新西兰留学申请的条件（实用19篇）

尊敬的_大学的老师们：

您们好!

我叫__，女，17岁，是西北大学附属中学理科一班的学生。

我是一个喜欢热闹的人，我总喜欢和同学们聚在一起谈论身边的大事小事，也会一起讨论一些很复杂的问题，但更多的是一起畅想未来，每当这时我们都会笑得很开心。其实我是一个特别喜欢笑的女孩，因为我坚信笑容可以给我的朋友们带来快乐，而我自己也在同时收获到快乐。所以我爱笑，就算遇到挫折也选择用这样的态度来迎接，以给自己更多的信心。也就是因为爱笑，同学们有时会说我像个傻瓜，不过我从未介意过，因为我希望我的朋友都快乐。

在学习上，我态度端正，曾担任学习委员和语文课代表，并且获得了许多荣誉。在生活中，因为我的笑让我与同学更团结了，也因此在小学一直担任班长，升入高年级后开始担任大队委、大队长，多年获得“三好学生”、“优秀班干部”，这些荣誉是我今生难忘的

它们是老师、学校对我的学习、工作的一种肯定，也一直激励着我向前。但我从未因此骄傲，而是怀着一颗感恩的心，感谢我的老师始终关心我、爱护我;感谢老师给我的荣誉，让我看到自己努力的价值;感谢老师教会我如何做一个正直的人。

我最喜欢的运动是游泳，我觉得在水里可以让我的头脑更清醒，所以无论是酷夏还是寒冬，只要有机会我就泡在水里。我也喜欢听音乐并且涉猎的范围很广，从通俗音乐到交响乐都有我喜欢的，之所以喜欢听音乐大概是因为我觉得这样可以让我的心静下来吧。

考试失利或遇到烦心事时我都会借此来舒缓压力。我还喜欢写随笔和涂鸦，把自己的开心或不快写出来、画出来，有时也会义愤填膺地写上一篇文章评论当下的新闻和一些社会现象。

我自认是一个爱玩的人，但对学习还是很认真的。我感觉自己是一个比较有自制力的人，知道什么时候该学习，也知道学习时不能分心，并且能遵守它。可我不觉得自己是人们通常所说的“书呆子”--只是一心扑在学习上，而不注重与别人交往。

所以我有很多朋友，我们一起学习，也约定一起向目标努力。同时我的外向性格也理所当然使我拥有了对外界强烈的好奇心和探索欲望，这也让我的眼界更加开阔。长得越大，懂得越多，我的探索欲望也越强烈，它驱使着我不停地向未知世界“进攻”，同时我也收获到学习的快乐。

我每天上学都要经过西电，校园里树木很多，我经常能闻到绿树青草的香味，而一旁古朴的教学楼更让这个校园显得优雅，久而久之我也就对这所伫立在闹事之中却能保持它原有气息的高校产生了浓厚的兴趣。后来，我开始查看有关电子科技大学的资料。

我渐渐了解了关于这所高校的历史沿革、办学理念和学科设置等一系列情况。我知道了电子科技大学是以信息与电子学科为主，工、理、管、文多学科协调发展的全国重点大学，是国家“211工程”立项建设的重点高校之一。而且学校汇聚了一支政治素质优良、学术水平高、结构合理的教师队伍。最让我感到兴奋的是“神五”、“神六”飞船副总设计师杨宏等一大批IT行业领军人物和技术骨干原来都是电子科技大学培养出来的。

看到这些，我情不自禁地笑了起来，与其说是为陕西有如此好的高校而高兴，还不如说是为自己找到了目标而高兴。特别是西电的通信工程专业吸引了我，对宇宙飞船和神秘的外太空充满好奇的我，希望自己也能像杨宏老师那样为航天事业做出贡献。

的确，从那时起我就决定不管结果怎样，都要以电子科技大学为目标奋斗。

我深知确定了目标就要为之而努力，否则一切都是徒劳的，但我有时也会对大学的生活充满想象：我想象着与大学里的同学一起生活的那种快乐;想象着与教授们一起探讨问题时的那种学习氛围;想象着丰富多彩的社会实践活动……而现在，为了我的目标和我所幻想的一切美好我必须更加刻苦地学习。

但在众多的优秀学生之间，我常常会感到力不从心，甚至是自卑，这是我的一大缺点。但在成长的过程中我一直在努力克服它，并且我也认识到唯有踏踏实实、勤奋拼搏才是通向成功的路。

我现在就在这条路上走着，虽然辛苦但我甘之若饴。我相信既然我有缘每天与_擦肩而过，我就会在不远的一天怀抱感恩的心骄傲地踏进那扇我向往已久的大门。

Due to the comprehensiveness of china’s “reform and open” policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. though more and more companies built， management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. management is a burgeoning field in china， so i hope i can acquire more modern knowledge on management in england.

The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. my father was among the first of china’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. as a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. my mother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simple calculations. and so it was early in my life that i hoped i， also， would someday be able to enter the realm of business.

With the time of growing up， i preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. i never ceased to contemplate over the questions i encountered. subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.

As a high school student in china， i had to concentrate on the college entrance examination (cee)， even so， books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. unfortunately when sitting in the exam in june， __， i was so nervous that i didn’t score well in the cee exam. i enrolled in the department of computer science in zhejiang college of traditional chinese medicine. any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. after several terms， i realized that i would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. at that moment， i lost my direction and objectives.

My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. as a matter of fact， i enjoyed reading the books included encyclopedia american， and some books about management by peter ker. i began to notice something interesting： why some companies can produce more than others? why some company can sell more than others? why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

With the questions in my mind， i started to read many relevant books. i was lucky to read the book “jack： straight from the gut”by jack welch， in which john a. byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. when i was a junior， i ran a bookshop by myself near my school. i should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. from this， my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed， definitely i was increasingly interested in what i was doing. by december， __， i had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of it. to accumulate more relevant knowledge， i strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的_大学老师领导：

您好!我是___，是入党积极分子，__省三好学生，在日常的学习和生活中我处处以身作则，以榜样的力量感染和带动我的同学。我在学习上勤奋刻苦，始终成绩优异，我就读的学校是一所拥有近四千名学生的省级示范校，每学期我校都要进行一次10所省级示范性高中的联合考试，每个年级的考生约一万三千多人在这类地区联考中，我的成绩始终名列前茅。20__年上学期我考取了地区联考第一名，本校年级第一名，班级第一名。20__年下学期地区第一名，本校年级第一名，班级第一名，20__年上学期地区第9名，英语单科成绩第一;本校第2名，班级第一名。20__年下学期地区第一名，本校年级第一名，班级第一名。20__年高三的第一次考试我考取第一名。我从初中起就多次参加全国中学生奥林匹克各学科竞赛，并于20__年获全国中学生奥林匹竞赛一等奖，20__年获全国中学生奥林匹竞赛英语、数学、化学竞赛一等奖、物理竞赛二等奖。读高中后20__年我获取全国中学生英语能力竞赛一等奖，全国中学生数学竞赛希望杯三等奖。20__年获全国中学生生物、数学竞赛决赛资格。各学科竞赛拓宽了我的学习思路，检验了我的学习效果，也争强了我的自信心。

20__年8月我升入高中，12月份我校有一名不幸身患尿毒症的同学叫___，面对着一个年轻的生命在顽强的与死神抗争。我决定和我的同学一起发起一次奉献爱心的捐赠活动，以集体的力量挽救这个年轻的生命。我写了倡议书，在学校号召老师和同学们为___同学捐款，还到社会上进行宣传，得到老师、同学和社会各界人士的帮助，共捐款6万余元。为邱纯亮同学做换肾手术奉献了我们的一份爱心。我们的爱心捐赠活动在社会上引起了强烈的反响。我市电视台在晚间最近新闻栏目专门做了报道。挽救这个濒临枯萎的生命的过程，震撼了我的心灵。因为我有能力通过自己的努力，延续一个年轻的生命，同时，爱心捐赠活动也验证了我的组织能力，凝聚力和感召力，更是对我自身综合素质的一次检验。在后来的班级工作和组织其他活动的时候我的自信心更强了。

当迈入了_大学的校门，也就步入了我生命中的最重要、最精彩的阶段。我会珍惜在校园中渡过的分分秒秒，在这大师云集、神圣的学术殿堂、在这群贤毕至的高等学府，如饥似渴的吸纳最新的知识和信息，发扬林业学子的优良传统，刻苦学习、精益求精，通过脚踏实地的努力使自己成为本专业的优秀学生，同时努力探索和验证与本学科、本专业相关的科学知识，以唯物和科学的态度勤奋地学习、深刻地思索、不懈地寻求本学科领域的最新知识，使自己成为本学科领域的有发展潜力和有培养价值的学生，成为北京林大的骄傲。

尊敬的老师：

您好!

又到了一年的毕业之际，我也即将结束自己为期三年的中学生涯。心中有许多不舍和留恋，但更多的，是对未来高中生活的憧憬，对前面未知人生路的期待。在这里，请允许我简单的向您分享一下自己至今为止的学习和生活体验。

一、自身成长经历及体会

我是一名有目标、重行动、心态平的学生。在学习中，能坚持为自己制定阶段学习计划，在一阶段的认真、刻苦学习之后，适时回头总结这一时期学习上取得的成绩和存在的不足，并向老师和班主任寻求一些建议和意见。努力做到不被单次的成绩影响学习步调，始终相信，稳定的心态是学习效率的内在保证。在与同学的相处中，我能做到不为人先，妥善处理各种情况，先理清思路找到解决问题的方法再提出自己的个人意见，在同学间有着很高的威望。在家庭生活中，我是妈妈的贴心小棉袄，妥善处理好自己的生活和情绪，不让父母为我担心。

二、个性特长及取得的成果

一方面由于我对各类挑战都有浓厚的兴趣，另一方面，我又擅长组织及协调工作，在校期间，代表学校参加县里组织的各类比赛。获得过市级三好学生与县级优秀团员等称号。除此之外，我还积极参与各类社会实践活动。社会实践活动不但激发了我的学习乐趣，也增进了我的服务意识。

三、进入高校的努力方向及设想

我是一个乐观自信、喜欢挑战的女孩。仰慕贵校的教学风格很久，所以我十分向往到贵校继续完成我的高中学习任务。在高中阶段受到更好的教育和指导，感受良好的学习、生活氛围。而且我自己也有信心在能力、体力上适应新的氛围和环境。请老师考虑我的条件，让我在贵校绚丽的舞台上展现新的精彩与辉煌，给我一次实现梦想的.机会。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的校领导：

本人叫______，我是师范大学中语系汉语言专业____班的学生，我逐步完成了由高中毕业到本科生的蜕变，在入校的三个多月学习期间，我努力辛苦的学习本系主要专业，一直受到本校辅导员和老师们莫大的关怀，给了我不断施展的平台，不过随着本专业系统的学习和深入，我感受到了前所未有的压力，来自理想与现实的，还有更多的。

我知道汉语言专业确实是一个好专业，它关联好多个专业领域，但是我感觉到我对本专业不是那么喜欢，家里人一直尊重我的想法，他们说让我学习以后保持生活的实际性专业，本来父母的愿望也是想让我上法律系，我从小就很喜欢法律方面的`知识，将来也希望在法律部门工作，新疆大学法律系一直都是我高三一年来的目标，由于估分的误差和一系列外界原因使我与新疆大学失之交臂，直到我知道还可以通过转学这个方式到新疆大学，我的心中又重燃希望。

这是我郑重的申请，我和我的家人们已经多次交流并考虑，我转校并不是因为师范大学，我是真的没有方向，没有办法好好学习，我希望以后成为对社会有用的人，我满怀着梦想!我不希望由于我一时选择上的失误造成我一生的失败，请帮助一个对世界，对社会都满怀希望的青年吧!

敬爱的校领导，我真诚的希望您能够慎重的考虑，我怀着感激的心，满载梦想的等着您给我的回音。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的x大学领导：

白雪皑皑的季节，莘莘学子又迎来了一年一度的留学热潮，这也将是我人生旅程的第一个重大转折。我来自x高级中学，我的名字叫x，男，x岁。今日我郑重向贵校推荐自我，因为考入x是我梦想，我渴望成为x的一名学子，成为一名真正的x人。

对x的向往由来已久，从上高中那天起，就开始对x有了逐步的认识，x大学以往不止一次被同学和教师提起，同学们也一向视考入x为一种荣耀和自豪，我开始关注x，了解x的一点一滴。

x大学是x第一所大学，其前身为x大学，始建于x年x月x日，至今已走过了x年的光辉历程，x始终依循“实事求是”的校训，构成了“严谨治学，严格教学要求”的优良校风，正是百年积淀的深厚底蕴，给x带来了生生不息的原动力，激励每一位x学子励精图治、创业为国。

随着对x了解的加深，自我对x的感情也在与日俱增，每每提起x，都感觉那样的亲切，对x，我似乎有一份难解的情缘，我默默地将考上x定为自我的奋斗目标。虽然x是那么遥远，是那么高不可攀，可是我要拼搏，我要追梦，我必须要去实现我美丽的梦想。随着自身的不断提高，学习成绩的稳步提升，我开始一步步向x靠近，我明白，正是我的梦想，支撑着我更加努力学习，支撑着我去争取走入x。

我出生在一个普通的工人家庭，父母都是从农村考上中专后进入城市，他们也一向对我有一个完美的期待，那就是上一所名校，完成他们没有完成的愿望。从小学到高中，父母从来没有对我的学习有太严厉的要求，他们更加注重我个性的培养，更加注重我健康欢乐地学习生活，他们不期望我成为一个读死书和死读书的书呆子，他们要我成长为一个阳光欢乐的人，成为一个善良正直懂得感恩的人。正是这样的家庭环境，让我有了充分的空间张扬个性，我欢乐，我阳光，我强健，虽然才十七岁，我已经长到了1.82米，我成了父母眼中的骄傲。

十余年的学习生涯，我一点点长大，一步步成熟，我不会错过任何一次表现自我的机会，学校组织的各种活动，我都进取参加，演讲比赛、体育比赛等，我都会冲在前面。我关心班级，爱护团体，从小学到初中一向担任班干部，上高中之后，我们开始竞选学生会，我又第一个报名，参加体育部长的竞选，经过努力，我最终如愿当上了学生会的体育部长，每周我还会参加学校的值周，帮忙教师管理学生，三年来的学生会和值周体验，锻炼了我的组织本事和语言表达本事，也磨练了我的意志。

都说当学生会干部会影响学习，我并没有这种感觉，倒是学生会的工作，促进了我的学习，学生会干部，学习更不能落后于别人。从进入高中的全校五十名，我逐年提高名次，最让我引以为傲的，是刷新自我最高名次和分数的证书最多，此刻我已经迈进了第一梯队，各学科也没有偏科落后现象，各科成绩均衡发展，但我最喜欢的还是物理和化学，多次取得近满分的成绩，这更增加了我学习的信心和动力。

我明白，我此刻离x还有必须的距离，可是我会利用这余下的将近180天时间，努力去完成学业，努力去提升自我，为自我走入x积蓄力量。我喜欢工科，喜欢动手，也有很强的动手本事，我觉得x的专业也异常适合我，如果我能走入x，我必须努力学习专业技能，不断增长才干，我也要象x的那些前辈们一样，设计更多的“鸟巢”及“水立方”，研究出继第一台飞机发动机之后众多的第一，为x人增光。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Personal Statement

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am with great pleasure to submit this personal statement in support of myapplication for continuing my university education in your esteemed universityand wish you could give my application a positive and favorable assessment.

Currently, I am a junior student in International College of Hubei NormalUniversity majoring in Accounting. Thus, I have obtained great knowledge aboutbusiness for the past three years. Depending on that, I have determined topursue a Bachelor degree at your distinguished university. There are therereasons leading to me choose business, the most important reason is that I amvery interested in business. In my opinion, handling good business is the sameas successful work of art. That’s an exciting thing. The second reason is that Ihave already learnt it for three years, so I want to broaden my knowledge aboutbusiness which will benefit my future life. The third reason is that I want tobecome a successful business lady which is my dream all the time.

To be honesty, I am an average student but I have diligent and strongconfident heart. I believe that a good attitude can change bad situation. So Iam always keeping a positive attitude on my life. I never ever give up anychance of promoting my study. During my three years in Hubei Normal University，Inever fail a class and always do my best for assignment. However，in my mind,social activity is as the same important as class study. In my spare time, Itook part in student union and took charge of minister in arts department. Ourwell-organized activities attracted many students to practice themselves. Lastsummer, I joined the Work and Travel Programme to be a staff in an Americancompany for three months. I made good use of that chance to improve my oralEnglish and tasted western culture. I think I can understand and adapt to aforeign culture in a short period.

I firmly believe that anyone could acquire success by their right way andfighting. This is one of the reasons why I want to go abroad. What’s more, Iwant to taste and accept some western education. I hope that I can learn moredifferences between Chinese and British university education and widen myhorizon. Furthermore，as we know, UK is a very modern country. It owns the mostadvanced education system and top universities in the world. And graceful schoolenvironments deeply attract me. By the way, if I can learn in your university Iwould cherish and appreciate this chance. In the future, I also mean to applyMaster’s Degree in UK. But after that, I will go back to my country and look fora job related to business.

I really want to own a colorful campus life in your school, further developmy overall capabilities including organizational ability, teamwork spirit etc. Ibelieve I can adapt to a foreign life and acquire best degree. With all theabove mentioned, in terms of my understanding of business and my enthusiasm forit, I hope that I can be up to the standard of the admission requirements inyour university. I believe that my strong interest in this subject. last, mypositive attitude and comprehensive ability will facilitate my successfulcompletion of the proposed program. Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours, Wanbin Xu

Yours sincerely,

"All I know about leadership I learned from..." What items could a personuse to describe leadership qualities?

Inspired by the student council advisors at my high school.

Student council was a big part of my life in high school. I haveparticipated in it since my frst year of high school. When I frst joined, I wasquiet, na?ve, and unwilling to participate in many activities. I was scared tomeet new people and afraid to apply myself. This all began to change. Half waythrough my frst year in student council, one of the advisors can up to me andasked why I did not participate that much. I did not have an answer for her anddid not know how to respond. After this, I began to think of an answer. I becamefrustrated and decided to change. I started to show up at events and had a greattime. I realized I loved this and wanted to start leading these activities. Inmy sophomore, junior, and now my senior year of high school, I asserted myselfand took on a strong leadership role in student council. I did not fgure out theanswer to why I was so reserved until this year with the help of thisquestion.

i am a student, graduated from baoyang middle school, nanning, guangxi autonomous region, in 20__. i am still studying in high school now, because i was not enrolled by the ideal university last year. recently, i have a dream to study abroad. then i search online and find that it is more convenient and suitable for me to go to new zealand for study.

first, new zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advanced education in the world. second, the tuition is lower than other countries’, which i think is mo

re reasonable for me. finally, the climate of new zealand is similar with the climate of the south of china. considering above reasons, i told my parents my plan on going to new zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

as a girl, i like preschool education since i was young. nowadays, chinese parents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention to preschool education. if i study specialized curriculums on preschool education, i will go back china and work hard on preschool education after leaving college.

my plan is as follows: first, i plan to study english in language institute for about a half year in new zealand. then, i will study specialized curriculums on preschool education.

i believe i have the ability of study abroad, because i have finished all high school curriculums. besides, my parents both have job and have rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. after finishing my study, i will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my life value.

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Dear _,

It is my conviction that the meaning of life does not dwell in the lengthof time that one can live or the material abundance that one can acquire, but inthe richness and the wonderfulness of life itself. With the increase of my age,many things in my life have changed. But one thing remains constant, that is, Iwill consistently insist on doing what I like to do and hope that my endeavorscan be valuable to the life of others. I see this as the only way whereby I canrealize the value of my life.

My undergraduate study focused on economics and I achieved remarkablescholastic performance in this field. My GPA is 3.44 (my GRE score is 20__ andTOEFL---- ). For four consecutive years of my undergraduate study, I receivedscholarships for my distinguished academic performance. Due to my equallyprominent performance in extracurricular activities I was conferred on theOutstanding Student in Campus Activities. However, honestly speaking, my realinterest lies not in economics, but in education. Ever since I was a primaryschool student, I had cherished a strong desire for a teaching careerexemplified by my teachers. In the actual teaching career that I embarked onupon my graduating from university, I have become increasingly aware that theexisting educational conditions in China are far from satisfactory. The backwardteaching methodology and the prevailing pedagogical ideology have renderedChinese education out of place with the modern international development ineducation. On the macro level, the current education theory and practice inChina lag significantly behind advanced countries in the West. For instance,though education via the internet has achieved considerable development in pasttwo years, in practical operation such education has more often than notdeteriorated into an extended form of the conventional examination-orientededucation instead of a really interactive process. In my personal experience,despite the fact that some of the problems that I have encountered in myteaching career can be solved by consulting relevant technical literature, Ihave found that the more serious flaws inherent in Chinas current educationalsystem cannot be worked out easily. Under such circumstances, an advancedprogram in education becomes necessary.

In this age of information, traditional education, both in its ideology andmethodology, has met unprecedented challenge like many other aspects of humanexistence. Meanwhile, the pursuit for higher levels of educational developmentand of the quality of life has largely transformed the educational valueorientation of the general public. The educational model that is centered aroundthe cognitive and intellectual instruction has been seriously questioned.Greater attention has been devoted to the cultivation of well-developedpersonality and to the ontological status of the individual in education. Suchissues as the internal studies of education science, scientific decision-makingin education, and meta-education have also been increasingly emphasized upon.There have also been innovations in educational research methodology. Thetendency has been to combine modern technology with humanistic researchcategories and with naturalistic research categories, and to organicallyintegrate qualitative descriptions with quantitative descriptions. It is alsoimportant to carry out educational experimentations in which educationalpredictions are complemented by educational feedbacks. Both the complexity ofeducation and the complexity of human individuals have made the comprehensiveapplication of diverse educational approaches necessary. Those new horizons arewhat fascinate me.

In view of the following qualifications that I have acquired, I believethat I will acquit myself satisfactorily in the prospective Ph.D. program ineducation that I am currently endeavoring to apply for. First and foremost, asis often claimed, ones interest is ones best director. I believe that I willdo well what I am really interested in doing. Secondly, though I majored ineconomics as an undergraduate, my trainings during that stage helped developeffective modes of thinking and research approaches. In addition, Iconscientiously self-studied many works related to education, including ADevelopmental History of Educational Science in the West, which enabled me toconstruct a solid groundwork for more advanced studies in this field. Next, itcan be safely asserted that education and economics are not entirely separated.For example, it is necessary to apply many statistical methods in educationalpsychology and my academic record indicates that statistics is the subject thatI am most good at. Last but not the least, my current teaching career and myteaching experience will play a positive role in facilitating my target degreeprogram.

The reason why I apply for the University of -- is that it is the firststate university with a time-honored history. The School of Education in thisuniversity is quite prominent among its counterparts in the field. I amparticularly attracted by the Schools powerful pedagogical resource, vibrantintellectual atmosphere and a comprehensive curriculum. I plan to apply for adegree program in Instructional Technology or Educational Psychology, both ofwhich enjoy unparalleled academic reputation in the world. My application forInstructional Technology is motivated by my strong interest in the applicationof modern science and technology, especially the information technologyrepresented by the Internet, in the field of education and in the nature of aseries of revolutionary changes resulting thereof. Instructional Technology is anew discipline that has emerged as a result of the rapid development of moderncommunication technology since the late 20th century. It has tremendouspotential for development and commercial application. As for my motive inselecting Educational Psychology as another possible area of specialization inmy degree program, it is my long-cherished interest that primarily counts. Onthe other hand, all the accomplished educators since the 1960s have beenwell-versed in psychology. Almost every important new educational theory isderived psychological findings in one way or another so that educationalpsychology has subsequently developed into a fundamental subject for the scienceof education. The tendency in the 21st century is to emphasize on the microresearch of educational activities and against this backdrop educationalpsychology will be attached greater importance. In Instructional Technology, Iwould like to focus on the following studies: how to improve educationalefficiency by applying research results from natural sciences and engineeringtechnology; how to explore the combination and coordination of pedagogicalcontents and to improve teaching methodology by exploiting the theoreticalfindings from psychology and educational science concerning the process ofteaching and learning. In Educational Psychology, I will concentrate on appliedcognition and development, gifted and creative education, genetics and childrendevelopment, personality structure and individual differences and other relatedsubjects.

For me, to shift from economics to education and to pursue an advanceddegree in the United States is not so much a challenge as an opportunity. Atpresent, major reforms are being introduced into virtually every importantaspect of Chinese society. The field of education especially calls forcomprehensive reforms. The United States occupies an absolutely leading positionin the present-day world in education. It is my conviction that, in the UnitedStates, advanced educational theories, technologies and information willfacilitate me immensely in the achievement of remarkable academic progress,fulfilling my aspiration to become an accomplished professional in the field ofeducation. This will not only bring my patriotic fervor into reality but alsomake my life more meaningful and rewarding.

Yours sincerely,

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

from: fan pu

department of the special class gifted for youths university of science andtechnology hefei, anhui 230026, p.r. china july 1, 1998 dear sir or madam:

i take great pleasure in recommending wang yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.

mr. wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the special class forthe gifted youths, my universitys unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented chinese youngsters. it was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.

he impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchinas scientific and technological talents. at the time, members of the giftedclass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. mr. wang scored the highest grade in that exam. he also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. to my regret at the time, hisenglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. but i noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his english during his fiveundergraduate years with us. by now, he seems to be at least as proficient inenglish as most of his former classmates in the gifted class.

in my experience with mr. wang, i was impressed with not only his

extraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. i amsure that mr. wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program thathe may care to enroll in. so i would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. i would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.

yours sincerely fan pu professor and deputy head.

Monsieur le Président,

Dans le souhait dune inscription auprès de votre université, jailhonneur de vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.

Jétudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans, et jobtiendrai malicence(bac+4) en juillet 20__ .(1)

Outre la langue fran?aise, jai étudié littérature fran?aise àlaquelle je mintéresse particulièrement.(2)

Après lobtention de mon dipl?me, jaimerais poursuivre mes études delittérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement delittérature.(3)

Or, pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires, jai besoin d’uncertificat de pré-inscription délivré par votre université. Cest pourquoi jevous demande quelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat etquelles sont les attesations que je devrais fournir.

Si cest possible, pourriez-vous me faire parvenir, à ladresse ci-dessus,un dossier dinscription ?(4)

Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance, je vous prie dagréer,Monsieur le Président, lexpression de mon profond respect.

(trois lignes dinterligne)

signature

Yours sincerely,

尊敬的_大学老师：

您好!

"韶华不为少年留，勤为天道酬。"正如高三的教室后墙上我所想出的励志名言一般，它时刻激励着班上的同学与我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡阳市八中高三的一名学生，就读文科，是平凡的，因为是一个同所有人一样的矛盾融合体;但又坚信自己是不同的，是因为我将成为发光体。金子，到哪里都会发光，而我选择的是贵校这样一座炼金炉。

河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我愿像河般，为梦想奔腾向前永不止息;像海般容纳百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利万物而不争，处众人之所恶，故几于道。居善地，心善渊，与善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，动善时。夫唯不争，故无尤。"善的最高境界，大致在于此乎。像水般，往低处流，却能容纳百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高处走时，当不胜寒时，不忘想想水的谦虚，以一种包容一切的姿态，以柔化刚，接受万物的俯视与臣服，这种"柔德"，使我自己的心境变得平和，要像水那样，无形胜有形，不断地改变，塑造自己，臻于完美。

宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落;去留无意，漫随天外云卷云舒的同时，我本着湖湘学派"经世致用"的原则，志当存高远。如果说周总理是"为中华之崛起而读书"，那我便愿为"中国之强盛而读书"。学无止境，人生本是一个不断学习的过程。在六年的学习委员一职的任职过程中，除了学习课本知识，我的右手可以写出一手漂亮的毛笔。因为正，一笔一划地写，心才会正。我的左手，能弹出美妙的小提琴乐章，这不仅开发了我的右脑，音乐更使我思维敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不仅是人类对上帝的提问，更是与大自然的交流。让狂躁的心，不知不觉间安静下来。

人生的旅途中，读书万卷：安徒生童话到世界名着。我醉心于宝黛间的痴缠;徜徉于《傲慢与偏见》里伊丽莎白奇妙的心海中;感叹于李白"我辈岂是蓬蒿人"的豪迈;与杜甫"安得广厦千万间，大庇天下寒士俱欢颜"一起忧国忧民;与易安居士一起看"雨疏风骤，绿肥红瘦"。在文的海洋中，我愿成那一滴水，一尾鱼，在海洋心中，见证着它的悲喜。于是在历史的不平中，我亦诗叹曰：陈王梦还金镂枕，凤皇遗恨正阿房，才佳长恨无归处，冷露成泪暗遗香。

我同样愿行万里路，沿途的风景，丰盈着自己的人生，懂得取与舍，让人生的阅历更加丰富。曾到过南京，河畔桨声灯影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝旧事已随流水，而这座古都却有太多历史无法忘记的东西：革命先行者孙文先生之陵……流连于河海大学门前，不由驻足，希望自己能成为"归人"，而不是"过客"。我这样的游子，在阅过17年风景后，选择了河海大学作为圆梦的地方。

我喜欢奔跑的感觉，起跑线比重点更加美好，体味那为理想拼搏的过程。十年磨一剑，剑出鞘，一鸣惊人，直指河海。

我，静如处子，或动如脱兔，愿意跟书本这样高尚的朋友对话。书山有路勤为径，运用正确的学习方法，在无涯的学海中"直挂云帆济沧海"，正确地驾驶着学习之舟，虽然途中有风浪，但坚持驶向目的地--河海之湾。我，崇尚独立，常独立思考探寻人生真谛，遇事冷静自若，却又让理性成为我织梦的梭，让勤奋成为我筑梦的桥。理智与热情，诚信与好学，成为划向河海的桨，只为到那里，为自己编织另一个梦，解决南方家乡旱涝灾害频繁的问题，造福家乡、祖国人民。在见证河湾辉煌的同时，与河海一起创造下一个辉煌。

我愿逆风行舟，驶向河海，利用水，造福人民。

我愿逆风，只为寻河海一梦。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

20__年__月__日

尊敬的大使(签证官)：

我的名字叫__， 2_岁。现在在__大学__学院就读，是-名__学专业的大学生。在父母的呵护下长大的我，从小就有一个心愿，就是可以到韩国学习韩国文化。所以，我喜欢收集韩国各方面的资料，包括民俗文化、科学技术。通过资料我逐渐了解到，韩国在东亚地区具有重要地位，她的历史悠久而灿烂，拥有独特的建筑、让难忘的与众不同的饮食，韩国的服饰更是让人喜欢。我最喜欢的是韩国的语言，听起来那么好听那么温柔。韩国是世界发达国家之一，她的科学技术在世界具有相当地位，电子产品在中国广受欢迎，而韩国的教育水平在世界更是瞩目。韩国比较突出的还有它的艺术，韩国的电视剧在东亚地区刮起过不小的风浪，而现代舞蹈和民俗舞蹈更是让世人惊叹。

韩国是礼仪之邦，韩国人民的热情友好是世界公认的，我希望可以在这样一个将传统 与现代很好结合在一起的国家继续深造。

性格开朗的我很喜欢护理行业，从小就喜欢白衣天使这个名字。看着护士小姐温柔的动作和美丽的仪态就特别向往着长大后可以做一名出色的护士。终于，我如愿以偿考上了延边大学护理学院，从此开始了护理学学习的道路。如今我即将毕业，实际操作能力虽然优良，可我发现我所学到的护理知识并不完善，所以我想继续深造。

通过网络，我收集到了很多关王韩国护理学方面的资料，了解到韩国有很多综合性大学都设有护理专业，如韩国梨花女女子大学、韩国延世大学等等。这些大学都具有悠久的历史、庞大的规模、尖级的教授队伍，最重要的是韩国的医学方面已经达到世界先进水平。这样优秀的大学是我渴望学习的最好的学校，因此我很向往去这样优异的环境中继续学习我热爱的护理学专业。虽然，语言是我面临的最大难题，但我会努力克服。我相信以我的学习能力加上韩国的语言环境，我会很快掌握这门美丽的语言，进而更快地无阻碍地学习护理知识，并将它用于实践中。因此我想申请梨花女子大学，因为我了解到梨花女子大学的护理系无论在教学上还是师资力量都是世界前矛。如果我能申请到，我-定会先在韩国语学习班刻苦学习，尽早将韩国语的日常用语和基本词汇掌握。在攻克语言的基础上，好好学习护理知识，为促进中韩两国文化发展做贡献。希望签证官考虑我的请求。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Having a flair for Economics and accounting I have decided that I want adegree in Accounting and Finance or Management. The many brilliantrepresentatives of the management community around the world have strengthenedthat resolve.

When I worked in my school as a tutor of English as a Second Language forstudents from a community school in Muscat, I realized the importance of astrong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well withothers. These ideas were further enforced by my month long internship atNovartis Pharmaceutical (Accounts and Finance Department and Human ResourcesDepartment).

I attended the Harvard Model Congress in Paris and won the Award ofDistinction. One skill in particular that contributed to this award was myconfident public speaking.

The last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world businessand economics. For my IB Extended Essay, titled “To What Extent Does Subway inOman Operate as an Oligopoly”, I set out to prove the oligpolistic structure ofthe fast food market in Oman. In this effort, I have come across many real lifecomplexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the Theoryof the Firm. While attempting to explain these alternate theories of firms Ihave developed a keen interest in analyzing and understanding how the world ofbusiness works.

After an undergraduate degree in accounting and finance or management Iplan to go onto post graduate studies and work on an MBA. A strong performancein a BA will allow me to move onto an MBA and only then shall I besatisfied.

For the last four years I have been part of our schools volleyball teamICE. We have retained our ISAC (Inter Schools Activities Conference, MiddleEast) title for four years. Playing in the power hitters (spiker) positionrequires immense physical fitness and to accomplish that I regularly go to thegym for fitness training. I am also part of my school track and field team.Being the fastest sprinter in the school since 11th grade the 100m, 200m and400m races are my specialty even though I still pursue long distance running. Inmy spare time I explore and master the computer as I am conversant with a VisualBasic Programming course. It is imperative for me to have the latest hardwareand software and I make it a point to install everything myself. I also learnUrdu as it is my native tongue and a link to my culture, to maintain that iscrucial.

Living in a diverse international community of over 52 nationalities hasallowed to me recognize and appreciate different cultures. With the experience Ihave and the strong motivation to craft a bright future I feel I can justify mydecision to pursue a career in Accounting and Finance or Management.

尊敬的学生处：

我是本校化学与环境工程学院化学工程与工艺专业的我是本校化学与环境工程学院化学工程与工艺专业的20x年级化学与环境工程学院化学工程与工艺学生叶福林。最近，由于气候的多变化，引起了身体不适应。最近，由于气候的多变化，引起了身体不适应，主要表叶福林现为严重失眠，精神状态较差。加上长期以来，现为严重失眠，精神状态较加上长期以来，长期以来饮食习惯也难以适应，饮食习惯也难以适应，习惯也难以适应常出现腹泻状况，对身体造成一定的伤害。

加之我是家里的独生子常出现腹泻状况，对身体造成一定的伤害。加之我是家里的独生子，一定的伤害我是家里的独生一个人独立生活能力有父母工作又远在郑州市照应。一个人独立生活能力有限，父母工作又远在郑州市需要照应。这样能力父母工作又远在郑州需要照应这样，诸多因素扰乱了我的学习与生活。对我的身体健康也极其不利。也会诸多因素扰乱了我的学习与生活。对我的身体健康也极其不利。严重影响学业的完成。

请求安阳工学院，严重影响学业的完成。影响学业的完成因此，因此，请求安阳工学院，安阳工学院考虑到我的实际困难，考虑到我的实际困难，能同意将我的学籍转到我父母现在工作的郑州市河南工业大学。能同意将我的学籍转到我父母现在工作的郑州市河南工业大学。郑州大学特此申请，恳请批准。申请，恳请批准。

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Dear Sir,

I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.

My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的X大学老师领导：

您好!首先感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间审视我的申请材料!

我是X市高级中学理科实验班的X，和其他的同胞或者说是竞争者们一样，我也但愿通过贵校的自主招生来实现我一直以来的梦想考入X大学。

在众多高校中，唯有X大学深深吸引了我，而且我也听到X的学长说，X非常适合那些“有想法主意”的人，只要你有想法主意，X都会尽全力帮你实现，我觉得我就是那种有想法主意、有立异意识的人，这也使我更加坚定了“将来一定要到X读书”的决心。凭借着十几年如一日的努力，我的成绩一直名列前茅，中考更是以全市第二十八的成绩考入铁岭市重点高中理科实验班。到了高中，我并没有骄傲，而是更加努力的学习，成绩也有了进一步的奔腾，每次考试成绩均不乱在年级前十名，施展好时还会进入前五名，我坚信自己是有资格进入X大学的。

相信在此之前，您已经阅读过了无数的自荐信，对省、市三好学生，校学生会主席，团支部书记等也已经见怪不怪了。很可惜，这些刺眼的荣誉和职位我都没有，我有的是对X全面的了解，有的是对X始终如一的热爱与向往，有的是“非X不去”的勇气与决心。更重要的是，我有着老实、量力而行的品质，我不会为了得到您的青睐而强调事实，虚张声势，而且我觉得一个人的领导能力、组织能力、交际能力和协调能力并不是只有靠这些职位才能体现出来的，究竟校学生会主席只有一个，但具有多地方能力的高中生远不止这些。

做事坚决，善于筹划是我的另一长处。说到筹划，我对自己的未来也已经做好了初步的打算：近年来，跟着中国经济的起飞，汽车已经走入了平常庶民家。因为汽车产业的提高，这地方精英的需求量也在随之增长。这对从小酷爱汽车，7岁就能识别数十种车标的我，无疑是一种巨大的激励，我也励志将来要进入一家汽车企业，介入设计制造一部机能优异，而且安全节能的汽车。据我所知，现今中国汽车在发念头的节油耐用，不乱机能上仍有一定的进步空间，而伴跟着油价的提高，增压直喷等技术也已走下神坛，进入乘用领域。在车身结构地方，人们对于安全恬静的追求是无止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能设计，有了更优秀的悬架，有了铝材，甚至碳纤维的应用。我愿把我全部的精力都投入到这些领域中，让中国的汽车有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞台上。这一切看似虚幻的梦想，一旦进入X，就都很有可能变为现实。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

i am a student, graduated from baoyang middle school, nanning, guangxiautonomous region, in 20__. i am still studying in high school now, because iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. recently, i have a dream tostudy abroad. then i search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to new zealand for study.

first, new zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which i think is mo

re reasonable for me. finally, the climate of new zealand is similar withthe climate of the south of china. considering above reasons, i told my parentsmy plan on going to new zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

as a girl, i like preschool education since i was young. nowadays, chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. if i study specialized curriculums on preschool education,i will go back china and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

my plan is as follows: first, i plan to study english in language institutefor about a half year in new zealand. then, i will study specialized curriculumson preschool education. i believe i have the ability of study abroad, because ihave finished all high school curriculums. besides, my parents both have job andhave rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. after finishing mystudy, i will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as torealize my life value.