新西兰留学申请的条件【精彩20篇】

Dear _,

It is my conviction that the meaning of life does not dwell in the lengthof time that one can live or the material abundance that one can acquire, but inthe richness and the wonderfulness of life itself. With the increase of my age,many things in my life have changed. But one thing remains constant, that is, Iwill consistently insist on doing what I like to do and hope that my endeavorscan be valuable to the life of others. I see this as the only way whereby I canrealize the value of my life.

My undergraduate study focused on economics and I achieved remarkablescholastic performance in this field. My GPA is 3.44 (my GRE score is 20__ andTOEFL---- ). For four consecutive years of my undergraduate study, I receivedscholarships for my distinguished academic performance. Due to my equallyprominent performance in extracurricular activities I was conferred on theOutstanding Student in Campus Activities. However, honestly speaking, my realinterest lies not in economics, but in education. Ever since I was a primaryschool student, I had cherished a strong desire for a teaching careerexemplified by my teachers. In the actual teaching career that I embarked onupon my graduating from university, I have become increasingly aware that theexisting educational conditions in China are far from satisfactory. The backwardteaching methodology and the prevailing pedagogical ideology have renderedChinese education out of place with the modern international development ineducation. On the macro level, the current education theory and practice inChina lag significantly behind advanced countries in the West. For instance,though education via the internet has achieved considerable development in pasttwo years, in practical operation such education has more often than notdeteriorated into an extended form of the conventional examination-orientededucation instead of a really interactive process. In my personal experience,despite the fact that some of the problems that I have encountered in myteaching career can be solved by consulting relevant technical literature, Ihave found that the more serious flaws inherent in Chinas current educationalsystem cannot be worked out easily. Under such circumstances, an advancedprogram in education becomes necessary.

In this age of information, traditional education, both in its ideology andmethodology, has met unprecedented challenge like many other aspects of humanexistence. Meanwhile, the pursuit for higher levels of educational developmentand of the quality of life has largely transformed the educational valueorientation of the general public. The educational model that is centered aroundthe cognitive and intellectual instruction has been seriously questioned.Greater attention has been devoted to the cultivation of well-developedpersonality and to the ontological status of the individual in education. Suchissues as the internal studies of education science, scientific decision-makingin education, and meta-education have also been increasingly emphasized upon.There have also been innovations in educational research methodology. Thetendency has been to combine modern technology with humanistic researchcategories and with naturalistic research categories, and to organicallyintegrate qualitative descriptions with quantitative descriptions. It is alsoimportant to carry out educational experimentations in which educationalpredictions are complemented by educational feedbacks. Both the complexity ofeducation and the complexity of human individuals have made the comprehensiveapplication of diverse educational approaches necessary. Those new horizons arewhat fascinate me.

In view of the following qualifications that I have acquired, I believethat I will acquit myself satisfactorily in the prospective Ph.D. program ineducation that I am currently endeavoring to apply for. First and foremost, asis often claimed, ones interest is ones best director. I believe that I willdo well what I am really interested in doing. Secondly, though I majored ineconomics as an undergraduate, my trainings during that stage helped developeffective modes of thinking and research approaches. In addition, Iconscientiously self-studied many works related to education, including ADevelopmental History of Educational Science in the West, which enabled me toconstruct a solid groundwork for more advanced studies in this field. Next, itcan be safely asserted that education and economics are not entirely separated.For example, it is necessary to apply many statistical methods in educationalpsychology and my academic record indicates that statistics is the subject thatI am most good at. Last but not the least, my current teaching career and myteaching experience will play a positive role in facilitating my target degreeprogram.

The reason why I apply for the University of -- is that it is the firststate university with a time-honored history. The School of Education in thisuniversity is quite prominent among its counterparts in the field. I amparticularly attracted by the Schools powerful pedagogical resource, vibrantintellectual atmosphere and a comprehensive curriculum. I plan to apply for adegree program in Instructional Technology or Educational Psychology, both ofwhich enjoy unparalleled academic reputation in the world. My application forInstructional Technology is motivated by my strong interest in the applicationof modern science and technology, especially the information technologyrepresented by the Internet, in the field of education and in the nature of aseries of revolutionary changes resulting thereof. Instructional Technology is anew discipline that has emerged as a result of the rapid development of moderncommunication technology since the late 20th century. It has tremendouspotential for development and commercial application. As for my motive inselecting Educational Psychology as another possible area of specialization inmy degree program, it is my long-cherished interest that primarily counts. Onthe other hand, all the accomplished educators since the 1960s have beenwell-versed in psychology. Almost every important new educational theory isderived psychological findings in one way or another so that educationalpsychology has subsequently developed into a fundamental subject for the scienceof education. The tendency in the 21st century is to emphasize on the microresearch of educational activities and against this backdrop educationalpsychology will be attached greater importance. In Instructional Technology, Iwould like to focus on the following studies: how to improve educationalefficiency by applying research results from natural sciences and engineeringtechnology; how to explore the combination and coordination of pedagogicalcontents and to improve teaching methodology by exploiting the theoreticalfindings from psychology and educational science concerning the process ofteaching and learning. In Educational Psychology, I will concentrate on appliedcognition and development, gifted and creative education, genetics and childrendevelopment, personality structure and individual differences and other relatedsubjects.

For me, to shift from economics to education and to pursue an advanceddegree in the United States is not so much a challenge as an opportunity. Atpresent, major reforms are being introduced into virtually every importantaspect of Chinese society. The field of education especially calls forcomprehensive reforms. The United States occupies an absolutely leading positionin the present-day world in education. It is my conviction that, in the UnitedStates, advanced educational theories, technologies and information willfacilitate me immensely in the achievement of remarkable academic progress,fulfilling my aspiration to become an accomplished professional in the field ofeducation. This will not only bring my patriotic fervor into reality but alsomake my life more meaningful and rewarding.

Yours sincerely,

I am applying for admission to the Ph.D. program in Electrical and ComputerEngineering， at the University of California， Berkeley. I present my researchexperience and study objectives in this statement of purpose. I would like tobuild on my solid education and experience as an engineer for a Ph. D. degree incomputer science at a distinguished university. I wish in particular to betrained at an advanced level in software systems， database systems， applied-AIand knowledge-based systems. My ultimate goal is to become a professor teachingcomputer science at a Chinese university. I believe that advanced training in aquality graduate program will help me realize my goal.

My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During mydays at Engineering College I used to go to my fathers office and help himmanage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was thetime I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and returnare proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock marketcrashed. But fortunately， my father had a well-diversified portfolio because ofwhich our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learntthe second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reducesrisk. While I understood these two principles intuitively， it produced in me astrong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working ofFinance. This， I believe， was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind topursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in BusinessAdministration.

As I was finishing college， my mother had both of her hips replaced withartificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away andit was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers，orthopedic surgeons， and biologists had all worked together to design theseartificial joints that completely transform. peoples lives by giving them backpain-free mobility， and I knew at that moment that this was an area about whichI wanted to learn more. In China these days， university graduates who have notbeen lucky enough to settle into their dream jobs often look to graduatedstudies as a way to kill the time that they cannot otherwise spend meaningfully.I am prepared to go against the social conventions by putting on hold asuccessful research career that promised to be even more successful. With eightyears of productive and highly valued practical research behind me， I now wouldlike to revert to a more intellectual life so that I can conduct moretheoretical discourses.

When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues， the French sculptorAuguste Rodin answered， “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever Idont need For me， life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can beturned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents， diligence and asense of duty. During over four years’ my college life， I have been dreaming ofbeing a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the developmentof science as men do. For Knowledge Itself Is Power.This is one of my favoriteprecepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduationand my future spreads in front of me like a dream， this adage has neverinfluenced my life more than this before.

For the past three years， my undergraduate education has exposed me to thevarious sub-fields of Computer Science (CS). However， our syllabus has focusedmainly on "traditional" CS topics， such as Operating systems and single-CPUsystems. We have had barely a glimpse of the newer technologies that are likelyto change the way computing is done in not-so-distant future. The desire toexamine such subjects in greater detail is what has prompted me to opt forgraduate study. Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s“reform. andopen”policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the developmentof its global position. As a senior at Beijing University majoring in Economics，I feel that my field is fundamental to the progress of my country. Yet， at thesame time， I realize only too well that what I have learned as an undergraduateis far from enough. Therefore， it is my desire to pursue a graduate degree IEconomics at your university. If accepted， my intended concentration would beEconomic Development and Public Economics.

wang is an impressive student because he has been forced to overcome thesignificant challenge of a serious illness during his freshman year. when ifirst met wang in my discrete math class, he did not appear to be anythingspecial to me. while his exam scores were good, they were not as high as i wouldnow expect of him. what i didnt know then was that due to his illness. wang wasattempting to take all of the difficult early mathematics courses at one time,including discrete mathematics, advanced mathematics, linear algebra, andpossibilities. while most

students found preparing for just one set of these exams difficult, wangwas overwhelmed by four of them. but in the end, he achieved an impressive scoreon the final exam, which made me conscious of his unusual determination hedemonstrates when confronting difficult challenges.

mr. wangi have often talked about a variety of mathematicscomputer scienceconceptsproblems. during these discussions, i always found him to bedelightfully intelligent. not only does he quickly understand the

conceptsproblems presented to him, he is able to analyze theseproblemspresent solutions. but perhaps most important is that wangs thinking isintensely rigorous. when looking at any question, he carefully scrutinizes itifhe finds any uncertain issues, he clears them up immediately. i believe thiskind of thought is essential to become an excellent computer programmer.

尊敬的领导：

您好!

从高一到高三毕业学习成绩有了明显的提高，在这三年中多次获得学校颁发的三好生奖状，进步之星奖，优秀学员奖和多项运动会奖状等。

在高中毕业以后，我想去日本留学深造。

自小就在城市中生活的我十分向往去经济发达的大城市去学习。同时对于自己家乡落后有着深刻的责任感。日本是当今世界上世界上经济最发达的国家之一，电子产品在世界市场的占有率居于榜首。具有强大的海洋捕捞船队和水产品养殖业，渔业发达。留学条件良好，气候四季分明。环境优美，有美丽的樱花，北海道的樱花。

去这些美丽的地方是我小时侯梦想。有优秀的教师和先进的教学设备以及先进的教育理念。于是从上高中开始我就定下了将来去日本留学的想法。

20x年2月底我向家里说明了我想去日本留学的意愿。在当时就得到了家人的许可。于是从20x年的3月份开始我到x日语培训学校学习日语，平常的上课时间我正常到学校学习高中的课程到了，周末就上x日语培训班去学习日语，到现在为止我的日语水平已达到使用最基本的日常用语和进行简单的阅读的程度。日本以后，打算先到语言学校学习。为自己将来进一步的深造做好语言上的准备。

在此基础上，根据本人的个人喜好和特长，想在日本的大学学习物流管理。日本是个经济文化繁荣发达的国家，尤其改革开放以来，中日两国经济文化艺术的交流更加深入。当我学有所成回国后，将致力于家乡的经济发展，用在日本所学的先进的管理方去经营自己家乡的企业。也愿意在日友好中日文化经济交流方面贡献自己的聪明才智。

父母支持我的留学请求，能够支付我在日本的一切费用。我到日本以后，保证遵守日本的法律遵守学校的规章制度。好好学习，增长本领，成为一个有用的人才

真诚地希望我的留学申请会被批准。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

A wise man once said “how dreadful knowledge of the truth can be, when there’s no help in truth.” I think, out of all thoughtful things one can think about, this quotes is unique description of what the depth of Drama and the Performing Arts can do for people. By studying Drama, we can become a variety of people, trapped within one single mind, all trying to be freed and each with their own personality and poison. Humanity has helped Drama so much to produce narrative of such calibre, and characters of such depth and poise – characters, which can be as sweet and innocent, or can take the more disgusting side of what being a human is, being as evil as what thought possible

Performance Art explores the whole range of human emotion and can produce tremendous performances and visual experiences and with Drama, in particular, we can go further than flesh and blood and express ourselves as somebody else and take on this ‘mask’. The most profound thing I have found when studying Drama is that we can become any person in the entire world, and still be us

I have always had a love for the performing arts since I can remember; for there has never really been anything else I have ever wanted to do apart from act. But acting is not just a subject to study people, narratives or social issues – we can discover so many things about ourselves, why we perform a character this way: is it because this person is so much like us? There have been numerous qualities I have discovered about myself while participating in drama. In teaching, I have learn how to really connect with people and help them to explorer what their feelings produce and more notably, how we learn about others, about a single person just by the way they say a monologue

Teaching has been a great experience for me because it has given me the time to evaluate my own performance and teaching skill, learning to become that character just a little but more. This has also been enhanced by the performances I have taken part in, learning to work together in teams to realise the dream of the narration and the vision of the director (for nothing really exists without the vision or image)

While experiencing other aspects of the Performing Arts, I have found that is has increased my performance skill on whole and expended my knowledge on the performance world greatly, Dance, Art and English all focusing on similar issues such as the Commedia dell’arte, Henrik Ibsen, Physical Theatre and Movements and philosophies. These subjects have greatly complemented my time in Drama, and increased my confidence and ability in being a performer. Being involved in 5 consecutive school productions, 2 amateur productions, teaching experience and a student has really influence me concerning the determination I will put into a career in Drama and Acting, and just working with these people and directors have really bettered me in the way I act, see myself and carry on with my life. The Performing Arts is such a brilliant profession to work in, because there is so much opportunity to explore the world

I know that I can offer the performing arts the time, the expense and the spark that it deserves. There is nothing else in world that I would devote more time to than being on the stage or acting in the street, and with the passion and determination to succeed behind me, I will give that spark and flavour that acting and the performing arts is all about. I know I can offer so much, because it is the only profession where, maybe just for one night, I can become someone else and do a damn good job of being that person – and I can easily say that I can offer the world, because performance and acting is my whole world. As well as enjoying Drama, I have also taken a shine to Philosophy and finding the reason for irrationality, and I feel particularly moved in amazement by the work of Bob Fosse and George Orwell for their use of horror, sorrow and murder. And a great interest to the History of Art, because so much of the story of us is portrayed in Art and more so these days it is so unique how Art and Drama work together to produce movement, beauty and conception.##

from: fan pu

department of the special class gifted for youths university of science andtechnology hefei, anhui 230026, p.r. china july 1, 1998 dear sir or madam:

i take great pleasure in recommending wang yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.

mr. wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the special class forthe gifted youths, my universitys unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented chinese youngsters. it was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.

he impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchinas scientific and technological talents. at the time, members of the giftedclass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. mr. wang scored the highest grade in that exam. he also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. to my regret at the time, hisenglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. but i noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his english during his fiveundergraduate years with us. by now, he seems to be at least as proficient inenglish as most of his former classmates in the gifted class.

in my experience with mr. wang, i was impressed with not only his

extraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. i amsure that mr. wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program thathe may care to enroll in. so i would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. i would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.

yours sincerely fan pu professor and deputy head.

I live in Pakistan-a country destroying itself with bombs,guns and governments blabber to find justifications for what it is going through;a country where a former president is murdered in public,where the nations constitution and parliament are suspended at the same time,and where the voice of a common man is unheard.

Since the last few years, I had aspired to become a doctor.The idea of "scalpels," "opened chests" and "sutures" had always intrigued me.And then it happened!The recent unprecedented events in my country wiped off the dust of disillusionment from my eyes;I lost my will to become a doctor.However,the turmoil in the country led me towards newspapers and news channels,and hence Politics.

As I involved myself into politics,I realized that it is all-embracive-wielding its way over social and economic life-it is the omnipotent of Pakistan.It can mobilize public opinion,gear up propaganda machinery,make or repeal laws and what not.Backed up by public opinion,supported by the majority of the legislators,armed with the means to keep the people in a state of ignorance,political power crosses the limits of dictatorial powers.Political power,like the most powerful intoxicant,makes the persons in power to forget social ethics,political morality and obligations.

Most of the learned youth in this country consider Politics to be "a refuge for the scoundrels" and this derogatory remark may be true if we look at the deceptive and degenerated type of politicians indulging in a dirty game.All these political parties are votaries of democracy,but the way they conduct themselves inside their own parties is nothing but senseless authoritarianism.Therefore a very few students choose to pursue Politics as a profession,but what they dont realize is that if we dont take a stand the system can never be changed.Thus,I want to study Politics so I can come back to my country and contribute what little I can do for my homeland and its people.If I can inspire even a single person,it would be worth it.The world today is growing global.We are now not only to think of our own nation but as and when we think of it,we have to keep the international perception in mind;consequently,I chose Politics with International Relations as one of my courses.

Studying in UK will breed a sense of individuality and self reliance.I would be able to interact with people from everywhere and get to know about their culture.This would not only open new horizons for me,but would also clear some preconceived notions one has about the other.I have always been an active participant of debates.I have participated in 3 Model UN conferences out of which I was awarded with the Best Delegate award in two. I was also one of the two students to be selected from my school to participate in the English Speaking Union 08.Moreover, Ive taken part in Parliamentary style debates too.Therefore I believe I can communicate effectively in public and language will not be a barrier in my education.Furthermore, I have worked as an internee at Al-Shifa Eye Hospital for a month in summers.Here I learnt how to deal with patients,use the Auto Ref, handle files and punctuality.We also campaigned to a remote area near Murree where we helped the doctors in examining the patients free of cost.Another experience which taught me a lot was when me and my fellow colleagues volunteered to paint walls for the SOS Childrens Village.In addition,I worked with SUNGI (NGO) where a group of 5 of us had to organize an event to pay tribute to 1000 Women for the Nobel Peace Prize.

I enjoy Literature,especially the works of Shakespeare,Tennessee Williams,Thomas Hardy and Andrew Marvell.Id be delighted to study in a challenging atmosphere where I can focus on my studies.I commit to my work and my ability to think out of the box,keenness for Politics and my perception of things,I understand,gives me an edge over others.I believe in myself,and if provided with an opportunity,Id make the university proud.

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

to whom it may concern:

i am vice-president of the institute of economics at the harbin universityof science and technology (hust), and i am writing to recommend miss. lv, one ofmy favorite students, to be admitted into your university as a candidate foryour undergraduate program.

i have known miss. lv since her sophomore year of college and acted as herthesis advisor mentor. as an academic advisor for her undergraduate study, iknow her more than two years and i am strikingly impressed by his performanceand personality. in my development economics class, she has proven to be atake-charge student who is able to successfully participate in any task. for hisexcellent academic performance, he won the third class scholarship in 20__. as ateam member of school, she won championship of freshmen-3+1-cup basketballmatch. her chase for extracurricular activities is not confined to sports, shealso won many awards in many art exhibitions, for example, their dance song anddance in the youth-hood won the second prize award in 20__ hust art show, andtheir group the excellent team in collecting folk songs by alumni. during theyears, as class monitor, she has strikingly manifested leadership ability byorganizing colorful activities and contacting with the school anduniversity.

i strongly believe her qualities combined with his toughness of characterwill enable him to be outstanding in the future. based on my observation, i deemmiss. lv as one of the most diligent and aggressive members of my students, shehas the openness to new field, people, and customs, which makes her fit wellwith any groups and the life in the coming future, besides, her ownirrepressible curiosity and an extraordinary ability to dealing with differentchallenges and situations. during the study at college, she is enthusiastic forevery major subject. with a assiduous and surefooted attitude and striving forexcellence, she has achieved each specialized course excellently, and inparticular, he has learnt a lot about japanese culture and history. i also takenote of miss. lv’ remarkable performance in academic research, and she graduatedwith honors in the top 10%. about all, she pay great attention to theadvancement of her comprehensive capability and energetically take part insocial practices. he is friendly to classmates and always ready to help others.i am quite satisfied with him.

i have confident that she will continue to acquire more achievement hisstudies. it is for these reasons above that i offer high recommendations letterfor miss. lv with no hesitation. i highly recommend miss. lv for graduateprogram and hope you will accept her admission to your university. i am reallyappreciate you for taking time to read this letter and looking forward tohearing from you at any time.

sincerely yours,

dr. wang zhonghua, professor, vice-president of the institute of economicsharbin university of science and technology

尊敬的先生/女士：

你好，我叫X，是X大学的老师。也是X学生的班主任，我非常高兴地向你推荐我的学生X，并且相信它能够出色的完成在贵校硕士课程的学习。

自从他进入大学以来，常常表现出与年纪不相符的成熟和稳重。由于班上的大部分同学都来自其他省市，这第一次的出门离家的经历使得他们需要一个相当长的过程适应这个完全陌生的新环境。但我注意到，相比之下，某某同志很快的调整好了心态，积极主动地融入到这个新环境之中。

大学的课程与中学有很大不同，偏重在自学能力，而且专业课程的学习要求另一种思维方式。因此，在大一。大二，很多同学都表现出了不同程度的不适应，不知道该如何学习大学的课程。但是，某某同志适应能力很强，很快摸清了工商管理课程的关键，在很短的时间里就掌握了学习方法，而且其他任课老师都表示他对于新知识的接受能力很强，新学的知识他马上就能消化，当堂就能理解掌握。

可以这么说，班里的部分学生是拿着极其出色的高考成绩走进了我们学校，而某某同志凭借的则是他极强的自学能力和良好的学习方法。这一点，在每学期的期末考试上得到了很好地体现，尤其是在专业英语的期末考试中取得极其优秀的成绩，也是班里少数顺利通过英语四六级考试的同学。他对学习英语的热情和毅力是最让我感动的。除了学同学还校里足球队的主力队员，积极的参加校里组织的各项活动，有极强的组织和领导才能。他经常到我办公室或给我打电话，一起讨论他学习和生活中所遇到的问题，希望取得更好的学习成绩。概括的说某某同志是一个好学生。

我希望贵校能给他一个机会，让他在贵校严谨的学风和良好的学习环境中继续发挥他的特长，进一步提高专业知识，拓宽视野。望贵校考虑它的申请。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

i am a student, graduated from baoyang middle school, nanning, guangxiautonomous region, in 20__. i am still studying in high school now, because iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. recently, i have a dream tostudy abroad. then i search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to new zealand for study.

first, new zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which i think is mo

re reasonable for me. finally, the climate of new zealand is similar withthe climate of the south of china. considering above reasons, i told my parentsmy plan on going to new zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

as a girl, i like preschool education since i was young. nowadays, chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. if i study specialized curriculums on preschool education,i will go back china and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

my plan is as follows: first, i plan to study english in language institutefor about a half year in new zealand. then, i will study specialized curriculumson preschool education. i believe i have the ability of study abroad, because ihave finished all high school curriculums. besides, my parents both have job andhave rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. after finishing mystudy, i will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as torealize my life value.

尊敬的_招生组的老师：

您好!

我是来自河南省__中学的__，很高兴能向您呈上我的留学申请书，也希望借此机会我可以脱颖而出，为顺利进入_大学奠定坚实的基础。

在首都这座梦想之城，可谓高校林立，但是只有贵校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我们高中都会有人考入贵校，他们被誉为“天子骄子”。当录取金榜贴到校园里，看着他们脸上洋溢的笑容，我的心里也如波涛汹涌，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定决心，有朝一日我也要以自己的实力筑梦于人大校园，成为她的一分子。

可说归说，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奋学习。

在学习上，我对自己要求十分严格，充分发扬不怕吃苦的精神去面对学习中的一切困难和挫折。我知道学习就是一个苦难的过程，唯有坚持不懈，才能实现凤凰涅盘的重生，才能抵达成功的彼岸。因此，在课堂上，我紧紧跟随老师的思路，认真听讲，细心做好笔记，每一个知识点都不会错过。课下，我珍惜时间，努力复习，积极预习，有的放矢地掌控好自己的学习节奏。我喜欢思考问题，喜欢探究问题的本源，然后举一反三，化整为零。由于我的勤奋、刻苦，我获得了优异的成绩，每次考试都在全校前列，受到了老师和同学们的肯定，多次被评为优秀班干部、优秀学生、学习标兵等。

在获得优异成绩的同时，我还抽时间，挤时间发展自己多方面的兴趣。我喜欢打乒乓球、羽毛球、篮球，沉浸于体育锻炼的激情与豪迈中，在紧张与刺激间收获了强健的体魄。但比起体育锻炼，我更钟情于国学文化。

我喜欢国学的博大精深，喜欢国学的厚重神奇。课余，我已经阅读了多部国学经典，比如《孟子》《论语》《史记》《资治通鉴》《汉书》等，在文字与故事里感受到了国学的无限魅力。在我看来，国学不仅仅是传统文化，更是中华民族核心的价值理念和追求，是数千年来中国人思维方式行为方式生活方式生产方式的高度总结，是中华母亲的乳汁，是中华儿女的血脉、精神和灵魂，是中国人信仰的天空和大地。

出于对国学的热爱，我从小就立志要投身于祖国宝贵文化的学习、挖掘、弘扬中，用自己的所学，为国家的文化发展和民族的文化复兴，贡献自己的微薄之力。

而我之所以在众多的_高校中钟情于贵校，就是因为贵校深厚的文化底蕴吸引了我。贵校是一所以人文社会科学为主的综合性研究型高校。自建校以来，贵校始终不忘“立学为民、治学报国”的办学宗旨，以“实事求是”为校训，逐渐形成了完备的教育体系，尤其注重发挥人文社会科学认识世界、传承文明、创新理论、咨政育人、服务社会的作用，半个多世纪以来，已为国家输送了一大批高素质的人才，其中范文澜、冯其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可谓赫赫有名，为国家的文化建设做出了巨大的贡献。

我敬仰贵校国学院，它是新中国第一家以国学为教育研究目的且本硕连读的教育科研机构。学院学术力量雄厚，已经制定了完整系统的国学教学方案，建立了以经典研读为中心的课程体系，并充分兼顾传统与现代的有机融合，在教学与研究中，既有继承传统的治学特点，又有鲜明的时代性和宽广的国际视野。这些，都令我向往。所以，我认为贵校国学院是我的梦想之地，会改变我的人生轨迹。

尊敬的老师，请您考虑并接受我的申请，给我一片天空，让我自由飞翔，给我一片海洋，让我尽情畅游，我相信，进入人大是我最明智的选择。如果顺利被录取，我一定会珍惜时间，勤奋努力，孜孜以求，投身于学术研究，跟随大师足迹，在国学的传承里留下自己的名字，成为国家的栋梁，成为人大的骄傲。

我相信，我可以。

此致

敬礼

1. 参观和考察学校

预约参观考察学校(首先进入学校的，先注册，然后通过邮件在网上预约参观学校的时间，一般学校都需要你提前预约，也可以自己接打电话预约)。收到回信按预约时间访问学校，会有招生办的老师带领参观校园然后帮助你了解相关学校信息。

2. 网上提交申请材料

确定学校后就可以在提交申请材料，学校的通常都会有完善的申请流程，按照提示和要求来就好。学校收到递交材料后如果有不完善的地方仍然会通过邮件形式与家长沟通，所以记得时常看看邮箱以及垃圾邮件箱。

3. 等待面试通知

从申请到收到面试通知这个过程会比较漫长，至少一个月，两个月也完全有可能。

因为，泰国人办事速度较慢，申请的学生越来越多，而招生办通常就是两三个负责人，她们每天有接待不完的访问者以及上百封邮件要回复。

所以如果怠慢你是非常正常的，建议勤发邮件沟通以防被疏漏。准备的这期间可以好好帮助孩子准备面试。低龄儿童面试对英文的要求不高，能简单的交流。

但是一年级以后的需要有一定的基础，面试包括听说读甚至写，比想象中要难。所以一定要有英文基础。(但各个学校都存在不同程度的差异，所以看你选择的是哪个学校)

4. 面试结果

参加学校面试后，不会立马有结果，通常等上一个月两个月都很正常。所以建议你至少提前半年开始办理申请。泰国开学时间一般都在八月份，一个学年分四个学期，平均两个月为一学期。

5. 交建校费和学费并保留收费单

如果面试成功学校会学校会通知你按时缴费(建校费和学费，学费可以按一学年交也可以按一学期交)学校收到款项会给你邮寄收费单据和签证所需的推荐材料(单据和签证材料都得保存好，这个后续去大使馆办签证要用到)。

尊敬的校领导：

本人叫______，我是师范大学中语系汉语言专业____班的学生，我逐步完成了由高中毕业到本科生的蜕变，在入校的三个多月学习期间，我努力辛苦的学习本系主要专业，一直受到本校辅导员和老师们莫大的关怀，给了我不断施展的平台，不过随着本专业系统的学习和深入，我感受到了前所未有的压力，来自理想与现实的，还有更多的。

我知道汉语言专业确实是一个好专业，它关联好多个专业领域，但是我感觉到我对本专业不是那么喜欢，家里人一直尊重我的想法，他们说让我学习以后保持生活的实际性专业，本来父母的愿望也是想让我上法律系，我从小就很喜欢法律方面的`知识，将来也希望在法律部门工作，新疆大学法律系一直都是我高三一年来的目标，由于估分的误差和一系列外界原因使我与新疆大学失之交臂，直到我知道还可以通过转学这个方式到新疆大学，我的心中又重燃希望。

这是我郑重的申请，我和我的家人们已经多次交流并考虑，我转校并不是因为师范大学，我是真的没有方向，没有办法好好学习，我希望以后成为对社会有用的人，我满怀着梦想!我不希望由于我一时选择上的失误造成我一生的失败，请帮助一个对世界，对社会都满怀希望的青年吧!

敬爱的校领导，我真诚的希望您能够慎重的考虑，我怀着感激的心，满载梦想的等着您给我的回音。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. -My view of life.

Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?”

When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into __ University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.

This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in __ Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpart didn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.

In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process, when I met a lot of problems, I often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case. My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.

In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient. Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship experience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough. What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.

尊敬的_大学老师：

您好!

"韶华不为少年留，勤为天道酬。"正如高三的教室后墙上我所想出的励志名言一般，它时刻激励着班上的同学与我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡阳市八中高三的一名学生，就读文科，是平凡的，因为是一个同所有人一样的矛盾融合体;但又坚信自己是不同的，是因为我将成为发光体。金子，到哪里都会发光，而我选择的是贵校这样一座炼金炉。

河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我愿像河般，为梦想奔腾向前永不止息;像海般容纳百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利万物而不争，处众人之所恶，故几于道。居善地，心善渊，与善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，动善时。夫唯不争，故无尤。"善的最高境界，大致在于此乎。像水般，往低处流，却能容纳百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高处走时，当不胜寒时，不忘想想水的谦虚，以一种包容一切的姿态，以柔化刚，接受万物的俯视与臣服，这种"柔德"，使我自己的心境变得平和，要像水那样，无形胜有形，不断地改变，塑造自己，臻于完美。

宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落;去留无意，漫随天外云卷云舒的同时，我本着湖湘学派"经世致用"的原则，志当存高远。如果说周总理是"为中华之崛起而读书"，那我便愿为"中国之强盛而读书"。学无止境，人生本是一个不断学习的过程。在六年的学习委员一职的任职过程中，除了学习课本知识，我的右手可以写出一手漂亮的毛笔。因为正，一笔一划地写，心才会正。我的左手，能弹出美妙的小提琴乐章，这不仅开发了我的右脑，音乐更使我思维敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不仅是人类对上帝的提问，更是与大自然的交流。让狂躁的心，不知不觉间安静下来。

人生的旅途中，读书万卷：安徒生童话到世界名着。我醉心于宝黛间的痴缠;徜徉于《傲慢与偏见》里伊丽莎白奇妙的心海中;感叹于李白"我辈岂是蓬蒿人"的豪迈;与杜甫"安得广厦千万间，大庇天下寒士俱欢颜"一起忧国忧民;与易安居士一起看"雨疏风骤，绿肥红瘦"。在文的海洋中，我愿成那一滴水，一尾鱼，在海洋心中，见证着它的悲喜。于是在历史的不平中，我亦诗叹曰：陈王梦还金镂枕，凤皇遗恨正阿房，才佳长恨无归处，冷露成泪暗遗香。

我同样愿行万里路，沿途的风景，丰盈着自己的人生，懂得取与舍，让人生的阅历更加丰富。曾到过南京，河畔桨声灯影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝旧事已随流水，而这座古都却有太多历史无法忘记的东西：革命先行者孙文先生之陵……流连于河海大学门前，不由驻足，希望自己能成为"归人"，而不是"过客"。我这样的游子，在阅过17年风景后，选择了河海大学作为圆梦的地方。

我喜欢奔跑的感觉，起跑线比重点更加美好，体味那为理想拼搏的过程。十年磨一剑，剑出鞘，一鸣惊人，直指河海。

我，静如处子，或动如脱兔，愿意跟书本这样高尚的朋友对话。书山有路勤为径，运用正确的学习方法，在无涯的学海中"直挂云帆济沧海"，正确地驾驶着学习之舟，虽然途中有风浪，但坚持驶向目的地--河海之湾。我，崇尚独立，常独立思考探寻人生真谛，遇事冷静自若，却又让理性成为我织梦的梭，让勤奋成为我筑梦的桥。理智与热情，诚信与好学，成为划向河海的桨，只为到那里，为自己编织另一个梦，解决南方家乡旱涝灾害频繁的问题，造福家乡、祖国人民。在见证河湾辉煌的同时，与河海一起创造下一个辉煌。

我愿逆风行舟，驶向河海，利用水，造福人民。

我愿逆风，只为寻河海一梦。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

20__年__月__日

尊敬的大使(签证官)：

我的名字叫__， 2_岁。现在在__大学__学院就读，是-名__学专业的大学生。在父母的呵护下长大的我，从小就有一个心愿，就是可以到韩国学习韩国文化。所以，我喜欢收集韩国各方面的资料，包括民俗文化、科学技术。通过资料我逐渐了解到，韩国在东亚地区具有重要地位，她的历史悠久而灿烂，拥有独特的建筑、让难忘的与众不同的饮食，韩国的服饰更是让人喜欢。我最喜欢的是韩国的语言，听起来那么好听那么温柔。韩国是世界发达国家之一，她的科学技术在世界具有相当地位，电子产品在中国广受欢迎，而韩国的教育水平在世界更是瞩目。韩国比较突出的还有它的艺术，韩国的电视剧在东亚地区刮起过不小的风浪，而现代舞蹈和民俗舞蹈更是让世人惊叹。

韩国是礼仪之邦，韩国人民的热情友好是世界公认的，我希望可以在这样一个将传统 与现代很好结合在一起的国家继续深造。

性格开朗的我很喜欢护理行业，从小就喜欢白衣天使这个名字。看着护士小姐温柔的动作和美丽的仪态就特别向往着长大后可以做一名出色的护士。终于，我如愿以偿考上了延边大学护理学院，从此开始了护理学学习的道路。如今我即将毕业，实际操作能力虽然优良，可我发现我所学到的护理知识并不完善，所以我想继续深造。

通过网络，我收集到了很多关王韩国护理学方面的资料，了解到韩国有很多综合性大学都设有护理专业，如韩国梨花女女子大学、韩国延世大学等等。这些大学都具有悠久的历史、庞大的规模、尖级的教授队伍，最重要的是韩国的医学方面已经达到世界先进水平。这样优秀的大学是我渴望学习的最好的学校，因此我很向往去这样优异的环境中继续学习我热爱的护理学专业。虽然，语言是我面临的最大难题，但我会努力克服。我相信以我的学习能力加上韩国的语言环境，我会很快掌握这门美丽的语言，进而更快地无阻碍地学习护理知识，并将它用于实践中。因此我想申请梨花女子大学，因为我了解到梨花女子大学的护理系无论在教学上还是师资力量都是世界前矛。如果我能申请到，我-定会先在韩国语学习班刻苦学习，尽早将韩国语的日常用语和基本词汇掌握。在攻克语言的基础上，好好学习护理知识，为促进中韩两国文化发展做贡献。希望签证官考虑我的请求。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

尊敬的老师：

您好!

我叫__，今年18岁，____高三生。

在20_年秋季我参加了全国中学生的物理竞赛，获得了二等奖。由此我得到了参加_的资格。为此，我感到十分的意外和荣幸。经过考虑权衡之后，我选择了贵校作为我的奋斗目标。虽然面对未知的结果我忐忑不安，但我决定全力一试。

我是个从小通过书籍接受儒家道家文化熏陶的人，我待人以礼，也能做到诚实守信、热心集体。只是有时反而会因太重礼节而与人产生隔阂。有时缺少站出来的勇气。我正在努力改变自己。

学习上我一直能在班级排前十，成绩在全校属中上等。然而高考面前这却不是个理想的成绩。我的理科成绩较优秀——有时能达到全班第一，而文科却总是达不到自己的理想状态。我喜欢研究问题、难题，喜欢安静的琢磨事情，被老师评价为“想的和别人不一样的学生”。我不敢说自己是否优秀，但我自己是很享受这种与众不同的感觉的。

在课外，我兴趣广泛，在自主研究上还得到过比较令我自豪的成绩。我曾花一年的课余时间来制作一个游戏，该作品因其精巧而有创意曾受好评，只是因为缺少剧情而人气较低。在一年期间制作进程断断续续，程序构思使我绞尽脑汁，在玩游戏与做工程之间不断进行心理斗争。收集素材、算法、音频剪辑……每一步都十分用心。很多个第一次让我得到了不少经验。然后在终于完成的时候，那种喜悦也是不可替代的。我学会了一样很重要的事情，那就是坚持。

另一件让我获益匪浅的业余尝试是曲谱。因为很喜欢一段电视配乐，我尝试把它写成钢琴谱。我拥有业余电子琴五级证书，但这依然不容易。遇到瓶颈后，我求助于网上。然而有多少人会随便帮助陌生人做这种麻烦事呢?答案是零。于是我便下定决心，靠自己来完成。没想到经过自己的一番努力真的把它写成了!从中我明白了另一样重要的事，那就是自立自强。没人可以随便让你依靠。困难要自己克服才有意义。

所以有理由相信，虽然我于现在的只能做到中上成绩，但到大学去学习自己喜欢的，向往科目时我一定能做到最好。那时我会选择自己的事业，全身心投入去完成。相信我做到更好——也希望您可以相信。

我认为我最重要的优势是，我有时间——同所有人一样。我还有利用大学四年去改变自己、完成自己的机会。去争取它，那便是我现在在做的事了。希望贵校能给我实现自我的机会。期待您的认可!

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尊敬的_老师：

您好!

我叫___，是___中学中学___学生。我与_缘起于幼年时读过的《荷塘月色》，苍茫的月光静静地泻落，田田的荷叶亭亭的立着，如同梦境般的美好景色给我留下了深刻的印象,从此，古朴典雅、文化底蕴丰厚的_就扎根于我心中，成为我魂牵梦绕的圣地。

_重视的是全面发展的人才，所以在平时各科的学习中，我都稳扎稳打，表现出色，在历次考试中都名列前茅。

竞赛方面：在20__年第__届全国生物中学生生物学奥林匹克联赛中获陕西赛区一等奖并代表陕西参加国家决赛获得银奖，在20__全国联赛中获陕西赛区数学一等奖和化学二等奖。在这里我想谈谈暑假参加全国生物竞赛的经历。来到武汉二中，我以自己的微笑与亲和力结识了来自全国各地的朋友，谈天说地，共话理想;我懂得了山外青山楼外楼，与全国的精英相比，我还有很多的地方需要改进;我学会了就算遇到挫折也永不言败，调整心态迎接下一个挑战才更重要……这一切，都是让我毕生难忘的宝贵经历，也让我更深刻的理解了_“自强不息”的校训。

爱好广泛：我虽然是一个理科生，却对历史人文知识等很感兴趣，闲暇时喜欢看看“百家讲坛”，看电视上的国学知识竞赛，有意提升自己的综合素养。我幼时曾习国画，我喜欢在生宣上信笔泼墨，喜欢那份“山水横拖千里外”的悠远超然;我也学过古筝，我喜欢在那二十一弦琴上钩托抹挑，喜欢《高山流水》的相逢恨晚，喜欢《春江花月夜》的婉约忧伤;初中时，我去学习跆拳道，我喜欢听双腿破空而出凌风而过踢中脚靶的清脆声响，也将跆拳道精神——礼义廉耻，忍耐克己，百折不屈——牢牢地铭刻在心，并且践行。

我的理想：我从小就很喜欢看各式各样的建筑，阿布?辛博神庙每个太阳日的第一缕曙光，巴黎圣母院高耸的尖顶，悉尼歌剧院的风帆造型，都让我深深着迷。我希望能成为_建筑系的一员，形成自己独特的建筑风格，从而实现我的终极梦想——参与未来世博会上中国馆的设计，让世界看到中国的风采!

我很喜欢泰戈尔的那一句诗：“天空不留下鸟的痕迹，但我已飞过。”为了我的梦想——_，我已经厚积了多年的力量，等待薄发的那一刻。不论结果如何，至少我曾经为自己的梦想努力过，为自己的人生拼搏过，那么我就永不后悔。或许当我苍颜白发时想起这段时期的经历，我也会为自己当初的坚持，为年少时的那份破釜沉舟的决心，而微微一笑。

“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海。”_园，等着我!

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Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the application process. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing number of applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is also increasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a college recommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.

A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about a candidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for them to see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea to include in the application, even if the college does not require one, many colleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep in mind when writing a college recommendation letter:

Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that you know the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendation letter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written for candidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harm than good.

How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendation letter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length of time you have known that person.

Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of the recommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and his or her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement an application, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the college he or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of a college recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character of the candidate.

Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letter is to first obtain the students rsum with a listing of his or her GPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experience and special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate, the more constructive your recommendation can be.

Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, before writing a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the person to whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name, the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."

Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write a college recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. A letter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave a negative impression.

Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendation letter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if it can be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application, return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.

Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadline of the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequate amount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the most important detail is that it is received before the application deadline.

Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sure to save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation letter easier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may ask that you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is important that each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information can be recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the original passage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a college recommendation.

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As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of a college-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writing a college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trust in you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whether or not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice on how to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letter and give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or her college of choice.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.

My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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due to the comprehensiveness of china’s “reform and open” policies，economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. though more and more companies built， management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. management is a burgeoning fieldin china， so i hope i can acquire more modern knowledge on management inengland.

the roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. my father was among the first of china’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. as a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. mymother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simplecalculations. and so it was early in my life that i hoped i， also， would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.

with the time of growing up， i preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. i never ceased to contemplate over the questions i encountered.subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.

as a high school student in china， i had to concentrate on the collegeentrance examination (cee)， even so， books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. unfortunately when sitting in the exam in june， 20__， iwas so nervous that i didn’t score well in the cee exam. i enrolled in thedepartment of computer science in zhejiang college of traditional chinesemedicine. any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. after several terms， i realizedthat i would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. at thatmoment， i lost my direction and objectives. my persistence in reading saved mefrom the dark situation. as a matter of fact， i enjoyed reading the booksincluded encyclopedia american， and some books about management by peterf.drucker. i began to notice something interesting: why some companies canproduce more than others? why some company can sell more than others? why somecompanies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

with the questions in my mind， i started to read many relevant books. i waslucky to read the book “jack: straight from the gut”by jack welch， in which johna. byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. when i was a junior， i ran a bookshop

by myself near my school. i should manage not only the finance in the shopbut also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge thebusiness in my shop to hold on the run the shop. from this， my interpersonalskills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed， definitely i wasincreasingly interested in what i was doing. by december， 20__， i had finallydetermined to take business management as my career instead of it. to accumulatemore relevant knowledge， i strived to gain more practical work experience insome big companies.

fortunately， as a senior， i began by conducting an internship in thearchitecture company in zhejiang province. over six months， i worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system， which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. the experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of i thought in big companies. after graduation， i continued my work inthis company. in may， 20__， the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes， they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas i mentioned.

during the short period of training， i realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. lancaster， with its excellencein management， represents the perfect fit for my needs. in your challengingenvironment， i can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. i am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. with this in mind， i hereby submit my application，and await your favorable reply.