新西兰留学申请的条件（热门20篇）

__大学的各位领导、导师们：

您们好!

首先感谢你们能在百忙之中审阅我的个人留学申请书。

我叫___，是来自__某中学的一名高三的理科生，即将面临高考，我期望透过贵校来实现我在__大学学习的梦想。一向以来，__大学对我都有很大的吸引力，有着悠久的历史，深厚的文化底蕴，丰富的教学资源，良好的学术氛围，强烈的时代气息，__大学历经沧桑，饱经风雨，为祖国培养了许多优秀人才，取得了丰硕的科研成果，并成为我国培养高层次专门人才和发展科学技术的一个重要基地。个性是，她是我国高校中最早开始试点实行自主招生的高校之一，她爱惜人才、有职责感，不拘一格选人才。这一点很吸引我。我十分渴望能在20__年7月拿到贵校的录取通知书，成为贵校的一名学生，成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才。

进入高中以来，我不断为实现这一理想而努力学习文化知识，勤学善思。英语、理化是我的强势科目，英语成绩个性优异。我参加了今年的全国中学生英语创新大赛，并有幸进入复赛，虽然由于种.种原因和最后的大奖擦肩而过，但参加竞赛的这种过程使我的潜力得到了很大的提升。

除了学习成绩优秀以外，我还有多方面的特长，我参加了校园的乐队，业余时间我喜欢拉二胡，学习二胡，不仅仅丰富了我的课余生活，而且升华了我对音乐的见解，在二胡的世界中，有奔腾豪放的《赛马》，有坚定有力，追溯光明的《光明行》，也有悲愤哀怨的《江河水》，我用心参与文体活动。初中时博兴县的才艺表演大赛中获得优秀节目奖。

我不仅仅爱好计算机，在业余时间，我参加了教育部组织的计算机等级考试并取得了一级B证，而且经常用心参与体育锻炼，强健体魄，增强毅力。除此之外，我热情、开朗，乐于助人，阳光、向上，所以高中以来，我年年被评为为"三好学生"。

但是，这些成绩只能代表我的过去，梦在心中，路在脚下，站在人生的十字路口，我选取了__大学，我期望__大学能敞开怀抱，给我带给一个大发展的平台，期望各位领导和老师能理解我的申请，衷心的感谢!

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敬礼

Dear Professor Zhiyong Lan:

My name is Lan Xi, a Ph.D. candidate studying Land Resource Management in College of Public Management, China University of Geosciences. I intend to spend one year of my doctor years in ASU School of Public Affairs by the end of September 20__ for a Ph.D. Mobility Program which I can acquire more knowledge about international policy of land management.

The land resource management is really an important major in Chinese University. It’s a subject of applied science which is combined both land policy and planning of land, and it helps the government to optimize the distribution of land resources. I’ve been studying the land resource management at least 7 years since 20__ when I was a college student, and I also love this major for 7 years.

I’ve read about your papers about land policy published on some magazines, and I can feel your abundant knowledge and lofty personality in words. Moreover, your altitude about sustainable development affects me a lot. As myself, it’s so thankful for my 7 years studying of land resource management and 5 more projects. It makes me become an accomplished and experienced person. And I’m sure I can help you and your team with some land projects.

I really want to join your team to learn more about the land resource management and exchange the experience. And I would greatly appreciate it if you could send me more information about the application at your earliest convenient.

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

from: fan pu

department of the special class gifted for youths university of science andtechnology hefei, anhui 230026, p.r. china july 1, 1998 dear sir or madam:

i take great pleasure in recommending wang yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.

mr. wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the special class forthe gifted youths, my universitys unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented chinese youngsters. it was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.

he impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchinas scientific and technological talents. at the time, members of the giftedclass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. mr. wang scored the highest grade in that exam. he also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. to my regret at the time, hisenglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. but i noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his english during his fiveundergraduate years with us. by now, he seems to be at least as proficient inenglish as most of his former classmates in the gifted class.

in my experience with mr. wang, i was impressed with not only his

extraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. i amsure that mr. wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program thathe may care to enroll in. so i would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. i would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.

yours sincerely fan pu professor and deputy head.

尊敬的老师：

您好!

又到了一年的毕业之际，我也即将结束自己为期三年的中学生涯。心中有许多不舍和留恋，但更多的，是对未来高中生活的憧憬，对前面未知人生路的期待。在这里，请允许我简单的向您分享一下自己至今为止的学习和生活体验。

一、自身成长经历及体会

我是一名有目标、重行动、心态平的学生。在学习中，能坚持为自己制定阶段学习计划，在一阶段的认真、刻苦学习之后，适时回头总结这一时期学习上取得的成绩和存在的不足，并向老师和班主任寻求一些建议和意见。努力做到不被单次的成绩影响学习步调，始终相信，稳定的心态是学习效率的内在保证。在与同学的相处中，我能做到不为人先，妥善处理各种情况，先理清思路找到解决问题的方法再提出自己的个人意见，在同学间有着很高的威望。在家庭生活中，我是妈妈的贴心小棉袄，妥善处理好自己的生活和情绪，不让父母为我担心。

二、个性特长及取得的成果

一方面由于我对各类挑战都有浓厚的兴趣，另一方面，我又擅长组织及协调工作，在校期间，代表学校参加县里组织的各类比赛。获得过市级三好学生与县级优秀团员等称号。除此之外，我还积极参与各类社会实践活动。社会实践活动不但激发了我的学习乐趣，也增进了我的服务意识。

三、进入高校的努力方向及设想

我是一个乐观自信、喜欢挑战的女孩。仰慕贵校的教学风格很久，所以我十分向往到贵校继续完成我的高中学习任务。在高中阶段受到更好的教育和指导，感受良好的学习、生活氛围。而且我自己也有信心在能力、体力上适应新的氛围和环境。请老师考虑我的条件，让我在贵校绚丽的舞台上展现新的精彩与辉煌，给我一次实现梦想的.机会。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Motivation

Ich hei?e Zhang Chen， komme aus der Stadt Beijing， VR China. Nach der Hochschulaufnahmepruefung habe ich bei der Studiengangwahl das Fach von Computer Wissenschaft und Technologie gew?hlt. Für meine Entscheidung zum Studium in Deutschland habe ich folgende Gründe，

Erstens， nach Deutschland zu studieren ist immer mein Traum. Deutschland ist eine entwickeltes Land， ihre Industrie， Wirtschaft liegt in den Spitze in der Welt. In diesem Land zu lernen und leben kann ich mehre Wissenschaften bekommen.

Zweitens， eine Schwester hatte ihres Studium in Deutschland abgeschlossen. Sie erklaert mir oft ihre Leben in Deutschland. Damals verfuellt Neid in meinem Herz. Die kulturelle Atmosph?re in Deutschland ist sehr stark. Die Literatur， Musik， das Drama usw. stehen in der Tradition von den anderen europ?ischen L?ndern， begründen trotzdem eine neue Richtung. So moechte ich diesem Land selbst verspueren.

Drittens， meine Eltern unterstützen mich bei meiner Entscheidung für das Studium in Deutschland. Nach der Meinung meines Vaters ist es der Traum der Ingenieur， die chinesische Industrie weiter entwickelt zu werden und Abstand mit Deutschland oder anderen entwickelten L?ndern abgekürzt zu werden， um den Traum zu wirklichen， will ich angestrengt studieren und mehre Wissens zu erhalten.

Schlie?lich bin ich auch tief von meinen Lehrern beeinflusst. Sie sch?tzen Ihre Studienerlebnisse in Deutschland hoch. Ich bin sicher， dass durch das Studium in Deutschland meine professionalen Qualifikationen verbessert werden und mein Horizont erweitert wird.

Ich bin optimistisch， aktiv， freundlich， selbstdisziplin?r， sprachgewandt， kommunikationsf?hig， willensstark， flexibel， gut in Zeiteinteilung und Zusammenfassung. Das Studium in Deutschland ist für mich Konsolidierung und Vertiefung von Fachkenntnissen， Erweiterung von meinem Horizont sowie St?rkung von meiner Selbst?ndigkeit. Ich bewundere die gewissenhafte Studienhaltung der Lehrer und Studierenden an der Hochschule Anhalt， sowie deren ernsthafte Denkweise und die Spitzenwissenschaft- und Technik. Deshalb bin ich fest entschlossen， in Deutschland an der Hochschule Anhalt zu studieren， um mein Ideal zu verwirklichen， mich zu bereichern und meinen Wert zu verwirklichen. Ich bin sicher， dass ich das Fachstudium an Ihrer Uni. reibungslos und erfolgreich abschlie?en werde.

Ich plane， Studienkolleg an der Hochschule Anhalt zu besuchen， und nach erfolgreichem Ablegen das ?Studienkolleg“ mit dem Fachstudium von Naturwissenschaften Bachelorprogramm an der Hochschule Anhalt zu beginnen.

Nach dem Studium werde ich selbstverst?ndlich nach China zurückkehren und eine Arbeit suchen. Ich hoffe auch， den Beitrag zur f?derung der kulturelle Konmmunikation zwischen Deutsch und China zu leisten.

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的__领导：?

您好!?

我是__省?中学高三应届理科学生__?。我希望通过贵校的_来实现我就读__的梦想，感谢您在百忙中抽出宝贵时间来审阅我的自荐材料。?

我一直有个梦想，梦想在__学习，梦想得到有着悠久历史和深厚文化底蕴的__的润泽。

从小学习成绩就非常优秀的我，凭借自己的努力以全市第十的优异的中考成绩考入景德镇市第二中学，并进入了奥赛班。经过三年的锤炼，我已经从一个单纯懵懂的男孩成长为一个热爱生活、追求知识、精力充沛、富有同情心、德智体全面发展的高中生。

我热爱生活，始终对生活充满信心和希望。在这个美丽的世界上，我享受着春花的美丽，秋月的温馨，夏雨的激情，冬雪的纯洁。我阳光，我快乐，我爱每一条河、每一座山、每一个人，我深爱着我所拥有的一切，即使是在苦累缠身的高三，我也痛并快乐着。我也希望把快乐传递给我身边的每一个人，我为强者欢呼，也为弱者流泪，我相信赠人玫瑰手有余香，相信人世间的真、善、美。为此我身边的人都非常喜欢我，称我为“开心果”。

我以同样的热情追求知识，我渴望了解人的心灵，渴望探求机器人的制造过程，渴望理解金融危机的产生原因，渴望知晓“六方会谈”的内容。所以我深爱学习，深爱看书。徜徉于书海之中，不断思考，不断领悟，其乐无穷。对知识的追求让我既增长了知识，开阔了眼界;又让我培养了情趣，提升了气质;还让我颐养了性情、平衡了心态。?

我的精力充沛，源于对生活的热爱，源于对知识的热情。在学习上，我认真刻苦，成绩优异，高三质检考试成绩在全校名列前茅，在今年第二十四届高中生化学竞赛(省级赛区)中荣获二等奖。除了抓好学习外，一直担任副班长的我还积极参加学校组织的各种活动。篮球赛、足球赛、校园歌手大赛、社会实践等活动中都能看到我的身影，既提高了我的能力，又锻炼了我的胆量。?

但我深知我还只是“小荷才露尖尖角”，成才之路浩漫漫，我还必须不断地锻造自己，提升自己。如果我有幸能进入自己梦寐以求的__殿堂深造，我定会上下而求索，把自己磨砺成一个具备独特文化品位、非凡才能和良好综合素质，敢闯敢拼的优秀人才。?

所以在此我恳请贵校领导能够给我一次实现理想的机会。?

此致?

敬礼!?

Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the application process. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing number of applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is also increasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a college recommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.

A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about a candidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for them to see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea to include in the application, even if the college does not require one, many colleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep in mind when writing a college recommendation letter:

Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that you know the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendation letter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written for candidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harm than good.

How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendation letter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length of time you have known that person.

Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of the recommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and his or her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement an application, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the college he or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of a college recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character of the candidate.

Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letter is to first obtain the students rsum with a listing of his or her GPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experience and special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate, the more constructive your recommendation can be.

Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, before writing a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the person to whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name, the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."

Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write a college recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. A letter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave a negative impression.

Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendation letter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if it can be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application, return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.

Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadline of the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequate amount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the most important detail is that it is received before the application deadline.

Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sure to save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation letter easier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may ask that you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is important that each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information can be recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the original passage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a college recommendation.

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Colleges place a large emphasis on a students academic ability because what is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academic success in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win situation. They want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only for the students benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more students become college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasingly selective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a college recommendation letter.

As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of a college-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writing a college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trust in you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whether or not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice on how to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letter and give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or her college of choice.

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

从高一到高三毕业学习成绩有了明显的提高，在这三年中多次获得学校颁发的三好生奖状，进步之星奖，优秀学员奖和多项运动会奖状等。在高中毕业以后，我想去日本留学深造。

自小就在城市中生活的我十分向往去经济发达的大城市去学习。同时对于自己家乡落后有着深刻的责任感。日本是当今世界上世界上经济最发达的国家之一，电子产品在世界市场的占有率居于榜首。具有强大的海洋捕捞船队和水产品养殖业，渔业发达。留学条件良好，气候四季分明。环境优美，有美丽的樱花，北海道的樱花。去这些美丽的地方是我小时侯梦想。

有优秀的教师和先进的教学设备以及先进的教育理念。于是从上高中开始我就定下了将来去日本留学的想法。

____年2月底我向家里说明了我想去日本留学的意愿。在当时就得到了家人的许可。于是从____年的3月份开始我到__日语培训学校学习日语，平常的上课时间我正常到学校学习高中的课程到了，周末就上__日语培训班去学习日语，到现在为止我的日语水平已达到使用最基本的日常用语和进行简单的阅读的程度。日本以后，打算先到语言学校学习。为自己将来进一步的深造做好语言上的准备。在此基础上，根据本人的个人喜好和特长，想在日本的大学学习物流管理。日本是个经济文化繁荣发达的国家，尤其改革开放以来，中日两国经济文化艺术的交流更加深入。当我学有所成回国后，将致力于家乡的经济发展，用在日本所学的先进的管理方去经营自己家乡的企业。也愿意在日友好中日文化经济交流方面贡献自己的聪明才智。

父母支持我的留学请求，能够支付我在日本的一切费用。我到日本以后，保证遵守日本的法律遵守学校的规章制度。好好学习，增长本领，成为一个有用的人才

真诚地希望我的留学申请会被批准。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的领导：

您好!

从高一到高三毕业学习成绩有了明显的提高，在这三年中多次获得学校颁发的三好生奖状，进步之星奖，优秀学员奖和多项运动会奖状等。

在高中毕业以后，我想去日本留学深造。

自小就在城市中生活的我十分向往去经济发达的大城市去学习。同时对于自己家乡落后有着深刻的责任感。日本是当今世界上世界上经济最发达的国家之一，电子产品在世界市场的占有率居于榜首。具有强大的海洋捕捞船队和水产品养殖业，渔业发达。留学条件良好，气候四季分明。环境优美，有美丽的樱花，北海道的樱花。

去这些美丽的地方是我小时侯梦想。有优秀的教师和先进的教学设备以及先进的教育理念。于是从上高中开始我就定下了将来去日本留学的想法。

20x年2月底我向家里说明了我想去日本留学的意愿。在当时就得到了家人的许可。于是从20x年的3月份开始我到x日语培训学校学习日语，平常的上课时间我正常到学校学习高中的课程到了，周末就上x日语培训班去学习日语，到现在为止我的日语水平已达到使用最基本的日常用语和进行简单的阅读的程度。日本以后，打算先到语言学校学习。为自己将来进一步的深造做好语言上的准备。

在此基础上，根据本人的个人喜好和特长，想在日本的大学学习物流管理。日本是个经济文化繁荣发达的国家，尤其改革开放以来，中日两国经济文化艺术的交流更加深入。当我学有所成回国后，将致力于家乡的经济发展，用在日本所学的先进的管理方去经营自己家乡的企业。也愿意在日友好中日文化经济交流方面贡献自己的聪明才智。

父母支持我的留学请求，能够支付我在日本的一切费用。我到日本以后，保证遵守日本的法律遵守学校的规章制度。好好学习，增长本领，成为一个有用的人才

真诚地希望我的留学申请会被批准。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Dear _,

It is my conviction that the meaning of life does not dwell in the lengthof time that one can live or the material abundance that one can acquire, but inthe richness and the wonderfulness of life itself. With the increase of my age,many things in my life have changed. But one thing remains constant, that is, Iwill consistently insist on doing what I like to do and hope that my endeavorscan be valuable to the life of others. I see this as the only way whereby I canrealize the value of my life.

My undergraduate study focused on economics and I achieved remarkablescholastic performance in this field. My GPA is 3.44 (my GRE score is 20__ andTOEFL---- ). For four consecutive years of my undergraduate study, I receivedscholarships for my distinguished academic performance. Due to my equallyprominent performance in extracurricular activities I was conferred on theOutstanding Student in Campus Activities. However, honestly speaking, my realinterest lies not in economics, but in education. Ever since I was a primaryschool student, I had cherished a strong desire for a teaching careerexemplified by my teachers. In the actual teaching career that I embarked onupon my graduating from university, I have become increasingly aware that theexisting educational conditions in China are far from satisfactory. The backwardteaching methodology and the prevailing pedagogical ideology have renderedChinese education out of place with the modern international development ineducation. On the macro level, the current education theory and practice inChina lag significantly behind advanced countries in the West. For instance,though education via the internet has achieved considerable development in pasttwo years, in practical operation such education has more often than notdeteriorated into an extended form of the conventional examination-orientededucation instead of a really interactive process. In my personal experience,despite the fact that some of the problems that I have encountered in myteaching career can be solved by consulting relevant technical literature, Ihave found that the more serious flaws inherent in Chinas current educationalsystem cannot be worked out easily. Under such circumstances, an advancedprogram in education becomes necessary.

In this age of information, traditional education, both in its ideology andmethodology, has met unprecedented challenge like many other aspects of humanexistence. Meanwhile, the pursuit for higher levels of educational developmentand of the quality of life has largely transformed the educational valueorientation of the general public. The educational model that is centered aroundthe cognitive and intellectual instruction has been seriously questioned.Greater attention has been devoted to the cultivation of well-developedpersonality and to the ontological status of the individual in education. Suchissues as the internal studies of education science, scientific decision-makingin education, and meta-education have also been increasingly emphasized upon.There have also been innovations in educational research methodology. Thetendency has been to combine modern technology with humanistic researchcategories and with naturalistic research categories, and to organicallyintegrate qualitative descriptions with quantitative descriptions. It is alsoimportant to carry out educational experimentations in which educationalpredictions are complemented by educational feedbacks. Both the complexity ofeducation and the complexity of human individuals have made the comprehensiveapplication of diverse educational approaches necessary. Those new horizons arewhat fascinate me.

In view of the following qualifications that I have acquired, I believethat I will acquit myself satisfactorily in the prospective Ph.D. program ineducation that I am currently endeavoring to apply for. First and foremost, asis often claimed, ones interest is ones best director. I believe that I willdo well what I am really interested in doing. Secondly, though I majored ineconomics as an undergraduate, my trainings during that stage helped developeffective modes of thinking and research approaches. In addition, Iconscientiously self-studied many works related to education, including ADevelopmental History of Educational Science in the West, which enabled me toconstruct a solid groundwork for more advanced studies in this field. Next, itcan be safely asserted that education and economics are not entirely separated.For example, it is necessary to apply many statistical methods in educationalpsychology and my academic record indicates that statistics is the subject thatI am most good at. Last but not the least, my current teaching career and myteaching experience will play a positive role in facilitating my target degreeprogram.

The reason why I apply for the University of -- is that it is the firststate university with a time-honored history. The School of Education in thisuniversity is quite prominent among its counterparts in the field. I amparticularly attracted by the Schools powerful pedagogical resource, vibrantintellectual atmosphere and a comprehensive curriculum. I plan to apply for adegree program in Instructional Technology or Educational Psychology, both ofwhich enjoy unparalleled academic reputation in the world. My application forInstructional Technology is motivated by my strong interest in the applicationof modern science and technology, especially the information technologyrepresented by the Internet, in the field of education and in the nature of aseries of revolutionary changes resulting thereof. Instructional Technology is anew discipline that has emerged as a result of the rapid development of moderncommunication technology since the late 20th century. It has tremendouspotential for development and commercial application. As for my motive inselecting Educational Psychology as another possible area of specialization inmy degree program, it is my long-cherished interest that primarily counts. Onthe other hand, all the accomplished educators since the 1960s have beenwell-versed in psychology. Almost every important new educational theory isderived psychological findings in one way or another so that educationalpsychology has subsequently developed into a fundamental subject for the scienceof education. The tendency in the 21st century is to emphasize on the microresearch of educational activities and against this backdrop educationalpsychology will be attached greater importance. In Instructional Technology, Iwould like to focus on the following studies: how to improve educationalefficiency by applying research results from natural sciences and engineeringtechnology; how to explore the combination and coordination of pedagogicalcontents and to improve teaching methodology by exploiting the theoreticalfindings from psychology and educational science concerning the process ofteaching and learning. In Educational Psychology, I will concentrate on appliedcognition and development, gifted and creative education, genetics and childrendevelopment, personality structure and individual differences and other relatedsubjects.

For me, to shift from economics to education and to pursue an advanceddegree in the United States is not so much a challenge as an opportunity. Atpresent, major reforms are being introduced into virtually every importantaspect of Chinese society. The field of education especially calls forcomprehensive reforms. The United States occupies an absolutely leading positionin the present-day world in education. It is my conviction that, in the UnitedStates, advanced educational theories, technologies and information willfacilitate me immensely in the achievement of remarkable academic progress,fulfilling my aspiration to become an accomplished professional in the field ofeducation. This will not only bring my patriotic fervor into reality but alsomake my life more meaningful and rewarding.

Yours sincerely,

Respectful Sir or Madam，

I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian， a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy， I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help people.But when I went to high school， our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But Istill keep my faith， because I know that my family will support me to let mydream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchangestudent， I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to studybut I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letterto you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better justbecause I have a dream that I can change my family， my hometown even my country.I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school， I‘ma good student. I’m interested about sports， arts and science. I also like tostudy foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English atschool. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But Ican’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture clearly.That‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. Ineed a scholarship of your school， because I’m a good student. I have a dream.In that dream， I can see my parents are smiling because I became a usefulperson. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My willis strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to youto apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kindheart and reading my letter.

Best wishes.

Haoyu Liu

Feb.12.201x

尊敬的先生/女士：

你好，我叫X，是X大学的老师。也是X学生的班主任，我非常高兴地向你推荐我的学生X，并且相信它能够出色的完成在贵校硕士课程的学习。

自从他进入大学以来，常常表现出与年纪不相符的成熟和稳重。由于班上的大部分同学都来自其他省市，这第一次的出门离家的经历使得他们需要一个相当长的过程适应这个完全陌生的新环境。但我注意到，相比之下，某某同志很快的调整好了心态，积极主动地融入到这个新环境之中。

大学的课程与中学有很大不同，偏重在自学能力，而且专业课程的学习要求另一种思维方式。因此，在大一。大二，很多同学都表现出了不同程度的不适应，不知道该如何学习大学的课程。但是，某某同志适应能力很强，很快摸清了工商管理课程的关键，在很短的时间里就掌握了学习方法，而且其他任课老师都表示他对于新知识的接受能力很强，新学的知识他马上就能消化，当堂就能理解掌握。

可以这么说，班里的部分学生是拿着极其出色的高考成绩走进了我们学校，而某某同志凭借的则是他极强的自学能力和良好的学习方法。这一点，在每学期的期末考试上得到了很好地体现，尤其是在专业英语的期末考试中取得极其优秀的成绩，也是班里少数顺利通过英语四六级考试的同学。他对学习英语的热情和毅力是最让我感动的。除了学同学还校里足球队的主力队员，积极的参加校里组织的各项活动，有极强的组织和领导才能。他经常到我办公室或给我打电话，一起讨论他学习和生活中所遇到的问题，希望取得更好的学习成绩。概括的说某某同志是一个好学生。

我希望贵校能给他一个机会，让他在贵校严谨的学风和良好的学习环境中继续发挥他的特长，进一步提高专业知识，拓宽视野。望贵校考虑它的申请。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Having a flair for Economics and accounting I have decided that I want adegree in Accounting and Finance or Management. The many brilliantrepresentatives of the management community around the world have strengthenedthat resolve.

When I worked in my school as a tutor of English as a Second Language forstudents from a community school in Muscat, I realized the importance of astrong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well withothers. These ideas were further enforced by my month long internship atNovartis Pharmaceutical (Accounts and Finance Department and Human ResourcesDepartment).

I attended the Harvard Model Congress in Paris and won the Award ofDistinction. One skill in particular that contributed to this award was myconfident public speaking.

The last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world businessand economics. For my IB Extended Essay, titled “To What Extent Does Subway inOman Operate as an Oligopoly”, I set out to prove the oligpolistic structure ofthe fast food market in Oman. In this effort, I have come across many real lifecomplexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the Theoryof the Firm. While attempting to explain these alternate theories of firms Ihave developed a keen interest in analyzing and understanding how the world ofbusiness works.

After an undergraduate degree in accounting and finance or management Iplan to go onto post graduate studies and work on an MBA. A strong performancein a BA will allow me to move onto an MBA and only then shall I besatisfied.

For the last four years I have been part of our schools volleyball teamICE. We have retained our ISAC (Inter Schools Activities Conference, MiddleEast) title for four years. Playing in the power hitters (spiker) positionrequires immense physical fitness and to accomplish that I regularly go to thegym for fitness training. I am also part of my school track and field team.Being the fastest sprinter in the school since 11th grade the 100m, 200m and400m races are my specialty even though I still pursue long distance running. Inmy spare time I explore and master the computer as I am conversant with a VisualBasic Programming course. It is imperative for me to have the latest hardwareand software and I make it a point to install everything myself. I also learnUrdu as it is my native tongue and a link to my culture, to maintain that iscrucial.

Living in a diverse international community of over 52 nationalities hasallowed to me recognize and appreciate different cultures. With the experience Ihave and the strong motivation to craft a bright future I feel I can justify mydecision to pursue a career in Accounting and Finance or Management.

尊敬的_招生组的老师：

您好!

我是来自河南省__中学的__，很高兴能向您呈上我的留学申请书，也希望借此机会我可以脱颖而出，为顺利进入_大学奠定坚实的基础。

在首都这座梦想之城，可谓高校林立，但是只有贵校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我们高中都会有人考入贵校，他们被誉为“天子骄子”。当录取金榜贴到校园里，看着他们脸上洋溢的笑容，我的心里也如波涛汹涌，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定决心，有朝一日我也要以自己的实力筑梦于人大校园，成为她的一分子。

可说归说，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奋学习。

在学习上，我对自己要求十分严格，充分发扬不怕吃苦的精神去面对学习中的一切困难和挫折。我知道学习就是一个苦难的过程，唯有坚持不懈，才能实现凤凰涅盘的重生，才能抵达成功的彼岸。因此，在课堂上，我紧紧跟随老师的思路，认真听讲，细心做好笔记，每一个知识点都不会错过。课下，我珍惜时间，努力复习，积极预习，有的放矢地掌控好自己的学习节奏。我喜欢思考问题，喜欢探究问题的本源，然后举一反三，化整为零。由于我的勤奋、刻苦，我获得了优异的成绩，每次考试都在全校前列，受到了老师和同学们的肯定，多次被评为优秀班干部、优秀学生、学习标兵等。

在获得优异成绩的同时，我还抽时间，挤时间发展自己多方面的兴趣。我喜欢打乒乓球、羽毛球、篮球，沉浸于体育锻炼的激情与豪迈中，在紧张与刺激间收获了强健的体魄。但比起体育锻炼，我更钟情于国学文化。

我喜欢国学的博大精深，喜欢国学的厚重神奇。课余，我已经阅读了多部国学经典，比如《孟子》《论语》《史记》《资治通鉴》《汉书》等，在文字与故事里感受到了国学的无限魅力。在我看来，国学不仅仅是传统文化，更是中华民族核心的价值理念和追求，是数千年来中国人思维方式行为方式生活方式生产方式的高度总结，是中华母亲的乳汁，是中华儿女的血脉、精神和灵魂，是中国人信仰的天空和大地。

出于对国学的热爱，我从小就立志要投身于祖国宝贵文化的学习、挖掘、弘扬中，用自己的所学，为国家的文化发展和民族的文化复兴，贡献自己的微薄之力。

而我之所以在众多的_高校中钟情于贵校，就是因为贵校深厚的文化底蕴吸引了我。贵校是一所以人文社会科学为主的综合性研究型高校。自建校以来，贵校始终不忘“立学为民、治学报国”的办学宗旨，以“实事求是”为校训，逐渐形成了完备的教育体系，尤其注重发挥人文社会科学认识世界、传承文明、创新理论、咨政育人、服务社会的作用，半个多世纪以来，已为国家输送了一大批高素质的人才，其中范文澜、冯其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可谓赫赫有名，为国家的文化建设做出了巨大的贡献。

我敬仰贵校国学院，它是新中国第一家以国学为教育研究目的且本硕连读的教育科研机构。学院学术力量雄厚，已经制定了完整系统的国学教学方案，建立了以经典研读为中心的课程体系，并充分兼顾传统与现代的有机融合，在教学与研究中，既有继承传统的治学特点，又有鲜明的时代性和宽广的国际视野。这些，都令我向往。所以，我认为贵校国学院是我的梦想之地，会改变我的人生轨迹。

尊敬的老师，请您考虑并接受我的申请，给我一片天空，让我自由飞翔，给我一片海洋，让我尽情畅游，我相信，进入人大是我最明智的选择。如果顺利被录取，我一定会珍惜时间，勤奋努力，孜孜以求，投身于学术研究，跟随大师足迹，在国学的传承里留下自己的名字，成为国家的栋梁，成为人大的骄傲。

我相信，我可以。

此致

敬礼

亲爱的教授：

我很高兴以书面形式推荐的医生的信。 __支持他申请在实验室的博士后位置。

博士。X__一个优秀的研究生致力于为毫秒我的监督下度。在我与他在大学接触，他的创造力和态度研究工作给了我很深的印象。他总是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解决他自己的问题，我很满意他。

__一直致力于高分子发光研究六年左右。据我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化学在主人的工作，如蛋白质和核酸检测等，在这些领域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已经和将发表多篇论文在国际期刊。我在读他的论文发表和与他讨论往往兴趣。我很赞赏他的研究能力。

__博士还拥有非常优良品格。他是一个虔诚的科研工作者。他的作品是在周末。他是一个诚实和智能，可靠，负责人，并且是非常合作过。

基于这些优势，我相信这个年轻人将实现在今后的工作更大的学业成功。因此，我强烈支持他的应用程序，这将不胜感激，如果你能给他的优先考虑。

请随时联系我，如果我可以回答关于__的任何其他问题。我的地址如下：

教授__X

尊敬的_大学老师领导：

您好!我是___，是入党积极分子，__省三好学生，在日常的学习和生活中我处处以身作则，以榜样的力量感染和带动我的同学。我在学习上勤奋刻苦，始终成绩优异，我就读的学校是一所拥有近四千名学生的省级示范校，每学期我校都要进行一次10所省级示范性高中的联合考试，每个年级的考生约一万三千多人在这类地区联考中，我的成绩始终名列前茅。20__年上学期我考取了地区联考第一名，本校年级第一名，班级第一名。20__年下学期地区第一名，本校年级第一名，班级第一名，20__年上学期地区第9名，英语单科成绩第一;本校第2名，班级第一名。20__年下学期地区第一名，本校年级第一名，班级第一名。20__年高三的第一次考试我考取第一名。我从初中起就多次参加全国中学生奥林匹克各学科竞赛，并于20__年获全国中学生奥林匹竞赛一等奖，20__年获全国中学生奥林匹竞赛英语、数学、化学竞赛一等奖、物理竞赛二等奖。读高中后20__年我获取全国中学生英语能力竞赛一等奖，全国中学生数学竞赛希望杯三等奖。20__年获全国中学生生物、数学竞赛决赛资格。各学科竞赛拓宽了我的学习思路，检验了我的学习效果，也争强了我的自信心。

20__年8月我升入高中，12月份我校有一名不幸身患尿毒症的同学叫___，面对着一个年轻的生命在顽强的与死神抗争。我决定和我的同学一起发起一次奉献爱心的捐赠活动，以集体的力量挽救这个年轻的生命。我写了倡议书，在学校号召老师和同学们为___同学捐款，还到社会上进行宣传，得到老师、同学和社会各界人士的帮助，共捐款6万余元。为邱纯亮同学做换肾手术奉献了我们的一份爱心。我们的爱心捐赠活动在社会上引起了强烈的反响。我市电视台在晚间最近新闻栏目专门做了报道。挽救这个濒临枯萎的生命的过程，震撼了我的心灵。因为我有能力通过自己的努力，延续一个年轻的生命，同时，爱心捐赠活动也验证了我的组织能力，凝聚力和感召力，更是对我自身综合素质的一次检验。在后来的班级工作和组织其他活动的时候我的自信心更强了。

当迈入了_大学的校门，也就步入了我生命中的最重要、最精彩的阶段。我会珍惜在校园中渡过的分分秒秒，在这大师云集、神圣的学术殿堂、在这群贤毕至的高等学府，如饥似渴的吸纳最新的知识和信息，发扬林业学子的优良传统，刻苦学习、精益求精，通过脚踏实地的努力使自己成为本专业的优秀学生，同时努力探索和验证与本学科、本专业相关的科学知识，以唯物和科学的态度勤奋地学习、深刻地思索、不懈地寻求本学科领域的最新知识，使自己成为本学科领域的有发展潜力和有培养价值的学生，成为北京林大的骄傲。

尊敬的X大学老师领导：

您好!首先感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间审视我的申请材料!

我是X市高级中学理科实验班的X，和其他的同胞或者说是竞争者们一样，我也但愿通过贵校的自主招生来实现我一直以来的梦想考入X大学。

在众多高校中，唯有X大学深深吸引了我，而且我也听到X的学长说，X非常适合那些“有想法主意”的人，只要你有想法主意，X都会尽全力帮你实现，我觉得我就是那种有想法主意、有立异意识的人，这也使我更加坚定了“将来一定要到X读书”的决心。凭借着十几年如一日的努力，我的成绩一直名列前茅，中考更是以全市第二十八的成绩考入铁岭市重点高中理科实验班。到了高中，我并没有骄傲，而是更加努力的学习，成绩也有了进一步的奔腾，每次考试成绩均不乱在年级前十名，施展好时还会进入前五名，我坚信自己是有资格进入X大学的。

相信在此之前，您已经阅读过了无数的自荐信，对省、市三好学生，校学生会主席，团支部书记等也已经见怪不怪了。很可惜，这些刺眼的荣誉和职位我都没有，我有的是对X全面的了解，有的是对X始终如一的热爱与向往，有的是“非X不去”的勇气与决心。更重要的是，我有着老实、量力而行的品质，我不会为了得到您的青睐而强调事实，虚张声势，而且我觉得一个人的领导能力、组织能力、交际能力和协调能力并不是只有靠这些职位才能体现出来的，究竟校学生会主席只有一个，但具有多地方能力的高中生远不止这些。

做事坚决，善于筹划是我的另一长处。说到筹划，我对自己的未来也已经做好了初步的打算：近年来，跟着中国经济的起飞，汽车已经走入了平常庶民家。因为汽车产业的提高，这地方精英的需求量也在随之增长。这对从小酷爱汽车，7岁就能识别数十种车标的我，无疑是一种巨大的激励，我也励志将来要进入一家汽车企业，介入设计制造一部机能优异，而且安全节能的汽车。据我所知，现今中国汽车在发念头的节油耐用，不乱机能上仍有一定的进步空间，而伴跟着油价的提高，增压直喷等技术也已走下神坛，进入乘用领域。在车身结构地方，人们对于安全恬静的追求是无止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能设计，有了更优秀的悬架，有了铝材，甚至碳纤维的应用。我愿把我全部的精力都投入到这些领域中，让中国的汽车有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞台上。这一切看似虚幻的梦想，一旦进入X，就都很有可能变为现实。

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的大使(签证官)：

我的名字叫__， 2_岁。现在在__大学__学院就读，是-名__学专业的大学生。在父母的呵护下长大的我，从小就有一个心愿，就是可以到韩国学习韩国文化。所以，我喜欢收集韩国各方面的资料，包括民俗文化、科学技术。通过资料我逐渐了解到，韩国在东亚地区具有重要地位，她的历史悠久而灿烂，拥有独特的建筑、让难忘的与众不同的饮食，韩国的服饰更是让人喜欢。我最喜欢的是韩国的语言，听起来那么好听那么温柔。韩国是世界发达国家之一，她的科学技术在世界具有相当地位，电子产品在中国广受欢迎，而韩国的教育水平在世界更是瞩目。韩国比较突出的还有它的艺术，韩国的电视剧在东亚地区刮起过不小的风浪，而现代舞蹈和民俗舞蹈更是让世人惊叹。

韩国是礼仪之邦，韩国人民的热情友好是世界公认的，我希望可以在这样一个将传统 与现代很好结合在一起的国家继续深造。

性格开朗的我很喜欢护理行业，从小就喜欢白衣天使这个名字。看着护士小姐温柔的动作和美丽的仪态就特别向往着长大后可以做一名出色的护士。终于，我如愿以偿考上了延边大学护理学院，从此开始了护理学学习的道路。如今我即将毕业，实际操作能力虽然优良，可我发现我所学到的护理知识并不完善，所以我想继续深造。

通过网络，我收集到了很多关王韩国护理学方面的资料，了解到韩国有很多综合性大学都设有护理专业，如韩国梨花女女子大学、韩国延世大学等等。这些大学都具有悠久的历史、庞大的规模、尖级的教授队伍，最重要的是韩国的医学方面已经达到世界先进水平。这样优秀的大学是我渴望学习的最好的学校，因此我很向往去这样优异的环境中继续学习我热爱的护理学专业。虽然，语言是我面临的最大难题，但我会努力克服。我相信以我的学习能力加上韩国的语言环境，我会很快掌握这门美丽的语言，进而更快地无阻碍地学习护理知识，并将它用于实践中。因此我想申请梨花女子大学，因为我了解到梨花女子大学的护理系无论在教学上还是师资力量都是世界前矛。如果我能申请到，我-定会先在韩国语学习班刻苦学习，尽早将韩国语的日常用语和基本词汇掌握。在攻克语言的基础上，好好学习护理知识，为促进中韩两国文化发展做贡献。希望签证官考虑我的请求。

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敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的_的老师：

您好!

我是来自河南省__中学的__，很高兴能向您呈上我的留学申请书，也希望借此机会我可以脱颖而出，为顺利进入_大学奠定坚实的基础。

在首都这座梦想之城，可谓高校林立，但是只有贵校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我们高中都会有人考入贵校，他们被誉为“天子骄子”。当录取金榜贴到校园里，看着他们脸上洋溢的笑容，我的心里也如波涛汹涌，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定决心，有朝一日我也要以自己的实力筑梦于人大校园，成为她的一分子。

可说归说，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奋学习。

在学习上，我对自己要求十分严格，充分发扬不怕吃苦的精神去面对学习中的一切困难和挫折。我知道学习就是一个苦难的过程，唯有坚持不懈，才能实现凤凰涅盘的重生，才能抵达成功的彼岸。因此，在课堂上，我紧紧跟随老师的思路，认真听讲，细心做好笔记，每一个知识点都不会错过。课下，我珍惜时间，努力复习，积极预习，有的放矢地掌控好自己的学习节奏。我喜欢思考问题，喜欢探究问题的本源，然后举一反三，化整为零。由于我的勤奋、刻苦，我获得了优异的成绩，每次考试都在全校前列，受到了老师和同学们的肯定，多次被评为优秀班干部、优秀学生、学习标兵等。

在获得优异成绩的同时，我还抽时间，挤时间发展自己多方面的兴趣。我喜欢打乒乓球、羽毛球、篮球，沉浸于体育锻炼的激情与豪迈中，在紧张与刺激间收获了强健的体魄。但比起体育锻炼，我更钟情于国学文化。

我喜欢国学的博大精深，喜欢国学的厚重神奇。课余，我已经阅读了多部国学经典，比如《孟子》《论语》《史记》《资治通鉴》《汉书》等，在文字与故事里感受到了国学的无限魅力。在我看来，国学不仅仅是传统文化，更是中华民族核心的价值理念和追求，是数千年来中国人思维方式行为方式生活方式生产方式的高度总结，是中华母亲的乳汁，是中华儿女的血脉、精神和灵魂，是中国人信仰的天空和大地。

出于对国学的热爱，我从小就立志要投身于祖国宝贵文化的学习、挖掘、弘扬中，用自己的所学，为国家的文化发展和民族的文化复兴，贡献自己的微薄之力。

而我之所以在众多的_高校中钟情于贵校，就是因为贵校深厚的文化底蕴吸引了我。贵校是一所以人文社会科学为主的综合性研究型高校。自建校以来，贵校始终不忘“立学为民、治学报国”的办学宗旨，以“实事求是”为校训，逐渐形成了完备的教育体系，尤其注重发挥人文社会科学认识世界、传承文明、创新理论、咨政育人、服务社会的作用，半个多世纪以来，已为国家输送了一大批高素质的人才，其中范文澜、冯其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可谓赫赫有名，为国家的文化建设做出了巨大的贡献。

我敬仰贵校国学院，它是新中国第一家以国学为教育研究目的且本硕连读的教育科研机构。学院学术力量雄厚，已经制定了完整系统的国学教学方案，建立了以经典研读为中心的课程体系，并充分兼顾传统与现代的有机融合，在教学与研究中，既有继承传统的治学特点，又有鲜明的时代性和宽广的国际视野。这些，都令我向往。所以，我认为贵校国学院是我的梦想之地，会改变我的人生轨迹。

尊敬的老师，请您考虑并接受我的申请，给我一片天空，让我自由飞翔，给我一片海洋，让我尽情畅游，我相信，进入人大是我最明智的选择。如果顺利被录取，我一定会珍惜时间，勤奋努力，孜孜以求，投身于学术研究，跟随大师足迹，在国学的传承里留下自己的名字，成为国家的栋梁，成为人大的骄傲。

我相信，我可以。

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敬礼

尊敬的_老师：

您好!

我叫___，是___中学中学___学生。我与_缘起于幼年时读过的《荷塘月色》，苍茫的月光静静地泻落，田田的荷叶亭亭的立着，如同梦境般的美好景色给我留下了深刻的印象,从此，古朴典雅、文化底蕴丰厚的_就扎根于我心中，成为我魂牵梦绕的圣地。

_重视的是全面发展的人才，所以在平时各科的学习中，我都稳扎稳打，表现出色，在历次考试中都名列前茅。

竞赛方面：在20__年第__届全国生物中学生生物学奥林匹克联赛中获陕西赛区一等奖并代表陕西参加国家决赛获得银奖，在20__全国联赛中获陕西赛区数学一等奖和化学二等奖。在这里我想谈谈暑假参加全国生物竞赛的经历。来到武汉二中，我以自己的微笑与亲和力结识了来自全国各地的朋友，谈天说地，共话理想;我懂得了山外青山楼外楼，与全国的精英相比，我还有很多的地方需要改进;我学会了就算遇到挫折也永不言败，调整心态迎接下一个挑战才更重要……这一切，都是让我毕生难忘的宝贵经历，也让我更深刻的理解了_“自强不息”的校训。

爱好广泛：我虽然是一个理科生，却对历史人文知识等很感兴趣，闲暇时喜欢看看“百家讲坛”，看电视上的国学知识竞赛，有意提升自己的综合素养。我幼时曾习国画，我喜欢在生宣上信笔泼墨，喜欢那份“山水横拖千里外”的悠远超然;我也学过古筝，我喜欢在那二十一弦琴上钩托抹挑，喜欢《高山流水》的相逢恨晚，喜欢《春江花月夜》的婉约忧伤;初中时，我去学习跆拳道，我喜欢听双腿破空而出凌风而过踢中脚靶的清脆声响，也将跆拳道精神——礼义廉耻，忍耐克己，百折不屈——牢牢地铭刻在心，并且践行。

我的理想：我从小就很喜欢看各式各样的建筑，阿布?辛博神庙每个太阳日的第一缕曙光，巴黎圣母院高耸的尖顶，悉尼歌剧院的风帆造型，都让我深深着迷。我希望能成为_建筑系的一员，形成自己独特的建筑风格，从而实现我的终极梦想——参与未来世博会上中国馆的设计，让世界看到中国的风采!

我很喜欢泰戈尔的那一句诗：“天空不留下鸟的痕迹，但我已飞过。”为了我的梦想——_，我已经厚积了多年的力量，等待薄发的那一刻。不论结果如何，至少我曾经为自己的梦想努力过，为自己的人生拼搏过，那么我就永不后悔。或许当我苍颜白发时想起这段时期的经历，我也会为自己当初的坚持，为年少时的那份破釜沉舟的决心，而微微一笑。

“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海。”_园，等着我!

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敬礼

申请人：___

__年__月__日

Letters veryimportant part applicationprocess. collegesbecome moremoresought out from increasingnumber applicantseach year, standout fromalsoincreasing. Below we providehelpful information collegerecommendationtailoringeach letter. Know maysound obvious, youknow candidatewell. After all,how can you write collegerecommendation letter someoneyou know little about?Recommendations written vaguefamiliarity oftenidentifiable cando more harm thangood. Obtain anothertip collagerecommendation letter firstobtain studentsrsumherGPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employmentexperience specialskills. moreinformation you have about particularcandidate,moreconstructive your recommendation can

Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies,economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.

The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.

With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered.Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.

As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20__, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.

My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some booksabout management by Peter F.Drucker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell morethan others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing thesame difficulties?

With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20__, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.

Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20__, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.

During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellencein management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.

Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.

A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:

Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.

How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.

Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.

Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the students rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.

Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."

Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.

Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.

Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.

Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sureto save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation lettereasier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may askthat you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is importantthat each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information canbe recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the originalpassage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a collegerecommendation.

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Colleges place a large emphasis on a students academic ability becausewhat is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academicsuccess in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win situation.They want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only forthe students benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more studentsbecome college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasinglyselective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a collegerecommendation letter.

As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of acollege-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writinga college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trustin you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whetheror not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice onhow to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letterand give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or hercollege of choice.

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