新西兰留学申请的条件精彩20篇

尊敬的老师：

您好，非常感谢您百忙之中能抽出时间读这份留学申请书。

我叫黄鹏，来自莱阳市第九中学，是地地道道的九中人，只不过现在又要在前面加上复习生的名号了。虽然高考不尽如人意，但此时说起自己的身份，我还是愿意称自己为“九中人”，这三个字几乎涵盖了我的整个青春，以后也将伴我继续走下去。这次以复习生的身份回到母校，千万思绪涌上心头，高中三年的点点滴滴似电影片段般一幕幕在我脑海中回放，当初的豪言壮志似乎还在母校的上空回荡，经久不息;恩师的教诲，朋友的勉励在时光的打磨下历久弥新，句句澎湃着我的内心。

虽然初入母校时的青涩已蜕变成了成熟，但想起那段懵懂的时光，内心依然久久不能平静。稚嫩的外表下装载着蓬勃的心，我开始了自己的高中生活。或许是初中两年的班长生涯使我看起来较为沉稳，也可能是中考成绩入了班主任的“法眼”，总之，我很荣幸地被授予了班长的重任，也从此开启了我至今三年的又一段班长生涯。

高一高二时的班级就是一群热血少年俱乐部，我们长论古今中外，激扬文字，点评江山，轻狂却不知疲倦。在这样一群心怀报复的知己的熏染中，在知识渊博的教师的教诲下，我的成绩也开始了稳步提升，更重要的是我的思想也从此有了雏形——我想成为强者!在与老师和同学们的朝夕相处中，我从他们每个人身上都学到了一点东西，我学会了沉着，我懂得了宽容，我明白了感恩……他们每一个人都是一本活教科书，我一页页读，一本本读，纵使现在不再生活在同一个屋檐下，但我依然可以很迅速的找出对他们的“读书笔记”。与大家的一起成长的过程中，我也在慢慢变强——成绩已经稳坐前几把“交椅”，心智也越来越成熟。

最终凭借较为优异的成绩升入了高三，进入了一个全新的班级。虽然许多东西都要重新来过，但从高一高二走过来的我已经可以很容易地融入新班级了。我一直相信，只要自己付出真心就一定可以捕获真心，所以虽然只有不到一年的相处，但是我与高三的同学却宛如相识多年的朋友一般，亲密无间。我们一起挑灯夜战，一起埋头苦读，一起奋笔疾书，直到最后一起奔赴高考的战场，很遗憾我折戟沉沙，没能跟上他们的步伐。不过，“短暂的停留是为了更高的飞翔”，终有一天，我会赶上去的，跟他们并肩奋斗，书写我们九中人的辉煌!

高中三年，我成长了，成熟了。我时常愿意把自己比作一个行者，一步一个脚印地奔赴远方，在人生的这条道路上，我不愿意落后于任何人，也不愿意亦步亦趋地跟随他人，我想走出一条属于自己的道路，留下自己独有的身影。虽然我是个理科生，但我却非常喜欢一个人静静地思考人生，我不害怕孤独，有人说，孤独就是你所面对的那个人，他的情绪跟你的情绪不在同一个频率。我非常赞同，但是我不认为我孤独，不论是我那些展翅高飞的朋友，还是跟我一样“留守”下来的伙伴，都是我吐露心声的知己，有他们在，我不寂寞。

现在的我虽然还拼搏在高考的道路上，但是单纯的考出高分已经不是我的目的了。不过，上一所如同贵校一般的名牌大学的确是我心所往。人都是为了未来而活的，我这次就是为未来而战!

黄鹏

__年12月11日

尊敬的_大学老师：

您好!

"韶华不为少年留，勤为天道酬。"正如高三的教室后墙上我所想出的励志名言一般，它时刻激励着班上的同学与我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡阳市八中高三的一名学生，就读文科，是平凡的，因为是一个同所有人一样的矛盾融合体;但又坚信自己是不同的，是因为我将成为发光体。金子，到哪里都会发光，而我选择的是贵校这样一座炼金炉。

河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我愿像河般，为梦想奔腾向前永不止息;像海般容纳百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利万物而不争，处众人之所恶，故几于道。居善地，心善渊，与善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，动善时。夫唯不争，故无尤。"善的最高境界，大致在于此乎。像水般，往低处流，却能容纳百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高处走时，当不胜寒时，不忘想想水的谦虚，以一种包容一切的姿态，以柔化刚，接受万物的俯视与臣服，这种"柔德"，使我自己的心境变得平和，要像水那样，无形胜有形，不断地改变，塑造自己，臻于完美。

宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落;去留无意，漫随天外云卷云舒的同时，我本着湖湘学派"经世致用"的原则，志当存高远。如果说周总理是"为中华之崛起而读书"，那我便愿为"中国之强盛而读书"。学无止境，人生本是一个不断学习的过程。在六年的学习委员一职的任职过程中，除了学习课本知识，我的右手可以写出一手漂亮的毛笔。因为正，一笔一划地写，心才会正。我的左手，能弹出美妙的小提琴乐章，这不仅开发了我的右脑，音乐更使我思维敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不仅是人类对上帝的提问，更是与大自然的交流。让狂躁的心，不知不觉间安静下来。

人生的旅途中，读书万卷：安徒生童话到世界名着。我醉心于宝黛间的痴缠;徜徉于《傲慢与偏见》里伊丽莎白奇妙的心海中;感叹于李白"我辈岂是蓬蒿人"的豪迈;与杜甫"安得广厦千万间，大庇天下寒士俱欢颜"一起忧国忧民;与易安居士一起看"雨疏风骤，绿肥红瘦"。在文的海洋中，我愿成那一滴水，一尾鱼，在海洋心中，见证着它的悲喜。于是在历史的不平中，我亦诗叹曰：陈王梦还金镂枕，凤皇遗恨正阿房，才佳长恨无归处，冷露成泪暗遗香。

我同样愿行万里路，沿途的风景，丰盈着自己的人生，懂得取与舍，让人生的阅历更加丰富。曾到过南京，河畔桨声灯影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝旧事已随流水，而这座古都却有太多历史无法忘记的东西：革命先行者孙文先生之陵……流连于河海大学门前，不由驻足，希望自己能成为"归人"，而不是"过客"。我这样的游子，在阅过17年风景后，选择了河海大学作为圆梦的地方。

我喜欢奔跑的感觉，起跑线比重点更加美好，体味那为理想拼搏的过程。十年磨一剑，剑出鞘，一鸣惊人，直指河海。

我，静如处子，或动如脱兔，愿意跟书本这样高尚的朋友对话。书山有路勤为径，运用正确的学习方法，在无涯的学海中"直挂云帆济沧海"，正确地驾驶着学习之舟，虽然途中有风浪，但坚持驶向目的地--河海之湾。我，崇尚独立，常独立思考探寻人生真谛，遇事冷静自若，却又让理性成为我织梦的梭，让勤奋成为我筑梦的桥。理智与热情，诚信与好学，成为划向河海的桨，只为到那里，为自己编织另一个梦，解决南方家乡旱涝灾害频繁的问题，造福家乡、祖国人民。在见证河湾辉煌的同时，与河海一起创造下一个辉煌。

我愿逆风行舟，驶向河海，利用水，造福人民。

我愿逆风，只为寻河海一梦。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

20__年__月__日

从高一到高三毕业学习成绩有了明显的提高，在这三年中多次获得学校颁发的三好生奖状，进步之星奖，优秀学员奖和多项运动会奖状等。在高中毕业以后，我想去日本留学深造。

自小就在城市中生活的我十分向往去经济发达的大城市去学习。同时对于自己家乡落后有着深刻的责任感。日本是当今世界上世界上经济最发达的国家之一，电子产品在世界市场的占有率居于榜首。具有强大的海洋捕捞船队和水产品养殖业，渔业发达。留学条件良好，气候四季分明。环境优美，有美丽的樱花，北海道的樱花。去这些美丽的地方是我小时侯梦想。

有优秀的教师和先进的教学设备以及先进的教育理念。于是从上高中开始我就定下了将来去日本留学的想法。

____年2月底我向家里说明了我想去日本留学的意愿。在当时就得到了家人的许可。于是从____年的3月份开始我到__日语培训学校学习日语，平常的上课时间我正常到学校学习高中的课程到了，周末就上__日语培训班去学习日语，到现在为止我的日语水平已达到使用最基本的日常用语和进行简单的阅读的程度。日本以后，打算先到语言学校学习。为自己将来进一步的深造做好语言上的准备。在此基础上，根据本人的个人喜好和特长，想在日本的大学学习物流管理。日本是个经济文化繁荣发达的国家，尤其改革开放以来，中日两国经济文化艺术的交流更加深入。当我学有所成回国后，将致力于家乡的经济发展，用在日本所学的先进的管理方去经营自己家乡的企业。也愿意在日友好中日文化经济交流方面贡献自己的聪明才智。

父母支持我的留学请求，能够支付我在日本的一切费用。我到日本以后，保证遵守日本的法律遵守学校的规章制度。好好学习，增长本领，成为一个有用的人才

真诚地希望我的留学申请会被批准。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Due to the comprehensiveness of china’s “reform and open” policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. though more and more companies built， management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. management is a burgeoning field in china， so i hope i can acquire more modern knowledge on management in england.

The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. my father was among the first of china’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. as a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. my mother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simple calculations. and so it was early in my life that i hoped i， also， would someday be able to enter the realm of business.

With the time of growing up， i preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. i never ceased to contemplate over the questions i encountered. subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.

As a high school student in china， i had to concentrate on the college entrance examination (cee)， even so， books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. unfortunately when sitting in the exam in june， __， i was so nervous that i didn’t score well in the cee exam. i enrolled in the department of computer science in zhejiang college of traditional chinese medicine. any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. after several terms， i realized that i would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. at that moment， i lost my direction and objectives.

My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. as a matter of fact， i enjoyed reading the books included encyclopedia american， and some books about management by peter ker. i began to notice something interesting： why some companies can produce more than others? why some company can sell more than others? why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

With the questions in my mind， i started to read many relevant books. i was lucky to read the book “jack： straight from the gut”by jack welch， in which john a. byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. when i was a junior， i ran a bookshop by myself near my school. i should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. from this， my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed， definitely i was increasingly interested in what i was doing. by december， __， i had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of it. to accumulate more relevant knowledge， i strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的考官：

您好!

很荣幸有机会向您呈上我的留学申请书。

我出生于一个教师之家，母亲是一位优秀的小学教师;父亲是也曾经是教师，后来经历了人生的第二次选择，考入法院，成了一名法官。父母对生活的热情和对人生挫折的态度，潜移默化地影响着我，形成了我自强不息、不轻言败的性格。

中考的教训，让我懂得了什么叫脚踏实地，什么叫不图虚荣，什么叫谦虚谨慎，什么叫取长补短……高中三年，我努力夯实学科基础知识、掌握学习方法、提高操作实践能力、同时，利用课余时间广泛地涉猎大量书籍，不但充实了自己，而且培养了自己多方面的技能。夷陵中学严谨的学风塑造了我朴实、稳重的学习态度，更重要的是在这样一个精英云集的地方，我学会了在竞争中挑战自我，在合作中欣赏他人。这样一步一个脚印走来，我尝到了成功的喜悦：成绩逐年上升，我看到了自己身上蕴藏着的无限潜能，它让我相信——如果给我一个支点，我也能撬起整个地球!

选择_大学我有以下几个理由：

一是_大学是一所国家教育部直属的，拥有研究生院，本科专业涵盖了理、工、文、经、管、法、教育等学科门类的综合性重点大学，是一所有着坚实的学术基础和严谨的治学传统，校园环境优美的大学。在这样的学习环境里，无论是在知识能力，还是在个人素质修养方面，我会受益匪浅。

二是_大学是一所以工为主的大学，这符合了我的学科兴趣，我是一个理科生，尤其以数学、物理学科见长，这次推荐我参加自主招生的就是我的数学老师和物理老师。我喜欢在这样自主开放的环境里学习，希望可以有更为广阔的发展前景。

三是_大学坚持以“厚基础，宽口径，强能力，高素质”的人才培养计划，在教学中注重创新能力培养，注重提高学生的综合素质，学校实施了一系列教学改革新措施包括：名师上讲台工程、中英文双语教学工程、“创新人才培养”工程、本硕连读制度等，还有一系列的完善学分制管理的制度，包括主辅修制、弹性学制、第二学位制、优异生培养制度等。

现在有很多的大学生毕业后面临就业难的问题，这也将是我今后不能回避的，但我想，这是一个适应社会的问题。大学是一个可以接触并尝试众多领域的独一无二的场所，是一个沟通社会的平台。我希望这里掌握生活技能，培养自己的社会角色，使自己能承担社会责任，权利和义务，成为一个真正的社会人。

现在的科技发展可谓日新月异，我的学习是要掌握最基本的学习工具和方法，将来利用这些工具和方法，再去学习新的东西。我们不可能靠在大学里学到的知识来维护一生的，以后如果不再学了，照样会落后，所以，本科读什么专业不能完全决定毕业后的工作方向。我希望根据我的学科特长，选择适合我的专业，但是我不会太在意专业的趋向，绝对服从学校根据我的情况进行专业调剂。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Motivation

Ich hei?e Zhang Chen， komme aus der Stadt Beijing， VR China. Nach der Hochschulaufnahmepruefung habe ich bei der Studiengangwahl das Fach von Computer Wissenschaft und Technologie gew?hlt. Für meine Entscheidung zum Studium in Deutschland habe ich folgende Gründe，

Erstens， nach Deutschland zu studieren ist immer mein Traum. Deutschland ist eine entwickeltes Land， ihre Industrie， Wirtschaft liegt in den Spitze in der Welt. In diesem Land zu lernen und leben kann ich mehre Wissenschaften bekommen.

Zweitens， eine Schwester hatte ihres Studium in Deutschland abgeschlossen. Sie erklaert mir oft ihre Leben in Deutschland. Damals verfuellt Neid in meinem Herz. Die kulturelle Atmosph?re in Deutschland ist sehr stark. Die Literatur， Musik， das Drama usw. stehen in der Tradition von den anderen europ?ischen L?ndern， begründen trotzdem eine neue Richtung. So moechte ich diesem Land selbst verspueren.

Drittens， meine Eltern unterstützen mich bei meiner Entscheidung für das Studium in Deutschland. Nach der Meinung meines Vaters ist es der Traum der Ingenieur， die chinesische Industrie weiter entwickelt zu werden und Abstand mit Deutschland oder anderen entwickelten L?ndern abgekürzt zu werden， um den Traum zu wirklichen， will ich angestrengt studieren und mehre Wissens zu erhalten.

Schlie?lich bin ich auch tief von meinen Lehrern beeinflusst. Sie sch?tzen Ihre Studienerlebnisse in Deutschland hoch. Ich bin sicher， dass durch das Studium in Deutschland meine professionalen Qualifikationen verbessert werden und mein Horizont erweitert wird.

Ich bin optimistisch， aktiv， freundlich， selbstdisziplin?r， sprachgewandt， kommunikationsf?hig， willensstark， flexibel， gut in Zeiteinteilung und Zusammenfassung. Das Studium in Deutschland ist für mich Konsolidierung und Vertiefung von Fachkenntnissen， Erweiterung von meinem Horizont sowie St?rkung von meiner Selbst?ndigkeit. Ich bewundere die gewissenhafte Studienhaltung der Lehrer und Studierenden an der Hochschule Anhalt， sowie deren ernsthafte Denkweise und die Spitzenwissenschaft- und Technik. Deshalb bin ich fest entschlossen， in Deutschland an der Hochschule Anhalt zu studieren， um mein Ideal zu verwirklichen， mich zu bereichern und meinen Wert zu verwirklichen. Ich bin sicher， dass ich das Fachstudium an Ihrer Uni. reibungslos und erfolgreich abschlie?en werde.

Ich plane， Studienkolleg an der Hochschule Anhalt zu besuchen， und nach erfolgreichem Ablegen das ?Studienkolleg“ mit dem Fachstudium von Naturwissenschaften Bachelorprogramm an der Hochschule Anhalt zu beginnen.

Nach dem Studium werde ich selbstverst?ndlich nach China zurückkehren und eine Arbeit suchen. Ich hoffe auch， den Beitrag zur f?derung der kulturelle Konmmunikation zwischen Deutsch und China zu leisten.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

I live in Pakistan-a country destroying itself with bombs,guns and governments blabber to find justifications for what it is going through;a country where a former president is murdered in public,where the nations constitution and parliament are suspended at the same time,and where the voice of a common man is unheard.

Since the last few years, I had aspired to become a doctor.The idea of "scalpels," "opened chests" and "sutures" had always intrigued me.And then it happened!The recent unprecedented events in my country wiped off the dust of disillusionment from my eyes;I lost my will to become a doctor.However,the turmoil in the country led me towards newspapers and news channels,and hence Politics.

As I involved myself into politics,I realized that it is all-embracive-wielding its way over social and economic life-it is the omnipotent of Pakistan.It can mobilize public opinion,gear up propaganda machinery,make or repeal laws and what not.Backed up by public opinion,supported by the majority of the legislators,armed with the means to keep the people in a state of ignorance,political power crosses the limits of dictatorial powers.Political power,like the most powerful intoxicant,makes the persons in power to forget social ethics,political morality and obligations.

Most of the learned youth in this country consider Politics to be "a refuge for the scoundrels" and this derogatory remark may be true if we look at the deceptive and degenerated type of politicians indulging in a dirty game.All these political parties are votaries of democracy,but the way they conduct themselves inside their own parties is nothing but senseless authoritarianism.Therefore a very few students choose to pursue Politics as a profession,but what they dont realize is that if we dont take a stand the system can never be changed.Thus,I want to study Politics so I can come back to my country and contribute what little I can do for my homeland and its people.If I can inspire even a single person,it would be worth it.The world today is growing global.We are now not only to think of our own nation but as and when we think of it,we have to keep the international perception in mind;consequently,I chose Politics with International Relations as one of my courses.

Studying in UK will breed a sense of individuality and self reliance.I would be able to interact with people from everywhere and get to know about their culture.This would not only open new horizons for me,but would also clear some preconceived notions one has about the other.I have always been an active participant of debates.I have participated in 3 Model UN conferences out of which I was awarded with the Best Delegate award in two. I was also one of the two students to be selected from my school to participate in the English Speaking Union 08.Moreover, Ive taken part in Parliamentary style debates too.Therefore I believe I can communicate effectively in public and language will not be a barrier in my education.Furthermore, I have worked as an internee at Al-Shifa Eye Hospital for a month in summers.Here I learnt how to deal with patients,use the Auto Ref, handle files and punctuality.We also campaigned to a remote area near Murree where we helped the doctors in examining the patients free of cost.Another experience which taught me a lot was when me and my fellow colleagues volunteered to paint walls for the SOS Childrens Village.In addition,I worked with SUNGI (NGO) where a group of 5 of us had to organize an event to pay tribute to 1000 Women for the Nobel Peace Prize.

I enjoy Literature,especially the works of Shakespeare,Tennessee Williams,Thomas Hardy and Andrew Marvell.Id be delighted to study in a challenging atmosphere where I can focus on my studies.I commit to my work and my ability to think out of the box,keenness for Politics and my perception of things,I understand,gives me an edge over others.I believe in myself,and if provided with an opportunity,Id make the university proud.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

Having a flair for Economics and accounting I have decided that I want adegree in Accounting and Finance or Management. The many brilliantrepresentatives of the management community around the world have strengthenedthat resolve.

When I worked in my school as a tutor of English as a Second Language forstudents from a community school in Muscat, I realized the importance of astrong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well withothers. These ideas were further enforced by my month long internship atNovartis Pharmaceutical (Accounts and Finance Department and Human ResourcesDepartment).

I attended the Harvard Model Congress in Paris and won the Award ofDistinction. One skill in particular that contributed to this award was myconfident public speaking.

The last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world businessand economics. For my IB Extended Essay, titled “To What Extent Does Subway inOman Operate as an Oligopoly”, I set out to prove the oligpolistic structure ofthe fast food market in Oman. In this effort, I have come across many real lifecomplexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the Theoryof the Firm. While attempting to explain these alternate theories of firms Ihave developed a keen interest in analyzing and understanding how the world ofbusiness works.

After an undergraduate degree in accounting and finance or management Iplan to go onto post graduate studies and work on an MBA. A strong performancein a BA will allow me to move onto an MBA and only then shall I besatisfied.

For the last four years I have been part of our schools volleyball teamICE. We have retained our ISAC (Inter Schools Activities Conference, MiddleEast) title for four years. Playing in the power hitters (spiker) positionrequires immense physical fitness and to accomplish that I regularly go to thegym for fitness training. I am also part of my school track and field team.Being the fastest sprinter in the school since 11th grade the 100m, 200m and400m races are my specialty even though I still pursue long distance running. Inmy spare time I explore and master the computer as I am conversant with a VisualBasic Programming course. It is imperative for me to have the latest hardwareand software and I make it a point to install everything myself. I also learnUrdu as it is my native tongue and a link to my culture, to maintain that iscrucial.

Living in a diverse international community of over 52 nationalities hasallowed to me recognize and appreciate different cultures. With the experience Ihave and the strong motivation to craft a bright future I feel I can justify mydecision to pursue a career in Accounting and Finance or Management.

尊敬的老师：

您好!

我叫__，今年__，是来自__省__高级中学的一名高三学生。感谢您能在百忙中抽出时间看完我的留学申请书。

贵校有着悠久的历史，深厚的文化底蕴，丰富的教学资源，良好的学术氛围，为社会培养出许多杰出人才，有许多专业是在国内名列前茅。我的许多师哥师姐都不约而同的选择贵校为第一志愿。我也渴望能在明年夏天拿到贵校的录取通知书，我期望成为贵校的一名学生，希望在贵校深造，渴望成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才，希望成为贵校光荣历史的见证人。我希望这次自主招生考试能够改变我的人生轨道，让我投入到贵校的怀抱，我希望被贵校录取。

我选择贵校，正是认为贵校既注重过程，又注重结果的人才培养方式。我认为我个人很适合在贵校接受教育。

我来自__高中理科实验班，在这个高手如林的班级中，我的学习成绩总能略占上风。这样的成绩，让我稳稳扎根于全校学习成绩前列中。事实上，我的潜力还很大，我的分数还有升值空间。我对问题的深入分析，对知识的熟练掌握并没有完全反映在我的卷面上。有很多时候，我的答案正确，但解题过程并没有被阅卷老师所理解。有时候，过程明晰，但结果却因一个微小的错误而与正确答案失之交臂。

令我颇为自豪的还有奥赛上的成绩。怎么说呢，成绩不是最好，但足以令我引以为荣。高一的时候，我就参加了化学竞赛，获得了市三等奖。当时我只是初试牛刀，小试身手。高二，开了生物课，对生物的兴趣使我毫不迟疑的参加竞赛班的学习，全心全意投入到“生物”的广阔海洋中去，其实，那时离市赛只有十多天，距省赛仅有半个月可以准备。我如饥似渴的仅用不到十天时间就把一本六百页厚的〈生物奥赛教程〉啃完，同时又做了几十张的习题。工夫不负有心人，我以__市市赛第二的身份进入省赛。为迎接省赛，我自学了大学生物课程，做了近五年的奥赛试题，每天忙到深夜，一大早又急急赶到学校图书馆。那个时候学校正开夏季运动会，运动员在赛场挥汗如雨，我在闷热的房间汗流浃背。我准备的很充足，踌躇满志，势在必得，我甚至夸下海口：“争省一，保省二”，现在看来，那时的我就像一把弓，无论精神上还是体力上都张的过满，连日的疲惫像洪水一样漫过了警戒线。结果，我没有把梦想带入现实，我以二分的差距与省二等奖无缘。我只得了省三等奖。当时我非常难过，为自己的付出而伤心，妈妈解劝我说：“这个努力的过程是一笔不小的人生财富。”现在看来，即使是省三等奖，在自主招生中不是也有很大的作用么?不是也帮助我向心仪的大学更靠近一步么?我觉得奥赛是我很难忘的一次经历，它让我知道了过程与结果同样重要。

我是学理科的，做事讲究有理有据，我不只是重视智商，在开发大脑智力资源的同时，我也非常注重情商的发展。我在高一的时候就担任数学课代表，那个时候我每天收、发作业，帮助老师完成教学任务。高二文理分班，又被同学们推举为生物课代表，在学习之余，我也经常帮助那些生物较弱的同学，给他们解释疑难题目，我因此受到同学们的欢迎，被多次评选为三好学生。我积极参加班级活动，曾编排历史剧《虎符》、《雷雨》，受到同学们热烈好评。在学校组织的辩论大赛中，我帮助本班六战全胜的不俗成绩，挂起了“第一名”的锦旗。

我对文学的爱好，让我的眼界更宽广，让我的思维更加广阔。我在省、市报刊发表过十多篇作文，在_网站有我好多文章。我想一棵大树，不管有多么大，它的根总是深深扎在大地里的。文学的根就深植于我国悠久的传统文化中。我喜欢〈西游记〉，尤爱〈三国演义〉，酷爱〈红楼梦〉。我爱〈三国演义〉就爱它的简爽干练，我喜欢〈红楼梦〉就爱它的温柔可人。我读到诸葛亮陨落五仗原，总有无限哀叹。我每次读到林黛玉临终前的那一幕，那竭尽全力的一句“宝玉，你-------”都忍不住替她接一句“宝玉，你好狠心。”然后心痛不已。我想，〈三国演义〉教会我用怀疑的眼光看问题，而〈红楼梦〉教会我用理想的眼光去解决问题。我用传统名著，在理想与现实之间构建统一的桥梁。

在我看来，高中生应该德、智、体、美全面发展，高中培养出来的不仅仅是拥有大量知识储备的“材”，更应该培养出的是能充分灵活运用自己知识储备的“人才”。我高中的标不仅仅是考入像贵校这样的名牌大学，以后衣食无忧。我的高中目标是成为一名有思想，有道德，有知识，有技能的全方位高素质人才。我想让自己投入到火一样的祖国现代化建设中去。我不想变成一个空有满腹经纶，却没有什么作为、碌碌一生的人。对我而言，贵校就是我心中的长城，我想，只有进入贵校，才能“英雄有用武之地”吧。期待您的认可!

此致

敬礼!

尊敬的学生处：

我是本校化学与环境工程学院化学工程与工艺专业的我是本校化学与环境工程学院化学工程与工艺专业的20x年级化学与环境工程学院化学工程与工艺学生叶福林。最近，由于气候的多变化，引起了身体不适应。最近，由于气候的多变化，引起了身体不适应，主要表叶福林现为严重失眠，精神状态较差。加上长期以来，现为严重失眠，精神状态较加上长期以来，长期以来饮食习惯也难以适应，饮食习惯也难以适应，习惯也难以适应常出现腹泻状况，对身体造成一定的伤害。

加之我是家里的独生子常出现腹泻状况，对身体造成一定的伤害。加之我是家里的独生子，一定的伤害我是家里的独生一个人独立生活能力有父母工作又远在郑州市照应。一个人独立生活能力有限，父母工作又远在郑州市需要照应。这样能力父母工作又远在郑州需要照应这样，诸多因素扰乱了我的学习与生活。对我的身体健康也极其不利。也会诸多因素扰乱了我的学习与生活。对我的身体健康也极其不利。严重影响学业的完成。

请求安阳工学院，严重影响学业的完成。影响学业的完成因此，因此，请求安阳工学院，安阳工学院考虑到我的实际困难，考虑到我的实际困难，能同意将我的学籍转到我父母现在工作的郑州市河南工业大学。能同意将我的学籍转到我父母现在工作的郑州市河南工业大学。郑州大学特此申请，恳请批准。申请，恳请批准。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

"All I know about leadership I learned from..." What items could a personuse to describe leadership qualities?

Inspired by the student council advisors at my high school.

Student council was a big part of my life in high school. I haveparticipated in it since my frst year of high school. When I frst joined, I wasquiet, na?ve, and unwilling to participate in many activities. I was scared tomeet new people and afraid to apply myself. This all began to change. Half waythrough my frst year in student council, one of the advisors can up to me andasked why I did not participate that much. I did not have an answer for her anddid not know how to respond. After this, I began to think of an answer. I becamefrustrated and decided to change. I started to show up at events and had a greattime. I realized I loved this and wanted to start leading these activities. Inmy sophomore, junior, and now my senior year of high school, I asserted myselfand took on a strong leadership role in student council. I did not fgure out theanswer to why I was so reserved until this year with the help of thisquestion.

亲爱的教授：

我很高兴以书面形式推荐的医生的信。 __支持他申请在实验室的博士后位置。

博士。X__一个优秀的研究生致力于为毫秒我的监督下度。在我与他在大学接触，他的创造力和态度研究工作给了我很深的印象。他总是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解决他自己的问题，我很满意他。

__一直致力于高分子发光研究六年左右。据我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化学在主人的工作，如蛋白质和核酸检测等，在这些领域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已经和将发表多篇论文在国际期刊。我在读他的论文发表和与他讨论往往兴趣。我很赞赏他的研究能力。

__博士还拥有非常优良品格。他是一个虔诚的科研工作者。他的作品是在周末。他是一个诚实和智能，可靠，负责人，并且是非常合作过。

基于这些优势，我相信这个年轻人将实现在今后的工作更大的学业成功。因此，我强烈支持他的应用程序，这将不胜感激，如果你能给他的优先考虑。

请随时联系我，如果我可以回答关于__的任何其他问题。我的地址如下：

教授__X

To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. -My view of life.

Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?”

When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into __ University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.

This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in __ Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpart didn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.

In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process, when I met a lot of problems, I often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case. My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.

In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient. Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship experience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough. What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.

I am applying for admission to the Ph.D. program in Electrical and ComputerEngineering， at the University of California， Berkeley. I present my researchexperience and study objectives in this statement of purpose. I would like tobuild on my solid education and experience as an engineer for a Ph. D. degree incomputer science at a distinguished university. I wish in particular to betrained at an advanced level in software systems， database systems， applied-AIand knowledge-based systems. My ultimate goal is to become a professor teachingcomputer science at a Chinese university. I believe that advanced training in aquality graduate program will help me realize my goal.

My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During mydays at Engineering College I used to go to my fathers office and help himmanage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was thetime I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and returnare proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock marketcrashed. But fortunately， my father had a well-diversified portfolio because ofwhich our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learntthe second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reducesrisk. While I understood these two principles intuitively， it produced in me astrong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working ofFinance. This， I believe， was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind topursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in BusinessAdministration.

As I was finishing college， my mother had both of her hips replaced withartificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away andit was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers，orthopedic surgeons， and biologists had all worked together to design theseartificial joints that completely transform. peoples lives by giving them backpain-free mobility， and I knew at that moment that this was an area about whichI wanted to learn more. In China these days， university graduates who have notbeen lucky enough to settle into their dream jobs often look to graduatedstudies as a way to kill the time that they cannot otherwise spend meaningfully.I am prepared to go against the social conventions by putting on hold asuccessful research career that promised to be even more successful. With eightyears of productive and highly valued practical research behind me， I now wouldlike to revert to a more intellectual life so that I can conduct moretheoretical discourses.

When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues， the French sculptorAuguste Rodin answered， “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever Idont need For me， life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can beturned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents， diligence and asense of duty. During over four years’ my college life， I have been dreaming ofbeing a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the developmentof science as men do. For Knowledge Itself Is Power.This is one of my favoriteprecepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduationand my future spreads in front of me like a dream， this adage has neverinfluenced my life more than this before.

For the past three years， my undergraduate education has exposed me to thevarious sub-fields of Computer Science (CS). However， our syllabus has focusedmainly on "traditional" CS topics， such as Operating systems and single-CPUsystems. We have had barely a glimpse of the newer technologies that are likelyto change the way computing is done in not-so-distant future. The desire toexamine such subjects in greater detail is what has prompted me to opt forgraduate study. Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s“reform. andopen”policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the developmentof its global position. As a senior at Beijing University majoring in Economics，I feel that my field is fundamental to the progress of my country. Yet， at thesame time， I realize only too well that what I have learned as an undergraduateis far from enough. Therefore， it is my desire to pursue a graduate degree IEconomics at your university. If accepted， my intended concentration would beEconomic Development and Public Economics.

__大学的各位领导、导师们：

您们好!

首先感谢你们能在百忙之中审阅我的个人留学申请书。

我叫___，是来自__某中学的一名高三的理科生，即将面临高考，我期望透过贵校来实现我在__大学学习的梦想。一向以来，__大学对我都有很大的吸引力，有着悠久的历史，深厚的文化底蕴，丰富的教学资源，良好的学术氛围，强烈的时代气息，__大学历经沧桑，饱经风雨，为祖国培养了许多优秀人才，取得了丰硕的科研成果，并成为我国培养高层次专门人才和发展科学技术的一个重要基地。个性是，她是我国高校中最早开始试点实行自主招生的高校之一，她爱惜人才、有职责感，不拘一格选人才。这一点很吸引我。我十分渴望能在20__年7月拿到贵校的录取通知书，成为贵校的一名学生，成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才。

进入高中以来，我不断为实现这一理想而努力学习文化知识，勤学善思。英语、理化是我的强势科目，英语成绩个性优异。我参加了今年的全国中学生英语创新大赛，并有幸进入复赛，虽然由于种.种原因和最后的大奖擦肩而过，但参加竞赛的这种过程使我的潜力得到了很大的提升。

除了学习成绩优秀以外，我还有多方面的特长，我参加了校园的乐队，业余时间我喜欢拉二胡，学习二胡，不仅仅丰富了我的课余生活，而且升华了我对音乐的见解，在二胡的世界中，有奔腾豪放的《赛马》，有坚定有力，追溯光明的《光明行》，也有悲愤哀怨的《江河水》，我用心参与文体活动。初中时博兴县的才艺表演大赛中获得优秀节目奖。

我不仅仅爱好计算机，在业余时间，我参加了教育部组织的计算机等级考试并取得了一级B证，而且经常用心参与体育锻炼，强健体魄，增强毅力。除此之外，我热情、开朗，乐于助人，阳光、向上，所以高中以来，我年年被评为为"三好学生"。

但是，这些成绩只能代表我的过去，梦在心中，路在脚下，站在人生的十字路口，我选取了__大学，我期望__大学能敞开怀抱，给我带给一个大发展的平台，期望各位领导和老师能理解我的申请，衷心的感谢!

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尊敬的___领导：

您好!我是_市第一中学高三学生___。我希望通过贵校的自主招生来实现在_大学学习的梦想!以下是我的个人自我介绍：

我很小的时候，对大学还很懵懂，但我知道_大学是_最好的大学。于是我从小就立志，将来一定要考上_大学。随着一天一天的长大，我渐渐知道，_大学是一个具有悠久历史的名校，其教育精神和治学态度在全国高校中名列前茅。这更加坚定了我上天大的理想。

我热爱学习。我始终认为实践是学习的最好方法。从小我就喜好做实验，有时不经意间就能发现许多规律——尽管后来都在书本上学到了这些。学习上我认真、努力，中考前始终在班内领先。由于中考成绩优异，我被_一中录取。来到一中的我更加努力学习。在历次期中期末考试中，大多数我都成绩领先。尤其是高三的最近的一次期中考试中，我取得了全班第三的好成绩，得到了老师、同学的表扬。今后我一定会百尺竿头更进一步，倾我所能在高考中取得满意的成绩，考进我梦寐以求的_大学。

我热爱科学。因此，从小我便对计算机编程产生了浓厚的兴趣。科教兴国，国家的未来是掌握在高科技人才手中的。__年，在学校老师的培养下，我在青少年信息学(计算机)奥林匹克全国竞赛中取得高中组贰等奖的好成绩。

我热爱艺术。在一中合唱团中任男低音声部长。__年，一中合唱队在_市文艺展演比赛获得壹等奖的好成绩，我们激情澎湃的演唱了《祖国颂》《共青团员歌》《美哉一中》，赢得了评委和观众热烈的掌声。如果将来我考上_大学，只要学校有合唱队，我一定参加，为学校争光。

我倾心于贵校的电气工程及其自动化专业。我有一定的理科和编程基础。电力是国民经济发展的先行官，是一个资金、技术、人才密集型的企业。我的祖父、父辈都在电力行业上辛勤的耕耘着。从小耳濡目染，我对电力行业有深厚的感情。如果我被贵专业录取，我会努力学习专业知识和应用技能，为我国电力事业添砖加瓦。

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尊敬的x：

多年来，数学科学的研究一直吸引着我。决定攻读数学和物理的A—level是因为他们对这两个学科领域的兴趣都很高，而且能力很强。这反映在我x月x日收到的AS成绩中x;获得数学A级，这进一步激励了我对这门学科的追求。

我的兴趣已经扩展到计算机，在过去的几年里，试图将两者联系在一起已经成为我生活的重要组成部分。我自学了，使用书籍和其他可用资源，如何用HTML编程，这使我有可能在网页设计中发挥积极作用。

我的其他学术兴趣包括商业研究，尤其是与数学课程部分相关的管理和金融领域。我选择在Alevel中加入人文学科的部分原因是我需要分析和评估情况，商业研究让我有机会非常详细地做到这一点，我发现参与相关的课程很有治疗作用

实例探究。我还在攻读通识学科的A级课程，这增加了我对政治和文化问题的了解。该主题还鼓励有关时事的小组讨论，并为我提供发表意见的机会。

在过去的几年里，我一直是爱丁堡公爵计划的成员，该计划在学院内进行。x年x月，我完成了铜奖，现在正在努力争取我的金牌。这让我在团队合作、解决问题和保持高度责任感方面积累了丰富的经验。这些品质已被纳入10年级的成功工作经验安置以及我在知名零售店Marksand Spencer担任销售/管理助理的兼职工作。

我很享受在六年级的时光，并从学术和课外活动中获得乐趣。我觉得我拥有继续数学到更高水平所需的素质，并将其与我现在感兴趣的模块以及我希望在大学期间建立的领域相结合。我相信这种热情将与我坚定的决心和动力相结合，使我能够在_大学面临的挑战中取得成功。

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申请人：

__年__月__日

Dear_ University Teacher Leader:

Hello! I am, It is an activist in the party__ The three best students in theprovince, in daily study and life I always set the example, with the power ofexample to infect and drive my classmates. I am diligent in my study and havealways achieved excellent results. My school is a provincial demonstrationschool with nearly 4000 students. Every semester, our school will conduct ajoint examination of 10 provincial demonstration high schools. About 13000candidates in each grade are among the top in this kind of district jointexamination. 20__ In the last semester, I took the first place in the regionaljoint examination, the first grade in our school and the first in class. 20__The next semester is the first in the region, the first in our school grade, thefirst in class, and 20__ In the last semester, the area was No.9, with the firstEnglish single subject achievement; The school is No. 2 and class is the first.20__ The next semester of the year is the first in the region, the first in ourschool grade and the first in class. 20__ I took the first place in the firstexam in junior high school. I have participated in the National Olympiccompetitions of middle school students many times since junior high school, andI have been in the 20__ Won the first prize of Olympi competition of middleschool students in China in, 20__ In, he won the first prize in English,mathematics and chemistry competition and the second prize in physicscompetition of Olympi competition of middle school students. 20 after highschool__ In, I won the first prize of the National English ability competitionfor middle school students and the third prize of the national mathematicscompetition. 20__ In, he was awarded the final qualification of biology andmathematics competition of middle school students in China. The competition ofvarious disciplines broadens my learning ideas, tests my learning effect, andalso strengthens my self-confidence.

20__ In August, I was promoted to high school. In December, a classmate withuremia was named "Yuzhu", Facing a young life in tenacious struggle with the Godof death. I decided to launch a donation activity with my classmates to savethis young life with collective power. I wrote an initiative, calling onteachers and students to do it at school___ Students donated money, also to thesociety for publicity, with the help of teachers, students and people from allwalks of life, a total of more than 60000 yuan. For qiuchunliang students to dokidney replacement surgery to give us a love. Our love donation activities havearoused strong repercussions in society. Our city TV station has made specialreports in the latest news column in the evening. The process of saving thisdying life shocked my heart. Because I have the ability to continue a young lifethrough my own efforts, at the same time, the charity donation activities alsoverify my organizational ability, cohesion and appeal, and it is also a test ofmy own comprehensive quality. I was more confident in my later class work andother activities.

When you get in_ The school gate of university has entered the most importantand wonderful stage of my life. I will cherish the minute and second spent oncampus. In this great gathering of masters, the holy academic hall and theinstitutions of higher learning where the talents are finished, I will absorbthe latest knowledge and information, develop the fine tradition of forestrystudents, study hard and strive for excellence, and make myself an excellentstudent of this major through the efforts of stepping on the ground, Meanwhile,we should try to explore and verify the scientific knowledge related to thesubject and the major, study hard, deeply think and unremittingly seek thelatest knowledge in the field of this subject with a materialistic andscientific attitude, and make myself a student with potential and training valuein this field and become the pride of Beijing Forestry University.

尊敬的老师：

您好!

我叫__，今年18岁，____高三生。

在20_年秋季我参加了全国中学生的物理竞赛，获得了二等奖。由此我得到了参加_的资格。为此，我感到十分的意外和荣幸。经过考虑权衡之后，我选择了贵校作为我的奋斗目标。虽然面对未知的结果我忐忑不安，但我决定全力一试。

我是个从小通过书籍接受儒家道家文化熏陶的人，我待人以礼，也能做到诚实守信、热心集体。只是有时反而会因太重礼节而与人产生隔阂。有时缺少站出来的勇气。我正在努力改变自己。

学习上我一直能在班级排前十，成绩在全校属中上等。然而高考面前这却不是个理想的成绩。我的理科成绩较优秀——有时能达到全班第一，而文科却总是达不到自己的理想状态。我喜欢研究问题、难题，喜欢安静的琢磨事情，被老师评价为“想的和别人不一样的学生”。我不敢说自己是否优秀，但我自己是很享受这种与众不同的感觉的。

在课外，我兴趣广泛，在自主研究上还得到过比较令我自豪的成绩。我曾花一年的课余时间来制作一个游戏，该作品因其精巧而有创意曾受好评，只是因为缺少剧情而人气较低。在一年期间制作进程断断续续，程序构思使我绞尽脑汁，在玩游戏与做工程之间不断进行心理斗争。收集素材、算法、音频剪辑……每一步都十分用心。很多个第一次让我得到了不少经验。然后在终于完成的时候，那种喜悦也是不可替代的。我学会了一样很重要的事情，那就是坚持。

另一件让我获益匪浅的业余尝试是曲谱。因为很喜欢一段电视配乐，我尝试把它写成钢琴谱。我拥有业余电子琴五级证书，但这依然不容易。遇到瓶颈后，我求助于网上。然而有多少人会随便帮助陌生人做这种麻烦事呢?答案是零。于是我便下定决心，靠自己来完成。没想到经过自己的一番努力真的把它写成了!从中我明白了另一样重要的事，那就是自立自强。没人可以随便让你依靠。困难要自己克服才有意义。

所以有理由相信，虽然我于现在的只能做到中上成绩，但到大学去学习自己喜欢的，向往科目时我一定能做到最好。那时我会选择自己的事业，全身心投入去完成。相信我做到更好——也希望您可以相信。

我认为我最重要的优势是，我有时间——同所有人一样。我还有利用大学四年去改变自己、完成自己的机会。去争取它，那便是我现在在做的事了。希望贵校能给我实现自我的机会。期待您的认可!

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申请人：

__年__月__日

from: fan pu

department of the special class gifted for youths university of science andtechnology hefei, anhui 230026, p.r. china july 1, 1998 dear sir or madam:

i take great pleasure in recommending wang yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.

mr. wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the special class forthe gifted youths, my universitys unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented chinese youngsters. it was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.

he impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchinas scientific and technological talents. at the time, members of the giftedclass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. mr. wang scored the highest grade in that exam. he also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. to my regret at the time, hisenglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. but i noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his english during his fiveundergraduate years with us. by now, he seems to be at least as proficient inenglish as most of his former classmates in the gifted class.

in my experience with mr. wang, i was impressed with not only his

extraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. i amsure that mr. wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program thathe may care to enroll in. so i would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. i would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.

yours sincerely fan pu professor and deputy head.

尊敬的_老师：

您好!

我叫___，今年17岁，是__市__中学高三_班的一名学生。一直以来，我成绩优异，团结同学。从高一起多次获得“三好学生”“学习标兵”等称号，这些荣誉是老师、学校对我自身努力的一种肯定。在这些荣誉的鼓励下，我更加严格要求自己，谋求全面发展，提高学习及综合能力，取得了更大的进步。

说到学习，我认为自己是一个很有自制力的人，我能够将精力倾注于学习，一心一意，不被周围环境所打扰。正是由于这一点，我总能保持高效率的学习。我并不是一味的与其他同学拼时间，而是注重时间的充分利用，让有限的时间得以延伸，实现的利用效率。学习的高效性帮助我合理的安排作息时间。在取得成绩的稳固与提高的同时，维持良好的生物钟。

当然，我所关注的不仅仅是学习，还有自身综合能力的培养。从高一起，我就一直担任班里的宣传委员，每当各种节日来临之际，我都会亲自进行版面设计，然后再和绘画写字好的同学一起办板报。在所有人的共同努力下，我们班的板报每次在年级的综合评比中总能得到好评。除此之外，我还是学校魔术社的一名社员。我积极参加社团活动，表现优秀，并

多次在学校开展的“社团展示周”活动中代表社团在其他年级和班级表演。这些经历不仅丰富了我的高中生活，同时也进一步提高了我的综合能力。

在高一了解各个高校之初，_大学“自强弘毅求是拓新”的校训便深深吸引了我。“自强”是中华民族的传统美德，成就事业当以此为训，“弘毅”和“求是”又是学习中所必须具有的坚毅刚强的品格和科学严谨的治学态度，而“拓新”则是当今时代发展所必需的动力来源。也许正是因为这样的校训，_大学作为一个历史悠久的高等学府，并没有止步于历史的光环之下，而是紧跟时代的步伐，不断拓新，发展成为长江沿岸上一颗璀璨的明珠。

在众多的学习精英中，我时常会感到压力。但我始终坚信，唯有踏踏实实、勤奋拼搏才能通向成功之路。当我决定做一件事时，就会用最认真的态度竭尽全力去办好它，即使遭遇挫折与困难也决不放弃，直到目标达成。

这就是我，一个热爱_的女孩的自述。虽然前面的道路可能有很多坎坷，但我始终在向前走着，因为我知道，那里有我的梦想，我的希望……

三年前，我怀着对_的憧憬开始了高中三年的学习。我相信，我将凭借着自己的努力带着骄傲和自信踏入_大学的校门!

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