留学申请书个人陈述(20篇)

Dear Sir,

I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.

My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

i am a student, graduated from baoyang middle school, nanning, guangxiautonomous region, in 20__. i am still studying in high school now, because iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. recently, i have a dream tostudy abroad. then i search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to new zealand for study.

first, new zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which i think is mo

re reasonable for me. finally, the climate of new zealand is similar withthe climate of the south of china. considering above reasons, i told my parentsmy plan on going to new zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

as a girl, i like preschool education since i was young. nowadays, chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. if i study specialized curriculums on preschool education,i will go back china and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

my plan is as follows: first, i plan to study english in language institutefor about a half year in new zealand. then, i will study specialized curriculumson preschool education. i believe i have the ability of study abroad, because ihave finished all high school curriculums. besides, my parents both have job andhave rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. after finishing mystudy, i will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as torealize my life value.

"All I know about leadership I learned from..." What items could a personuse to describe leadership qualities?

Inspired by the student council advisors at my high school.

Student council was a big part of my life in high school. I haveparticipated in it since my frst year of high school. When I frst joined, I wasquiet, na?ve, and unwilling to participate in many activities. I was scared tomeet new people and afraid to apply myself. This all began to change. Half waythrough my frst year in student council, one of the advisors can up to me andasked why I did not participate that much. I did not have an answer for her anddid not know how to respond. After this, I began to think of an answer. I becamefrustrated and decided to change. I started to show up at events and had a greattime. I realized I loved this and wanted to start leading these activities. Inmy sophomore, junior, and now my senior year of high school, I asserted myselfand took on a strong leadership role in student council. I did not fgure out theanswer to why I was so reserved until this year with the help of thisquestion.

尊敬的_招生组的老师：

您好!

我是来自河南省__中学的__，很高兴能向您呈上我的留学申请书，也希望借此机会我可以脱颖而出，为顺利进入_大学奠定坚实的基础。

在首都这座梦想之城，可谓高校林立，但是只有贵校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我们高中都会有人考入贵校，他们被誉为“天子骄子”。当录取金榜贴到校园里，看着他们脸上洋溢的笑容，我的心里也如波涛汹涌，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定决心，有朝一日我也要以自己的实力筑梦于人大校园，成为她的一分子。

可说归说，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奋学习。

在学习上，我对自己要求十分严格，充分发扬不怕吃苦的精神去面对学习中的一切困难和挫折。我知道学习就是一个苦难的过程，唯有坚持不懈，才能实现凤凰涅盘的重生，才能抵达成功的彼岸。因此，在课堂上，我紧紧跟随老师的思路，认真听讲，细心做好笔记，每一个知识点都不会错过。课下，我珍惜时间，努力复习，积极预习，有的放矢地掌控好自己的学习节奏。我喜欢思考问题，喜欢探究问题的本源，然后举一反三，化整为零。由于我的勤奋、刻苦，我获得了优异的成绩，每次考试都在全校前列，受到了老师和同学们的肯定，多次被评为优秀班干部、优秀学生、学习标兵等。

在获得优异成绩的同时，我还抽时间，挤时间发展自己多方面的兴趣。我喜欢打乒乓球、羽毛球、篮球，沉浸于体育锻炼的激情与豪迈中，在紧张与刺激间收获了强健的体魄。但比起体育锻炼，我更钟情于国学文化。

我喜欢国学的博大精深，喜欢国学的厚重神奇。课余，我已经阅读了多部国学经典，比如《孟子》《论语》《史记》《资治通鉴》《汉书》等，在文字与故事里感受到了国学的无限魅力。在我看来，国学不仅仅是传统文化，更是中华民族核心的价值理念和追求，是数千年来中国人思维方式行为方式生活方式生产方式的高度总结，是中华母亲的乳汁，是中华儿女的血脉、精神和灵魂，是中国人信仰的天空和大地。

出于对国学的热爱，我从小就立志要投身于祖国宝贵文化的学习、挖掘、弘扬中，用自己的所学，为国家的文化发展和民族的文化复兴，贡献自己的微薄之力。

而我之所以在众多的_高校中钟情于贵校，就是因为贵校深厚的文化底蕴吸引了我。贵校是一所以人文社会科学为主的综合性研究型高校。自建校以来，贵校始终不忘“立学为民、治学报国”的办学宗旨，以“实事求是”为校训，逐渐形成了完备的教育体系，尤其注重发挥人文社会科学认识世界、传承文明、创新理论、咨政育人、服务社会的作用，半个多世纪以来，已为国家输送了一大批高素质的人才，其中范文澜、冯其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可谓赫赫有名，为国家的文化建设做出了巨大的贡献。

我敬仰贵校国学院，它是新中国第一家以国学为教育研究目的且本硕连读的教育科研机构。学院学术力量雄厚，已经制定了完整系统的国学教学方案，建立了以经典研读为中心的课程体系，并充分兼顾传统与现代的有机融合，在教学与研究中，既有继承传统的治学特点，又有鲜明的时代性和宽广的国际视野。这些，都令我向往。所以，我认为贵校国学院是我的梦想之地，会改变我的人生轨迹。

尊敬的老师，请您考虑并接受我的申请，给我一片天空，让我自由飞翔，给我一片海洋，让我尽情畅游，我相信，进入人大是我最明智的选择。如果顺利被录取，我一定会珍惜时间，勤奋努力，孜孜以求，投身于学术研究，跟随大师足迹，在国学的传承里留下自己的名字，成为国家的栋梁，成为人大的骄傲。

我相信，我可以。

此致

敬礼

I live in Pakistan-a country destroying itself with bombs,guns and governments blabber to find justifications for what it is going through;a country where a former president is murdered in public,where the nations constitution and parliament are suspended at the same time,and where the voice of a common man is unheard.

Since the last few years, I had aspired to become a doctor.The idea of "scalpels," "opened chests" and "sutures" had always intrigued me.And then it happened!The recent unprecedented events in my country wiped off the dust of disillusionment from my eyes;I lost my will to become a doctor.However,the turmoil in the country led me towards newspapers and news channels,and hence Politics.

As I involved myself into politics,I realized that it is all-embracive-wielding its way over social and economic life-it is the omnipotent of Pakistan.It can mobilize public opinion,gear up propaganda machinery,make or repeal laws and what not.Backed up by public opinion,supported by the majority of the legislators,armed with the means to keep the people in a state of ignorance,political power crosses the limits of dictatorial powers.Political power,like the most powerful intoxicant,makes the persons in power to forget social ethics,political morality and obligations.

Most of the learned youth in this country consider Politics to be "a refuge for the scoundrels" and this derogatory remark may be true if we look at the deceptive and degenerated type of politicians indulging in a dirty game.All these political parties are votaries of democracy,but the way they conduct themselves inside their own parties is nothing but senseless authoritarianism.Therefore a very few students choose to pursue Politics as a profession,but what they dont realize is that if we dont take a stand the system can never be changed.Thus,I want to study Politics so I can come back to my country and contribute what little I can do for my homeland and its people.If I can inspire even a single person,it would be worth it.The world today is growing global.We are now not only to think of our own nation but as and when we think of it,we have to keep the international perception in mind;consequently,I chose Politics with International Relations as one of my courses.

Studying in UK will breed a sense of individuality and self reliance.I would be able to interact with people from everywhere and get to know about their culture.This would not only open new horizons for me,but would also clear some preconceived notions one has about the other.I have always been an active participant of debates.I have participated in 3 Model UN conferences out of which I was awarded with the Best Delegate award in two. I was also one of the two students to be selected from my school to participate in the English Speaking Union 08.Moreover, Ive taken part in Parliamentary style debates too.Therefore I believe I can communicate effectively in public and language will not be a barrier in my education.Furthermore, I have worked as an internee at Al-Shifa Eye Hospital for a month in summers.Here I learnt how to deal with patients,use the Auto Ref, handle files and punctuality.We also campaigned to a remote area near Murree where we helped the doctors in examining the patients free of cost.Another experience which taught me a lot was when me and my fellow colleagues volunteered to paint walls for the SOS Childrens Village.In addition,I worked with SUNGI (NGO) where a group of 5 of us had to organize an event to pay tribute to 1000 Women for the Nobel Peace Prize.

I enjoy Literature,especially the works of Shakespeare,Tennessee Williams,Thomas Hardy and Andrew Marvell.Id be delighted to study in a challenging atmosphere where I can focus on my studies.I commit to my work and my ability to think out of the box,keenness for Politics and my perception of things,I understand,gives me an edge over others.I believe in myself,and if provided with an opportunity,Id make the university proud.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的_大学老师：

您好!首先感谢您在百忙之中耐心阅读我的留学申请书。我是一名来自江滨小城安庆的学生，就读于安庆市第一中学。我的名字叫___。不知是否是名字的缘故，我从小就与水结下了不解之缘。从扬子江畔到大海之滨，我带着梦想一步步奔流前进。

一、一位女生

我是一个善于思考、爱好广泛、积极进取的女孩，不论是长长的成绩单的前列，还是各类社会活动中，总能发现我的身影。我学习成绩优异，语文、历史等学科尤为突出，在各种联考、学期测试中多次获得分。同时，从小担任学习委员、语文课代表的经历帮我练就了良好的口才，扎实的语言功底和自信大方的风度。

升入高中以后，我的综合素质尤其是文学才能得到了更好的体现。我担任着安庆一中向未来文学社社长，在这片热土上播洒着青春的梦想。这期间，我组织并参与多期校刊的编辑和创作，举办文学讲座，组织采风活动，《中国校园文学》、《辽宁青年》、《中学生优秀作文》……各种报刊上都留下了我年轻而有朝气的文字。在校园广播站中，我依靠较强的编采读写能力和亲切的嗓音成为人气颇高的主播，带大家欣赏窗外的风景。

此外，我还通过选拔，成为学校合唱队的一员，加入了GLOBE气象观测小组。更为光荣的是，我被选为第一批入党积极分子，在业余党校努力学习……在这一系列的学习和工作中，我提升了自身的素养，也收获了不少荣誉。20_、20_年连续两届获得“中国少年作家杯”全国征文大赛一等奖;20__年获第七届“新作文杯”全国中小学生放胆作文大赛高中组一等奖;20_年校“新新文学”征文比赛一等奖，并被评为校优秀团员、三好学生。

二、一次经历

20_年9月16日是_纪念日。作为文学社社长，我以此为主题带头撰写了一批稿件。9月15日，我突然接到了校领导的电话，表示欣赏我的文章，并邀请我作为一名学生代表在纪念大会上发言，但必须新拟讲稿。进入高三以后学业繁重，当时我也身患感冒，噪音大打折扣，是不是婉拒这次邀请呢?经过了片刻的犹豫之后，我决定给自己一个挑战的机会。凭着担任校史讲解员所积累的知识，通过查阅相关史料，我很快写出了讲稿《永为国之栋》。

16日早晨，在全校师生、各届校友和众多市民的注视下，我从容地走上主席台，深吸一口气，朗声说道：“亲爱的老师、同学们，今天，当我们翻开安庆一中厚重的史稿，我们不会忘记这样一个日子……”当我结束发言、鞠躬致谢时，台下爆发出的热烈掌声告诉我;我做到了!校长赞许地拍了拍我的头，同学们纷纷向我表示祝贺——大家都没有发现我的噪音的小秘密。当日，我的讲稿被选登在《安庆日报》专版上，很多素不相识的师生见到我都说：“你是在大会上发言的※※吧!讲得真好!”

虽然这次经历只是我多彩的高中生活中的一个小小的片段，虽然这不是我最光鲜耀眼的荣誉，但它却最让我引以为傲;因为我明白了：相信自己，我可以做得更好!

三、一个梦想

想成为一名优秀新闻工作者的我，如今站在高三这个人生的十字路口，但步伐却一如从前，自信坚定。_大学就是我始终坚持的方向。她以她“自强不息、止于至善”的精神，深厚的文化底蕴及一流的教学水平深深地吸引着年轻的我。

20_年夏天，我同父母特地来到祖国的东南明珠_，提前感受了_那温暖亲切的怀抱。漫步于优雅大方的校园，看着来来往往的哥哥姐姐阳光的脸庞，品尝着_食堂可口的沙茶面，我真切地感受到：就是_!这就是我追逐梦想的舞台!

尊敬的老师，您能给我一个再次在这个美丽校园听涛声、品美食的机会吗?

尊敬的x大学领导：

白雪皑皑的季节，莘莘学子又迎来了一年一度的留学热潮，这也将是我人生旅程的第一个重大转折。我来自x高级中学，我的名字叫x，男，x岁。今日我郑重向贵校推荐自我，因为考入x是我梦想，我渴望成为x的一名学子，成为一名真正的x人。

对x的向往由来已久，从上高中那天起，就开始对x有了逐步的认识，x大学以往不止一次被同学和教师提起，同学们也一向视考入x为一种荣耀和自豪，我开始关注x，了解x的一点一滴。

x大学是x第一所大学，其前身为x大学，始建于x年x月x日，至今已走过了x年的光辉历程，x始终依循“实事求是”的校训，构成了“严谨治学，严格教学要求”的优良校风，正是百年积淀的深厚底蕴，给x带来了生生不息的原动力，激励每一位x学子励精图治、创业为国。

随着对x了解的加深，自我对x的感情也在与日俱增，每每提起x，都感觉那样的亲切，对x，我似乎有一份难解的情缘，我默默地将考上x定为自我的奋斗目标。虽然x是那么遥远，是那么高不可攀，可是我要拼搏，我要追梦，我必须要去实现我美丽的梦想。随着自身的不断提高，学习成绩的稳步提升，我开始一步步向x靠近，我明白，正是我的梦想，支撑着我更加努力学习，支撑着我去争取走入x。

我出生在一个普通的工人家庭，父母都是从农村考上中专后进入城市，他们也一向对我有一个完美的期待，那就是上一所名校，完成他们没有完成的愿望。从小学到高中，父母从来没有对我的学习有太严厉的要求，他们更加注重我个性的培养，更加注重我健康欢乐地学习生活，他们不期望我成为一个读死书和死读书的书呆子，他们要我成长为一个阳光欢乐的人，成为一个善良正直懂得感恩的人。正是这样的家庭环境，让我有了充分的空间张扬个性，我欢乐，我阳光，我强健，虽然才十七岁，我已经长到了1.82米，我成了父母眼中的骄傲。

十余年的学习生涯，我一点点长大，一步步成熟，我不会错过任何一次表现自我的机会，学校组织的各种活动，我都进取参加，演讲比赛、体育比赛等，我都会冲在前面。我关心班级，爱护团体，从小学到初中一向担任班干部，上高中之后，我们开始竞选学生会，我又第一个报名，参加体育部长的竞选，经过努力，我最终如愿当上了学生会的体育部长，每周我还会参加学校的值周，帮忙教师管理学生，三年来的学生会和值周体验，锻炼了我的组织本事和语言表达本事，也磨练了我的意志。

都说当学生会干部会影响学习，我并没有这种感觉，倒是学生会的工作，促进了我的学习，学生会干部，学习更不能落后于别人。从进入高中的全校五十名，我逐年提高名次，最让我引以为傲的，是刷新自我最高名次和分数的证书最多，此刻我已经迈进了第一梯队，各学科也没有偏科落后现象，各科成绩均衡发展，但我最喜欢的还是物理和化学，多次取得近满分的成绩，这更增加了我学习的信心和动力。

我明白，我此刻离x还有必须的距离，可是我会利用这余下的将近180天时间，努力去完成学业，努力去提升自我，为自我走入x积蓄力量。我喜欢工科，喜欢动手，也有很强的动手本事，我觉得x的专业也异常适合我，如果我能走入x，我必须努力学习专业技能，不断增长才干，我也要象x的那些前辈们一样，设计更多的“鸟巢”及“水立方”，研究出继第一台飞机发动机之后众多的第一，为x人增光。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

A wise man once said “how dreadful knowledge of the truth can be, when there’s no help in truth.” I think, out of all thoughtful things one can think about, this quotes is unique description of what the depth of Drama and the Performing Arts can do for people. By studying Drama, we can become a variety of people, trapped within one single mind, all trying to be freed and each with their own personality and poison. Humanity has helped Drama so much to produce narrative of such calibre, and characters of such depth and poise – characters, which can be as sweet and innocent, or can take the more disgusting side of what being a human is, being as evil as what thought possible

Performance Art explores the whole range of human emotion and can produce tremendous performances and visual experiences and with Drama, in particular, we can go further than flesh and blood and express ourselves as somebody else and take on this ‘mask’. The most profound thing I have found when studying Drama is that we can become any person in the entire world, and still be us

I have always had a love for the performing arts since I can remember; for there has never really been anything else I have ever wanted to do apart from act. But acting is not just a subject to study people, narratives or social issues – we can discover so many things about ourselves, why we perform a character this way: is it because this person is so much like us? There have been numerous qualities I have discovered about myself while participating in drama. In teaching, I have learn how to really connect with people and help them to explorer what their feelings produce and more notably, how we learn about others, about a single person just by the way they say a monologue

Teaching has been a great experience for me because it has given me the time to evaluate my own performance and teaching skill, learning to become that character just a little but more. This has also been enhanced by the performances I have taken part in, learning to work together in teams to realise the dream of the narration and the vision of the director (for nothing really exists without the vision or image)

While experiencing other aspects of the Performing Arts, I have found that is has increased my performance skill on whole and expended my knowledge on the performance world greatly, Dance, Art and English all focusing on similar issues such as the Commedia dell’arte, Henrik Ibsen, Physical Theatre and Movements and philosophies. These subjects have greatly complemented my time in Drama, and increased my confidence and ability in being a performer. Being involved in 5 consecutive school productions, 2 amateur productions, teaching experience and a student has really influence me concerning the determination I will put into a career in Drama and Acting, and just working with these people and directors have really bettered me in the way I act, see myself and carry on with my life. The Performing Arts is such a brilliant profession to work in, because there is so much opportunity to explore the world

I know that I can offer the performing arts the time, the expense and the spark that it deserves. There is nothing else in world that I would devote more time to than being on the stage or acting in the street, and with the passion and determination to succeed behind me, I will give that spark and flavour that acting and the performing arts is all about. I know I can offer so much, because it is the only profession where, maybe just for one night, I can become someone else and do a damn good job of being that person – and I can easily say that I can offer the world, because performance and acting is my whole world. As well as enjoying Drama, I have also taken a shine to Philosophy and finding the reason for irrationality, and I feel particularly moved in amazement by the work of Bob Fosse and George Orwell for their use of horror, sorrow and murder. And a great interest to the History of Art, because so much of the story of us is portrayed in Art and more so these days it is so unique how Art and Drama work together to produce movement, beauty and conception.##

尊敬的老师：

您好!

又到了一年的毕业之际，我也即将结束自己为期三年的中学生涯。心中有许多不舍和留恋，但更多的，是对未来高中生活的憧憬，对前面未知人生路的期待。在这里，请允许我简单的向您分享一下自己至今为止的学习和生活体验。

一、自身成长经历及体会

我是一名有目标、重行动、心态平的学生。在学习中，能坚持为自己制定阶段学习计划，在一阶段的认真、刻苦学习之后，适时回头总结这一时期学习上取得的成绩和存在的不足，并向老师和班主任寻求一些建议和意见。努力做到不被单次的成绩影响学习步调，始终相信，稳定的心态是学习效率的内在保证。在与同学的相处中，我能做到不为人先，妥善处理各种情况，先理清思路找到解决问题的方法再提出自己的个人意见，在同学间有着很高的威望。在家庭生活中，我是妈妈的贴心小棉袄，妥善处理好自己的生活和情绪，不让父母为我担心。

二、个性特长及取得的成果

一方面由于我对各类挑战都有浓厚的兴趣，另一方面，我又擅长组织及协调工作，在校期间，代表学校参加县里组织的各类比赛。获得过市级三好学生与县级优秀团员等称号。除此之外，我还积极参与各类社会实践活动。社会实践活动不但激发了我的学习乐趣，也增进了我的服务意识。

三、进入高校的努力方向及设想

我是一个乐观自信、喜欢挑战的女孩。仰慕贵校的教学风格很久，所以我十分向往到贵校继续完成我的高中学习任务。在高中阶段受到更好的教育和指导，感受良好的学习、生活氛围。而且我自己也有信心在能力、体力上适应新的氛围和环境。请老师考虑我的条件，让我在贵校绚丽的舞台上展现新的精彩与辉煌，给我一次实现梦想的.机会。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的老师：

您好，非常感谢您百忙之中能抽出时间读这份留学申请书。

我叫黄鹏，来自莱阳市第九中学，是地地道道的九中人，只不过现在又要在前面加上复习生的名号了。虽然高考不尽如人意，但此时说起自己的身份，我还是愿意称自己为“九中人”，这三个字几乎涵盖了我的整个青春，以后也将伴我继续走下去。这次以复习生的身份回到母校，千万思绪涌上心头，高中三年的点点滴滴似电影片段般一幕幕在我脑海中回放，当初的豪言壮志似乎还在母校的上空回荡，经久不息;恩师的教诲，朋友的勉励在时光的打磨下历久弥新，句句澎湃着我的内心。

虽然初入母校时的青涩已蜕变成了成熟，但想起那段懵懂的时光，内心依然久久不能平静。稚嫩的外表下装载着蓬勃的心，我开始了自己的高中生活。或许是初中两年的班长生涯使我看起来较为沉稳，也可能是中考成绩入了班主任的“法眼”，总之，我很荣幸地被授予了班长的重任，也从此开启了我至今三年的又一段班长生涯。

高一高二时的班级就是一群热血少年俱乐部，我们长论古今中外，激扬文字，点评江山，轻狂却不知疲倦。在这样一群心怀报复的知己的熏染中，在知识渊博的教师的教诲下，我的成绩也开始了稳步提升，更重要的是我的思想也从此有了雏形——我想成为强者!在与老师和同学们的朝夕相处中，我从他们每个人身上都学到了一点东西，我学会了沉着，我懂得了宽容，我明白了感恩……他们每一个人都是一本活教科书，我一页页读，一本本读，纵使现在不再生活在同一个屋檐下，但我依然可以很迅速的找出对他们的“读书笔记”。与大家的一起成长的过程中，我也在慢慢变强——成绩已经稳坐前几把“交椅”，心智也越来越成熟。

最终凭借较为优异的成绩升入了高三，进入了一个全新的班级。虽然许多东西都要重新来过，但从高一高二走过来的我已经可以很容易地融入新班级了。我一直相信，只要自己付出真心就一定可以捕获真心，所以虽然只有不到一年的相处，但是我与高三的同学却宛如相识多年的朋友一般，亲密无间。我们一起挑灯夜战，一起埋头苦读，一起奋笔疾书，直到最后一起奔赴高考的战场，很遗憾我折戟沉沙，没能跟上他们的步伐。不过，“短暂的停留是为了更高的飞翔”，终有一天，我会赶上去的，跟他们并肩奋斗，书写我们九中人的辉煌!

高中三年，我成长了，成熟了。我时常愿意把自己比作一个行者，一步一个脚印地奔赴远方，在人生的这条道路上，我不愿意落后于任何人，也不愿意亦步亦趋地跟随他人，我想走出一条属于自己的道路，留下自己独有的身影。虽然我是个理科生，但我却非常喜欢一个人静静地思考人生，我不害怕孤独，有人说，孤独就是你所面对的那个人，他的情绪跟你的情绪不在同一个频率。我非常赞同，但是我不认为我孤独，不论是我那些展翅高飞的朋友，还是跟我一样“留守”下来的伙伴，都是我吐露心声的知己，有他们在，我不寂寞。

现在的我虽然还拼搏在高考的道路上，但是单纯的考出高分已经不是我的目的了。不过，上一所如同贵校一般的名牌大学的确是我心所往。人都是为了未来而活的，我这次就是为未来而战!

黄鹏

__年12月11日

As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spenthours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waitedon customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me thedesire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that thebusiness world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education,and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administrationprogram at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).

In addition to my helping out in my father’s business, I have had numerousother work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program.My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters,Chili’s restaurants, and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational SportsCenter (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis onserving the public effectively. Further, as an assistant manager at theShowplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuableexpertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of thesepositions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which areextremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.

Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. Part of myvolunteering experience at Middleway House, the local battered women’s shelter,involved extensive work on computers, including word processing, organizingdatabases and creating spreadsheets. Also, I recently participated in aninternship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in thepersonnel division. As a management intern, I was able to watch the workings ofa major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine myexperiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB,with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.

My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success asan undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety ofextracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing inintramural basketball. My positive experiences here have resulted in my desireto stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore,continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts,with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in theMidwest.

due to the comprehensiveness of china’s “reform and open” policies，economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. though more and more companies built， management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. management is a burgeoning fieldin china， so i hope i can acquire more modern knowledge on management inengland.

the roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. my father was among the first of china’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. as a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. mymother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simplecalculations. and so it was early in my life that i hoped i， also， would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.

with the time of growing up， i preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. i never ceased to contemplate over the questions i encountered.subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.

as a high school student in china， i had to concentrate on the collegeentrance examination (cee)， even so， books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. unfortunately when sitting in the exam in june， 20__， iwas so nervous that i didn’t score well in the cee exam. i enrolled in thedepartment of computer science in zhejiang college of traditional chinesemedicine. any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. after several terms， i realizedthat i would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. at thatmoment， i lost my direction and objectives. my persistence in reading saved mefrom the dark situation. as a matter of fact， i enjoyed reading the booksincluded encyclopedia american， and some books about management by peterf.drucker. i began to notice something interesting: why some companies canproduce more than others? why some company can sell more than others? why somecompanies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

with the questions in my mind， i started to read many relevant books. i waslucky to read the book “jack: straight from the gut”by jack welch， in which johna. byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. when i was a junior， i ran a bookshop

by myself near my school. i should manage not only the finance in the shopbut also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge thebusiness in my shop to hold on the run the shop. from this， my interpersonalskills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed， definitely i wasincreasingly interested in what i was doing. by december， 20__， i had finallydetermined to take business management as my career instead of it. to accumulatemore relevant knowledge， i strived to gain more practical work experience insome big companies.

fortunately， as a senior， i began by conducting an internship in thearchitecture company in zhejiang province. over six months， i worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system， which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. the experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of i thought in big companies. after graduation， i continued my work inthis company. in may， 20__， the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes， they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas i mentioned.

during the short period of training， i realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. lancaster， with its excellencein management， represents the perfect fit for my needs. in your challengingenvironment， i can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. i am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. with this in mind， i hereby submit my application，and await your favorable reply.

I am applying for admission to the Ph.D. program in Electrical and ComputerEngineering， at the University of California， Berkeley. I present my researchexperience and study objectives in this statement of purpose. I would like tobuild on my solid education and experience as an engineer for a Ph. D. degree incomputer science at a distinguished university. I wish in particular to betrained at an advanced level in software systems， database systems， applied-AIand knowledge-based systems. My ultimate goal is to become a professor teachingcomputer science at a Chinese university. I believe that advanced training in aquality graduate program will help me realize my goal.

My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During mydays at Engineering College I used to go to my fathers office and help himmanage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was thetime I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and returnare proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock marketcrashed. But fortunately， my father had a well-diversified portfolio because ofwhich our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learntthe second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reducesrisk. While I understood these two principles intuitively， it produced in me astrong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working ofFinance. This， I believe， was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind topursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in BusinessAdministration.

As I was finishing college， my mother had both of her hips replaced withartificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away andit was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers，orthopedic surgeons， and biologists had all worked together to design theseartificial joints that completely transform. peoples lives by giving them backpain-free mobility， and I knew at that moment that this was an area about whichI wanted to learn more. In China these days， university graduates who have notbeen lucky enough to settle into their dream jobs often look to graduatedstudies as a way to kill the time that they cannot otherwise spend meaningfully.I am prepared to go against the social conventions by putting on hold asuccessful research career that promised to be even more successful. With eightyears of productive and highly valued practical research behind me， I now wouldlike to revert to a more intellectual life so that I can conduct moretheoretical discourses.

When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues， the French sculptorAuguste Rodin answered， “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever Idont need For me， life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can beturned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents， diligence and asense of duty. During over four years’ my college life， I have been dreaming ofbeing a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the developmentof science as men do. For Knowledge Itself Is Power.This is one of my favoriteprecepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduationand my future spreads in front of me like a dream， this adage has neverinfluenced my life more than this before.

For the past three years， my undergraduate education has exposed me to thevarious sub-fields of Computer Science (CS). However， our syllabus has focusedmainly on "traditional" CS topics， such as Operating systems and single-CPUsystems. We have had barely a glimpse of the newer technologies that are likelyto change the way computing is done in not-so-distant future. The desire toexamine such subjects in greater detail is what has prompted me to opt forgraduate study. Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s“reform. andopen”policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the developmentof its global position. As a senior at Beijing University majoring in Economics，I feel that my field is fundamental to the progress of my country. Yet， at thesame time， I realize only too well that what I have learned as an undergraduateis far from enough. Therefore， it is my desire to pursue a graduate degree IEconomics at your university. If accepted， my intended concentration would beEconomic Development and Public Economics.

Respectful Sir or Madam，

I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian， a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy， I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help people.But when I went to high school， our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But Istill keep my faith， because I know that my family will support me to let mydream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchangestudent， I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to studybut I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letterto you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better justbecause I have a dream that I can change my family， my hometown even my country.I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school， I‘ma good student. I’m interested about sports， arts and science. I also like tostudy foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English atschool. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But Ican’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture clearly.That‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. Ineed a scholarship of your school， because I’m a good student. I have a dream.In that dream， I can see my parents are smiling because I became a usefulperson. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My willis strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to youto apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kindheart and reading my letter.

Best wishes.

Haoyu Liu

Feb.12.201x

Motivation

Ich hei?e Zhang Chen， komme aus der Stadt Beijing， VR China. Nach der Hochschulaufnahmepruefung habe ich bei der Studiengangwahl das Fach von Computer Wissenschaft und Technologie gew?hlt. Für meine Entscheidung zum Studium in Deutschland habe ich folgende Gründe，

Erstens， nach Deutschland zu studieren ist immer mein Traum. Deutschland ist eine entwickeltes Land， ihre Industrie， Wirtschaft liegt in den Spitze in der Welt. In diesem Land zu lernen und leben kann ich mehre Wissenschaften bekommen.

Zweitens， eine Schwester hatte ihres Studium in Deutschland abgeschlossen. Sie erklaert mir oft ihre Leben in Deutschland. Damals verfuellt Neid in meinem Herz. Die kulturelle Atmosph?re in Deutschland ist sehr stark. Die Literatur， Musik， das Drama usw. stehen in der Tradition von den anderen europ?ischen L?ndern， begründen trotzdem eine neue Richtung. So moechte ich diesem Land selbst verspueren.

Drittens， meine Eltern unterstützen mich bei meiner Entscheidung für das Studium in Deutschland. Nach der Meinung meines Vaters ist es der Traum der Ingenieur， die chinesische Industrie weiter entwickelt zu werden und Abstand mit Deutschland oder anderen entwickelten L?ndern abgekürzt zu werden， um den Traum zu wirklichen， will ich angestrengt studieren und mehre Wissens zu erhalten.

Schlie?lich bin ich auch tief von meinen Lehrern beeinflusst. Sie sch?tzen Ihre Studienerlebnisse in Deutschland hoch. Ich bin sicher， dass durch das Studium in Deutschland meine professionalen Qualifikationen verbessert werden und mein Horizont erweitert wird.

Ich bin optimistisch， aktiv， freundlich， selbstdisziplin?r， sprachgewandt， kommunikationsf?hig， willensstark， flexibel， gut in Zeiteinteilung und Zusammenfassung. Das Studium in Deutschland ist für mich Konsolidierung und Vertiefung von Fachkenntnissen， Erweiterung von meinem Horizont sowie St?rkung von meiner Selbst?ndigkeit. Ich bewundere die gewissenhafte Studienhaltung der Lehrer und Studierenden an der Hochschule Anhalt， sowie deren ernsthafte Denkweise und die Spitzenwissenschaft- und Technik. Deshalb bin ich fest entschlossen， in Deutschland an der Hochschule Anhalt zu studieren， um mein Ideal zu verwirklichen， mich zu bereichern und meinen Wert zu verwirklichen. Ich bin sicher， dass ich das Fachstudium an Ihrer Uni. reibungslos und erfolgreich abschlie?en werde.

Ich plane， Studienkolleg an der Hochschule Anhalt zu besuchen， und nach erfolgreichem Ablegen das ?Studienkolleg“ mit dem Fachstudium von Naturwissenschaften Bachelorprogramm an der Hochschule Anhalt zu beginnen.

Nach dem Studium werde ich selbstverst?ndlich nach China zurückkehren und eine Arbeit suchen. Ich hoffe auch， den Beitrag zur f?derung der kulturelle Konmmunikation zwischen Deutsch und China zu leisten.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. -My view of life.

Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?”

When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into __ University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.

This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in __ Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpart didn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.

In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process, when I met a lot of problems, I often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case. My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.

In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient. Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship experience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough. What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.

Dear Professor Zhiyong Lan:

My name is Lan Xi, a Ph.D. candidate studying Land Resource Management in College of Public Management, China University of Geosciences. I intend to spend one year of my doctor years in ASU School of Public Affairs by the end of September 20__ for a Ph.D. Mobility Program which I can acquire more knowledge about international policy of land management.

The land resource management is really an important major in Chinese University. It’s a subject of applied science which is combined both land policy and planning of land, and it helps the government to optimize the distribution of land resources. I’ve been studying the land resource management at least 7 years since 20__ when I was a college student, and I also love this major for 7 years.

I’ve read about your papers about land policy published on some magazines, and I can feel your abundant knowledge and lofty personality in words. Moreover, your altitude about sustainable development affects me a lot. As myself, it’s so thankful for my 7 years studying of land resource management and 5 more projects. It makes me become an accomplished and experienced person. And I’m sure I can help you and your team with some land projects.

I really want to join your team to learn more about the land resource management and exchange the experience. And I would greatly appreciate it if you could send me more information about the application at your earliest convenient.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的校领导：

本人叫______，我是师范大学中语系汉语言专业____班的学生，我逐步完成了由高中毕业到本科生的蜕变，在入校的三个多月学习期间，我努力辛苦的学习本系主要专业，一直受到本校辅导员和老师们莫大的关怀，给了我不断施展的平台，不过随着本专业系统的学习和深入，我感受到了前所未有的压力，来自理想与现实的，还有更多的。

我知道汉语言专业确实是一个好专业，它关联好多个专业领域，但是我感觉到我对本专业不是那么喜欢，家里人一直尊重我的想法，他们说让我学习以后保持生活的实际性专业，本来父母的愿望也是想让我上法律系，我从小就很喜欢法律方面的`知识，将来也希望在法律部门工作，新疆大学法律系一直都是我高三一年来的目标，由于估分的误差和一系列外界原因使我与新疆大学失之交臂，直到我知道还可以通过转学这个方式到新疆大学，我的心中又重燃希望。

这是我郑重的申请，我和我的家人们已经多次交流并考虑，我转校并不是因为师范大学，我是真的没有方向，没有办法好好学习，我希望以后成为对社会有用的人，我满怀着梦想!我不希望由于我一时选择上的失误造成我一生的失败，请帮助一个对世界，对社会都满怀希望的青年吧!

敬爱的校领导，我真诚的希望您能够慎重的考虑，我怀着感激的心，满载梦想的等着您给我的回音。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

从高一到高三毕业学习成绩有了明显的提高，在这三年中多次获得学校颁发的三好生奖状，进步之星奖，优秀学员奖和多项运动会奖状等。在高中毕业以后，我想去日本留学深造。

自小就在城市中生活的我十分向往去经济发达的大城市去学习。同时对于自己家乡落后有着深刻的责任感。日本是当今世界上世界上经济最发达的国家之一，电子产品在世界市场的占有率居于榜首。具有强大的海洋捕捞船队和水产品养殖业，渔业发达。留学条件良好，气候四季分明。环境优美，有美丽的樱花，北海道的樱花。去这些美丽的地方是我小时侯梦想。

有优秀的教师和先进的教学设备以及先进的教育理念。于是从上高中开始我就定下了将来去日本留学的想法。

____年2月底我向家里说明了我想去日本留学的意愿。在当时就得到了家人的许可。于是从____年的3月份开始我到__日语培训学校学习日语，平常的上课时间我正常到学校学习高中的课程到了，周末就上__日语培训班去学习日语，到现在为止我的日语水平已达到使用最基本的日常用语和进行简单的阅读的程度。日本以后，打算先到语言学校学习。为自己将来进一步的深造做好语言上的准备。在此基础上，根据本人的个人喜好和特长，想在日本的大学学习物流管理。日本是个经济文化繁荣发达的国家，尤其改革开放以来，中日两国经济文化艺术的交流更加深入。当我学有所成回国后，将致力于家乡的经济发展，用在日本所学的先进的管理方去经营自己家乡的企业。也愿意在日友好中日文化经济交流方面贡献自己的聪明才智。

父母支持我的留学请求，能够支付我在日本的一切费用。我到日本以后，保证遵守日本的法律遵守学校的规章制度。好好学习，增长本领，成为一个有用的人才

真诚地希望我的留学申请会被批准。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Applied Program：Organizational Behavior

I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In the past， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and the corporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that there is a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of their organizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)， large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. One simple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independently without direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations， acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towards the supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience and research， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with the employees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.

In contrast， foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have the ability to make decisions on their own， though the extent to which this is true depends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. These organizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior

The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission to your well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program， but to impress upon you my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in both scholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based my decision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons， but rather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is that money and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives and that in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from ones inner needs. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift， and I intend to use this gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.

I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In the past， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and the corporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that there is a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of their organizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)， large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. One simple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independently without direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations， acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towards the supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience and research， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with the employees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的x：

多年来，数学科学的研究一直吸引着我。决定攻读数学和物理的A—level是因为他们对这两个学科领域的兴趣都很高，而且能力很强。这反映在我x月x日收到的AS成绩中x;获得数学A级，这进一步激励了我对这门学科的追求。

我的兴趣已经扩展到计算机，在过去的几年里，试图将两者联系在一起已经成为我生活的重要组成部分。我自学了，使用书籍和其他可用资源，如何用HTML编程，这使我有可能在网页设计中发挥积极作用。

我的其他学术兴趣包括商业研究，尤其是与数学课程部分相关的管理和金融领域。我选择在Alevel中加入人文学科的部分原因是我需要分析和评估情况，商业研究让我有机会非常详细地做到这一点，我发现参与相关的课程很有治疗作用

实例探究。我还在攻读通识学科的A级课程，这增加了我对政治和文化问题的了解。该主题还鼓励有关时事的小组讨论，并为我提供发表意见的机会。

在过去的几年里，我一直是爱丁堡公爵计划的成员，该计划在学院内进行。x年x月，我完成了铜奖，现在正在努力争取我的金牌。这让我在团队合作、解决问题和保持高度责任感方面积累了丰富的经验。这些品质已被纳入10年级的成功工作经验安置以及我在知名零售店Marksand Spencer担任销售/管理助理的兼职工作。

我很享受在六年级的时光，并从学术和课外活动中获得乐趣。我觉得我拥有继续数学到更高水平所需的素质，并将其与我现在感兴趣的模块以及我希望在大学期间建立的领域相结合。我相信这种热情将与我坚定的决心和动力相结合，使我能够在_大学面临的挑战中取得成功。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日