的会成为茂密丛林中的一只骄傲洁白的天鹅。
11.自然界有许多小精灵，只要你仔细观察它，它就会给你丰富的联想和有益的启迪。有人观察蜜蜂，赞美它无私的奉献精神;有人观察蚂蚁，佩服它勤劳的品格;而你观察小螃蟹，喜欢它的倔强。看，这些小精灵可真给了我们不少启迪，真像你说的一样，螃蟹横走可爱，人要横走就烦人了。这是你发现的道理，大人也得佩服。
12.“明白晓畅，文采飞扬，这种老到的语言功夫是众多考生无法望其项背的”，
13.如果没有异想天开，童年也就不会色彩斑斓了。换一个角度体会一下指挥别人的威风，换一种活法体验一下辛苦和艰苦的滋味，不仅是一种乐事，还是一件好事。文中‘司令’和‘小兵’的语言和动作既是‘兵’的，又是‘孩子气’的，两个孩子那副煞有介事、俨然真为司令真为兵的神气劲儿，令人忍俊不禁，由不得赞叹作者描写的活泼”。
14.第一次独自做饭，免不了要手忙脚乱。按照做饭的先后顺序，作者依次写了淘米、煲饭、炒菜的全过程。因为经验不足，就要格外细心;越细心，就越慌神儿。好在小作者挺机灵，关键时刻能急中生智，转危为安。作者抓住了‘第一次’做饭的特点，文字不多;却写得小有波澜。别看小作者做饭时手忙脚乱，文章可写得步骤清楚。”
15.周智莹小朋友真幸运，她能有个‘月亮娃娃’。她太喜爱这个娃娃了，所以对它观察得很细致。她是按这样的顺序来观察并描写的：蓝天→星星→月亮→小男孩和小女孩→可爱的小花猫。写一个静物比较容易，要把静物写得生动而又具体就不那么容易了。周智莹小朋友恰恰做到了这一点：她不仅写了这个静物各部分的颜色、大孝样子，还写出了小男孩和小女孩的服饰和姿态，最后还写出了自己的联想，字里行间流露出对爸爸送给自己的这份礼物的喜爱之情。
16.沈思同学在给姑妈的这封信里，记叙了家里发生的一件大事——爷爷给她找了位新奶奶。她明知道这应该是件喜事，可是自己却‘怎么也高兴不起来’，原因是她太爱自己的亲奶奶了。沈思同学，你不是也很敬爱爷爷吗?你不是也希望爷爷晚年幸福快乐吗?那么请你在心里给新奶奶留个位置，像爱亲奶奶那样去爱新奶奶吧!
篇8：2024年颐和园导游词400字
各位旅客们：
大家好!欢迎大家来到这古色古香的北京颐和园。我是本次的导游，我叫王荟茹，大家可以叫我王导。游览时注意要跟紧我，不要走丢了，而且不要损坏文物。希望在这几天能够玩得开心、吃得满意、住得舒服。
北京的颐和园历史悠久，美不胜收，规模宏大。而且还被列入了《世界遗产名录》。进了颐和园的大门，绕过大殿，我们就来到了有名的长廊。大家看!绿漆的柱子，红漆的栏杆，一眼望不到头。这条长廊有700多米长，分成273间。在每一间的横槛上还有五彩的画，画有人物、花草、风景，几千幅画中没有哪两幅是相同的。
走完长廊，我们就来到了万寿山脚下。大家往高处看，一座八角宝塔形的三层建筑耸立在半山腰上，黄色的琉璃瓦闪闪发光，那就是佛香阁。下面的一排排金碧辉煌的宫殿，就是排云殿。
登上万寿山，站在佛香阁的前面向下望，颐和园的景色大半收在眼底，葱郁的树丛，掩映着黄的绿的琉璃瓦屋顶和朱红的宫墙。正前面，昆明湖静得像一面镜子，绿得像一块碧玉。游船、画舫在湖面慢慢地滑过，几乎不留一点痕迹。向东远眺，隐隐约约还可以望见几座古老的城楼和城里的`白塔。
颐和园的景色说也说不尽，逛也逛不完。有些景点还需要细细游赏，大家还可以在颐和园里自由地漫步游玩。
大家记住，不要随地吐痰，不要随手扔垃圾，不要损坏文物!再次祝大家玩得开心!
篇9：自己写的颐和园的导游词
各位游客大家好，我是长龙旅行社的导游员，我姓张，今天就有我来带领大家共同游览这个清代的皇家园林颐和园。希望我的讲解能够令各位满意，使我们共同度过这一美好的时光。请大家在游览时注意事项：不要在墙上乱涂乱画乱刻，不要乱丢果皮纸屑，不要随地大小便!
我们现在即将前往的就是颐和园，最早在辽金时代的时候，皇帝就已经开始在北京修建皇家园林了。
各位朋友，现在我们来到了长廊，它东起邀月门，西止石丈亭，全长728米，共273间。由于长廊的地基是随着万寿山地势高低而起伏的，所以廊身的走向是以昆明湖北岸的弯曲而变化的，在地势高低和变向的连接点上，还建有四个亭子代表春夏秋冬，分别是留佳寄澜秋水和清遥，设计十分的巧妙。长廊是我国园林中最长的游廊，也有画廊之称。这是因为在廊中共有苏式彩绘1.4万多幅，而且很少重复。
各位旅客，一天的游玩就要结束了，颐和园之行一定给大家留下了深刻的印象，愿大家记住这美好的一天。
篇10：作文评语简短
1. “当你把自己的“杰作”——一幅美丽的画交给老师欣赏的时候，老师真为你感到骄傲，你妈妈的心情一定跟老师一样激动吧!这幅画是你花了许多心血才创作完成的，对吗?告诉你，学习就像画画一样，只要我们肯下功夫，收获会更大。”
2. “你把拔河比赛中的“长绳”比作“拿不定主意的孩子”，太贴切了!比赛虽然失败了，但你的作文却写得非常成功!如果作文结尾把自己失望的心情变成短短的几句启示，就更好了!
3. 你是一个多么重情的孩子啊!你多么善于感悟生活中的情，尽管你对作文有些胆怯，但你却把握了作文的真谛——我笔写我情。只要写出自己的真情，老师一定非常喜欢你的。
4. 你是一个聪慧敏感的孩子，你也曾有一个快乐的家庭，你也爱你的家，可是当你的家庭出现不愉快的事后，你就不爱它了吗?用你的聪慧，用你的爱去召唤家庭的和睦幸福吧!
5. 在你的笔下，秋天是多么美啊!老师从你的作文中看到了那高远而深蓝的天空，看到了金黄的稻田、南飞的北雁和那飘零的黄叶，这一切，无不让我感受到秋天的美丽与神奇。我多么想对秋天说：秋天啊!化腐朽为神奇的秋天，你使学生的作文多么优美啊!
6. 当老师打开你的作文本时，总能听到一阵哭泣，原来是标点符号，因为你太不重视他们了。你想想，当老师也像你轻视标点符号那样而轻视你的作文时，你不是也会哭吗?
7. 你的作文能对秋天的田野进行细致的描写，说明你是一个善于观察的孩子。可是秋天是多么美的季节啊，秋天是收获的季节，秋天是多彩的季节，老师真希望在你的文章中能感受到那一个美丽而充满诗情的秋天!
8. 语言诙谐有趣,情节安排曲折生动,开头与结尾的呼应巧妙.本文篇幅虽短,但内容生动具体,段落明确,语言朴实,通俗易懂.
9. 文中一系列表现人物动作的动词运用得准确,衬托手法运用得好.
10. 你越来越棒了!你的作文真使我大开了眼界.你妈妈人美心更美,她对病人满腔热情,对工作一丝不苟,极端负责,这种精神是多么值得我们学习啊!我也为你有这样的好妈妈而感到骄傲!
11. 看了你的游览作文,仿佛身临其境.那两层楼高的长颈鹿你写得栩栩如生,那憨憨的大熊猫,机灵的小猴,狡猾的狐狸跃然纸上,读你的文章是我的一大享受.继续努力,你的文章是我们的最爱.
12. 你文中的"生物角"色彩绚丽,活泼可爱.那鲜艳的花朵,翠绿的叶子栩栩如生;那五颜六色的金鱼活灵活现,自由自在地遨游„„真是令人百读不厌.运用总分法,清晰地展现了生物角上每一种惹人喜爱的小生物,妙处横生.
13. 从这一段小小的日记,看出你是个细心的学生,能够细心捕捉到日常生活中的一件小事,并能用平实的语言写出内心的感受,篇幅短小精悍,语言平实,能引起心灵的共鸣.
14. "让座"是件极平常的事,但你的作文,却令人耳目一新.你不只写事,还具体而又真实地写出了自己让座前后复杂的内心世界,层次分明,语句生动,情节自然,富有感人的魅力.此外,你提出的社会问题,令人深思.
15. 文如其人，你的文章和你的为人一样朴实、豁达。你的作文功底很好，这也是你长期磨练的结晶。希望你在未来的学习过程中，用心感受和体味生活，写出更加感人的好文章。
16. 文能言声，我想文章正是你心灵的反映。人生的路途确实很曲折，也很漫长，但只要你努力执着地往前走，成功的桂冠必将属于你。
17. 文能怡情。不能把写作文当成自己的一项负担，而应该以积极的心态、细腻的笔触记录下自己的心路历程。
18. 可以说你的文章充满了真情实感。人嘛，失败在所难免，有勇气能面对失败就更加难能可贵。我相信是金子，总会有闪光之时。希望你尽快调整心态，你将会发现天空更加湛蓝。
19. 真是“下笔如有神”啊。看来你一定阅读了大量的文学作品。内容如此丰富，更显示了你的文学功底。只是如果把材料再按一定的逻辑顺序调整一下，此文会更精彩。
20. 看了你的文章，仿佛眼前流过一条小溪，清纯，可爱。希望你能保持住这样的文风，用纯净的语言表达出丰富的内涵。
21. 作文如做人，从你的生活感受中可以看出你是个积极上进的好青年，你看事物有自己的独到见解，认识深刻，真是难能可贵。
22. 能过合理的想象,反映出意味深长的哲理,…行文流畅,简洁,充分发挥了自己的想像力,是一篇不错的…文章清逸婉丽,流畅连贯,尤其人物语言幽默风趣,再加上一些精妙词语的使用,无形中为文章增添了不少情趣.
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篇11：颐和园导游词1500字
游客朋友们，你们好!我是你们的导游，大家叫我虫虫就好。今天我们要游览的是颐和园，请各位在听讲解的过程中不要掉队。
现在我们走的这条游廊就是1990年被收入《吉尼斯世界纪录大全》的长廊。这条长廊全长728米，分成273间。大家看这长廊的横槛，每根横槛上都有五彩的画，每一幅都不相同，共一万四千余幅，所以这条长廊也称为画廊。大家看这幅画，上边画的就是《桃园结义》的故事。请大家边走边观赏。据说，这些画是乾隆修建长廊时，命人到杭州临摹回来画上的，所以这些彩绘属“苏式彩画”。画的内容很丰富，有人物、花卉，也有古典名著，所设计的内容时间跨度非常大，从三皇五帝到清朝，上下五千年，是我国文化史上的一个缩影。
现在，大家先把目光从横槛上的画移向左边，看看左边这水平如镜的湖。这是北京西北郊众多的泉水汇聚而成的天然湖泊，以前叫瓮山泊。乾隆修建行宫时改名为昆明湖。这湖中心有一座小岛，去小岛玩要经过一座十七孔桥，这桥两边的汉白玉石栏杆有128根石柱，每根石柱上都雕有神态各异的狮子，有的母子相抱，有的玩耍嬉闹，有的你追我赶，有的凝神观景，每一只都惟妙惟肖，共有544只。
好了，我们继续沿着长廊往前走，来到万寿山脚下。请大家抬头看，半山腰是不是有一座八角宝塔形的三层建筑?那就是佛香阁。佛香阁高41米，八面三层四重檐，是一座宗教塔形建筑。据说，原来万寿山叫瓮山，这里埋葬着元世祖忽必烈的正宫瓮皇后，乾隆为了稳固自己的江山，就命工匠在山腰修建了这座佛香阁。
要去佛香阁得先经过排云殿。现在我们就从排云殿进去。这排云殿前后有21间房屋，殿角重重叠叠，琉璃五彩缤纷。这里是慈禧太后举行万寿庆典的地方。“排云”一词出自晋朝郭璞的诗句“神仙排云出，但见金银台”。现在这里展示的是慈禧接受文武百官祝寿的贺礼，这是不是很有意思呢?
现在，大家可以沿着石级上去，上面就是佛香阁了。大家可以在佛香阁前面的平台眺望一下，远处的北京城，近处的整个昆明湖都呈现在你眼前，风光无限。
好了，我的讲解先到这儿。接下来是自由活动的时间，请各位在游览的过程中不要乱丢垃圾，不要刻画文物。45分钟后在长廊的尽头集合，再前往颐和园的其他景点：石舫、画中游、苏州街、四大部洲……大家可以尽情观赏。
(点评：虫虫把自己游览颐和园时买的资料充分用在这篇习作中，读来让人身临其境。此外，虫虫除了采用课文的“移步换景法”介绍颐和园，还运用了方位顺序，以长廊为中心，把长廊左边的昆明湖和右边万寿山的排云殿和佛香阁逐一介绍了，改变了课文的介绍顺序。在颐和园众多景点中，详写了长廊、昆明湖、佛香阁、排云殿，一笔带过了石舫、画中游、苏州街、四大部洲这些景点。
篇12：颐和园英文导游词
Everybody is good! My name is presented, your tour guide, today we will visit is rated at 29 "world cultural heritage" in the Summer Palace. I hope my sincerity and enthusiasm can bring happiness to you!
The Summer Palace is one of the most vast imperial gardens in the world, is Chinas largest, protect the most complete existing royal garden museum. Was built in 1750, formerly qingyi park. Qianlong, jiaqing and daoguang and xianfeng emperor palace garden. In 1860 by British and French troops burned down. In 1886, emperor guangxu reconstruction on the original base according to the original size, two years later renamed the Summer Palace, the empress dowagers remaining land. In December 1998, UNESCO listed in the "world heritage list".
Park is mainly composed of longevity hill and kunming lake, two big scenery to, lake between the mountains, a pavilion, table, floor, palaces, temples, pagodas, waterside pavilion, pavilion, veranda, long beach, stone bridge, stone fat place full of national features of classical architecture, veranda, the countrys longest promenade, the distant mountains near water, become an organic whole repeatedly has the very high artistic value
Longevity hill belongs to yanshan -odd arteries, 58. 59 m. Buildings and mountain building, before the longevity hill mountain, three to eight surface layer as the center, four double-hipped roof of Buddha incense of the main body of large buildings. From the foot of "prout catamarans brainpower-computer" arched, the rows cloud gate, two of palace, cloud temple, DE hui temple, Buddha incense, and the wisdom of the sea, until the top of the mountain formed up in layers of a central axis.
Kunming lake is the main lake, the Summer Palace, three-fourths of the dominated area, about 220 hectares. Former lakes rippling, south of lake Simon Simon, a castle in the west, north look at the ups and downs in groups; There is a west causeway lake, and on the peach willow lines; The marble seventeen-arch bridge which lies on the lake, the kunming lake is the largest lake in the royal gardens in qing dynasty.
Today, our visit to this end, hope pleasant scenery of the Summer Palace, and I can become you the interpretation of wonderful memories! Thank you all!
篇13：关于颐和园的导游词
大家好!我是旅行社的导游员，我姓，请大家叫我。今天，就由我来带领大家游览皇家园林——颐和园。
请大家跟着我走。这就是大殿，我们绕过大殿就可以来到长廊。长廊又叫画廊，一共有237间，长达728米。每间的槛上都有一幅画，每幅画都有一个美丽的故事。
我们现在离开了长廊，来到了万寿山脚下，请大家往上看，在半山腰上的八角三层建筑就是佛香阁。那一排排金碧辉煌的建筑就是排云殿。
现在我们已经站在万寿山的山顶了。大家看下面的景色的一大半已经呈现在眼前，有葱郁的树丛，有朱红的宫墙和黄的绿的琉璃瓦屋顶，还有画舫游船缓缓游过。
下山以后，如果有需要乘坐游船的游客可以到昆明湖里荡舟。不坐船的游客请跟随我到十七孔桥上欣赏昆明湖的美。最后，我们到湖中心的小岛集合。坐船的游客请不要往湖里扔垃圾，以免污染了昆明湖的美丽景致。
现在，我们脚下踩着的就是十七孔桥，十七孔桥有几百根柱子，每根柱子上都有一只狮子，各个惟妙惟肖，姿态不一。
下了桥，我们来到的是与十七孔桥相连的小岛。现在请两路游客汇合。我带领大家游览颐和园的最后一个景点。这座小岛上有葱郁的树丛，还有华丽的宫殿。在这里，大家可以自由活动半个小时。半个小时后，由我带领大家回酒店休息。
今天的游览活动到此结束，谢谢大家!
篇14：颐和园英文导游词最全_导游词范文_网
颐和园，中国清朝时期皇家园林，前身为清漪园，坐落在北京西郊，距城区十五公里，占地约二百九十公顷，与圆明园毗邻。它是以昆明湖、万寿山为基址，以杭州西湖为蓝本，汲取江南园林的设计手法而建成的一座大型山水园林，也是保存最完整的一座皇家行宫御苑，被誉为“皇家园林博物馆”，也是国家重点旅游景点。下面是由小编为大家带来的关于颐和园英文导游词，希望能够帮到您！
颐和园英文导游词
the tour will take 4-6 hours. the route is as follows:
out side the east gate-side the east gate –in front of the hall of benevolence and longevity- in front of garden of virtuous harmony-in front of the grand theater building- a lakeside walk from the garden of virtuous harmony to the hall o jade ripples- in front of the o jade ripples- in front of the yiyunguan (chamber of mortal being)-hall of happiness and longevity- in front of the yaoyue (chamber of mortal beings)-hall of happiness and longevity-in front of the yaoyue(inviting the moon ) gate of the long corridor- strolling along the long corridor- visiting an exhibition of cultural relics- in front of the hall of dispelling clouds- inside the hall of dispelling clouds- atop the tower of buddhist incense- on a hilltop leading from the back door of the tower of buddhist incense- on a hilltop leading from the back door of the tower of buddhist incense- inside the garden of harmonious interest –outside the south gate to suzhou shopping street- atop the stone bridge inside the suzhou shopping street –on the road from the south gate of suzhou shopping street- on the road form the south gate of suzhou shopping street to the marble boat- in front of the ruins of the garden of complete spring –along the lakeside by the marble boat-boating on the kunming lake-leaving out through the east gate.
(out side the east gate)
ladies and gentlemen: welcome to the summer palace.(after the self-introduction of the guide -interpreter) i hope this will be an interesting and enjoyable day for you .
during our tour, you will be introduced to time honored historical and cultural traditions, as well as picturesque views and landscapes.
the construction of the summer palace first started in 1750. at that time, the qing dynasty was in its heyday and china was a powerful asian country with vast territories. the monarch in power then was emperor qianlong. with supreme power and large sums of money, he summoned skillful and ingenious artisans from all over the country to carry out this construction work in honor of his mother `s birthday. after 15 years and one seventh of the nation` s annual revenue spent, the garden of clear ripples was completed and served as a testimony to china` s scientific and technological achievements. in 1860, this vast royal garden was burnt down along with the yuanming yuan (garden of perfection and brightness) by angol-french allied forces. in 1888, empress dowager cixi reconstructed the garden on the same site and renamed it the garden of nurtured harmony (summer palace). characterized by its vast scope and rich cultural embodiments, the summer palace has become one of the most famous tourist sites in the world. this is the main entrance to the summer palace-the east gate on top of the eaves of the door there is a plaque bearing a chinese inscription which means garden of nurtured harmony” , whose calligrapher was emperor guangxu. the gate that you are now entering was used exclusively by the emperor, the empress and the queer mother. all others used the side doors.
(inside the east gate)
the summer palace can be divided into two parts: longevity hill and kunming lake .the whole garden covers an area of 290 hectares, of whih three- fourths consists of a lake and rivers .this imperial garden features 3,000 room-units and covers an expanse of 70,000 square meters with more than 100 picturesque spots of interest. the layout of the summer palace includes three groups of architectures: palaces where the emperor attended to state affairs, resting palaces of the emperor and empress, and sightseeing areas. entering the east gate we will come the the office quarters. entering the east gate we will come to the office quarters. the annex halls on both sides were used for officials on duty. this is the gate of benevolence and longevity. above the door there is a plaque bearing the same name in both chinese and manchurian characters. the gigantic rock in the foreground is known as taihu rock, or eroded limestone, quarried in jiangsu province and placed here to decorated the garden. on the marble terrace sits a bronze mythical beast, known as qilin or xuanni . it was said to the one of the nine sons of dragon king. a point of peculiar interest is that it has the head of a dragon, antlers of a deer, the tail of a lion and hooves of a ox, and is covered with a unique skin. it was considered an auspicious creature that brought peace and prosperity. this grand hall is the hall of benevolence and longevity. it was built in 1750 , and was known as the hall of industrious government. emperor qianlong ruled that the halls where monarchs attended to state affairs would be named after them . after the rebuilding of the summer palace, the hall was renamed, suggesting that benevolent rulers would enjoy long lives. the arrangement of the hall has been left untouched. in the middle of the hall stands a throne made of sandalwood and carved with beautiful designs. in the background there is a screen carved with nine frolicking dragons. on either side of the throne there are two big fans made of peacock feathers, two column-shaped incense burners, crane-shaped lanterns and an incense burner assuming the form of luduan, a mythological animal which was suppose to have the power to prevent fire. the small chambers on eight side were where the emperor qianlong and empress dowager cixi rested and met officials on formal occasions. on the verandah in the foreground of the hall there are bronze statues of dragon and phoenixes which served as incense burners on major occasions. they are hollow and smoke comes through holes on their backs. also on the veranda are tai ping (peace) bronze water vats made during the reign of emperor qianlong. as a precaution in case of fire, a fire was lit underneath the vats in the winter to keep the water in them from freezing.
(at the entrance of garden of virtuous harmony)
we are now visiting the garden of virtuous harmony, where emperor qianlong and empress dowager cixi were entertained with beijing opera performances. it mainly consists of the dressing house, the grand theater building and the hall of pleasure smiles. the grand theater building known as the cradle of beijing opera” was uniquely laid out and magnificently decorated. on september 10, 1984, the garden of virtuous harmony opened its doors to visitors. there are also 7 exhibition halls with articles of daily use on display here. the staff here put up court dresses of qing dynasty in order to give the visitor a more vivid impression.
(in front of the grand theater building)
this building is 21 meters in height and 17 meters in width and features three tiers of tilted eaves and stages. all of the stages are connected to a raise ,and a winch is installed at the top. a well and 5 ponds were sunk under the ground stage. there are trapdoors in the ceiling for fairies to descend, as well as on the floor for demons to surface. the underground passages also served as a means of improving resonance and making the performers` voices more audible .of the three main theater building of the qing dynasty, the grand theater building is the tallest and the largest. the other two are changyin (fluent voice ) pavilion in chengde, an imperial summer resort. the building played a major part in fostering the birth and development of beijing opera: since the completion of the grand theater building, many performances were held in it in honor of the empress dowager cixi.
(a lakeside walk from the garden of virtuous harmony to the hall of jade ripples)
we are now standing in the middle of a rockery behind the hall of benevolent and longevity. it appears that there` s nothing special ahead. however, after we clear the rockery, we will reach kunming lake. this is a application of a specific style of chinese gardening. not far away in the lake there is a islet. it is filled with peach and weeping willow trees and serves as a ideal place to appreciate the scenery. the pavilion on the islet is called zhichun (understanding spring) pavilion and is chardcterized by four- edged, multiple eaved roofs.
(in front of the hall of jade ripples)
this group of special and quiet courtyard dwelling is the hall of jade ripples. it was first used by emperor qianlong to attend to state affairs. it was also where emperor guangxu of the late qing dynasty was kept under house arrest. this hall is a hallmark of the reform movement of 1898, emperor guanxu was empress dowager cixi` s nephew. after emperor tongzhi died, empress dowager cixi made her nephew, who was at that time four years old a successor in order to continue her wielding of power behind the scenes. when emperor guanxu was 19 years old ,empress dowager cixi relinquished power to him but continued to exert considerable influence. in 1898, the reform movement took place with the aim of sustaining the corn principles of the qing dynasty while reforming outdated laws. the movement lasted for 103 days until it was suppressed by empress dowager cixi. the emperor` s six earnest reformists were beheaded and emperor guangxu was placed under house arrest which lasted for 10 years .all the back doors were sealed and a brick was was put up behind the wooden partition on each side of the two annexes of the courtyard. emperor guangxu was closely watched by eunuchs. the wall remains intact for tourists to see.. dynasty while reforming outdated laws. the movement lasted for 103 days until it was suppressed by empress dowager cixi. the emperor` s six earnest reformists were beheaded and emperor guangxu was placed under house arrest which lasted for 10 years .all the back doors were sealed and a brick was was put up behind the wooden partition on each side of the two annexes of the courtyard. emperor guangxu was closely watched by eunuchs. the wall remains intact for tourists to see. (in front of yiyunguan (chamber of mortal beings) this was where empress and empress dowager of china` s feudal system. however, emperor guanxu was not the last emperor of the qing dynasty. the last in the line was emperor puyi, who ascended the throne in 1908 at the age of three, too young to be married . in 1912, he was forced to abdicate. during the short reign of emperor puyi. empress longyu handled state affairs on his behalf in the name of empress dowager. in 1911, a revolution led by dr. sun yat-sun succeeded, and the year after, empress longyu announced the abdication of the last emperor of china.
(in the hall of happiness and longevity)
the aged empress dowager cixi was so fond of the summer palace that she decided to live here from april through october of every year. this group of buildings served as her residence. this group of courtyard dwellings consists of a forecourt and a backyard with annex courts on each side .the whole compound was basically made of wood, which is ideal for ventilation and lighting . with its quiet and tasteful layout, the hall of happiness and longevity made life very easy and convenient. no wonder one of empress dowager cixi` s pleasure boat. on the pier there is a tall lantern post. flanking the staircase leading to the main entrance of the hall, there are bronze cranes, deer and vases, symbolizing universal peace. the interior layout is the same as the imperial court, with throne, a large table and incense burners placed in the middle. at mealtime, eunuchs-in –waiting would make a gigantic table out of this table and empress dowager cixi would dine on 128 courses. because of this more than 1,800 tales of silver would be spent each month on meals. on the east side of the living room is the cloak room. the bedroom in on its west. in front of the yaoyue (inviting the moon ) gate of the long corridor the famed long corridor is ahead. facing kunming lake and in the foreground of longevity hill, the long corridor stretches from yaoyue (inviting the moon ) gate to shizhang (stony old man) pavilion. it is 728 meters in length and consist of 273 sections and connects four octagonal pavilions. in 1990 ,it was listed in guinness book of world records.
(strolling along the long corridor)
the long corridor is one of the major structures of the summer palace .since the corridor was designed to follow the physical features of the southern slope of longevity hill , four multiple-eaved, octagonal pavilions (beauty-retaining pavilion, enjoy-the ripples pavilion, autumn water pavilion and clarity distance pavilion) were placed at bends and undulation. thus sightseers will hardly notice the rise and fall of the terrain. as a major part of the architectural style of the summer palace, the long corridor serves as an ingenious connector between the lake and the hill. scattered buildings on the southern slope were linked to creat a unified complex. this corridor can also be called a corridor of paintings ”: there are more than 14,000 paintings on its beams. some of them are of birds, flowers and landscapes of the west lake in hangzhou, zhejian province. others present scenes from literary classics. the majority of the landscape painting were done under the order of emperor qianlong, who preperred the scenery of south china.
(by the door leading to the exhibition of cultural relics)
this group of temple-shaped structures are known as qinghua (clarified china) hall ,also known as arhat hall during the reign of emperor qianlong. the original hall burned down in 1860. after it was reconstructed, it was renamed. qinghua hall is now used as a exhibition hall displaying rare cultural relics collected in the summer palace. the hall consists of 6 exhibition rooms with tens of thousands of articles of treasure on display in turn. among the exhibits there are bronze ware, porcelain, jade assemblages from the ming and qing dynasties, and rare and paintings. there is also a gigantic stone slab, which is more than 3 meters in height and width. it bears the handwritten inscriptions of emperor qianlong is commemoration of the suppression of a rebellion in the xinjiang region. only this slab survived when the angle-french allied forces set fire to the summer palace.
(in front of the gate of dispelling clouds)
now we are approaching the central part of the structures on the lakeside slope, the tower of buddhist incense within the hall of dispelling clouds. the hall of dispelling clouds was where numerous palatines kowtowed to empress dowager cixi. it was surrounded by galleries and flanked by annex halls. in the forecourt there is a pool and marble bridges . starting from the lakeside, there lies in succession a memorial archway, the gate of dispelling clouds, the hall of dispelling clouds and the tower of buddhist incense. all of these structures are built on a central axis and each is taller than its predecessor. this was designed to give prominence to the last structure, the tower of buddhist incense, which was a symbol of imperial power. the layout of this group of architectures was based on scenes described in buddhist sutras. this group of structure are among the most magnificently constructed here in the summer palace.
(inside the hall of dispelling clouds)
the original buildings on this site were burned down by the anglo-french allied forces in 1860. a new set of structures was built during the reign of emperor guanxu, and was called the hall of dispelling clouds, suggesting that it was a fairyland. the hall was built on a high terrace, and has 21 room. inside the hall are a throne, screens, tripods and mandarin fans. on a platform you will see bronze dragons, phoenixes and tripods. at the foot of the platform there are four bronze water vats, the ancient form of fire extinguishers. the 10th day of lunar october was ,empress dowager cixi` s birthday. on that day ,she sat on the throne here to receive congratulations and gifts. now we are going to pay a visit to the highlight of the summer palace- the tower of buddhist incense. what we are now standing on is a stone terrace which is 20 meters in height. it has a semi housed stairway of 100 steps, you will live for 100 years. so, let` s go !
(in the front of the tower of buddhist incense)
an octagonal structure with three storeys and quadruple eaves, the tower of buddhist incense is the very center of the summer palace, and is one of the masterpieces of ancient chinese architecture. the tower is 41 meters in height, and is buttressed by 8 solid pillars made of lignumvitae logs. with its complex structure, ingenious layout, towering terrace and convincing grandeur, the tower of buddhist incense was artfully set out by the imperial gardens and beautiful scenery surrounding it .the tower overlooks kunming lake and other picturesque spots within an area of tens of kilometers .on the west side of the tower stands baoyunge (precious cloud pavilion). it is made of bronze and is7.5 meters in height and 270 tons in weight. it resembles its wooden counterparts in every detail. it is one of the largest and most exquisite bronze pavilions still on existence in china. lamas prayed here during the reign of emperor qianlong in honor of the monarchs and their families. at the turn of the century 10 bronze windows were spirited abroad. in 1992 an american company bought the windows and returned them intact to china.
(on a hilltop leading from the back door of tower of buddhist incense)
now we can see the long and snaking western causeway and a shorter dike that divides kunming lake into three areas that contain south lake island, seaweed-viewing island and circle city island. the three island represent three mountain in ancient chinese mythology, i. e. penglai, fangzhang and yingzhou. this peculiar method of incorporating a lake a three mountains within a single garden was a brainchild of emperor wudi of the han dynasty more than 2,000 years ago, bearing testimony to feudal monarchs` s longing for longevity. as the legend goes many heavenly elixirs grew on the three mythical islands. using artificial building techniques, the ancient chinese built this masterpiece based on the myth to make the mythical on appear to be accessible to humans.
(inside the garden of harmonious interest)
setting a garden within a larger garden has been one of china traditional architectural styles. the garden of harmonious interest serves as a fine example of this. this garden was built under the order of emperor qianlong and modeled after the jichang garden (garden of ease of mind )at the foot of mount huishan, jiansu province. it was renamed by his son emperor jiaqing in 1811. the existing garden was rebuilt by emperor or guangxu. empress dowager cixi used to go fishing here. the garden features 10 waterfront platforms, pavilions and halls as well as hundreds of galleries with all of its structures facing the lake and pools, the garden of harmonious interest is basically a garden of waterscape. spanning the vast expanse of the lake and pools are five bridges, each quite different from the others. the most famous of them is the bridge known as knowing –the fishing-bridge.” it is said that more than 2,500 years ago during the warring states period, two philosophere named zhuang zi had an interesting argument by the side of a pond. zhang said, ”fish swim to and fro in the water. what happy fish!” hui asked , ”you are not a fish. how do you know they are happy? ” zhuang replied, you are not me .how do you know i don’t know? ” hui signed, i am not you ,therefore, i don’t know you . and you are not a fish ,so how do you know that fish are happy? ” zhang said, you ask me how i know fish are happy, why do you keeping me the same question?” although the garden of harmonious interest was designed after jichang garden, it not only absorbed the original designs, but exceeded it .
(outside the south entrance to suzhou shopping street)
now lets have a look at longevity hill. on the back slope of the hill stands a group of architectures. the centerpiece of structures there are known as the four continents and are dedicated to buddhism. this group was laid out and arranged in accordance with buddhist cosmology. aside from a main shrine and structures embodying the four continents, there are eight towers representing minor continents. the shrine is surrounded by four lamaist pagodas and between the major and minor continents, there two platforms representing the sun and the moon. the qing authority attached great importance to buddhism. to further strengthen ties with the ethnic minorities who practiced buddhism, the monarchs incorporated both han and tibetan styles of architecture into this group of temples. further north at the foot of the four major continent lies the suzhou shopping street. built along the back lake of the summer palace, this street stretches about 300 meters and features more than 60 stores. it includes restaurants, teahouses, pawnshops banks, drugstores dye houses and publishing houses. in order to recreate the atmosphere of ancient times, visitors will have the chance to exchange their money to ancient style chinese coins for use here. storefronts are trimmed with traditional signboards and ornaments. the commercial culture of the mid-18th century has thus been recreated.
(atop the stone bridge inside the suzhou shopping street)
visitors may be surprise to see that this shopping street is almost the same as that in south china. as a matter of fact, this street was designed after the shops along the canals in suhzhou. originally known as emperor` s shopping street, it was built during the reign of emperor qianlong. after making several inspection tours to south china and being duly impressed by its commercial prosperity, emperor qianlong ordered the construction of this street. the imperial shopping street was burnt down by anglo-french allied forces in 1860. the site remained desolated until 1987, when reconstruction began. it was opened to the public in september 1990. with commercial culture as its hallmark, the suzhou shopping street is a vivid representation of china` s traditional cultures.
(on the road from the south fate of the suzhou shopping street to the marble boat)
this is the hall of pines. from it to the west we can walk to the marble boat. the path we aree taking stretches between longevity hill and back lake. monarchs and their cohorts used to stroll along it .hence it was named central imperial path. along this path you will see lilacs all around. hence, this road is also known as the path of lilac.
(in front of the ruins of the garden of complete spring)
quite a few unique structures were burnt down during the reign of emperor qianlong, among which the garden of complete spring was one of the most famous. the ruined and desolate courtyard by the roadside was its original site, it remains to be restored. this group of structures cover an area of 4,000 square meters and features a number of halls built on three different levels. all of the structures were connected with galleries and stone staircases. with its natural and ingenious combination of pavilions, a hall, galleries and rooms, the garden of complete spring serves as a fine model for other gardens. emperor qianlong frequently visited this compound.
(along the lakeside by the marble boat)
now we have returned from the back of longevity hill to the front. there is the famous marble boat. this structure is 36 meters in length and its body was made of marble. on top of it is a two storeyed structure. the floor was paved with colored bricks. all of the windows are inlaid with multi-colored glass and the ceiling was decorated with carved bricks. the drainage system channels rain water down through four hollow concrete pillars and into the lake through the mouth of dragon heads. according to a book written by emperor qianlong, the boat was used for enjoying the scenery and was supposed to be symbolic of the stability of the qing dynasty. halfway up the slope there stands the hall for listening to orioles . the ancient chinese liken the warble of an oriole to beautiful songs and melodies, hence the name of the hall which used to be a theater. now the hall is one of the most famous restaurants in china, featuring imperial dishes and desserts. it is a must for many foreign visitors to have lunch here when then come to beijing. more than one hundred heads of state worldwide have dined here and the late premier zhou enlai has held banquets here in honor of state guests. (sightseers who want to try the restaurant can go boating after they eat. those who do not can go abroad right away. those who do not feel like taking the boat can stoll along the long corridor to the outside of the east gate). (boating on kunmin lake) we are now going to enjoy the lakeside scenery from a pleasure boat. as a main part of the summer palace, kunming lake covers an area of 220 hectares, or three fourths of the combined space of this summer resort. this natural lake is more than 3500 years old. this lake was originally called wengshan lake. in 1749 emperor qianlong ordered the construction of qingyi garden, the predecessor of the summer palace. involving nearly 10,000 laborers, the lake was expanded and turned into a peach-shaped reservoir, the first of its kind for beijing. from 1990 to 1991, the beijing municipal government ordered the first dredging of the lake in 240 years .involving 200,000 men and hundreds of dredgers and other tools, a total of 625,600 cubic meters of sludge was dredged and 205 bombs dropped by the japanese during the anti-japanese war were removed. the summer palace set a precedent for sightseeing by boat. there used to be a large imperial flotilla, of which the kunming merry dragon” was the most famous. it was destroyed by the anglo-french allied forces in 1860. to make the tour of the summer palace a more pleasant one, a large pleasure boat tai he ” (supreme harmony )was built. this double –decked boat is 37.09 meters long,8,59 meters wide and 10.49 meters high. it can travel at a speed of 9 kilometer per hour. small pleasure boats are also available to tourist. another major spot of interest on the western causeway is jingming (bright view ) hall. both its front and rear face the lake. this structure also features three two- storeyed halls of varying heights. our tour is drawing to a close as we approach the shore. today we only visited the major scenic areas of the summer palace. i have left other spot of interest for your next visit. i will show you out through the east gate. i hope you enjoyed today` s tour. thank you .good-bye and good luck.
篇15：小学生叙事作文评语
1. 文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读爱读，不忍释手。
2. 虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地突现了文章主题。
3. 故事虽平凡，感情却真挚充沛感人。
4. 以饱满的激情，描写了……
5. 重点突出，详略得当，内容具体。
6. 比喻贴切，用词生动。
7. ，语言准确，鲜明生动，内容极其丰富具体，
8. 事例叙述得生动具体，人物的言行符合各自身份特点。
9. 文章来源于生活，因此语言虽然不怎样优美，但却真实有趣，写得入情入理
10. 文章将…写得细致入微
11. 文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉。
12. 结尾以…点明中尽，含蓄隽永，意味深长。
13. 重点突出，详略得当，内容具体。
14. 比喻贴切，用词生动。
15. 文章语言通俗易懂，贴近生活实际，读来令人倍感亲切。
篇16：颐和园导游词900字
大家好!我叫梁静扬，你们可以叫我梁导游。今天，由我来带领大家游览颐和园，请大家多多关照，希望大家能对我的工作提出宝贵的意见。颐和园到了，大家请随我下车。 进了大门，绕过大殿，现在的位置就是著名的长廊。你们看，这绿漆的柱子、红漆的栏杆，是一眼望不到头。这条长廊有七八百多米长，分为二百七十三间。每一间的横槛上都有五彩的画，画着人物、风景、花草，几千幅画没有哪两幅画相同。长廊两旁栽的花木，一种花还没有谢，另一种花就已经开了。 微风从左边的昆明湖上吹来，使人神清气爽，大家感觉到了吗?
走完长廊，我们现在来到的是万寿山脚下。大家抬头看一看，一座八角宝塔形的三层建筑耸立在半山腰上，黄色的琉璃瓦闪闪发光，那就是佛香阁。下面的一排排金碧辉煌的宫殿就是排云殿。 现在，我们在万寿山的佛香阁。大家向下望，颐和园的景色大半收在眼底。看，葱郁的树丛，掩映着黄、绿的琉璃瓦屋顶和朱红的宫墙。前面，昆明湖静得像一面镜子，绿得像一块碧玉。游船、画舫也都从湖面慢慢滑过，几乎不留一点儿痕迹。大家向东远眺，隐隐约约可以望见几座古老的城楼和城里的白塔。 我们现在所在的地点是昆明湖。昆明湖围着长长的堤岸，堤上有几座式样不同的石桥。大家走过石桥，就可以去湖中心的那座小岛上去玩。大家看，我现在用手指着的那座桥有十七个桥洞，所以叫十七孔桥。桥栏杆上有着上百根石柱，柱子上雕刻着小狮子，这些狮子姿态不一，没有哪两只是相同的。好，现在大家可以去小岛上玩儿，两小时后在这儿集中，然后我们坐车回去。解散!
大家今天玩得开心吗?通过我的讲解，你们是不是对故宫有了一定的了解呢?希望下次你们还来找我当你们的导游。再见。
篇17：励志作文评语
1、你的自觉、认真、刻苦精神很难得，是一个让老师和家长都宽慰的孩子。你能合理地安排自己的学习时间，讲究学习方法的改进和学习效率的提高，一个学期下来的成绩逐步进步证明了你学习的能力，希望在高中的最后一个学期，努力、有序、科学的学习，考上理想的大学。
2、看得出，你喜欢学校，喜欢这个大家庭。可平时，你为什么总不爱和同学们多说一句话呢?内向的你似乎和大家多了一层隔膜，常言道：孤木难成林，众志才成城。成功时，和大家一起分享喜悦;失败时，让大家和你一起分担，不要把一切都深埋在心里。班级就是你的家，还有什么不能和兄弟姐妹们说的呢?你很聪明，也很懂事，各方面对你来说都不算难，难的是如何让自己融入这个集体。用心去做好每件事吧!当你成功时，大家一定会在心里为你祝福!
3、乖巧的你在老师眼中听话、懂事，有着积极进取的精神，但过于沉静的性格让你在生活中多了些拘谨，少了些张扬个性的冲动。希望在今后的日子里，你能更大方、自然地表现自己，让同学们看到你的优点。希望在高中的最后一个学期，努力、有序、科学的学习，考上理想的大学。
4、美国流传着这样一句名言：如果连你自己都不相信自己，谁还会信任你呢?老师把这句话送给你，希望能对你有所启示。其实你很聪明，要对自己有信心，特别是在学习上。端正了学习态度，在老师的帮助下付诸努力，相信你一定能收获令人喜悦的成果。
5、相对于上个学期而言，本学期你的成绩有所提高，看得出你的心急和努力，但学习更重要的是掌握正确的方法才能对症下药，才能事半功倍。希望在高中的最后一个学期，努力、有序、科学的学习，考上理想的大学。
6、尽管开始到我们班还不能适应新的环境，尤其是学习习惯，但从期末成绩上看，你的基础还是不错的。只要你踏下心来，投入到学习中去，相信下学期你还会有更大的进步。希望你能更主动地学习，多思，多问，多练，大胆向老师和同学请教，刻苦学习，积极工作，不断提高各方面的能力，争取在专业理论和技能方面有更大的提高!
7、记得你曾经告诉过我，你对以后的生活有期待、有梦想、有追求。老师那一刻觉得，你将会有很大的改变。可是慢慢我发现你并没有明白，仍然沉浸在你的“快乐”里。在美国社会中流转着一句名言：如果连你自己都不相信自已，谁还会信任你呢?老师想把这句话送给你，希望能对你有所启示。把学习变成“我要学”，每天提前完成当天的任务，不会做的事学会做，会做的事要做好，能做好的事争取做得更好。其实你完全有这个能力，否则你将再一次被优秀所逃汰，将成为成为笑柄。这是你的亲人和老师最不愿意接受的事实。
8、聪明、机灵是你的天赋;讲义气是你的美德，“我想，我做”是你做事的信条„从小，父母对你进行无微不至地关怀，也许正是这个缘故，使你在遇到挫折，遇到困难时，难免滋生依赖别人和逃避困难的思想。
9、你的自觉、认真、刻苦精神很难得，是一个让老师和家长都宽慰的孩子。你能合理地安排自己的学习时间，讲究学习方法的改进和学习效率的提高，一个学期下来的成绩逐步进步证明了你学习的能力，希望在今后能继续保持你的优势，并能在此基础上注重各方面能力的锻炼。希望在高中的最后一个学期，努力、有序、科学的学习，考上理想的大学。
10、你懂礼貌，明事理，能严格遵守班级和学校的纪律，热爱集体，对待学习态度端正。上课也能认真听讲，课后能认真完成作业。只要有恒心，有毅力，老师相信你会在各方面取得长足的进步。
11、你是位遵守校纪校规的好学生，课堂上你专心听讲，作业认真及时。但你的学习成绩不是很理想。其实，你很聪明，你还可以往前跨一大步，但你似乎没有这个目标，老师真诚地希望在未来的日子里你能更努力，成为更出色、更优秀的学生。
12、你渴望做一个守纪律的学生，但又常常不能约束自己。你渴望为班级争光，但又缺乏勇气与胆量。你渴望学习成绩的进步，但又缺乏顽强拼搏的精神。请你不要灰心，慢慢来，只有不懈的追求、不断努力，让无数次失败奠定成功的基石，你终能得到成功的喜悦!
13、你有着豪爽的性格和可爱的个性，让人羡慕你的活力。但在学习上，你要注重知识在点滴间的积累。动如脱兔，也需静如处子，只有这样，你才能更自律、更扎实地学习，也才能让自己的知识堡垒更坚固。希望在高中的最后一个学期，努力、有序、科学的学习，考上理想的大学。
14、在平时的学习生活中，你尊重老师，能较好地完成老师布置的各项工作任务;学习上，你很自觉、认真，不放过点滴。希望在高中的最后一个学期，努力、有序、科学的学习，考上理想的大学。
15、虽然这学期你的某些行为受到了老师的批评，但你能正确对待，并且积极改正，这也是难能可贵的，希望你能在学习上多与老师和同学沟通，增强自信心和主动性，尽的努力去弥补自己的不足。
篇18：关于春的作文评语
俗话说：如果没有伟大的心愿，就没有伟大的天才。是的，每个人都有自己的心愿，有的人心愿是当人民教师，有的人是当警察，还有的人想当科学家。而我的心愿是当上一名宇航员，在太空中遨游着，发现许许多多的太空奥秘，看着许许多多别人看不到的壮观美景，成为一个英雄，为祖国作出贡献。
当然想要当上宇航员，可是一件不简单的事情，但我可以从现在做起，为自己的理想打下坚实的基础。我知道，要当一名宇航员必须有好的身体素质，所以要每天坚持锻炼;不仅要坚持锻炼，也需要有好的心理素质，不要害怕，这也是一个重要的问题，所以，我要为自己做心理准备。当然了，不仅要具备这两项最基础的，也一定要有稳固的知识和常识。
我买了许许多多的宇宙知识类的书，很好奇宇宙到底是什么样的，想亲眼见识一下。我想知道，著名的“黑洞”“白洞”究竟是什么样子，为什么黑洞会吸住白洞，会弹出?中间到底有什么奥秘呢?我还想去到每一个星球上，去银河系外别的星系，探索一望无际的宇宙尽头在那里，是什么样，到底会不会有外星人呢?我要登上月球，在月球上插上我的小旗子，表明了我在这里的存在，这里将会有环形山、陨石坑、杂石，像裸露在海岸边的岩石群，坑洼不平;我要登上火星，看看火星上奇特的美景;我要登上金星，研究里面到底有没有生物;我还要观察流星究竟是从哪里来的?最重要的是，我要在太空中看地球是什么样，亲眼看到中国在哪里?于是这一连串的问题，就成为了我想当一位宇航员的重要原因之一。能在太空中看地球、在太空中遨游着，这是多少人做梦也想不到的事情。
所以为了我的梦想，我会不断的锻炼，使自己真正能成为一位优秀的宇航员，在太空中遨游，为国家做贡献，读到这里，你能告诉我，你的愿望是什么呢?
篇19：北京颐和园导游词模板
各位游客们，大家好!我叫陈雯昕，大家可以叫我小陈。我是你们的导游，现在我来带你们去颐和园。
终于来到颐和园的大门了，进去之前我先说几点要注意的事。1。不要乱扔垃圾，2。不要玩水，3。不要私自离队，要跟着我走。好，我的事已经讲完了，现在我带你们进入颐和园。
走进大门，绕过大殿，就来到了有名的长廊，这条长廊有七百二十米长，分成二百七十三间，中有四座八角亭，代表一年四季。他们分别叫做"留佳"寄澜"秋水"清遥"。上面的画有上千幅，没有哪两幅是一样的。
走完长廊，我们来到了万寿山脚下。抬头一看，一座八角宝塔型的建筑耸立在半山腰上。黄色的琉璃瓦在太阳底下闪闪发光，那就是佛香阁。下面的一排排金碧 辉煌的宫殿，那就是排云殿。
丛万寿山下来，就是昆明湖。昆明湖有一座桥，叫十七孔桥。为什么叫它十七孔桥呢?因为它有十七个孔嘛?十七孔桥上有许多小狮子。每个都有每个的可爱之处而且姿态不一，我们的颐和园之旅已经结束了，现在我们回宾馆休息了。
篇20：游颐和园导游词300字
大家好，欢迎来到我国的世界遗产——颐和园，我很高兴能成为你们的导游。
一提到北京那里的世界遗产，大家应该都会想到颐和园吧，你们应该也都知道那里吧，这里的颐和园到处都是美景，比如说：长廊、万寿山、昆明湖等等。
长廊那是一眼望不到头，这长廊长700多米，分成 了273间，每一件都有五彩的画，画着：人物、花草、风景，几千幅画没有那两幅是相同的。
万寿山的半山腰有闪闪发光的佛香阁还有金碧辉煌的排云殿，如过登上了万寿山，站在佛香阁的前面往下望，你就会看到颐和园大半的景色。
昆明湖有个能通往小岛的桥，那个桥有十七个桥，叫十七孔桥，这桥栏的杆上有上百个石柱，柱子上都刻着小狮子，这么多的狮子，一个个都姿态不一，没有哪两个是相同的。
好了，我已经讲完了，你们可以仔细看看那里的，请不要扔垃圾，踩草坪。