个人出国留学申请书范文（热门20篇）

Dear _,

As a 28-year-old female, there has been nothing sensational about my pasteducation and career experience. I do not feel any regret because I have alwaysbeen making worthy efforts to achieve personal development and to enrich my lifein my own way. Helen Keller serves as a paragon that I will emulate in my entirelifetime. The beautiful things that she brought to the world with her lovingheart and her strength convince me that the power of the spiritual motivation isinfinite. An individual lives a meaningful live only to the extent of benefitingthe welfare of others. Both my education and my five-year work experience haveunmistakably made me believe that economics is a science whose ultimate functionis the improvement of human welfare. The motivation behind my currentapplication for a Master’s program in economics is to pursue a more fruitfulcareer development in the future so that the process of my self-actualizationwill also be a process of making contributions to others.

My education background makes me an appropriate candidate for your program.My education consists of two stages. From 1993 to 1995 I received a juniorcollege education from the Business School of _ University, majoring inmarketing. Then I proceeded onto an undergraduate program in the Department ofBusiness Administration of _ University, waived of entrance examination becauseof my distinguished academic performance at the junior college (ranking topsecond among 31 students in the class). During my undergraduate program, Icontinue to maintain a satisfactory academic performance, ranking top ten amonga total of 51 students. Completing my undergraduate program in 1998, I obtaineda Bachelor’s degree in economics.

Through my undergraduate program, I gained an increasingly deepunderstanding of the importance of economics. As far as I am concerned,economics is by no means an abstract discipline. It is closely connected withreality and is designed to explore and explain diverse economic phenomena andeconomic laws. For the foreseeable future, the conflict between the scarcity ofnatural resources and the infinitude of human demand will continue to persist,posing a long-lasting threat to the social development of all nations. Thenecessity to seek a solution to this conflict gave birth to Economics, whichpromises to maximize material wealth through an optimum allocation of resources.Because of my diligent efforts at coursework and my strong interest ineconomics, I managed to achieve a top-10 ranking in my class，winning the honorof Outstanding Student and a second-class scholarship. I familiarized myselfwith most classic works on economics and management, including Principles ofManagement by Harold Koontz, Economics by Samuelson, Competition Strategy byPorter and Wealth of Nations by Adam Smiths, etc. From the very beginning of myeconomics study, I have tried to expose myself to western perspectives.

Starting from the premise that economics will be lifeless unless it isapplied to the problems in the real world, I paid special attention in myundergraduate program to the combination of theory and practice as a way oflearning and applying my knowledge of economics. I once spent a whole summervacation on conducting a survey of the fast food business in _ City. I sampled15 fast food restaurants, carried out interviews with restaurant owners and thecustomers. I applied quantitative analysis to my statistics and proposedconcrete measures for developing the city’s fast food industry through improvingmanagement, business environment, food variety and service quality.

My research ability was improved through writing my thesis –The Protectionand the Development of China’s National Industry in the Age of Reform andOpening Up. The thesis focuses on China’s joining of WTO and its possiblenegative impact on the growth of national industry. My conclusion is that acareful balance must be struck between the protection of national industry andthe introduction of foreign capital. The thesis was rated “Excellent” for itscomprehensive theoretical formulation, detailed statistics and creativeperspectives.

Yours sincerely,

1. 参观和考察学校

预约参观考察学校(首先进入学校的，先注册，然后通过邮件在网上预约参观学校的时间，一般学校都需要你提前预约，也可以自己接打电话预约)。收到回信按预约时间访问学校，会有招生办的老师带领参观校园然后帮助你了解相关学校信息。

2. 网上提交申请材料

确定学校后就可以在提交申请材料，学校的通常都会有完善的申请流程，按照提示和要求来就好。学校收到递交材料后如果有不完善的地方仍然会通过邮件形式与家长沟通，所以记得时常看看邮箱以及垃圾邮件箱。

3. 等待面试通知

从申请到收到面试通知这个过程会比较漫长，至少一个月，两个月也完全有可能。

因为，泰国人办事速度较慢，申请的学生越来越多，而招生办通常就是两三个负责人，她们每天有接待不完的访问者以及上百封邮件要回复。

所以如果怠慢你是非常正常的，建议勤发邮件沟通以防被疏漏。准备的这期间可以好好帮助孩子准备面试。低龄儿童面试对英文的要求不高，能简单的交流。

但是一年级以后的需要有一定的基础，面试包括听说读甚至写，比想象中要难。所以一定要有英文基础。(但各个学校都存在不同程度的差异，所以看你选择的是哪个学校)

4. 面试结果

参加学校面试后，不会立马有结果，通常等上一个月两个月都很正常。所以建议你至少提前半年开始办理申请。泰国开学时间一般都在八月份，一个学年分四个学期，平均两个月为一学期。

5. 交建校费和学费并保留收费单

如果面试成功学校会学校会通知你按时缴费(建校费和学费，学费可以按一学年交也可以按一学期交)学校收到款项会给你邮寄收费单据和签证所需的推荐材料(单据和签证材料都得保存好，这个后续去大使馆办签证要用到)。

Monsieur le Président,

Dans le souhait dune inscription auprès de votre université, jailhonneur de vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.

Jétudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans, et jobtiendrai malicence(bac+4) en juillet 20__ .(1)

Outre la langue fran?aise, jai étudié littérature fran?aise àlaquelle je mintéresse particulièrement.(2)

Après lobtention de mon dipl?me, jaimerais poursuivre mes études delittérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement delittérature.(3)

Or, pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires, jai besoin d’uncertificat de pré-inscription délivré par votre université. Cest pourquoi jevous demande quelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat etquelles sont les attesations que je devrais fournir.

Si cest possible, pourriez-vous me faire parvenir, à ladresse ci-dessus,un dossier dinscription ?(4)

Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance, je vous prie dagréer,Monsieur le Président, lexpression de mon profond respect.

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Yours sincerely,

i am a student, graduated from baoyang middle school, nanning, guangxiautonomous region, in 20__. i am still studying in high school now, because iwas not enrolled by the ideal university last year. recently, i have a dream tostudy abroad. then i search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to new zealand for study.

first, new zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which i think is mo

re reasonable for me. finally, the climate of new zealand is similar withthe climate of the south of china. considering above reasons, i told my parentsmy plan on going to new zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

as a girl, i like preschool education since i was young. nowadays, chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. if i study specialized curriculums on preschool education,i will go back china and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

my plan is as follows: first, i plan to study english in language institutefor about a half year in new zealand. then, i will study specialized curriculumson preschool education. i believe i have the ability of study abroad, because ihave finished all high school curriculums. besides, my parents both have job andhave rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. after finishing mystudy, i will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as torealize my life value.

尊敬的老师：

您好!

我叫__，今年18岁，____高三生。

在20_年秋季我参加了全国中学生的物理竞赛，获得了二等奖。由此我得到了参加_的资格。为此，我感到十分的意外和荣幸。经过考虑权衡之后，我选择了贵校作为我的奋斗目标。虽然面对未知的结果我忐忑不安，但我决定全力一试。

我是个从小通过书籍接受儒家道家文化熏陶的人，我待人以礼，也能做到诚实守信、热心集体。只是有时反而会因太重礼节而与人产生隔阂。有时缺少站出来的勇气。我正在努力改变自己。

学习上我一直能在班级排前十，成绩在全校属中上等。然而高考面前这却不是个理想的成绩。我的理科成绩较优秀——有时能达到全班第一，而文科却总是达不到自己的理想状态。我喜欢研究问题、难题，喜欢安静的琢磨事情，被老师评价为“想的和别人不一样的学生”。我不敢说自己是否优秀，但我自己是很享受这种与众不同的感觉的。

在课外，我兴趣广泛，在自主研究上还得到过比较令我自豪的成绩。我曾花一年的课余时间来制作一个游戏，该作品因其精巧而有创意曾受好评，只是因为缺少剧情而人气较低。在一年期间制作进程断断续续，程序构思使我绞尽脑汁，在玩游戏与做工程之间不断进行心理斗争。收集素材、算法、音频剪辑……每一步都十分用心。很多个第一次让我得到了不少经验。然后在终于完成的时候，那种喜悦也是不可替代的。我学会了一样很重要的事情，那就是坚持。

另一件让我获益匪浅的业余尝试是曲谱。因为很喜欢一段电视配乐，我尝试把它写成钢琴谱。我拥有业余电子琴五级证书，但这依然不容易。遇到瓶颈后，我求助于网上。然而有多少人会随便帮助陌生人做这种麻烦事呢?答案是零。于是我便下定决心，靠自己来完成。没想到经过自己的一番努力真的把它写成了!从中我明白了另一样重要的事，那就是自立自强。没人可以随便让你依靠。困难要自己克服才有意义。

所以有理由相信，虽然我于现在的只能做到中上成绩，但到大学去学习自己喜欢的，向往科目时我一定能做到最好。那时我会选择自己的事业，全身心投入去完成。相信我做到更好——也希望您可以相信。

我认为我最重要的优势是，我有时间——同所有人一样。我还有利用大学四年去改变自己、完成自己的机会。去争取它，那便是我现在在做的事了。希望贵校能给我实现自我的机会。期待您的认可!

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

to whom it may concern:

i am vice-president of the institute of economics at the harbin universityof science and technology (hust), and i am writing to recommend miss. lv, one ofmy favorite students, to be admitted into your university as a candidate foryour undergraduate program.

i have known miss. lv since her sophomore year of college and acted as herthesis advisor mentor. as an academic advisor for her undergraduate study, iknow her more than two years and i am strikingly impressed by his performanceand personality. in my development economics class, she has proven to be atake-charge student who is able to successfully participate in any task. for hisexcellent academic performance, he won the third class scholarship in 20__. as ateam member of school, she won championship of freshmen-3+1-cup basketballmatch. her chase for extracurricular activities is not confined to sports, shealso won many awards in many art exhibitions, for example, their dance song anddance in the youth-hood won the second prize award in 20__ hust art show, andtheir group the excellent team in collecting folk songs by alumni. during theyears, as class monitor, she has strikingly manifested leadership ability byorganizing colorful activities and contacting with the school anduniversity.

i strongly believe her qualities combined with his toughness of characterwill enable him to be outstanding in the future. based on my observation, i deemmiss. lv as one of the most diligent and aggressive members of my students, shehas the openness to new field, people, and customs, which makes her fit wellwith any groups and the life in the coming future, besides, her ownirrepressible curiosity and an extraordinary ability to dealing with differentchallenges and situations. during the study at college, she is enthusiastic forevery major subject. with a assiduous and surefooted attitude and striving forexcellence, she has achieved each specialized course excellently, and inparticular, he has learnt a lot about japanese culture and history. i also takenote of miss. lv’ remarkable performance in academic research, and she graduatedwith honors in the top 10%. about all, she pay great attention to theadvancement of her comprehensive capability and energetically take part insocial practices. he is friendly to classmates and always ready to help others.i am quite satisfied with him.

i have confident that she will continue to acquire more achievement hisstudies. it is for these reasons above that i offer high recommendations letterfor miss. lv with no hesitation. i highly recommend miss. lv for graduateprogram and hope you will accept her admission to your university. i am reallyappreciate you for taking time to read this letter and looking forward tohearing from you at any time.

sincerely yours,

dr. wang zhonghua, professor, vice-president of the institute of economicsharbin university of science and technology

I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXiautonomous region, in _. I am still studying in high school now, because I wasnot enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently, I have a dream tostudy abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient andsuitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.

First, New Zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advancededucation in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’,which I think is mo

re reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar withthe climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parentsmy plan on going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chineseparents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention topreschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education,I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leavingcollege.

My plan is as follows: first, I plan to study English in language institutefor about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculumson preschool education.

I believe I have the ability of study abroad, because I have finished allhigh school curriculums. Besides, my parents both have job and have rich income,so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study, I willreturn to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my lifevalue.

Yours sincerely,

尊敬的_老师：

您好!

我叫___，今年17岁，是__市__中学高三_班的一名学生。一直以来，我成绩优异，团结同学。从高一起多次获得“三好学生”“学习标兵”等称号，这些荣誉是老师、学校对我自身努力的一种肯定。在这些荣誉的鼓励下，我更加严格要求自己，谋求全面发展，提高学习及综合能力，取得了更大的进步。

说到学习，我认为自己是一个很有自制力的人，我能够将精力倾注于学习，一心一意，不被周围环境所打扰。正是由于这一点，我总能保持高效率的学习。我并不是一味的与其他同学拼时间，而是注重时间的充分利用，让有限的时间得以延伸，实现的利用效率。学习的高效性帮助我合理的安排作息时间。在取得成绩的稳固与提高的同时，维持良好的生物钟。

当然，我所关注的不仅仅是学习，还有自身综合能力的培养。从高一起，我就一直担任班里的宣传委员，每当各种节日来临之际，我都会亲自进行版面设计，然后再和绘画写字好的同学一起办板报。在所有人的共同努力下，我们班的板报每次在年级的综合评比中总能得到好评。除此之外，我还是学校魔术社的一名社员。我积极参加社团活动，表现优秀，并

多次在学校开展的“社团展示周”活动中代表社团在其他年级和班级表演。这些经历不仅丰富了我的高中生活，同时也进一步提高了我的综合能力。

在高一了解各个高校之初，_大学“自强弘毅求是拓新”的校训便深深吸引了我。“自强”是中华民族的传统美德，成就事业当以此为训，“弘毅”和“求是”又是学习中所必须具有的坚毅刚强的品格和科学严谨的治学态度，而“拓新”则是当今时代发展所必需的动力来源。也许正是因为这样的校训，_大学作为一个历史悠久的高等学府，并没有止步于历史的光环之下，而是紧跟时代的步伐，不断拓新，发展成为长江沿岸上一颗璀璨的明珠。

在众多的学习精英中，我时常会感到压力。但我始终坚信，唯有踏踏实实、勤奋拼搏才能通向成功之路。当我决定做一件事时，就会用最认真的态度竭尽全力去办好它，即使遭遇挫折与困难也决不放弃，直到目标达成。

这就是我，一个热爱_的女孩的自述。虽然前面的道路可能有很多坎坷，但我始终在向前走着，因为我知道，那里有我的梦想，我的希望……

三年前，我怀着对_的憧憬开始了高中三年的学习。我相信，我将凭借着自己的努力带着骄傲和自信踏入_大学的校门!

此致

敬礼!

As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spenthours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waitedon customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me thedesire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that thebusiness world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education,and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administrationprogram at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).

In addition to my helping out in my father’s business, I have had numerousother work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program.My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters,Chili’s restaurants, and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational SportsCenter (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis onserving the public effectively. Further, as an assistant manager at theShowplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuableexpertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of thesepositions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which areextremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.

Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. Part of myvolunteering experience at Middleway House, the local battered women’s shelter,involved extensive work on computers, including word processing, organizingdatabases and creating spreadsheets. Also, I recently participated in aninternship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in thepersonnel division. As a management intern, I was able to watch the workings ofa major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine myexperiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB,with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.

My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success asan undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety ofextracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing inintramural basketball. My positive experiences here have resulted in my desireto stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore,continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts,with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in theMidwest.

尊敬的老师：

您好，非常感谢您百忙之中能抽出时间读这份留学申请书。

我叫黄鹏，来自莱阳市第九中学，是地地道道的九中人，只不过现在又要在前面加上复习生的名号了。虽然高考不尽如人意，但此时说起自己的身份，我还是愿意称自己为“九中人”，这三个字几乎涵盖了我的整个青春，以后也将伴我继续走下去。这次以复习生的身份回到母校，千万思绪涌上心头，高中三年的点点滴滴似电影片段般一幕幕在我脑海中回放，当初的豪言壮志似乎还在母校的上空回荡，经久不息;恩师的教诲，朋友的勉励在时光的打磨下历久弥新，句句澎湃着我的内心。

虽然初入母校时的青涩已蜕变成了成熟，但想起那段懵懂的时光，内心依然久久不能平静。稚嫩的外表下装载着蓬勃的心，我开始了自己的高中生活。或许是初中两年的班长生涯使我看起来较为沉稳，也可能是中考成绩入了班主任的“法眼”，总之，我很荣幸地被授予了班长的重任，也从此开启了我至今三年的又一段班长生涯。

高一高二时的班级就是一群热血少年俱乐部，我们长论古今中外，激扬文字，点评江山，轻狂却不知疲倦。在这样一群心怀报复的知己的熏染中，在知识渊博的教师的教诲下，我的成绩也开始了稳步提升，更重要的是我的思想也从此有了雏形——我想成为强者!在与老师和同学们的朝夕相处中，我从他们每个人身上都学到了一点东西，我学会了沉着，我懂得了宽容，我明白了感恩……他们每一个人都是一本活教科书，我一页页读，一本本读，纵使现在不再生活在同一个屋檐下，但我依然可以很迅速的找出对他们的“读书笔记”。与大家的一起成长的过程中，我也在慢慢变强——成绩已经稳坐前几把“交椅”，心智也越来越成熟。

最终凭借较为优异的成绩升入了高三，进入了一个全新的班级。虽然许多东西都要重新来过，但从高一高二走过来的我已经可以很容易地融入新班级了。我一直相信，只要自己付出真心就一定可以捕获真心，所以虽然只有不到一年的相处，但是我与高三的同学却宛如相识多年的朋友一般，亲密无间。我们一起挑灯夜战，一起埋头苦读，一起奋笔疾书，直到最后一起奔赴高考的战场，很遗憾我折戟沉沙，没能跟上他们的步伐。不过，“短暂的停留是为了更高的飞翔”，终有一天，我会赶上去的，跟他们并肩奋斗，书写我们九中人的辉煌!

高中三年，我成长了，成熟了。我时常愿意把自己比作一个行者，一步一个脚印地奔赴远方，在人生的这条道路上，我不愿意落后于任何人，也不愿意亦步亦趋地跟随他人，我想走出一条属于自己的道路，留下自己独有的身影。虽然我是个理科生，但我却非常喜欢一个人静静地思考人生，我不害怕孤独，有人说，孤独就是你所面对的那个人，他的情绪跟你的情绪不在同一个频率。我非常赞同，但是我不认为我孤独，不论是我那些展翅高飞的朋友，还是跟我一样“留守”下来的伙伴，都是我吐露心声的知己，有他们在，我不寂寞。

现在的我虽然还拼搏在高考的道路上，但是单纯的考出高分已经不是我的目的了。不过，上一所如同贵校一般的名牌大学的确是我心所往。人都是为了未来而活的，我这次就是为未来而战!

黄鹏

__年12月11日

Dear_ University Teacher Leader:

Hello! I am, It is an activist in the party__ The three best students in theprovince, in daily study and life I always set the example, with the power ofexample to infect and drive my classmates. I am diligent in my study and havealways achieved excellent results. My school is a provincial demonstrationschool with nearly 4000 students. Every semester, our school will conduct ajoint examination of 10 provincial demonstration high schools. About 13000candidates in each grade are among the top in this kind of district jointexamination. 20__ In the last semester, I took the first place in the regionaljoint examination, the first grade in our school and the first in class. 20__The next semester is the first in the region, the first in our school grade, thefirst in class, and 20__ In the last semester, the area was No.9, with the firstEnglish single subject achievement; The school is No. 2 and class is the first.20__ The next semester of the year is the first in the region, the first in ourschool grade and the first in class. 20__ I took the first place in the firstexam in junior high school. I have participated in the National Olympiccompetitions of middle school students many times since junior high school, andI have been in the 20__ Won the first prize of Olympi competition of middleschool students in China in, 20__ In, he won the first prize in English,mathematics and chemistry competition and the second prize in physicscompetition of Olympi competition of middle school students. 20 after highschool__ In, I won the first prize of the National English ability competitionfor middle school students and the third prize of the national mathematicscompetition. 20__ In, he was awarded the final qualification of biology andmathematics competition of middle school students in China. The competition ofvarious disciplines broadens my learning ideas, tests my learning effect, andalso strengthens my self-confidence.

20__ In August, I was promoted to high school. In December, a classmate withuremia was named "Yuzhu", Facing a young life in tenacious struggle with the Godof death. I decided to launch a donation activity with my classmates to savethis young life with collective power. I wrote an initiative, calling onteachers and students to do it at school___ Students donated money, also to thesociety for publicity, with the help of teachers, students and people from allwalks of life, a total of more than 60000 yuan. For qiuchunliang students to dokidney replacement surgery to give us a love. Our love donation activities havearoused strong repercussions in society. Our city TV station has made specialreports in the latest news column in the evening. The process of saving thisdying life shocked my heart. Because I have the ability to continue a young lifethrough my own efforts, at the same time, the charity donation activities alsoverify my organizational ability, cohesion and appeal, and it is also a test ofmy own comprehensive quality. I was more confident in my later class work andother activities.

When you get in_ The school gate of university has entered the most importantand wonderful stage of my life. I will cherish the minute and second spent oncampus. In this great gathering of masters, the holy academic hall and theinstitutions of higher learning where the talents are finished, I will absorbthe latest knowledge and information, develop the fine tradition of forestrystudents, study hard and strive for excellence, and make myself an excellentstudent of this major through the efforts of stepping on the ground, Meanwhile,we should try to explore and verify the scientific knowledge related to thesubject and the major, study hard, deeply think and unremittingly seek thelatest knowledge in the field of this subject with a materialistic andscientific attitude, and make myself a student with potential and training valuein this field and become the pride of Beijing Forestry University.

尊敬的校领导：

本人叫______，我是师范大学中语系汉语言专业____班的学生，我逐步完成了由高中毕业到本科生的蜕变，在入校的三个多月学习期间，我努力辛苦的学习本系主要专业，一直受到本校辅导员和老师们莫大的关怀，给了我不断施展的平台，不过随着本专业系统的学习和深入，我感受到了前所未有的压力，来自理想与现实的，还有更多的。

我知道汉语言专业确实是一个好专业，它关联好多个专业领域，但是我感觉到我对本专业不是那么喜欢，家里人一直尊重我的想法，他们说让我学习以后保持生活的实际性专业，本来父母的愿望也是想让我上法律系，我从小就很喜欢法律方面的`知识，将来也希望在法律部门工作，新疆大学法律系一直都是我高三一年来的目标，由于估分的误差和一系列外界原因使我与新疆大学失之交臂，直到我知道还可以通过转学这个方式到新疆大学，我的心中又重燃希望。

这是我郑重的申请，我和我的家人们已经多次交流并考虑，我转校并不是因为师范大学，我是真的没有方向，没有办法好好学习，我希望以后成为对社会有用的人，我满怀着梦想!我不希望由于我一时选择上的失误造成我一生的失败，请帮助一个对世界，对社会都满怀希望的青年吧!

敬爱的校领导，我真诚的希望您能够慎重的考虑，我怀着感激的心，满载梦想的等着您给我的回音。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

"All I know about leadership I learned from..." What items could a personuse to describe leadership qualities?

Inspired by the student council advisors at my high school.

Student council was a big part of my life in high school. I haveparticipated in it since my frst year of high school. When I frst joined, I wasquiet, na?ve, and unwilling to participate in many activities. I was scared tomeet new people and afraid to apply myself. This all began to change. Half waythrough my frst year in student council, one of the advisors can up to me andasked why I did not participate that much. I did not have an answer for her anddid not know how to respond. After this, I began to think of an answer. I becamefrustrated and decided to change. I started to show up at events and had a greattime. I realized I loved this and wanted to start leading these activities. Inmy sophomore, junior, and now my senior year of high school, I asserted myselfand took on a strong leadership role in student council. I did not fgure out theanswer to why I was so reserved until this year with the help of thisquestion.

尊敬的_大学老师：

您好!

"韶华不为少年留，勤为天道酬。"正如高三的教室后墙上我所想出的励志名言一般，它时刻激励着班上的同学与我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡阳市八中高三的一名学生，就读文科，是平凡的，因为是一个同所有人一样的矛盾融合体;但又坚信自己是不同的，是因为我将成为发光体。金子，到哪里都会发光，而我选择的是贵校这样一座炼金炉。

河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我愿像河般，为梦想奔腾向前永不止息;像海般容纳百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利万物而不争，处众人之所恶，故几于道。居善地，心善渊，与善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，动善时。夫唯不争，故无尤。"善的最高境界，大致在于此乎。像水般，往低处流，却能容纳百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高处走时，当不胜寒时，不忘想想水的谦虚，以一种包容一切的姿态，以柔化刚，接受万物的俯视与臣服，这种"柔德"，使我自己的心境变得平和，要像水那样，无形胜有形，不断地改变，塑造自己，臻于完美。

宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落;去留无意，漫随天外云卷云舒的同时，我本着湖湘学派"经世致用"的原则，志当存高远。如果说周总理是"为中华之崛起而读书"，那我便愿为"中国之强盛而读书"。学无止境，人生本是一个不断学习的过程。在六年的学习委员一职的任职过程中，除了学习课本知识，我的右手可以写出一手漂亮的毛笔。因为正，一笔一划地写，心才会正。我的左手，能弹出美妙的小提琴乐章，这不仅开发了我的右脑，音乐更使我思维敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不仅是人类对上帝的提问，更是与大自然的交流。让狂躁的心，不知不觉间安静下来。

人生的旅途中，读书万卷：安徒生童话到世界名着。我醉心于宝黛间的痴缠;徜徉于《傲慢与偏见》里伊丽莎白奇妙的心海中;感叹于李白"我辈岂是蓬蒿人"的豪迈;与杜甫"安得广厦千万间，大庇天下寒士俱欢颜"一起忧国忧民;与易安居士一起看"雨疏风骤，绿肥红瘦"。在文的海洋中，我愿成那一滴水，一尾鱼，在海洋心中，见证着它的悲喜。于是在历史的不平中，我亦诗叹曰：陈王梦还金镂枕，凤皇遗恨正阿房，才佳长恨无归处，冷露成泪暗遗香。

我同样愿行万里路，沿途的风景，丰盈着自己的人生，懂得取与舍，让人生的阅历更加丰富。曾到过南京，河畔桨声灯影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝旧事已随流水，而这座古都却有太多历史无法忘记的东西：革命先行者孙文先生之陵……流连于河海大学门前，不由驻足，希望自己能成为"归人"，而不是"过客"。我这样的游子，在阅过17年风景后，选择了河海大学作为圆梦的地方。

我喜欢奔跑的感觉，起跑线比重点更加美好，体味那为理想拼搏的过程。十年磨一剑，剑出鞘，一鸣惊人，直指河海。

我，静如处子，或动如脱兔，愿意跟书本这样高尚的朋友对话。书山有路勤为径，运用正确的学习方法，在无涯的学海中"直挂云帆济沧海"，正确地驾驶着学习之舟，虽然途中有风浪，但坚持驶向目的地--河海之湾。我，崇尚独立，常独立思考探寻人生真谛，遇事冷静自若，却又让理性成为我织梦的梭，让勤奋成为我筑梦的桥。理智与热情，诚信与好学，成为划向河海的桨，只为到那里，为自己编织另一个梦，解决南方家乡旱涝灾害频繁的问题，造福家乡、祖国人民。在见证河湾辉煌的同时，与河海一起创造下一个辉煌。

我愿逆风行舟，驶向河海，利用水，造福人民。

我愿逆风，只为寻河海一梦。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

20__年__月__日

__大学的各位领导、导师们：

您们好!

首先感谢你们能在百忙之中审阅我的个人留学申请书。

我叫___，是来自__某中学的一名高三的理科生，即将面临高考，我期望透过贵校来实现我在__大学学习的梦想。一向以来，__大学对我都有很大的吸引力，有着悠久的历史，深厚的文化底蕴，丰富的教学资源，良好的学术氛围，强烈的时代气息，__大学历经沧桑，饱经风雨，为祖国培养了许多优秀人才，取得了丰硕的科研成果，并成为我国培养高层次专门人才和发展科学技术的一个重要基地。个性是，她是我国高校中最早开始试点实行自主招生的高校之一，她爱惜人才、有职责感，不拘一格选人才。这一点很吸引我。我十分渴望能在20__年7月拿到贵校的录取通知书，成为贵校的一名学生，成为一名对社会、对祖国有用的人才。

进入高中以来，我不断为实现这一理想而努力学习文化知识，勤学善思。英语、理化是我的强势科目，英语成绩个性优异。我参加了今年的全国中学生英语创新大赛，并有幸进入复赛，虽然由于种.种原因和最后的大奖擦肩而过，但参加竞赛的这种过程使我的潜力得到了很大的提升。

除了学习成绩优秀以外，我还有多方面的特长，我参加了校园的乐队，业余时间我喜欢拉二胡，学习二胡，不仅仅丰富了我的课余生活，而且升华了我对音乐的见解，在二胡的世界中，有奔腾豪放的《赛马》，有坚定有力，追溯光明的《光明行》，也有悲愤哀怨的《江河水》，我用心参与文体活动。初中时博兴县的才艺表演大赛中获得优秀节目奖。

我不仅仅爱好计算机，在业余时间，我参加了教育部组织的计算机等级考试并取得了一级B证，而且经常用心参与体育锻炼，强健体魄，增强毅力。除此之外，我热情、开朗，乐于助人，阳光、向上，所以高中以来，我年年被评为为"三好学生"。

但是，这些成绩只能代表我的过去，梦在心中，路在脚下，站在人生的十字路口，我选取了__大学，我期望__大学能敞开怀抱，给我带给一个大发展的平台，期望各位领导和老师能理解我的申请，衷心的感谢!

此致

敬礼

尊敬的大使(签证官)：

我的名字叫__， 2_岁。现在在__大学__学院就读，是-名__学专业的大学生。在父母的呵护下长大的我，从小就有一个心愿，就是可以到韩国学习韩国文化。所以，我喜欢收集韩国各方面的资料，包括民俗文化、科学技术。通过资料我逐渐了解到，韩国在东亚地区具有重要地位，她的历史悠久而灿烂，拥有独特的建筑、让难忘的与众不同的饮食，韩国的服饰更是让人喜欢。我最喜欢的是韩国的语言，听起来那么好听那么温柔。韩国是世界发达国家之一，她的科学技术在世界具有相当地位，电子产品在中国广受欢迎，而韩国的教育水平在世界更是瞩目。韩国比较突出的还有它的艺术，韩国的电视剧在东亚地区刮起过不小的风浪，而现代舞蹈和民俗舞蹈更是让世人惊叹。

韩国是礼仪之邦，韩国人民的热情友好是世界公认的，我希望可以在这样一个将传统 与现代很好结合在一起的国家继续深造。

性格开朗的我很喜欢护理行业，从小就喜欢白衣天使这个名字。看着护士小姐温柔的动作和美丽的仪态就特别向往着长大后可以做一名出色的护士。终于，我如愿以偿考上了延边大学护理学院，从此开始了护理学学习的道路。如今我即将毕业，实际操作能力虽然优良，可我发现我所学到的护理知识并不完善，所以我想继续深造。

通过网络，我收集到了很多关王韩国护理学方面的资料，了解到韩国有很多综合性大学都设有护理专业，如韩国梨花女女子大学、韩国延世大学等等。这些大学都具有悠久的历史、庞大的规模、尖级的教授队伍，最重要的是韩国的医学方面已经达到世界先进水平。这样优秀的大学是我渴望学习的最好的学校，因此我很向往去这样优异的环境中继续学习我热爱的护理学专业。虽然，语言是我面临的最大难题，但我会努力克服。我相信以我的学习能力加上韩国的语言环境，我会很快掌握这门美丽的语言，进而更快地无阻碍地学习护理知识，并将它用于实践中。因此我想申请梨花女子大学，因为我了解到梨花女子大学的护理系无论在教学上还是师资力量都是世界前矛。如果我能申请到，我-定会先在韩国语学习班刻苦学习，尽早将韩国语的日常用语和基本词汇掌握。在攻克语言的基础上，好好学习护理知识，为促进中韩两国文化发展做贡献。希望签证官考虑我的请求。

此致

敬礼!

申请人：

__年__月__日

I am applying for admission to the Ph.D. program in Electrical and ComputerEngineering， at the University of California， Berkeley. I present my researchexperience and study objectives in this statement of purpose. I would like tobuild on my solid education and experience as an engineer for a Ph. D. degree incomputer science at a distinguished university. I wish in particular to betrained at an advanced level in software systems， database systems， applied-AIand knowledge-based systems. My ultimate goal is to become a professor teachingcomputer science at a Chinese university. I believe that advanced training in aquality graduate program will help me realize my goal.

My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During mydays at Engineering College I used to go to my fathers office and help himmanage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was thetime I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and returnare proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock marketcrashed. But fortunately， my father had a well-diversified portfolio because ofwhich our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learntthe second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reducesrisk. While I understood these two principles intuitively， it produced in me astrong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working ofFinance. This， I believe， was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind topursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in BusinessAdministration.

As I was finishing college， my mother had both of her hips replaced withartificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away andit was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers，orthopedic surgeons， and biologists had all worked together to design theseartificial joints that completely transform. peoples lives by giving them backpain-free mobility， and I knew at that moment that this was an area about whichI wanted to learn more. In China these days， university graduates who have notbeen lucky enough to settle into their dream jobs often look to graduatedstudies as a way to kill the time that they cannot otherwise spend meaningfully.I am prepared to go against the social conventions by putting on hold asuccessful research career that promised to be even more successful. With eightyears of productive and highly valued practical research behind me， I now wouldlike to revert to a more intellectual life so that I can conduct moretheoretical discourses.

When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues， the French sculptorAuguste Rodin answered， “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever Idont need For me， life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can beturned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents， diligence and asense of duty. During over four years’ my college life， I have been dreaming ofbeing a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the developmentof science as men do. For Knowledge Itself Is Power.This is one of my favoriteprecepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduationand my future spreads in front of me like a dream， this adage has neverinfluenced my life more than this before.

For the past three years， my undergraduate education has exposed me to thevarious sub-fields of Computer Science (CS). However， our syllabus has focusedmainly on "traditional" CS topics， such as Operating systems and single-CPUsystems. We have had barely a glimpse of the newer technologies that are likelyto change the way computing is done in not-so-distant future. The desire toexamine such subjects in greater detail is what has prompted me to opt forgraduate study. Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s“reform. andopen”policies， economics plays an increasingly important role in the developmentof its global position. As a senior at Beijing University majoring in Economics，I feel that my field is fundamental to the progress of my country. Yet， at thesame time， I realize only too well that what I have learned as an undergraduateis far from enough. Therefore， it is my desire to pursue a graduate degree IEconomics at your university. If accepted， my intended concentration would beEconomic Development and Public Economics.

亲爱的教授：

我很高兴以书面形式推荐的医生的信。 __支持他申请在实验室的博士后位置。

博士。X__一个优秀的研究生致力于为毫秒我的监督下度。在我与他在大学接触，他的创造力和态度研究工作给了我很深的印象。他总是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解决他自己的问题，我很满意他。

__一直致力于高分子发光研究六年左右。据我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化学在主人的工作，如蛋白质和核酸检测等，在这些领域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已经和将发表多篇论文在国际期刊。我在读他的论文发表和与他讨论往往兴趣。我很赞赏他的研究能力。

__博士还拥有非常优良品格。他是一个虔诚的科研工作者。他的作品是在周末。他是一个诚实和智能，可靠，负责人，并且是非常合作过。

基于这些优势，我相信这个年轻人将实现在今后的工作更大的学业成功。因此，我强烈支持他的应用程序，这将不胜感激，如果你能给他的优先考虑。

请随时联系我，如果我可以回答关于__的任何其他问题。我的地址如下：

教授__X

尊敬的_老师：

您好!

我叫___，是___中学中学___学生。我与_缘起于幼年时读过的《荷塘月色》，苍茫的月光静静地泻落，田田的荷叶亭亭的立着，如同梦境般的美好景色给我留下了深刻的印象,从此，古朴典雅、文化底蕴丰厚的_就扎根于我心中，成为我魂牵梦绕的圣地。

_重视的是全面发展的人才，所以在平时各科的学习中，我都稳扎稳打，表现出色，在历次考试中都名列前茅。

竞赛方面：在20__年第__届全国生物中学生生物学奥林匹克联赛中获陕西赛区一等奖并代表陕西参加国家决赛获得银奖，在20__全国联赛中获陕西赛区数学一等奖和化学二等奖。在这里我想谈谈暑假参加全国生物竞赛的经历。来到武汉二中，我以自己的微笑与亲和力结识了来自全国各地的朋友，谈天说地，共话理想;我懂得了山外青山楼外楼，与全国的精英相比，我还有很多的地方需要改进;我学会了就算遇到挫折也永不言败，调整心态迎接下一个挑战才更重要……这一切，都是让我毕生难忘的宝贵经历，也让我更深刻的理解了_“自强不息”的校训。

爱好广泛：我虽然是一个理科生，却对历史人文知识等很感兴趣，闲暇时喜欢看看“百家讲坛”，看电视上的国学知识竞赛，有意提升自己的综合素养。我幼时曾习国画，我喜欢在生宣上信笔泼墨，喜欢那份“山水横拖千里外”的悠远超然;我也学过古筝，我喜欢在那二十一弦琴上钩托抹挑，喜欢《高山流水》的相逢恨晚，喜欢《春江花月夜》的婉约忧伤;初中时，我去学习跆拳道，我喜欢听双腿破空而出凌风而过踢中脚靶的清脆声响，也将跆拳道精神——礼义廉耻，忍耐克己，百折不屈——牢牢地铭刻在心，并且践行。

我的理想：我从小就很喜欢看各式各样的建筑，阿布?辛博神庙每个太阳日的第一缕曙光，巴黎圣母院高耸的尖顶，悉尼歌剧院的风帆造型，都让我深深着迷。我希望能成为_建筑系的一员，形成自己独特的建筑风格，从而实现我的终极梦想——参与未来世博会上中国馆的设计，让世界看到中国的风采!

我很喜欢泰戈尔的那一句诗：“天空不留下鸟的痕迹，但我已飞过。”为了我的梦想——_，我已经厚积了多年的力量，等待薄发的那一刻。不论结果如何，至少我曾经为自己的梦想努力过，为自己的人生拼搏过，那么我就永不后悔。或许当我苍颜白发时想起这段时期的经历，我也会为自己当初的坚持，为年少时的那份破釜沉舟的决心，而微微一笑。

“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海。”_园，等着我!

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多年来，数学科学的研究一直吸引着我。决定攻读数学和物理的A—level是因为他们对这两个学科领域的兴趣都很高，而且能力很强。这反映在我x月x日收到的AS成绩中x;获得数学A级，这进一步激励了我对这门学科的追求。

我的兴趣已经扩展到计算机，在过去的几年里，试图将两者联系在一起已经成为我生活的重要组成部分。我自学了，使用书籍和其他可用资源，如何用HTML编程，这使我有可能在网页设计中发挥积极作用。

我的其他学术兴趣包括商业研究，尤其是与数学课程部分相关的管理和金融领域。我选择在Alevel中加入人文学科的部分原因是我需要分析和评估情况，商业研究让我有机会非常详细地做到这一点，我发现参与相关的课程很有治疗作用

实例探究。我还在攻读通识学科的A级课程，这增加了我对政治和文化问题的了解。该主题还鼓励有关时事的小组讨论，并为我提供发表意见的机会。

在过去的几年里，我一直是爱丁堡公爵计划的成员，该计划在学院内进行。x年x月，我完成了铜奖，现在正在努力争取我的金牌。这让我在团队合作、解决问题和保持高度责任感方面积累了丰富的经验。这些品质已被纳入10年级的成功工作经验安置以及我在知名零售店Marksand Spencer担任销售/管理助理的兼职工作。

我很享受在六年级的时光，并从学术和课外活动中获得乐趣。我觉得我拥有继续数学到更高水平所需的素质，并将其与我现在感兴趣的模块以及我希望在大学期间建立的领域相结合。我相信这种热情将与我坚定的决心和动力相结合，使我能够在_大学面临的挑战中取得成功。

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Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the application process. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing number of applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is also increasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a college recommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.

A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about a candidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for them to see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea to include in the application, even if the college does not require one, many colleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep in mind when writing a college recommendation letter:

Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that you know the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendation letter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written for candidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harm than good.

How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendation letter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length of time you have known that person.

Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of the recommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and his or her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement an application, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the college he or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of a college recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character of the candidate.

Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letter is to first obtain the students rsum with a listing of his or her GPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experience and special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate, the more constructive your recommendation can be.

Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, before writing a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the person to whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name, the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."

Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write a college recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. A letter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave a negative impression.

Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendation letter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if it can be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application, return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.

Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadline of the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequate amount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the most important detail is that it is received before the application deadline.

Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sure to save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation letter easier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may ask that you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is important that each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information can be recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the original passage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a college recommendation.

What Colleges Really Want

Colleges place a large emphasis on a students academic ability because what is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academic success in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win situation. They want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only for the students benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more students become college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasingly selective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a college recommendation letter.

As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of a college-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writing a college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trust in you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whether or not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice on how to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letter and give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or her college of choice.

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